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Pikachu

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Eric

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Hmm... oh I get it! It's extreme day! That's why your comic is extremley cliched right?

You also have mix of styles and bittages which take away from the comic.

Last is that you seem to break the fourth wall alot. Does that make you happy because I feel wretched when I see it happen. Instead of people going into the comic and reading like they're in it themselves, you have it where the feeling is gone and you lose attention
 
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Pikachu

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4th wall? Please explain the last paragraph a little simpler?
 
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iron picachu

Damn, broke the Dog!
i think the 4th wall is where character know theyre in a comic.
 
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Joe Vega #4

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Dude, everything's great. All except for one thing. Swearing! replace the letters with asterisks. Kids(like me) could be cruising the Fan-comics and asking their parents what the swearing means(not me)! And you'll get all the blame.
 
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You know, it's pretty hard to have characters not know they're in a comic when the antigonist wants to end the comic. However, Mighty and Sonic are the only characters (besides HD19) who talked about the comic and they did it once (only HD19 does it all the time, it's very hard not to break the 4th wall because of his goal).

And about the swearing, I stated that it might contain bad language on the first post.
 
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Eric

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Indeed, in a GOOD cartoon, have the character ever said, "man, this cartoon sucks" or "I will stop this cartoon to save you" or "God, the writer stunk with this one."

No, because they want you to feel like your in the cartoon yourself. When you break the fourth wall, you break that trance (if the comic is good) and lose the attension of the reader.

Also, **** * signs. Say the curse.
 
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Volt Tackle

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I think this comic is pretty innovative, IMO. When are pokemon comming to the mix?
 
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Davis the Gamer

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Volt Tackle said:
I think this comic is pretty innovative, IMO. When are pokemon comming to the mix?
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Lets hope not.
I find it funny, but some of the fourth wall breaking makes it BLAH
Though the Fireman/Torchman comic was lol funny.
And the Sonic Team bashing is a bit lol.
The Robo thingie isn't funny. I don't like him.
 
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Joe Vega #4

RAWR.
Pikachu said:
You know, it's pretty hard to have characters not know they're in a comic when the antigonist wants to end the comic. However, Mighty and Sonic are the only characters (besides HD19) who talked about the comic and they did it once (only HD19 does it all the time, it's very hard not to break the 4th wall because of his goal).

And about the swearing, I stated that it might contain bad language on the first post.
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Yes, I know you said that, but still, replace the words with asterisks. Stay cool!
 
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Sindakwil

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Your speech bubbles are sloppy and there's too much swearing. At least censor it. Kids go here you know.
 
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Pixilated Penguin

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Oh noes! Swearing. He gave a notice about swearing, so he has no reason to relinquish his freedom of speech.
 
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Eric

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FIGHT THE POWER! And **** no cursing, **** it up it's stupid ***.
 
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Pikachu

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Eric

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Fix textboxes. Line and box is just cheap, and makes comic man cry. Do you want comic man to cry?
 
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Mega

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Eric said:
Fix textboxes. Line and box is just cheap, and makes comic man cry. Do you want comic man to cry?
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Hey wannabe- bob you haven't been here in a while.
 
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