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<-Me in real life
This is the first fic I've posted... anywhere. I hope people like it. I'm rating this PG-13 because there'll most likely be some scenes later on that won't be child-friendly. I'll accept constructive-criticism but anyone who goes farther than that will be ignored.
I'm going to post the Prologue and Chapter 1 together, because I don't feel like posting them seperately.
Prologue…
Sun beat down on the head of a young man. He had brilliant blonde hair that reached down to mid neck. Combined with his dark blue eyes he appeared to be a very normal man, his clothes would signify otherwise. He wore black jeans and a black, armor-like coat with ridges running along the length of the arms. Red leather gloves covered his hands and a red cloth obscured his distinctive facial features from view.
Next to him, another man stood erect like a scarecrow. He had orange hair and emerald green eyes that contrasted against his partner nicely. He wore nearly the exact same clothes as his friend but with a distinct difference, the red leather gloves were replaced with purple ones and the same was true of the cloth covering their faces.
Their names were Primair and Seco, in that order.
Primair scanned the battlefield. Three trainers, dead. He grinned and turned to Seco. “The trainers thought they posed a threat to us.” He said it as if for clarification. Seco nodded slowly and continued to look through a pair of binoculars.
“They had only a few pokemon,” Seco said. He didn’t like it when Primair acted like he just had. He made it sound like killing was okay.
“That’s exactly my point, why did the big wigs at the government send these losers?” Seco sighed and shook his head. Sometimes his partner and friend could be very thickheaded.
“The government is scoping out our strengths and weaknesses. Didn’t you notice the Pidgey overhead? The one that kept circling above us?” Seco paused a moment and took the binoculars down from his face. “They want to eliminate you and me, the elite of Team Phoenix… so that we’ll never rise again.” Seco concluded his speech with an angry look at Primair, “that’s why we shouldn’t have killed the poor little fools. We could’ve let them be and the government would never even know what we looked like. Now our faces will be everywhere. "Oi!” Seco hopped of the small hill and onto a small mound of grass.
The two men were at the secluded water spot in the Cankine Desert, Cankine Oasis. They’d been checking over the defensive systems for Team Phoenix’s Desert hideout. All had seemed fine until they’d come across three trainers. The battle had gone swiftly and the Trainers were dead. Plain and simple.
“Yeah, there was minor setback… no we took care of it… apart from that everything seems fine.” Seco closed his cell phone and nodded to Primair. They were all set to head back to Pfenix Mountain…
“Mr. President… they’re my elite!” The tiny man said over the small telephone in his office.
“I understand that Shin but they’re a threat to everything I’ve worked for. If you accidentally reveal anything to them about what their missions are really about,” The President paused to catch his breath. “Then everything goes up in smoke. Hire two more Executives, ones you can trust with this information.”
“But really… kill them?” Shin said quietly. He understood the reasoning behind it all, he wanted confirmation.
“Yes, your Team Phoenix will profit from it, you just can’t see it yet…”
“Very well… kill them… but if I may ask, how will you go about doing it?”
“We have two Murkrow that will take care for them for us.”
Shin couldn’t believe what he’d heard. Did the President actually think that two Murkrow could take out his two Executives? “Fifty Murkrows wouldn’t be able to handle a job like that! It would take thousands!” The line was dead; Shin slumped back into his chair and sighed. There was something very wrong.
Chapter 1
The Murkrows…
(The Follwoing Takes Place Between 2:33pm and 2:51pm)
Seco yawned as he walked down the tiny path leading out of the oasis. There motorcycles were parked in some underbrush at the end of the path. He was all too ready to get home and take a nap.
Primair was satisfied as ever. What could be better than winning and crushing few people at the same time? Nothing that’s what! “They didn’t even lay a scratch on us!”
“Will you shut up already? It was a stupid idea to go and kill them!” Seco didn’t care as much about the trainers as he did the pokemon that were now trapped in their pokeballs, never to be released again.
A piercing cry filled the air, Seco recognized it immediately. “There are Murkrow around here? They prefer cold, damp climates…” Seco stopped and looked around. Where had the cry come from? Seco grabbed a pokeball from his waist pocket and threw it to the ground, releasing the pokemon from inside.
Jitter came out and stretched her wings gracefully. “I-i-mise” she cooed as she buzzed around Seco’s head.
“Jitter, I heard Murkrow calls. Can you look for them for me? When you find them come back to me.” Jitter took off with a final affectionate buzz in Seco’s direction. Seco nodded to Primair who released his Masquerain, Mask.
Primair issued the same command and Mask flew off in the same direction of Jitter. “Let’s get to our bikes, quickly.”
They didn’t get the chance to reach their bikes; two Murkrow swooped down towards them, as if out of nowhere. The first gave Primair a significant gash and the wrist, the second one missed. It was aiming for his face.
Seco produced another pokeball and his second pokemon appeared in the battle scene. “Go Kappa! Wet down their wings with a jet of water!” Kappa looked around, yawning, Seco’s pet peeve. “Kappa now—“ Seco ducked out of the way of an incoming Murkrow and at possibly the best moment possible, Kappa emitted a large stream of liquid, dousing the Murkrow’s wings.
Primair copied his partner by releasing a second pokemon from its containment. Primair’s Electabuzz, Beast emerged from the ball in a blast of red energy. Beast sent a surge of electricity from his antennae, into the air. Kappa looked off into Beast’s direction and grinned.
The first Murkrow hesitated once it saw the Electabuzz. Many a Murkrow had been eaten by Electabuzz on different occasions and he didn’t like the thought of going through the creature’s digestive track. It considered a moment then screeched as it sent a whirlwind of energy towards Kappa, catching him off guard.
Beast roared and whipped up a Zap Cannon attack. The attack launched, moving at an impressive rate, killing the Murkrow instantly. Now only one Murkrow remained. It was struggling on the ground and Kappa took care of it quickly with a large swipe of his claws.
An eerie silence fell over the small group. Kappa and Beast exchanged looks of confusion; neither of them knew what exactly had happened or why they were called out.
“Beast, send a thunderbolt into the air to alert Mask and Jitter to come back, we should get out of here.” Seco nodded in agreement with Primair’s plan, something was wrong with the scene.
“What do we do with the Murkrow bodies, we can’t just leave them dead, and it’ll look suspicious.”
“Beast can have them… that’s just natural,” Primair said, almost to himself.
Jitter and Mask returned some time later. Jitter cuddled her trainer before he pressed the pokeball to her body. She vanished in an instant, followed by Kappa. Time seemed to stand still as they evacuated the oasis.
I'm going to post the Prologue and Chapter 1 together, because I don't feel like posting them seperately.
Prologue…
Sun beat down on the head of a young man. He had brilliant blonde hair that reached down to mid neck. Combined with his dark blue eyes he appeared to be a very normal man, his clothes would signify otherwise. He wore black jeans and a black, armor-like coat with ridges running along the length of the arms. Red leather gloves covered his hands and a red cloth obscured his distinctive facial features from view.
Next to him, another man stood erect like a scarecrow. He had orange hair and emerald green eyes that contrasted against his partner nicely. He wore nearly the exact same clothes as his friend but with a distinct difference, the red leather gloves were replaced with purple ones and the same was true of the cloth covering their faces.
Their names were Primair and Seco, in that order.
Primair scanned the battlefield. Three trainers, dead. He grinned and turned to Seco. “The trainers thought they posed a threat to us.” He said it as if for clarification. Seco nodded slowly and continued to look through a pair of binoculars.
“They had only a few pokemon,” Seco said. He didn’t like it when Primair acted like he just had. He made it sound like killing was okay.
“That’s exactly my point, why did the big wigs at the government send these losers?” Seco sighed and shook his head. Sometimes his partner and friend could be very thickheaded.
“The government is scoping out our strengths and weaknesses. Didn’t you notice the Pidgey overhead? The one that kept circling above us?” Seco paused a moment and took the binoculars down from his face. “They want to eliminate you and me, the elite of Team Phoenix… so that we’ll never rise again.” Seco concluded his speech with an angry look at Primair, “that’s why we shouldn’t have killed the poor little fools. We could’ve let them be and the government would never even know what we looked like. Now our faces will be everywhere. "Oi!” Seco hopped of the small hill and onto a small mound of grass.
The two men were at the secluded water spot in the Cankine Desert, Cankine Oasis. They’d been checking over the defensive systems for Team Phoenix’s Desert hideout. All had seemed fine until they’d come across three trainers. The battle had gone swiftly and the Trainers were dead. Plain and simple.
“Yeah, there was minor setback… no we took care of it… apart from that everything seems fine.” Seco closed his cell phone and nodded to Primair. They were all set to head back to Pfenix Mountain…
“Mr. President… they’re my elite!” The tiny man said over the small telephone in his office.
“I understand that Shin but they’re a threat to everything I’ve worked for. If you accidentally reveal anything to them about what their missions are really about,” The President paused to catch his breath. “Then everything goes up in smoke. Hire two more Executives, ones you can trust with this information.”
“But really… kill them?” Shin said quietly. He understood the reasoning behind it all, he wanted confirmation.
“Yes, your Team Phoenix will profit from it, you just can’t see it yet…”
“Very well… kill them… but if I may ask, how will you go about doing it?”
“We have two Murkrow that will take care for them for us.”
Shin couldn’t believe what he’d heard. Did the President actually think that two Murkrow could take out his two Executives? “Fifty Murkrows wouldn’t be able to handle a job like that! It would take thousands!” The line was dead; Shin slumped back into his chair and sighed. There was something very wrong.
Chapter 1
The Murkrows…
(The Follwoing Takes Place Between 2:33pm and 2:51pm)
Seco yawned as he walked down the tiny path leading out of the oasis. There motorcycles were parked in some underbrush at the end of the path. He was all too ready to get home and take a nap.
Primair was satisfied as ever. What could be better than winning and crushing few people at the same time? Nothing that’s what! “They didn’t even lay a scratch on us!”
“Will you shut up already? It was a stupid idea to go and kill them!” Seco didn’t care as much about the trainers as he did the pokemon that were now trapped in their pokeballs, never to be released again.
A piercing cry filled the air, Seco recognized it immediately. “There are Murkrow around here? They prefer cold, damp climates…” Seco stopped and looked around. Where had the cry come from? Seco grabbed a pokeball from his waist pocket and threw it to the ground, releasing the pokemon from inside.
Jitter came out and stretched her wings gracefully. “I-i-mise” she cooed as she buzzed around Seco’s head.
“Jitter, I heard Murkrow calls. Can you look for them for me? When you find them come back to me.” Jitter took off with a final affectionate buzz in Seco’s direction. Seco nodded to Primair who released his Masquerain, Mask.
Primair issued the same command and Mask flew off in the same direction of Jitter. “Let’s get to our bikes, quickly.”
They didn’t get the chance to reach their bikes; two Murkrow swooped down towards them, as if out of nowhere. The first gave Primair a significant gash and the wrist, the second one missed. It was aiming for his face.
Seco produced another pokeball and his second pokemon appeared in the battle scene. “Go Kappa! Wet down their wings with a jet of water!” Kappa looked around, yawning, Seco’s pet peeve. “Kappa now—“ Seco ducked out of the way of an incoming Murkrow and at possibly the best moment possible, Kappa emitted a large stream of liquid, dousing the Murkrow’s wings.
Primair copied his partner by releasing a second pokemon from its containment. Primair’s Electabuzz, Beast emerged from the ball in a blast of red energy. Beast sent a surge of electricity from his antennae, into the air. Kappa looked off into Beast’s direction and grinned.
The first Murkrow hesitated once it saw the Electabuzz. Many a Murkrow had been eaten by Electabuzz on different occasions and he didn’t like the thought of going through the creature’s digestive track. It considered a moment then screeched as it sent a whirlwind of energy towards Kappa, catching him off guard.
Beast roared and whipped up a Zap Cannon attack. The attack launched, moving at an impressive rate, killing the Murkrow instantly. Now only one Murkrow remained. It was struggling on the ground and Kappa took care of it quickly with a large swipe of his claws.
An eerie silence fell over the small group. Kappa and Beast exchanged looks of confusion; neither of them knew what exactly had happened or why they were called out.
“Beast, send a thunderbolt into the air to alert Mask and Jitter to come back, we should get out of here.” Seco nodded in agreement with Primair’s plan, something was wrong with the scene.
“What do we do with the Murkrow bodies, we can’t just leave them dead, and it’ll look suspicious.”
“Beast can have them… that’s just natural,” Primair said, almost to himself.
Jitter and Mask returned some time later. Jitter cuddled her trainer before he pressed the pokeball to her body. She vanished in an instant, followed by Kappa. Time seemed to stand still as they evacuated the oasis.