Da Kirby Adventures

[Hikari Tenshi]

This is my second comic thread that I made! (My first one's dead though...)
It's really about different kirbys going back and forth to Hoenn and Kanto and their adventures. I hope you like them.

Comics:
[sarcasm]OH MY GOSH!!! *Gasp*[/sarcasm]

Not much yet. There will be more coming up though.

Other:
Character Bios (Not all of the characters are in the comics, yet. These aren't all of them either)

Fanstuff:
None

Credits to Imageshack and The Spriters Resorce.

 

[Anorith]

i like the first one. good text boxes.
how do u make these?

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

Thanks. If you mean the comics, go here: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=80341, but if you mean the Bios, then, I just made them.

 

[Anorith]

feh?
whaddya mean?
what program do u use?

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

I use the basic MS paint...

 

[Pokefan26]

I don't think you used all of that.
The backrounds and the sprites.
You used this http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/NSA/Sheets/kirbyhubroom.png
and this http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/NSA/Sheets/kirbycolors.gif .
You need to given then credit.

 

[Eric]

Fireball20xl aren't the only ones with sprites like that, but if you did use them Mud then give credit.

I have been debating what I should do with the review for this comic. I'm not really in the modd for an indepth one but I will ive some advice until the real review:
Use actually grammer and english and you might want there mouths to move when they talk.

 

[P-Man]

Seems like a rip off of "Kirby in hoenn!"

 

[Flygon]

No, in KIH, all sorts of things were different (eg. May not turned into an overworld, Deoxys eaten, Shiny Treeko, ect.) The panels in the first comic made little sence, however you seem somewhat skilled in bios. Fix the odd panel locations, and you're good.

 

[Anorith]

ever used photoshop?
7.0 is what i am gonna use...
i might get it for christmas....

 

[kapslock]

Nice your bios for the chars were organized.Hope to see more great comics soon.

 

[Anorith]

one thing-
u mite wanna make those text boxes sort of end in a point above the kirby.
That is optional!
keep, goin', kipkip!

 

[Hikari Tenshi]

Actually, I did give credit. It's in the comic. And I have Photoshop, Photoshop CS, but I scarcly(sp?) use it. Oh yeah, the bio part, that was my first try at doing it. ^_^;

 

[PikaMew]

Seems like a rip off of "Kirby in hoenn!"

If it does, its probably because we are close friends.

No, in KIH, all sorts of things were different (eg. May not turned into an overworld, Deoxys eaten, Shiny Treeko, ect.) The panels in the first comic made little sence, however you seem somewhat skilled in bios. Fix the odd panel locations, and you're good.

I totally agree! ^_^