DBGT the rewrite

[RED1992]

Alright this story starts out the same as the regular GT, except Gohan is still Chou. Also Goten and Trunks have learned SSJ2.
I don't want to go into excruciating detail here.

DBGT rewrite Episode 1: The Luud Robot Part 1
In the deep reaches of space 2 Saiyans(a Saiyan and a half-breed, actually.) were busy training “with their minds”.
“C’mon Goku” taunted Trunks, who has mastered SSJ2. “you trying to get beat up or what?” This was always a favorite of Trunks for the 3 weeks they’ve been in space: reeling up Goku and seeing if he would be presented with a challenge.
“Trunks is a lot stronger than I thought,” thought Goku. “ ever since I got wished back to a kid he’s been able to always stay one step ahead of me.”
“So I’ll just have to do….. This!!!!!!!!!” yelled Goku as his already SSJ2 aura burst forth. Lightning began to surround his body even more, and his hair went down to his ***. Yep, you guessed it right. He went SSJ3. “Wha..” said Trunks with a cowardly look. “I..I thought you promised to only fight as SSJ2, Goku!”
“Yeah, but I needed something to level the playing field. It’s no fair we fight in the same form, with you as an adult and me as a kid, anyways.” Instantly, he disappeared and reappeared behind Trunks. “Take this!!” yelled the SSJ3. “SUPER DRAGON FIST!!!!!!!!”
“Yow!!!” yelled Trunks, as the Dragon impaled his stomach. “Time out!!”
And with that, they were back in the real world. “Goku, I thought you couldn’t even handle SSJ3 anymore! What’s going on??!!” said the confused lad.
“Does it matter? We were inside our minds. The laws of physics don’t even apply there.”
“Yeah, I guess….”
“Quiet, you two!” yelled Pan, who’s been steering the wheel for hours now. “Listen! The Radar’s getting a signal!” “What, is it a Dragonball?” asked Trunks.. “Yep,” said Pan. “and it’s coming from that Planet! It’s moving real fast, too!” “Weird,” said Goku with a puzzled look. “how can it be moving if there’s no ki?”
To Be Continued





This is my first fic so please don't bash me. I'll try to have as many chapters written as possible.

 

[Poison Master]

very very short, not enough detail, for example, what is a Super Saiyan? What does Pan look like? How did Goku become a child again? you know, explain things, its not very easy for somebody to just pick up and read.

 

[RED1992]

The next one's gonna be a little more detailed. And I thought since people know DBZ so well, I wouldn't have to explain what a SSJ is and all that. I promise the next one wil be a little bit longer.
The real reason this one wasn't so detailed was because I was saving it for the battle scene.

 

[RED1992]

The 2nd part of ch.1

DBGT rewrite Ep.1 The Luud Robot Part 2
Our heroes, namely Goku(who’s been wished back into a kid again), Trunks(son of Vegeta. Is capable of going SSJ2 now), and Pan(the granddaughter of Goku. Unlike in GT she is sexy.haha just kidding she’s about the age of Marron at the end of Z) landed in a deserted Planet. There were some traces of civilization here and there but everything was wrecked. Wrecked buildings and dead bodies littered the city. And there was a sandstorm brewing.
“You sure this is the place, Pan” asked Goku. “the whole place looks…. Kinda ruined.”
“The Dragon Radar says it’s here,” said Pan. “oh no… It’s heading right for us!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Suddenly, a giant robot arm came out of nowhere and started squeezing Goku. It was difficult to see because of the sandstorm, but it looked as if it just popped out of the ground.
“ Ha!!!!!!!!!!” Goku yelled as he powered up to SSJ. “Let me go, you stupid pile of junk!” He let loose a giant scream, and then it was followed by a Super Explosive wave. “pant… pant”
“Grandpa!! You did it!” Pan yelled with joy.
“No..” said Goku. “It’s still out there.”
Suddenly, a claw came out of the robot’s broken arm and tried to rip him to shreds. Goku countered it with instant Transmission, and showed up behind it. He powered up to SSJ2, and prepared a kamehameha.
“Ka…Me…Ha.. ..Me….HA!!” A giant blue beam of energy prepared to engulf the robot, but it countered it with a blast of its own from its mouth, which was glowing red.. “Hey….that orb…” said Goku. “That’s it! The Dragonball!” However he got distracted and lost the struggle. “Yow!!” yelled Goku as he seemingly got blasted into nothingness.
“Grandpa!!!” yelled Pan as she dashed towards him, but was stopped by Trunks. “Let go!! Grandpa needs my help!” cried Pan.
“No Pan you’ll just make things worse.” Said Trunks. “I’ll handle this!” he yelled as he too powered up to SSJ2. “You may be able to counter an energy attack…” said Trunks. “but can you handle this?” He took out his sword and prepared to slash the robot’s giant head.
“Ha…. Ha foolish human..” the robot laughed and made a barrier. Trunks tried to stop, but he was too late. He crashed onto it, and electricity steamed out of it. He screamed and reverted back to base. He was about to fall, but was saved by Goku. “G…Goku..” said Trunks weakly. “I knew it.. You didn’t die after all…”
“Hmph!” he scoffed. “You think I’m just gonna let a giant pile of trash waste me? Now let’s go send that thing back to the junk yard!!” said Goku cheerfully.
“B..but how?” asked Trunks. “That thing’s tougher than a wall of Katchin!”
“True.” Said Goku. “but I have a plan. Listen up! We need to break that barrier, right? So we need to throw more energy at it than it’s using for that barrier! Give me your sword, Trunks!” “I don’t understand, Goku. How’s this going to…”
“Just believe my gramps, Trunks! He’s never let us down before!” yelled Pan. “Thanks Pan!” Goku powered up to SSJ3 instantly, and channeled his ki into the sword. It started glowing gold, and crakled with blue lightning all around it. "Hey!" said Trunks " this must be your plan! To break the barrier with my sword!" "Yep," said Goku as he powered up to SSJ3 again. "I can't handle SSJ3 for long. Do it! And be quick about it!"
Trunks powered up to SSJ2 and said:" I'm Impressed Goku! Maybe you're not so hardheaded after all!"
"WTF did you say?" yelled Goku. "N..Never mind!"
Trunks charged towards the behemoth, and slashed a hole in its barrier. "Do it Goku!" yelled Trunks. Goku powered up and yelled, "SUPER DRAGON FIST!!!" A familiar yellow Dragon came out of his fist, and completely blew off Luud's head. The robot(or what's left of it, at least) began spinning in all directions, and blew up, leaving a mushroom cloud in its wake. Unfortunately Goku got caught in the explosion as well.
To Be Continued

 

[RED1992]

I'm planning another DBGT remake, set in a different universe than this 1.