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Concerning originality...and title

Luckmage

Boulder Trainer
I am one eager beaver. x_X Well, I just came up with something that has to do with the- Oh, who cares! *does not feel like repeating what she has typed in Word* Here(should I continue this fanfic or not? And if so, any advice, comments and constructive critisicism and suggestions for names will be greatly...appreciated!) :

The plot has something that had to do with an event that happened during the GSC series of Pokemon Adventures(the manga)

Warning: There might be some spoilers included for people who have not read the manga Pokemon Adventures for the GSC series(well, duh). xP

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Prologue: Just a messenger

A single clatter of windows slamming shut, a flap of my wings and I was on my way. Again. With the wind blowing straight in my face, streaming up my beak and feathers all a mess, I was on a mission. Clearly, the Man in White hadn’t been fully awake and so had just manage to stagger to my Pokeball to release me and send me on my way instead of sending himself there. The person I’d been sent to was…interesting enough, but still, it was rather demeaning for a ditto of my stature to be reduced to a messenger.

I let out a deep, heartfelt sigh that came out as a pathetic little chirp before I returned my attention back to where it was supposed to be focused at: my surroundings, location, destination and navigations. Sadly enough, I did not have the luxury of extra time to ponder what this “alternate worlds theorem” the Man in White had been muttering about had to do with my quest.

I noticed that he’d been fiddling about with the phone on his table, trying to contact someone whom he called “Gold”(now, who could that be?), then giving up and saying that he’d send me to find “Red”, the boy(I knew this ‘un, almost everyone did) being the last person who had been sighted with Gold.

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Many people say it’s fun to fly. I’m usually on their side, that is, if I’m not in the middle of gale force winds and there’s a water spout heading in my direction. On this particular morning however, all was well. The sun was up, the bird-like pokemon were chirruping sweetly(and loudly) and smooth flying conditions were enjoyed by those capable of flight.

I decided to speed up a little and flapped harder while trying to seem like I wasn’t in a hurry at all(albeit trying to keep at least a scrap of dignity instead of flapping about like a lunatic). Ah, almost there: a small peaceful countryside house in the midst of the settlement otherwise known as Pallet Town. Keeping in mind that-

SPLAT

Stupid lamp-post.

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That's it for the time being. I know it's cutting it a little close to the one page limit for prologues, but I really didn't want to give away even more of the plot. And: the lack of description of the surroundings was done on purpose. Though I think the third paragraph was rather unecessary.

Main Plot(so far, More SPOLERS, Look out below!):

It has something to do with the shrine and the world of time-traveling and Celebi. A "certain professor" has found out that there are other alternate worlds beyond the Pokemon world and also the time-traveling..thingy. X_x And then he sends the messenger ditto through the portal later on in Chapter One as humans have been sealed out of the portals by Celebi(fearing another repeat of "the Pryce thing") and only Pokemons could enter.
...It sounds weird, now that I've got the plot down in typing but, whatever! *submits thread and waits for the horror to begin* xD

Okay, so it's wayyyy too short. *decides to extend it more if possible*
 
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