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Delta Mightyena Ver II

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zappy

Beginning Trainer
I don't really get the fuss around Delta Pokémon, but whatever.

Nice card, but you could've done the fonts a bit bigger for the attack text.
 
A

Altair

Guest
The image is very nice, and the attacks are great, as well as the ability.
Though, I do have one suggestion, maybe you should lower the extra damage on Delta Claw to 20 instead of 30 for each Delta species in play.

10/10 otherwise
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Very nice. Two things:

If you want Absol to be sticking out of the picture, make it a Pokémon-* instead of a Pokémon-ex. And make the HP white. Otherwise, 9/10.
 
Z

zappy

Beginning Trainer
Double Dash said:
Very nice. Two things:

If you want Absol to be sticking out of the picture, make it a Pokémon-* instead of a Pokémon-ex. And make the HP white. Otherwise, 9/10.
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Have you ever seen a real card? 9/10 means almost perfect, something this card isn't, although it gets really close.

HP font is off, should be white like Double Dash mentioned, and really, fontsize could be a lot bigger on this card! I assume you used size 11-12? Make that 14 and then fix your HP, then we have a 10/10 card.

People here are overrating cards, if you ask me.
 
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Cipher 2008

Well-Known Member
Well, if people take the time to make the cards in the first place, why shouldn't we? So it's not exactly like a real card. Doesn't matter, it's still a great card.

And actually, I have to agree with the font issue. Far too small. I still stand by 9/10, however.
 
M

MAJINX24

Researcher/CardRater
Really nice card but the wording is so broken. "for each delta species pokemon in play" that would include Mightyena unless specified that it doesn't. 90 Damage automatically plus a possible more.. see what I mean only way a mightyena would do that much is if it was an ex.. the fonts are alittle funny and the justification is non existant but I give a bonus mark for good art 4/5

Wording is off on Absol ex's power aswell.. it basically says you may remove up to 6 damage counters from all your dark pokemon including absol (reword it alittle and it'll be fine).. still needs to be justified.. only shiney goes outside the boarder.. fonts still alittle funny (cant put my finger on it).. and again awesome art.. 3.75/5
 
N

Nofan

Guest
10/10 picture

but 7/10 for card

No offense , but the picture does suit the card imo
 
King Shuckle

King Shuckle

Don't be daft
Why am I the only one to see the obvious mistakes? ;-;

Okay on both Mightyena AND Absol, the HP font is incorrect. It's also suppose to be white on Absol. On Mightyena, the font is way to fuzzy. Try anti-aliasing or something. The correct fonts can be found in my sig. You could also make the effect text a little bigger. One more thing, the justification on the effect text could be fixed too. Your on your way to greatness! Just fix a few things and your cards will shine.

Absol - 8/10
Mightyena - 8.5/10
 
A

Alakazam

I like cheerios.
For Mightyena, the last attack is too overpowered.

Throw 4 Dratini d on the bench plus the darkness= 200 Damage.
 
G

greatchikorita

~It's Raining here!~
I can't see the HP of Absol, For Dark Type Pokemon, the color of its HP should be white. Also, The wording of the cards are incorrect. The Power of Absol is kinda overpowered. I like the art, they are great.

8.5/10 Overpowerness, and Grammar are the only ones that bug me.

Keep up the good work!
 
E

English Avatarman

Guest
Knightblazer said:
This is the fourth card in my set EX-Twilight Souls (I've never shown the third card basically because... it looks horrible. So I'm currently redoing it.

And yes, I sneaked in. >.<



Knightblazer ;262;
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I know this picture, it was by a members neighbour.
 
S

shadowofdreams

SEXAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
both cards are awesome.
 
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