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Dark Charizard

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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Hi all, this is my first fake card. I know there'll be nagging problems on the card, but hey, first timer here. :) I host all my cards on my own server.

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Anyway, please tell me what you think. I'll be making more from now on, now I know how! :D
 
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Cursed

Heroic Sociopath
Why didn't you just say that black rhapsody does 70 damage? other than that, it is impressive.
 
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Esperante

XJ220
Wow. For a first time at fake carding, that almost looks like I pro did it.

I assume you use photoshop?
 
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+Flame Claw+

Space Rebellion!
Well done, brilliant at a first try! That's cool, a few font errors here and there, but it's an overall good card! I know that bubble_cup made that blank (I'm one of his friends). I'd love to see more from you!
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Thanks guys,

Cursed: I don't really know why, I just knew that if I put a 70 it'd be affected by Weakness and Resistance, and I just felt like, DC being a Dark Pokémon...um...nope, I have no idea why I didn't just put 70...eh, well. It's different. :)

Esperante: Actually, I use Ulead Photo Express, I don't have Photoshop. Ulead's quite good, especially with PNG files.

Flame Claw: Thank you, I found the fake on his site and LOVED. IT. His fakes are amazing...
 
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Mawile XD

ello thar
Well, Dark Swampert is part ground. Otherwise it's awesome.
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Whoops. Wow, that deleted real easy. Heh...;260;

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POKErUsAm: This one took about an hour. Dark Charizard took a lot longer, mind.

Mawile XD: I had a choice between the original Fangking Water-Fighting blank, and Cascade's Dark-Water blank. The latter just suited the illustration more, really.
 
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+Flame Claw+

Space Rebellion!
Well, there are a few errors - and you've missed out the Card ID, the set number, and the rarity & set symbol. It's still good though, but you might want to be a bit more creative with the art - those have already been used on cards.
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
I don't put Card ID, set #, rarity, or set symbol on my cards. No reason, really. I just don't see any point unless I'm making a set, which I'm not.
 
King Shuckle

King Shuckle

Don't be daft
ID is usually necessary because it makes the card look more realistic. You cards are nice but one major problem I have is that you are using art that have already been used for other TCG cards. I miss originality. Anyways, the cards aren't that bad. 8/10 for both cards respectively. Keep up the good work.
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
They´re pretty good, but I have here some points to say:
-Dark Charizard:
--Why Dark Blast Burn is weaker if BB is the strongest attack of Charizard?
--It has to need more energys, 70 damage with 3 energys and without any side effects is too powerful.
-Dark Swampert:
--The same as above, but with Apocaliptyc Endeavor, 40 damage with only 2 energys and an increment of 20 damage?
--Why it´s weakness to Thunder? I know that Water type HAVE weakness to Electric type but Swampert is part Ground (in the games) so the weakness couldn´t be Electric
 
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MAJINX24

Researcher/CardRater
im gonna say three things and ur probably gonna hate me for it (but im used to it in this section)

1.dont use art thats already been on cards.. unless your remaking that card in a new style.. its boring.. and anyone who liked the original card better is automatically not gonna like urs
2.the names on swamperts card need work.. for something thats apocoliptyc (or however u spell it).. its kinda weak.. lol.. and leviathan is a roman sea god.. a name/noun.. and swampert is nothing compared..
3.double weakness is normally used for pokemon that have too much strength to let it die.. DC isnt even an EX and isnt all that powerful.. it doesnt need a double weakness
 
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greatchikorita

~It's Raining here!~
It seems that you used Cascade's blanks for your card.

I'm gonna say this to let you improve:

NICE FOR A FIRST/SECOND TRY!!! I really like your cards! Keep up the good work! BUT:

The placements for the symbols on the weakness and resistance are wrong. It should only be 1 pixel down.

The attacks, symbols etc on Dark Swampert in not central in the card.

I don't really use TCG art for my cards but, It's just me.

Swampert is not affected by lightning right? Why is its weakness lightning then?

There is no ID even though you said that you will not give the bottom parts. But you need the ID. # is optional, same as the set symbol.

Like I said, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

9/10!
 
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