Cyndaquil Scratch!

[miken park]

Leave all comments on the doorstep
http://i2.*******.com/rlb9mp.png
Thats him. He's one of my first Scrathes.

 

[ImmortalKaine]

Hmm......8/10 Good work! Keep it up!

 

[miken park]

It'd be nice if you actually reviewed it, not just give a number rating >>

 

[Kinginsoar]

It looks more like Quilava. Don't make the body so long.

 

[Shadow_Fox]

It does look rather long and the shading dosent look right at all. Maybe try a different scratch, fire is reallly hard to get right. Maybe an Eevee or something along those lines.
For improving this one, straighten out the lines and give him a bit more of a butt. The fire looks too solid to be fire too, but fires hard to get right.
Overall, nice job.
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[Kyaku]

Meh, I'll say it's pretty darn good, but just one thing: It looks fat. If you make it slim then it'll look better.

-Spikey-

 

[.Bambi.]

It kind of looks like a squished Cyndaquil.

My advice is, before going into making your own Sprites, try some Re-vamps and Mixes before going ahead and making your own Sprites. As it does take skill.

 

[TheTurquoiseTauros!]

i like it!!!!!!!!! its not perfect.... but i couldnt have done any better!!!!!

 

[miken park]

>>. I've been spriting for one year now. I think I've had enough practice.

porygon2lover: PLEASE DON'T SPAM.

 

[~*Dairuga*~]

Just work on the legs and the head and your set ^_^

 

[.Bambi.]

>>. I've been spriting for one year now. I think I've had enough practice.

Oh really? Well, you clearly have the shading down, just try to work on the building of the Pokemon and the proportions.

Maybe try to scratch a mimic of an already existing Sprite?

 

[miken park]

Ya. Heres some of my old ones. http://i1.*******.com/rmtf2s.pnghttp://i1.*******.com/rmtfg4.png
It's annoying spriting something that already exists though:/
When its a new creation no-one has anything to compare it with.

 

[Kinginsoar]

Awesome! I just love that Kabutops!

 

[miken park]

I didn't want you to review my Old sprites, I was just showing .Combusken. That I ahd done somemore,'Mkay?

 

[blueguy]

It's quite bad, as its shape is nowhere close to that of Cyndaquil. I advise you study a picture as you sprite, and perhaps try to use a similar pose? The colors are pretty off too. Maybe you should also look at the way a Cyndaquil's sprite is shaded to help you out.

 

[miken park]

I used cyndaquils colours though :/

 

[Torchic23]

The head is waaaay to skinny, and the body is too long. Other than that, shading is awsome, I hope you do more!

 

[Kinginsoar]

The old is still good though! I like them!

 

[Shadow_Fox]

I used cyndaquils colours though :/

I think they were refering to the way you used the colors to shade it. Cyndaquil's have round bodys and should be shaded as a round object.

When its a new creation no-one has anything to compare it with.

Besides the actual sprites and drawings. I agree with .Combusken., try spriting an already existing picture for practice then go from there.
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