Ok, I feel like critquing a picture, so here goes.
(I'll work down from the head).
May:
>Bandanna: Done Nicley.
>Hair: Perfect design, although swaying a bit much. Needs a few more hair strokes on the right side.
>Face: It looks seemingly a lot like an older version of May somehow, I just can't put my finger on it.
>Shape: Good, although chin needs a bit of flat.
>Eyebrows: Need to be thicker.
>Eyes: Perfect, I find nothing wrong with them.
>Nose: Might need a bit more showing.
>Cheeks, Nicley blushed!
>Mouth: I find nothing wrong with it.
>Arms: Nice thickness, compared to her weight.
>Breasts: Again, looks like an older version of May. Just underneath them, the shirt appears to tuck under. It gives it a different effect the way you drew them.
>Stomach/Posture: The stomach is a good size. Where you dignify the posture line (The curve near her stomach), it needs to look a little more rounded, It makes it look a bit more natural that way.
>Hips/Waist: Right size.
Legs:
It's really good but May has chicken legs....
Yes...
Thighs are right size (compared to the stomach). The Knees are good. Yet the muscle in thelower part of the legs (I forgot what it is called) is thicker than what you Imaged in the stomach and other parts of her body.
Drew:
Its ALL good.
Colouring: F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C! Great shading, nice colours, everything is perfect!
Please, PLEASE, keep up the fantasticwork, you are AMAZING!