Dear Diary...

[kyledove]

Simply put - the Honest writings of a starting out Pokemon trainer.
Yes~ I know its cliche and so on but I don't care!

Chapter 1
Page 1: Easy as...Cake?!
Page 2: Pickpocket-mon?!

Newest page:

Wanted to try a pokemon comic, if its popular I might continue it XP

 

[.Bright Side.]

Its very good!
Even thoguh it may be cliche, not all cliche comics turn out crappy.

Although the writing is a bit hard to read, I like how you used the book template. Its better then a lot of beginner comics.

 

[Redsoxpsyco]

This is absolutely maginificent spriting. I've never seen a better sprited comic...(although I haven't exactly been into comics that long, but I've seen some of the good ones. <_<) It's only the first chapter, so I can't exactly rate the plot, but a quick tip, if it's a normal pokemon journey plot, then that excellent spriting will be put to waste.

 

[Matt Silver]

I saw you're sprite thread, read the comic and I must quote Peter from Family Guy when he meets Kiss: "You...are...GODS!"

Seriously, this comic looks impressive visually (Love the diary layout) i'd like to see it continue (Let's hope the plot thickens a bit more than normal cliche)
4.8 Stars.

 

[kuro mizu]

yes, please continue with the comic. Ive always loved your sprites, and I want to see how they do in a comic ^^

 

[EmberGryphon]

Actually, I like this. :3 I'm not usually a huge fan of sprite comics, but I love the diary-format idea, the grammar is believable for the diary of a teenager but still well-written, and the visuals are really very impressive. ^_^ And... I like journey comics, if they're kept under control. (Not "Professor Oak is out of starter pokemon so Kyle starts out with a shiny Absol at level forty-two" and given up on after the first critical comment. ^~) Giving this an original edge would be a good idea, but anyway, I'm looking forward to new issues!

It might be a good idea to darken the text a tad, though, so it's easier to read.

 

[kyledove]

Thanks for all the constructive criticism people ^_^; Ill try to make it original and creative! And Ill take on board all the things like text and so on.
It is a journey comic so far but Ill try to make it a bit more interesting than "meets proffesor, chooses pokemon, fights rival, etc"

 

[jakepwnsjoo]

I love the journal thing. ^^ I'm gonna have to remember to check up on this. =D You are my inspiration for spriting, and you'll probably be my inspiration for comicing (? xD) too. ^^

 

[kyledove]

Okay I did the first episode thing~
Ill remove the old one cos it was lame.

 

[Feity]

Excelent job. My one beef is that you should furthur differentiate the boy's text from the girl's... the colors are too similar.

 

[Silon]

Kyle,

That is brilliant! I love how you made it like a journal. The 'book' is amazing, and your custom tiles are always lovely. <3 Continue it, please. ;;

 

[Divine_Light]

Thanks Kyle, You've blessed us with a brilliant comic, lol, Keep it up please

 

[nattydbzmaster]

i cant believe it i made my comic first and this one is almost more popular
gime hi five
*gives kyle a hi five*

 

[The Dean of Suds]

Incredible spriting, it truly is marvelous. I love the book form, the only problem is that the plot could be better. It is great though, I like it.

 

[Rizadon]

funny comic man! That thing is gona kill him!

 

[Frenzy boy]

yo

OMFG I LOVE IT!, when r u going to post the next comic???soon i hope

 

[Typhlosion Dude]

Great comic! If it starts out this good, I wonder how good it will be like in the future!

 

[Pokechuppa]

finally you made a fan comic with your
amazing sprites, and guess what? it
turned out great as always, love it
i'm so keeping my eyes on this comic
great work =D

pokechuppa x ;026;​

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Wow, this comic is just incredible. The sprites are great, and the book layout is original, and good. The only thing is that the boy´s text colour is too similar too the girl´s, try changing a colour

 

[Redsoxpsyco]

*applause for remake of comic* You've gained another fan on your comic ^_^. The plot hasn't thickened yet, but it's looking great, and it's pretty funny too.
4.8 stars so far, I'll wait until the plot thickens to really rate the comic.