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Custom Cyndaquil Sprite!

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
The title says it all.

http://*******.com/i3uz5i.png

Here it is bigger to see it better:
http://*******.com/i3v1fs.png

NO STEALING!

IF YOU DO, I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU!

Anyways, the funny part was, I made this for fun, and then found out it was the perfect size for the icon-making contest! Weird, huh?

I think he would look good in a cell-phone platformer game.

I'm really unhappy with the flames on his back, though.


Constructive critisicm, please.
 
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.Dan.S.2006.

Guest
*Gapes* That's amazing! For the games it would be too small but as you say it would be a perfect icon or phone game sprite. Nice work, I can't see any problems. Congrats :D
 

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
*Gasps* Wow! Critiqued by one of the best spriters on Serebii.net... It's an honor! And... Thanks! Glad you like it!
 
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Dawnstar

Guest
Criticism: It's nice, but you might want to shade the outline. I think the feet of Cyndaquil have a white nail on them...and the foot (infront) looks sort of chubby. But other than that, it's very good. Was it your first custom sprite? (just wondering) If so, it's really awesome for a first.

Out-Of-Crit: Doubt my criticism matters to you, lol, I'm just pointing out a few things you can fix. Well...that's it...*poofs*
 

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
Thanks for the criticism. It does mattter to me, darn it!

you might want to shade the outline.

Do you mean put some black in it? Cause it's already a dark color.
I think the feet of Cyndaquil have a white nail on them...

Ohhh yeeaahhh... I knew I was forgetting something!

the foot (infront) looks sort of chubby.

Yeah, I had some trouble with that.

other than that, it's very good.

Thanks!

Was it your first custom sprite? (just wondering) If so, it's really awesome for a first.

Yes, it is my first custom! Unless you count the Melody sprite that's my profile pic... It was editted from an Aroma Lady.


EDIT:

Here's the updated version:

http://*******.com/i3w7dc.png
http://*******.com/i3w8zn.png

I gave him the little claws.
 
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Psychic

Really and truly
It's very good!
Well-done, with a good outline, exceot for the fire on its back. It should be more spikey, being more wide and less tall.
Also, for the outlining of the blue back, it shouldn't all the black. Parts of it should be light blue instead because of the lighting.
The feet are also sort of long. The shading on them is odd and their overall shape is weird.

Otherwise, great job! Keep up the good work!

~Psychic
 

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
What? The blue part doesn't have a black outline. It's just dark blue/Aqua/Whatever the heck that color is.

And yeah, I was having trouble with the flames. It's hard to make spikes with pixels! :p
 
I like it but the outline its kinda dark on cyndaquils head but everything else its okay.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;
 

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
You didn't tell me what's wrong with it.

Please tell me what's wrong with it! I can't tell what's wrong with it if you don't tell me!
 
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Dawnstar

Guest
For the outline:

When did I say it had to be darker? Shading meaning the fact that the outline is mono-color, and most sprites don't have that. *points to her own almost-fully custom sprite* Don't do the shading as slightly as I did, try to make it different than just having the same color for the whole outline. Make a lighter outline color for lighter parts, darker for darker parts...understand? ;)
 

Frecyo

Wooo-wah wah
Pretty good, but the flame seems a bit out of whack to me. No reaosn why though >( You need to shade your outlines also.
 

Kauser79

Kauser il più grande
Okay, I'll shade the outlines! Gack, too many people saying that... I'll work on it.
 

ZOMBIE!

Well-Known Member
I really like it!
Very cute!
Though its nose/snout annoys me..
I dunno what it is though,
But it looks awesome!
Did an amazing job of the flame!
 
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Carpetted!

Guest
That is teh amazing!!!
Still, the flame is out of porpotion, and the pose is sort of bland. Still, it's so very good :eek:
 
EHEHEEE! It;s cool. The flames are a bit of side though..
Cool Cyda
 
Kauser79 said:
You didn't tell me what's wrong with it.

Please tell me what's wrong with it! I can't tell what's wrong with it if you don't tell me!
If you are talking to me what I meant to say was that the outline on Cyndaquil's head is a little to dark so you should fix that because the head is to dark and did not look right when I was looking at it for the 1st time.Sorry for the confusion Kauser79.

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;
 
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