Custom OWs

[Ayra]

Here's the last Sailor, now to start Wolf's Rain.

Sailor Neptune

~Ayra~;267;

 

[Ayra]

Here's the first Wolf's Rain one.

Blue

~Ayra~;267;

 

[Northern Lights]

awww Blue, she was my fave, but i think you should add a few more pixels at her hair line, to make it more of a fringe

 

[Ayra]

This better?

~Ayra~;267;

 

[PsychedelicJellyfish]

I don't really know what she should look like, but the second version does look better to me.

 

[Ayra]

Here's a follow-up to my last animation

~Ayra~;267;

 

[PsychedelicJellyfish]

It's good I can't find anything wrong with it, really. One thing though: it's rather long

 

[Ayra]

Northern Lights said I should make it longer to give people enough time to read it.

Kiba

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[PsychedelicJellyfish]

Northern Lights said I should make it longer to give people enough time to read it.

Kiba

~Ayra~;267;

Fair enough, I think it's the combined length of three versions of the song that makes it long more than anything else.

I think the outline of the hair might be a little too dark. It doesn't seem to be gelling with the rest of the sprite, if you get me.

 

[Ayra]

This better?

Bleach

Kurosaki Ichigo

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[PsychedelicJellyfish]

Oh, no, now I know what looked weird about it: the hair needs more of a light effect on it. It's all one shade. If you didn that to the second version it'd look good. Sorry, only just managed to put my finger on it >_<

The other one's fine, though =D

 

[Northern Lights]

Northern Lights said I should make it longer to give people enough time to read it.

Kiba

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The hair needs be a little darker and have a more prominent hairline as R. New said.
Kurosaki looks funny as a tiny OW sprite. =3

 

[Ayra]

Here it is again

~Ayra~;267;

 

[PsychedelicJellyfish]

Yes, that looks much better now ^_^

 

[Ayra]

This was hard

Neliel Tu Oderschvank

~Ayra~;267;

 

[PsychedelicJellyfish]

That's great, you wouldn't know it was made from scratch. Seriously. I think the outline on the hair is too dark, though; it's just black so it doesn't match with the part it's outlining, if you see what I mean.

 

[Ayra]

This better?

~Ayra~;267;

 

[PsychedelicJellyfish]

This better?

~Ayra~;267;

Yep, it is indeed.

 

[Northern Lights]

This better?

~Ayra~;267;

Oh wow, you can definatly tell thats Nel, good job!
Kiba looks much better too =]

 

[Ayra]

Here's a new one, I tried my best.

Tsume

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