Deoxys uk's sprite's!

[deoxysuk]

hi everyone. i have been doing sprites for a while and i thought to myself ' why not make a thread of them' so ... here they are!
[img=http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/9461/myspritesforserebii0ap.th.png]
i welcome any comments and critisism
if you want to see more of my sprites then go to http://www.freewebs.com/swampertsswim
i'll take a few suggestions of anything you think i should do and you can use these sprites but give credit or pm me if you want to use them.
happy postings
deoxysuk

 

[Jasmine Lover]

Your scratches are tooo straight
you left some green outline in the tyranitar fusooin
The map is ok though

 

[deoxysuk]

thanks for the critisism and comment jasmine lover. i'm not sure if i will edit them because i just want to know if i've done anything wrong.

 

[Jasmine Lover]

The shadow celebi are the worst. you must recolor everything
The four way things are wierd

 

[deoxysuk]

i know about the celebi i forgot too finish it of.

 

[LatiosLover]

On the mixes you've gotta fix the parts that have had their outlining cut off. Also work on the overall outlining and how the parts blend in to the body. On the scratches you need to work on the shape and outlining and shading. Your recolors are good.

~LL~

 

[Grandmaster Chao]

I really like Zaplax and Tyranizard, and the reigon is very good to. well done dude

 

[deoxysuk]

hi everyone.
i've got two new sprites.
the slaking sprite is a recoulor to make it look like king kong. i especially like the munchlax.i personally think its good for a sprite of a 4th gen pokemon seeing as there aren't many around.
anyways enjoy!

 

[shadow3944]

your sprites or ok but they need some improvement. i like the munchlax though it doesn't look like a sprite its still well i don't know how t say this but munchy! (lol)

 

[deoxysuk]

thanks everyone for the c and c. i may try on some more sprites with your tips so they are perfect. anyway at the moment i'm trying to change a japanese d/p screenshot into english. at the moment the text will be "MUNCHLAX used UNKNOWN". don't ask me why.
Deoxysuk

 

[Aptenodytes]

The outlines on your Munchlax need major fixing up. One foot looks bigger than the other, the bottom is one straight line, and the ears are weirdly shaped. Also, your shading looks really flat. Looks like diagonal lines with darker colors, which is a no if you want to give it a nice 3D shape. The sprite isn't all bad, but keep practicing.

I'd rate your other sprites, but you have too many .

Off topic: Give credit to Coronis for the Munchlax base in your signature.

 

[deoxysuk]

um...bonemerang,that sprite in my sig with munchlax was done by arbok of doom so should i have credit to arbok of doom and coronis...i guess i'll do it now.thanks anyway.
deoxysuk