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Da Kirby Adventures

Hikari Tenshi

erghh... hungry...
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Anorith

Bring me the grapes.
i like the first one. good text boxes.
how do u make these?
 

Anorith

Bring me the grapes.
feh?
whaddya mean?
what program do u use?
 
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Eric

Guest
Fireball20xl aren't the only ones with sprites like that, but if you did use them Mud then give credit.

I have been debating what I should do with the review for this comic. I'm not really in the modd for an indepth one but I will ive some advice until the real review:
Use actually grammer and english and you might want there mouths to move when they talk.
 
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Flygon

Guest
No, in KIH, all sorts of things were different (eg. May not turned into an overworld, Deoxys eaten, Shiny Treeko, ect.) The panels in the first comic made little sence, however you seem somewhat skilled in bios. Fix the odd panel locations, and you're good.
 

Anorith

Bring me the grapes.
ever used photoshop?
7.0 is what i am gonna use...
i might get it for christmas....
 

Anorith

Bring me the grapes.
one thing-
u mite wanna make those text boxes sort of end in a point above the kirby.
That is optional!
keep, goin', kipkip!
 

Hikari Tenshi

erghh... hungry...
Actually, I did give credit. It's in the comic. And I have Photoshop, Photoshop CS, but I scarcly(sp?) use it. Oh yeah, the bio part, that was my first try at doing it. ^_^;
 

PikaMew

Call me Kirii!
Seems like a rip off of "Kirby in hoenn!"
If it does, its probably because we are close friends.
No, in KIH, all sorts of things were different (eg. May not turned into an overworld, Deoxys eaten, Shiny Treeko, ect.) The panels in the first comic made little sence, however you seem somewhat skilled in bios. Fix the odd panel locations, and you're good.
I totally agree! ^_^
 
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