comic with a tauros

[Wietse]

I know it isn't graphicly what it needs to be but well...

 

[Omega Pirate]

Yes....might be a bit better if we could actually understand what they are talking about. Try english next time.

 

[Chinese Teletubbie]

Its not bad but there are grammer mistakes and maybe you should do speech bubbles

 

[Wietse]

Yes....might be a bit better if we could actually understand what they are talking about. Try english next time.

lol it's the first comic i ever made... sorry for the english i'm belgian so i don't speak english that well...

 

[Iron Lugia]

The camper was missing in panel 2...

 

[Beco]

Well...It's a good start. Just work on your English. Try to use costum made, editted ( or even recoloured) sprites instead of the cliché FR/LG hero. Try to avoid one-colour backgrounds. And maybe you should try speech bubbles.

Good luck.

 

[Metropolis]

Its OK. Could be better, but it wasn't bad.

I know you speak Belgium, so it must be hard to write in English, let alone have good grammar.

It was semi-humorous, but had the potential to be more. Are you going to start a series?

Overall: OK, could be better. You have good potential, and I'm looking forward to more from you.

 

[Wietse]

i'll work on it! thanks for the commentary