Dear Little Rocking Horse

[Zephyr Flare]

Nother thats since poofed but I''ll post it again.

Written while in Learn Direct for some bizzare reason.

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Rocking Horse

My dear little rocking horse;

Standing so strong
All firm and solid
Only ever weakened
With hair of thread

My dear little rocking horse
Looking so pristine and clean
Carved to perfection
Knowing forever just when to be

Take the strain
Remain in rhythm
Moving so simple
Staying always steady

My dear little rocking horse
Unbreakable as you are
Can we but dream
And pray to stretch as far?

Just to be as you
My dear little rocking horse friend.

 

[Brian Random]

Dear Little Rocking Horse:

I’m not a big fan of poetry but I like this poem because I enjoyed the way you described that horse and how much a person loved that horse. The flow kept me interested and at the end I found this poem cute.

Question: Did you use to have a rocking horse and did it inspire you to write or did it come out randomly? I ask because there are people who get inspired by people or items important to them.

Overall score: 4/5

 

[Zephyr Flare]

Random, I was in Learn Direct and bang, I was writting it down on my doodle pad...

Late response due to email problems.


Sandra