Crappy first attempt to an overshade

[Sailor Universe]

I felt for trying to overshade a sprite. And I will hopefully never do it again; I hated every single second of doing it.
Anyways, I want to know if it is a good first try, or if I screwed up again.

 

[zeppelin]

i like it!

 

[Sailor Universe]

i like it!

Can I please get some critics? -_- Don't just say that you like it, give me ways to improve it.

 

[Magical Trevor]

it's ot an ovr shade it's a linless really

 

[Mewsala]

Hmm... Well I think you should give it an outline. Otherwise, it's a good sprite.

 

[Ilex]

Personally I find that the colors are too bright for crobat. There is also a few pixels of purple in the blue wing area. The shading on the wings is inverted, where the lightest shade of is there should be a darker shade. the outline needs to be darker in areas such as the back of his foot, but that's not a big issue.

But overall this is great for a first attempt at overshsgin, good job!

 

[Sailor Universe]

Thanks, all of you. If I ever do a overshade again, I'll think about what you said.

 

[Neopolis]

It looks like it's made out of jelly! *eats it* But you could've added more shades to the main body. The wings are nice, but the main body needs more shades.

 

[Ultimate]

it's ot an ovr shade it's a linless really

its no lineless.... he/she didnt use black ... i suggest you use darker colour for the outline since you didnt use black.. the shadings are are ok but the colours are too light

 

[Koneko]

It's a little bright
Tip: for over shades use the sprites from http://pokesho.com/ (It's Japanese) The Bulbasar Should take you to the pokemon sprites and the Above numbers are used to nagivate.