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Gatene
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ClefairyTenchi
Well, that was something ClefairyTenchi, I liked it. I was a little lost at the beginning with the Xatu and all, but once I realized it was an introduction to what you were presenting next, I understood it. I especially liked the prophecy. I just found one error. Andros have metal plates, not iron. Iron sounds better in the prophecy, but they still have metal, not iron.
Perhaps you may be up to something, perhaps Azure will forward it to Spect, who knows.
I agree with Elite Eevee, *pants wheezes* lol. *needs more chapterness*
Gatene
Well, that was something ClefairyTenchi, I liked it. I was a little lost at the beginning with the Xatu and all, but once I realized it was an introduction to what you were presenting next, I understood it. I especially liked the prophecy. I just found one error. Andros have metal plates, not iron. Iron sounds better in the prophecy, but they still have metal, not iron.
Perhaps you may be up to something, perhaps Azure will forward it to Spect, who knows.
I agree with Elite Eevee, *pants wheezes* lol. *needs more chapterness*
Gatene