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CZ's hand drawn art
- Thread starter crystal-zephyr
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blazikenBAM
alittlestitious
eh
they're all right..
no offense, but the faces are a bit disproportionate (sp?). the eyes strange. the eye closest to us on the first drawing is really different from the one away from us. i understand that's because of the 3/4 angle, but they are just too different looking, like two different eye styles.
on the second drawing the eyes are WAY too far apart. i like the angle on that drawing, but the face is very wide and the top of her head is pointed.
the hands overall need work, but hands are very hard, so that'll just take parctice.
good work, just keep practicing
they're all right..
no offense, but the faces are a bit disproportionate (sp?). the eyes strange. the eye closest to us on the first drawing is really different from the one away from us. i understand that's because of the 3/4 angle, but they are just too different looking, like two different eye styles.
on the second drawing the eyes are WAY too far apart. i like the angle on that drawing, but the face is very wide and the top of her head is pointed.
the hands overall need work, but hands are very hard, so that'll just take parctice.
good work, just keep practicing
crystal-zephyr
i feel his pain
ok thanks for the crit. i'll get onto making more soon and im trying to improve, im just really bad at making eyes match and hands. i'll get better with practise, i hope
really nice drawings, could use some improvement (then again, everyone could).
On pic #2, her right leg appears to come out of her left leg, not from where it should be coming from
I was going to comment on the hands on pic#1 but you already addressed that.
Ok here's the awkward part, in pic#1 her right..umm..breast..is bigger than the left one...just pointing it out...
I really do like them otherwise!
On pic #2, her right leg appears to come out of her left leg, not from where it should be coming from
I was going to comment on the hands on pic#1 but you already addressed that.
Ok here's the awkward part, in pic#1 her right..umm..breast..is bigger than the left one...just pointing it out...
I really do like them otherwise!
Anotomy lessons are your friends. Those might be alright, but they aren't the best, and they aren't all that great overall. A breast larger than it's fellow, and overly large at that- do you know how cliche and over used SUPER LARGE BOOBS are? :/ very. There's also other errors like the second's pic face looks .. smashed and triangular, the eyes are askew. For the second pic, outside of the eyes also being .. off, and the breasts different sizes, the hand looks like a foot, to be honest.
So yeah. Keep practicing. Oh and the leg of the second pic also looks off. Mostly because her thigh goes from being FAT to STICK or something along the lines. Just, as I said. Anotomy. Use it. It keeps your people from looking wtf, makes them more realistic.
So yeah. Keep practicing. Oh and the leg of the second pic also looks off. Mostly because her thigh goes from being FAT to STICK or something along the lines. Just, as I said. Anotomy. Use it. It keeps your people from looking wtf, makes them more realistic.