Darkpkmn fan1's very first card

[darkpkmn fan1]

Well, my first card.


[img=http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/5229/card2sl.th.png]

 

[Lunanai]

try to read the tutorial,
it's quite helpfull.

you'll probably see the mistakes you've made.

 

[darkpkmn fan1]

What are the mistakes i made.

 

[Lunanai]

-all text is too big.
-Pokéname is too low
-HP could be at the right place, but possibly too high
-Razor Leaf is overpowered (but, if you wanted to have fun, then it's ok)
-text for Headbutt is wrong. It should be:
flip a coin. if heads, your opponent can't attack during your next turn. (sth like that; i'm not completely sure at the moment). but I can assure you that yours is wrong.
-it's Defending Pokémon, not defending pokemon
-energies are not centered with the circles in the background
-you can see white dots around energies, which makes it look bad. (also, the image of Bulbasaur- the white edge is visible)

that's all I could think of.

 

[Naetoru & Stitch]

But it is his first card. I still have to give him credit. Good job. Just fix the mistakes soon.

 

[Lunanai]

But it is his first card. I still have to give him credit. Good job. Just fix the mistakes soon.

of course.
it's allways good to see a new faker.

i'm just trying to point out the mistakes,
so his 2nd card could be better.

and reading tutorial could be the easiest way.

 

[Cutiebunny]

It's not bad. The font's off, but, it's your first and seeing how I am not very knowledgeable in photoshop, I really can't comment on the quality.

 

[Cipher 2008]

Mistakes, but it's your first - and it's good for your first. Make sure to read the tuts.

7/10.