Dawnstar's Sprite Thread

[Dawnstar]

I've made so many, but let them die off...I hate being such a procrastinator >.< Oh well...



Phantasmeon

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Phantom Dog Pokemon
Type 1: Ghost
Type 2: None
Eevee --- >

(Shade Stone) --- > Phantasmeon
Pokedex: From a distance, Phantasmeon often seem quite docile and tame. But if you approach one fast, loudly, or abrubtly, they will often attack you with a Shadow Ball and take your memories from the past day to keep.



They are my most recent sprites, I've been editing them over and over again, lol. And I changed the shiny to the normal version by popular demand. Hopefully everyone likes it better now

P.S. Please don't spam or post without criticism, just saying something like 'good job' or 'don't like it'...is spamming up my topic. Ok, just telling you.

 

[Medical Meccanica]

YOU'RE a procrastinator? lol.

Anyways... I like it, but it doesn't look ghost-y enough. You should make it more in the style of your old ghost sprites.

 

[Medical Meccanica]

the post above was killed by a mod and therfore I am not a double poser kthxbai.

 

[Dawnstar]

I know my EDIT note was a little harsh...changed it a bit, lol. Btw, I made a version 2 for Phantasmeon, and although part of the ears bug me, I don't have the patience to, for the 4th time, redo both sprites, save them, transparasize them both, then upload and host them.

Also...the part that seperates the little hang-off part from the top part, that's mean to be there. It's like a little circle of string hanging off a cloth. It's also there on the scarf-like part.

 

[Medical Meccanica]

hmm... I like the edit on the tail but not the ears. They look too ghosty to be ears.

Sorry I'm being picky

 

[Dawnstar]

I fixed that up. Hopefully it looks better now, lol. I will probably make another Eeveelution in my spare time, but not right now, I'm going to go soon anyways.

 

[ellie]

I like it, although all three tries look the same to me, except the first one has the best outlines. Maybe I'm just not very good at noticing details >3. The main crit I have is that the outline isn't very visible on tries 2 and 3, and on all of them, the tail looks weirdly connected to the body. However, the shading on all of them is very nice, and the custom parts look almost official, but smoother shading. Maybe I'm weird, but I think that the first try was the best. It just has a lot better outlines. Keep up the good work!

 

[Dawnstar]

IT'S NOT A TAIL...gah x.x It's the rest of the body, Phantasmeon does not have back legs, and if she decides she wants them, they form from the ghostly essence that trails her. That's why the tail and tips of ears now have a light colored outline, it's 100% meant to be there...ghosts normally have a glowing essence to them, so Phantasmeon does as well.

People should be able to see the difference...
1st. All dark outline.
2nd. The outline of the ghostly essence (her 'tail') is light colored as well as her ears.
3rd. Her ears were changed to only have ghostly essence at their ends.

Lol, just saying. I'll try slightly to edit it later, but the outline is meant to be the way it is.

 

[Samayowa]

It's so cute!

 

[Frecyo]

Interesting concept. I've seen other Ghost-Typed Eons, but none with the diversity of this one. And yes, the shiny's colours are ownage XD. THe ears look a bit odd to me.

 

[ZOMBIE!]

I really like it!
So cute!
Though one thing..
To me, the shiny version looks like it should be the normal version!
Awesome though,
I love your sprites
Always so original!

 

[Starter530]

I agree with Autumn I think the colors should be switched
Black=Normal
Green=Shiny

Keep up the awesome work Dawnstar!

 

[Shed]

She told me that the colors were chosen so that people like the Shiny better, so the black should remain as Shiny. It makes sense though... In the games, you usually like the shiny colors better, right?

*Analyzes all versions* well. The first's outlines are too dark (pretty evident in the shiny), but that's fixed in the others. The second's outlines are too light on certain parts, but the third is pretty much perfect. I only have one suggestion: the essence flowing from its back looks a lot like the fire on the Cyndaquil family, which makes it look like its bursting from the back rather than flowing. Maybe try to make it more wavy?

 

[Dark Venusaur]

I liked how you gave it Pokedex information and what Starter and autum said about swicthing them. It will look better for everyone probably. The shading is good. Out of 10 I give it a 9

;003;Dark Venusaur;003;

 

[Dawnstar]

I finished the new versions of Phantasmeon. Hopefully they will be more liked then all the others...I deleted the other versions, at least from my post. Hope you like!

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

The lower body now glows. Are there other differences?

 

[Dawnstar]

Differences:

Editted the shading at many areas
Edited the right leg (it's view)
Changed the shading of the tail and ears back to normal
Made the tail glow (fine, it's a tail)
Made it in it's form with back legs


Why, do you not like it?...

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

No, ZI just wasn't in the mood to zoom in and obseve. Plus you got rigd of the others, so I couldn't really compare. I guess it is a tail now since it has hind legs.

 

[Dawnstar]

I will make another version without the hind legs in a slightly different pose.

It just sounded like you didn't like the sprite, sorry x.x

 

[Starter530]

I will make another version without the hind legs in a slightly different pose.

It just sounded like you didn't like the sprite, sorry x.x

how could you not like it?
its almost to perfection
its this close * holds up two fingers in a pinching gesture*