Destiny Deoxys Remake

[Lil Brother]

Has this been done before...?

Did Pokemon 7 let you down? I know it let me down, all we got was a dumb Rayquaza that destroyed everything, some pointless Munchlax and Plusle/Minun stuff, Team Rocket making cameos for no reason, and bucnh of boxes that appearnatly multplied like bunnies at the last minute.

Well, I'm totally re-doing it with a few twists. I know this chapter seems word-to-word the same with the movie, but as it goes on it'll be wildly differnet. And I also know it looks real short, but it was something that only took me an hour and probably has a bunch of errors in it. Feel free to criticize.

Rated PG-13 for major blood and gore, and later some cussing.


Since the beginning of time, our world has had mysteries. How did it come to be? When was life created? What exactly is life? What happens once we do die? And… is this the only planet with life?

Humans and Pokémon have wandered these questions since their creation and have no come to a solid conclusion. Life is a miracle in its own way. We can see, think, hear, touch, and ask why we can do these extraordinary things.

Pokémon are as much as a miracle as humans, if not more so. Like humans they change form over the years, to a much further extent. We call this evolution, although it is more of a puberty action. The odd thing is, Pokémon seem to have the choice whether they evolve or not. It is unknown if this is some kind of glitch or something… more.

Whatever the matter, we can not overlook the importance of our world. In a perfectly balanced nature, our planet consist of three main areas: ground, sea, and air. It is unknown, like so many other things, how we have this perfect balance. Some ancient cultures tell legends of almighty Pokémon that watch over our planet, keeping it safe.

But safe… from what?

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Billions of Years Ago
Moments Before the Big Bang​

On a small, desolate planet lived a miniscule colony of life-forms. Life was extraordinarily rare, yet this colony had no idea. They had amazing psychic power and could, to a limit, change shape to a number of different forms. These creatures’ souls were mainly in the colored gem in the center of the chest. Every gem was a different color, and could emit solar waves that would mark territory. Breeding was a rarity as too many of these forms would cause catastrophe.

And indeed it did.

Amazing how such a small argument can cause something that would change history forever. It started out innocent enough. One of the beings with emerald-colored solar waves and gem was hungry for cosmic radiation. It wandered into territory not of its own to satisfy its needs.

However, it had wandered into the area of a very territorial indigo-colored creature. The emerald creature just wanted a few rays before going to search for its own. But when the indigo creature saw this stranger absorbing its rays that it gathered, it was outraged.

From out of seemingly nowhere, the emerald creature was hit by a psychic blast. Surprised, it realized it was being attacked. And indeed, the indigo creature was in its attack form, with four long tentacles as arms and spiked kneecaps.

Frightened, the emerald creature assumed its speed form: the back of its head was shifted to be pointed backwards and its arms and legs morphed to flow alongside it as it fled. Quickly zooming away, it was almost immediately hit with another attack. Pulling together all its courage, the emerald creature got into defense form.

Defense form had an almost egg-shaped head and shoulders and large, protective shields as arms. Turning back to its enemy, the emerald creature was barely feeling the attacks. But the indigo creature was very displeased now, it was angrily firing a single blast. Realizing it must attack back, the indigo creature’s foe managed to dodge an attack just long enough to also transform into attack mode. Now in full combat, the two were in full combat now, not exactly what the indigo creature wanted. Terribly angered, it began to store up all of its energy for a devastating attack. Quickly noticing this, the emerald creature followed suit. There were a few moments of charging, but the two unleashed massive amounts of energy only milliseconds apart.

The other creatures on this tiny planet were killed instantly. Many other planets had been destroyed within seconds. This gigantic collision of energy created new matter; positive, negative, and even some “strange” matter. As galaxies were destroyed within the blink of an eye, new space was being created. Our universe had just been born.

Somehow, the two creatures in combat had been spared. All that remained left of them were the indigo and emerald gems which contained their very existence.

The two gems were being shot out into this new universe they had created. They were very weak to see at the least, of course, but they still barely had some life in them. Going at a speed about 1/16 of the speed of the energy rapidly destroying and creating, it would put their speed forms to shame. But, it would still take them a long time before they could stop and continue their battle.

The very same battle that inadvertently created all of us.

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1995 A. D.
Earth​

Professor Lund smiled as he watched his young son wander down the beach. With his long, gray hair swaying by his neck as he ran, Tori looked more happy than he had in months. At age six, he sure did like to explore. Natural instinct, Lund though, the skills of the scientist…

“Jay? This I fascinating, you should come look,” his wife said as she walked up behind him. The two watched as their son began to walk up to a group of Corsola. “Quite the mover, isn’t he?” she pointed out.

“Yes, just like you,” Lund, who always insisted the boy got his personality from her, replied, “what has the archeology team found this time?”

It was thanks to the archeology team that they were on this nearly-abandoned island in the first place. The collapsed remains of an ancient temple dubbed the “Sky Pillar” had thought to have been found and most of the test pointed toward it truly being so. Back in its prime, it was said to literally scrape the sky, and it is rumored where the term “sky scrapers” originates from. The Sky Pillar was considered very holy to an ancient clad who worshiped three Pokémon: Groudon, God of Land; Kyogre, God Of Seas; and Rayquaza; God of the Sky.

It was Jay who insisted Tori come and his wife reluctantly agreed. She seemed to like his idea now though, as Tori apparently enjoyed traveling across half the country with his parents. Which, brings us back to Jay’s question…

“What has the archeology team found this time?”

“It’s amazing. The hieroglyphics seem to be hinting towards Rayquaza not only living at the Sky Pillar, but also being born there. They say that Rayquaza was the peace-keeper of ground, sea, and sky and was the more intelligent of the three gods,” she exclaimed excitedly.

“That is, of course, if Rayquaza was real. I’d think we’d notice the skeleton of a fifty-foot beast,” Jay remarked.

As the two discussed possibilities, their son was making friends with a wild Pokémon.

“Hi, I’m Tori!” he claimed, “I’m here with my mom and dad they’re researching some ruins!”

“Corsola, corso cor la!” the pink-and-white Corsola happily replied. As more Corsola came up to him, the more excited Tori got. He couldn’t wait until he was ten and could start to catch Pokémon and train them. But the little boy’s fantasies were cut short when the Corsola began to run away into the ocean. “Wait- stop…” he muttered.

Hearing a whooshing sound behind him, Tori turned around and was shocked. A meteor with an indigo glow was heading straight at him!

“Tori!” his parents shouted simultaneously, running towards him. But it was not worth shouting at him, he was so startled he couldn’t even move.

Mouth agape, Tori hardly even notice his parents run to him and push him out of the way. With Tori in his arms, Jay ran until he hard a horrible sound behind him. SCRREEEEE!!!!!!!

“MOOOOOMMMMMMYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Tori screamed. She had been hit by the meteor and pushed out to the ocean with it. With a loud “boom!” the meteor landed about thirty feet in the ocean… with the organs and blood of Jay’s wife scattered all throughout the beach.

Horrified, Tori and Jay barely even realized what was happening. From where the meteor landed, the indigo creature emerged out of the ocean. Thankfully, all the archeologist got out of the ruins of the Sky Pillar before the emerald gem- also looking like a meteor- landed and caused a large explosion. And only some of the archeologist turned around in time to see Rayquaza rise from the ruins.

Under other circumstances, it would be a wondrous opportunity to see the legendary creature rise from the Sky Pillar. In the late afternoon sun, it’s brilliant green and yellow scales shined as if Rayquaza had just been polished. But it wasn’t the time to be thinking straight: two meteors just hit, the ruins and all their research destroyed, some odd being covered in carnage was coming from the ocean, and the leader of the operation had just been violently killed.

Rayquaza and the indigo creature immediately rose into the air. It wasn’t much of a battle; the indigo creature was still very weak from its landing and a single Hyper Beam from Rayquaza reduced it to the indigo gem that had rammed into Earth. Without anyone noticing, the indigo gem rolled back into the ocean and Rayquaza roared angrily as it flew into the sky. Some people were in hysterical tears, some were watching in horror and confusion as Rayquaza flew away, and some were too shocked to do anything.

And one of them found the emerald gem that rammed into the ruins and awoke Rayquaza.

 

[Lil Brother]

Gah! No one's replying. If nobody says anything, I'll probably stop.

Meh. Here's part two. Shorter than the first one, I know, but I decided to end it earlier than planned to leave on a cliffhanger.

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1999 A.D.
Hoenn​

“Ash, I’m getting tired, let’s rest!” May whined.

“Why do you always tell me when you want to stop?” Ash retorted, “Ask Brock, he’s the oldest.”

“Actually, Ash, it is getting kind of late. We should stop for tonight,” Brock smugly answered.

It was not uncommon for this type of bickering to start. Four teenagers of very different ages are bound to disagree when traveling together by foot. Ash Ketchum, a thirteen-year-old from Pallet Town had traveled across many different countries and was used to these long walks, as was Brock, an eighteen-year-old who was forced to care for his nine younger siblings the majority of his life and was a terrific cook. Ten-year-old May was not as accustomed to these journeys as she only started about half a year ago. Her eight-year-old brother Max also didn’t enjoy walking everywhere they went.

“Good, because I’m pretty tired,” Max reported, holding back a yawn. It was about eight o’ clock and sunset, but the group usually didn’t stop to set camp for at least another hour.

Ash groaned, he wanted to at least get to the next town. Adept City it was called, it was known for being the home of an Archeology corporation. Most of the residents there were said to be smart, but there weren’t any moving sidewalks or anything ridiculous like that, of course. The traveling guide mentioned something about a giant tower named the Sky Pillar overlooking the city that worked as a research building.

“Pika pi!” Pikachu called out. Lost in thought, Ash hadn’t even noticed his electric mouse Pokémon, Pikachu, had leapt off his shoulders and gone to play with Max as Brock and May set up camp.

“We should let our Pokémon out, they could use some air,” Brock commented, unrolling his sleeping bag.

“Okay!’ Ash agreed with determination. Grabbing for his belt, he yanked off the four Pokéballs and threw them into the air. “Go, Grovyle, Torkoal, Swellow, Corphish!” he yelled.

“Come on out, Beautifly, Bulbasaur, Combusken, Skitty!” May called, also throwing her balls into the air.

“Mudkip, Lombre, Forretress! You guys, too!” Brock screamed.

With eleven blinding bursts of light, the group’s Pokémon emerged and began to stretch. Ash could only imagine what it was like inside a Pokéball, but it must have been cramped.

“Corphish! Cor cor phish!” Ash’s Corphish bellowed. He seemed pretty angry at something. Then again, Corphish always seemed mad at something.

“What’s the matter, Corphish?” Ash asked, still half-daydreaming. Yet Corphish wasn’t the only one of the Pokémon acting strangely.

“Kip, mud mud!” Brock’s Mudkip exclaimed.

“Bulbasaaaaur...” May’s Bulbasaur said to herself strangely.

“What’s up with them?” May asked, confused.

“Pokémon are much more in tune with nature then we are,” Brock explained, “something must be wrong.”

Ash remembered times where things like this had happened before. A few years ago, some of the best trainers in Kanto were called to a construction site to stop a group of Diglett that were halting the operation. None of the trainers’ Pokémon would stop the Diglett though, as they knew the construction would destroy the environment. On a much larger scale, a madman that was trying to capture the legendary birds Moltres, Zapdos, Articuno, and Lugia ended up nearly flooding the world, and Pokémon from all over the continent tried to travel to the source of the mayhem to stop it. Ash wondered if only the local Pokémon were acting odd or all of them on Earth like last time.

“Pika Pikachu Pi!” Pikachu said, interrupting Ash’s thoughts once again.

“What’s he saying?” May asked. To a limited degree, Ash seemed to understand what Pikachu said.

‘I’m not sure. Something about the air being… corrupted.” He processed, thinking of what Pikachu was trying to say.

“Pika, Pi Chu!” Pikachu insisted. The others joined in talking. Ash glanced at them, then over to May Brock. Something was missing…

“Hey, where’s Max?” he asked.

“I sent him out to firewood while you weren‘t helping us set up,” May calmly replied. Then after a moment, she exclaimed, “Oh no! What if he’s hurt?”

A few moments before, Max was walking through the small forest that the group had stopped next to. Picking up sticks as he saw them, a pair of Seedot ran by him.

I wonder what’s wrong, Max thought. Deciding to move on, his eyes glanced upon-

“A bright, crunchy apple!” he excitedly said to himself. Rushing over to pick it up, he stopped to see a blue, furry paw pick it up.

“A Munchlax…?” he asked himself. Slowly, the Munchlax lifted the apple over its head and dropped it into its mouth, swallowing it in one gulp.

“Ah-” he groaned. Then, with a change in personality, he shouted, “hey! I was going to eat that!” But, the Munchlax didn’t seem to notice him. Slowly, it turned around and started to waddle away.

“Huh…” Max groaned to himself.

“Max, where are you!?” his sister’s voice rang. Realizing he must be in trouble, Max turned around and started to jog in the direction of the campsite.

“I’m right here, May, don’t have a cow!” Max called.

Back at camp, Ash and Brock were recalling their Pokémon. It was odd, they seemed almost resistant to go in. For some reason, Swellow and Beautifly (that Brock returned into her ball, along with the rest of May’s Pokémon) refused to fly.

“Hey, what’s that?” Brock asked. Max stopped running towards the others as he turned to look at what was approaching. At a distance, it looked like a dot but as it got closer, Ash and his friends could see a streaking pattern of red , blue and purple: it was the indigo creature in speed form.

“It looks like a Pokémon,” May said. She and Ash simultaneously retrieved their Pokédex, digital encyclopedias of all the known Pokémon. But neither of them recognized the creature.

Unlike the modern-day creatures of Earth, the creature saw energy instead of objects. Five objects ahead were giving off extreme energy, one further away from the other four.

The creature made a dive for Max. Within seconds, it picked him up and started to fly in the direction it came from.

“May!” Max shouted. He wouldn’t dare try to shake loose, he was clearly above fifty feet from the ground. A fall from here would kill him.

“Max!” May shouted back, helpless to save her little brother.

Thinking quickly, Ash grabbed one of his Pokéballs and tossed it. “Go, Swellow!” he yelled, “Go chase Max and that thing!”

“Swellow!” Swellow said, and began to give chase.

The creature was not amused. It quickly turned around and threw Max into the air.

“Max!” May, Ash, and Brock shouted in fear.

Before Swellow, could even do anything, the creature used a Psychic attack. The impact sent Swellow flying, and he crashed right in front of the campsite. The creature, meanwhile, caught Max, and began to head back to its destination.

“May!” Max shouted, one more time.

“Max, hold on!” May shouted back, giving chase with Brock close behind her.

“Knocked out in one hit,” Ash grumbled, returning Swellow to his ball.

There was no hope in catching Max. The creature was far ahead of them. But they kept on running, tying to see where it was going. May was so focused on chasing after it, she didn’t even notice Max’s glasses on the ground. They had fallen off and shattered to pieces. No use in getting them now, Brock thought as he ran past them.

What seemed like hours was only a few minutes. The creature and Max were out of sight now, and the three were tired of running. But without any words, they kept on running until they couldn’t any more. May had almost run straight off a steep cliff, stopping just as she realizing where she was heading.

“Oof,” Brock grunted, tripping on crabgrass. Out of breath, Ash stopped behind him. All three were heavily panting.

“Max…” May said to herself, tears forming in her eyes. It had been her responsibility to watch after Max as they traveled. Max was gone and it was all her fault! It was her who insisted it was Max’s turn to gather firewood, and that may of very well ended his life. Not caring, May hardly notice Ash yell, “that thing is coming back!”

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I know I left a lot of stuff unexplained like how Deoxys is fully recovered and why that building is called the Sky Pillar, but you'll just have to wait for future parts (if anyone's even reading this T.T).

 

[Lil Brother]

Bah, are people at least reading?

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“Damn!” Ash yelled in anger. What in the world was going on? Just ten minutes ago, everything seemed fine. Now they were being abducted.

Wiping back tears, May strangely could only think about Ash at this moment. It was unlike him to cuss, even in the most dire of situations. Then again, he did seem to always have a deep friendship with Max. Ash was always like the older brother she never had, and it seemed Max shared this feeling. They even fought like brothers. But now was not the time to be thinking about Ash, an odd Pokémon-like creature had come from nowhere and taken Max… and was now coming back for seconds.

“Hurry, hide!” Brock told the others. Obeying directions, Ash, May, and Pikachu followed him, looking for a place to hide. All four instantly saw the same spot: a large telephone pole, painted green, one in a long line they had been following to get to Adept City. It was unusually large, just big enough for them to hide behind. Ducking behind it, they realized they were not the only ones to have this idea.

“Munchlax, Munch!” the Munchlax muttered to itself. It had a small group of apples in front of it. There were six of them, ordered by color and size. Slowly, it reached out and picked up the nearest one, swallowing it hole like it had in front of Max. “Munch Munch,” it said, complimenting itself on finding these fine apples.

“Uh… okay,” Ash grumbled, slightly confused.

“Pika?” Pikachu asked, also confused.

The creature was close now. “Whirrrr,” it muttered, with a voice that seemed to be the combination of radio signals and a growl. It quickly changed from Speed form to a form with human-like arms and five fingers on each hand.

It flew down and stood on the ground. Leaning down, it grabbed the base of the telephone pole, a few inches away from Ash, May, Brock, Pikachu, and the Munchlax. It yanked and tugged, using every force of its physical strength to pull it out of the ground. After what seemed like a long time, it violently broke into two pieces.

“Ah!” May screamed, following Ash, Brock, and Pikachu as the jumped out of the way. They were forced flying in the small explosion, landing a few yards away. They all groaned, there were cuts and scrapes all over their bodies, but they were ultimately unharmed.

The same couldn’t be said for Munchlax.

“Munch…” it groaned, lying helplessly on the ground. It had been electrocuted, and a deep gashes was on his arm. The creature threw the destroyed telephone pole out of the way; it landed about thirty feet away, causing more violent electricity. Telephone wires had snapped and were sending sparks all over the grass. This was not a safe place to be.

With another “whirrrr,” the creature got into its speed form and lifted up Munchlax, letting it hand limp instead of cradling it like a baby like it should of in its condition. Getting into the air again, the indigo creature flew off again.

Distracted with all that was happening, the group was reluctant to hear a crackling noise out of the corner of their ears.

“Pika! Pika Pi!” Pikachu screamed. Indeed, the sparks had started a fire.

“A fire!” Brock shouted, repeating what Pikachu had just pointed out. He reached a threw one of his Pokéballs. “Go, Mudkip!” he yelled.

But, Mudkip did not emerge. The ball just landed, dangerously close to the fire.

“Mudkip!” Brock yelled in fear, rushing over to the ball.

“Brock, be careful!” May called to him, as he retrieved it.

The ball was now a dangerous thing to touch: it was heated by the fire, which was a mere inches away. Stuttering, Brock lifted up his leg and kicked it out into an open grass area.

“Aaaggh!” Brock screamed in anguish. The fire had, just for a moment, leapt onto his leg. It wasn’t serious, but he had just been burnt.

“Brock!” both May and Ash yelled. Ash ran to where Brock had kicked the ball; his gloves would be able to pick it up. “I am so glad I wear these things,” he said to himself. By the time Ash turned around, Brock had managed to limp out of the fire area, but they were all still in danger.

May, Brock, and Pikachu also ran to Ash, and all four were now fleeing for their lives. They stopped: the fire had circled them, the only way to escape was to jump down the cliff.

“Jump!” Brock forced himself to yell, already in mid-air. Ash and May nervously followed his example, Pikachu now on Ash’s shoulder.

There was yet another explosion behind them as they plummeted down the steep cliff this one louder than before. Glad they jumped when they did, the four friends began to bump into each other ad they fell. They hit the ground hard, adding to all the pain they had just received.

“Oh… God,” May said to herself.

“How’s your leg, Brock?” Ash asked, a tone of concern on his voice.

“Could be doing better,” Brock managed to groan.

“Pika, Pikachu!” Pikachu, insisted to Brock’s large camping bag. Ash understood; perhaps a Super Potion would help.

“A Super Potion!” Ash translated, “do you think it will help?”

“I don’t know,” Brock groaned, “if it works on the Pokémon, it might work on me.”

With his hands shaking, Ash unzipped the bag and dug out a Super Potion. “Just be glad we managed to grab our bags before that thing took Max,” he calmly said.

On the mention of Max’s name, May began to cry again. Deciding to ignore her as Brock needed more attention, Ash sprayed the contents of the orange bottle onto Brock’s leg.

Brock moaned. “The Pokémon are right, it does sting.” After a few moments, he added, “I think it’s starting to heal, it already feels better.”

“Great,” May sniffed.

A few quiet seconds later, they started to talk.

“What is that thing?” May asked rhetorically.

“I think it’s some kind of Pokémon,” Ash replied and then stated, “What I want to know is why it took Max and that Munchlax.”

“And it tried to take that telephone pole,” Brock reminded him. “And why didn’t Mudkip come out?”

“Pi Pikachu,’ Pikachu quietly mentioned.

“Just because Mudkip is upset he hasn’t evolved yet doesn’t mean he won’t come out,” Ash retorted. He then remembered Mudkip’s ball was in his hand, and gave it to Brock saying, “it’s cooled off.”

“We better hurry, that soulless thing will be back in a few seconds,” May observed.

As if one cue, the indigo creature did indeed re-appear in the sky, looking for a next target.

“It’s coming for us!” Ash yelled, quietly so it wouldn’t hear them.

“Pika!” Pikachu agreed.

Apparently taunting Ash, the creature made a sudden dive in a different direction, avoiding them completely.

“It changed course!” exclaimed Brock.

“Where’s it goin’?” Ash asked to no one in particular.

At about the same time, Team Rocket was tiredly walking across a dirt road not far away for Ash and the others were. All three were hungry and not afraid to steal any food they would fins.

“I’m so hungry I could eat a Donphan,” Jessie mumbled, holding her stomach.

“Live,” James added.

“Why aren’t we dead yet?” Meowth asked, also holding his stomach.

A few more stomach growls later, Jessie smelled something peculiar.

“Is that..?” she asked herself, turning in the direction of the fire, which was quickly spreading. “Ah, look, smoke!”

“Maybe it’s a fire…” James said, not putting up the effort to look.

“No, it’s a delicious barbeque just waiting for us to come to steal!” Jessie exclaimed, starry-eyed.

Meowth glanced over his shoulder. “Looks like an awful lot of smoke for it to be a barbeque.”

Angered, Jessie blurted out, “what’s with you two? It’s mouth-watering beef and I’m going to get a taste of it!”

“Hey, what’s that?” James asked, interrupting Jessie’s rage.

The indigo creature was zooming in on them.

“It’s some kind of Pokémon,” Jessie observed.

“Ah, the boss would love this!” Meowth beamed.

“Well-” Meowth began. But before he could explain why Giovanni would adore the creature, he was picked up by the creature.

“Meowth!” James said in shock, as he and Jessie grabbed onto the creature’s legs. It flew back up into the air, the two Team Rocket members hanging on for dear life. The creature was slightly annoyed they were dragging him down, but satisfied it had claimed three victims in one stroke. “Whirrrr,” it growled.

“Looks like we’re zooming off again!” all three thieves screamed as they were carried off.

At the base off the cliff, Ash pointed out, “it’s going away. We should find someplace to hide.”

“But… where?” May asked, with a tone of worry.

“I don’t know, but we better hurry before that thing comes back or the fire comes down the cliff!” Brock yelled.

“Right,” Ash agreed.

“Pika!” Pikachu also agreed, jumping onto Ash’s shoulder.

And the three began to run again, this time searching for a good place to hide. It was very similar to before, running on an open grass field with a forest to the right of them. As if answering their prayers, they heard a voice call out, “over here!” Not caring where they were going, they changed direction to the voice’s origin. Instantly, they noticed a two-story building made of some kind of metal, with a destroyed satellite dish in front. Before it’s destruction, it looked about twice as tall as Brock.

The trio ran past a middle-aged man and went through the front entrance. It was dark inside, as known of the lights were on. About three dozen people were inside, of all ages. Most of the children were crying hysterically. Looking at the surroundings, Ash quickly realized where they were.

“It’s a weather station,” he commented. It looked similar to the one they had been to earlier in their Hoenn travels.

“Yes,” the middle-aged man answered, quickly closing the door behind him, “Deoxys isn’t able to see us in here, it’s made of solid lead.”

“Deoxys?” May asked herself, “Is that the thing to took my little brother?!”

“Yes,” he responded like before. ‘It’s a long story, you might want to sit down.” At his request, the trio sat down and Pikachu climbed off of Ash onto the ground. “I’m Professor Lund and this is my son Tori,” he said, pointing at a boy standing in the corner of a wall. He wore a bright blue t-shirt and had bushy, white hair. He didn’t look very happy, then again, no one did, and why should they?

“Why is that thing taking people?” Ash demanded to know.

“Like I said, it’s a long story,” Professor Lund replied, “it started about four years ago-”

 

[charlizard]

huh?

interesting...very...interesting... ;386-d; ;201-f;

 

[dark-rukario]

why are you callin deoxys indigo? ;rukario;

 

[Bu†cH]

I'm not that interested in the Pokemon Anime or its movies but this is what Destiny Deoxys should be! Will there be guns & rocket launchers in the remake?

 

[JoHn_C]

By the way it's Torkoal not Torkal. And the story is pretty interesting so far.

 

[Lil Brother]

dark-rukario: I call the two Deoxys "Indigo" and "Emerald' in refrence to the Indigo League and Emerald game.

Butchimatic: There will probably be no guns, this isn't a human threat it's a Pokemon threat. But... that gives me some ideas. *ponder*

JoHn _C: Oh, you're right! My mistake.

Thanks for finding it... intresting... everyone. If you think it's bad you can just say so, I won't be offended.

 

[Torchic23]

Yes right more chapters,I love this story!

 

[Blue Ditto]

Oooh...meh likeh meh likeh! ^^

Perks: A much better version than the original Destiny Deoxys, complete with bluurd...

Quirks: Uhh...is there much to say other than the occasional typo? .--. I can't really pick out anything that's not good...

Overall, great first chapters! I'll keep reading! ^^

 

[Torchic23]

So whens the next chap?

 

[Lil Brother]

Yay, people actually like it! ^^ Thanks for the compliments.

The next chapter will probably be up Sunday or Monday, I've got a lot of stuff to do with school starting up in a few weeks.

 

[Lil Brother]

Or, y'know, not. Tehe. I somehow got chapter four done rather quickly.

And I went back and corrected some typos and critical plot points in the earlier chapters. Feel free to point those out, they're certainly annoying.

On a side note, Professor Elm from the second generation originally made a cameo in this chapter but I edited him out.

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“-and then Rayquaza flew away,’ Professor Lund continued explaining.

“Whoa,” was all Ash could say. Jay had just told them all about what had happened four years ago. All about the expedition to the Sky Pillar, how the professor’s wife died, and about the indigo Deoxys’s awakening.

“So… she-” May rambled, in slight shock over the woman’s violent death.

“Yes,” Lund quickly and firmly replied, determined to move on to the next subject, “over the next two years, the building our archeology company uses as its headquarters was built here in Adept City and named the Sky Pillar in memory of her.”

Ash, May, Brock, and Pikachu weren’t the only ones listening intently. A small amount of people in the weather station sill had no idea why all this was happening and were paying attention to every detail. Tori continued to sit in the corner.

“But, how did the Deoxys come back to life?” one of the younger children, about Max’s age asked.

“And why is it taking people?” Brock added sternly.

“I believe I can answer that,” a slightly metallic voice came from across the room. There was a slight shudder as the emerald Deoxys revealed itself from a doorway.

“Deoxys!” Ash bellowed. “Pikachu, thunder!”

“Pika-” Pikachu began, static leaping from his cheeks.

“Wait!” Tori suddenly called out.

“Pi?” Pikachu asked, stopping mid-attack.

“Please, do not attack,” the emerald Deoxys continued, a touch of worry on its voice, “I mean no harm.”

“Why!?” May asked accusingly.

“Because Emerald is on our side,” Lund explained as calmly as possible, “he- or it, rather, he was born before the era of gender- is on our side. Remember the green gem that crashed into the Sky Pillar ruins?”

“That was me,” Emerald continued, also trying to clam down, “I should explain-”

“No, I will,” Lund retorted, “You weren’t exactly… conscious the whole time. Son, will you help me out with some of the details?” Tori nodded. “Now then-” Lund began.

Sky Pillar Labs
Two Days Earlier

“Focus the LASER,” a scientist announced.

A fairly large group, about sixty or so, were in the laboratory, Professor Lund overseeing from the back of the room. This was a very risky procedure, trying to revive the energies of the green meteor that had landed at the ancient Sky Pillar four years ago. If Professor Lund was right, this could be a power source stronger than anything found on Earth, even nuclear power. It was predicted that if activated, this gem could power all of Japan for the next ten thousand years.

The space gem had been placed inside a sterile tube, about twenty feet tall with a LASER device connected to the roof of it. LASER technology was a growing field. It was a stretch, but it may be just the thing they need for this project.

“Temperature rising… 400 Kelvin degrees… 450 Kelvin degrees… 500 Kelvin degrees…” the scientist that had spoken from before read from the monitor. It was extremely dangerous to work with this kind of heat. If it escaped, the heat would instantly kill everyone present. Of course, there was protection. Twenty inches of an unnamed material surrounded the gem. This material was clear and very heat-resistant, so there was no possible way for the heat to escape.

But, alas, fate has its way of laughing at the so-called “impossible.” The S.S Titanic is a classic example of this. It was said to be the ship that could not sink, which was of course, disproved on its first voyage when it sailed through Seadra and Kingdra territory and hit the iceberg than forced it down below.

Professor Lund immediately knew something was wrong. Maybe it was the way it seemed suddenly warmer, maybe it was just animal instinct, but he knew somehow this was doomed to fail. Rising from his seat, he quickly moved across the room to the mean in charge of this.

“550 Kelvin degrees…”

“Stop this now,” Lund cautioned.

“Why, Professor?” the man asked, in a bored-like tone, pointing to one of the monitors. “Everything’s going according to plan.”

“No, something’s wrong, I know it,” Lund responded with a tone of authority.

“600 Kelvin degrees…”

“This could easily make our small company. We’ll all be rich, Jay, we’ll never have to worry about lack of funding again!” the man remarked.

“I don’t care, something is wrong and we need to stop now!” Lund answered, louder.

“Look, there’s nothing wrong! What are you talking about?” the man retorted, slightly annoyed.

“Stop it now!” Lund bellowed, louder than before. Most of the scientists turned their heads to look at him.

“650 Kelvin degrees…”

“No! I know you’re upset about your gelatin of wife, but shut up, old man! You don’t know what you’re talking about.” the young man scoffed.

“Something is wrong, and you’re going to die if you don’ stop this thing now, damn it!’ Lund bellowed. Everyone was looking at him now, eyebrows raised and mouths open.

“Shut up or leave!” the man shouted.

“You stupid kid!” Lund shouted back. He turned to the audience and added, “leave now or else you’ll die, I know it!”

Quite a few whispers and mumblings went through the lab. The crazy widower had finally had his break-down. Angrier than he had been in a long time, Lund stormed out of the room.

“Psycho…” the man in charge mumbled.

“700 Kelvin degrees…”

Outside, the professor was yelling hysterically. “Get out, run while you still can! Run or else you’ll die!’ Thankfully, nearly everyone that heard him began to flee the building, horrified. Not everyone that fled heard him, they had instead saw other people running in a panic. These people trusted Lund, unlike those stuck-up government officials and A-rated scientists that thought him a crackpot.

“750 Kelv-”

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOM.

The explosion from the sterile chamber killed those in the lab instantly, before they even knew what happened. At such high temperatures, they melted away in split-seconds, a truthfully painful death. The entire city heard the explosion. Nothing was visible from outside except a few busted windows, but inside the top four floors were literally melted away.

A few moments later, after the dust cleared, the emerald creature stood in the remains.

“Whirrrr,” it asked, confused on what had happened. In a panic, it quickly flew off through a large window.

At that very same moment, off the coast of the island with the Sky Pillar ruins, the indigo creature arose from the water, causing a somewhat small whirlpool. With a more content “whirrrr,” it observed its surroundings , switched to speed form, and headed to the location of its eternal rival.

In Adept City, there was quite a lot of confusion. What was that loud explosion? Why is everyone in such a panic? Worried about his father, Tori continued his stroll through the park, albeit at a slightly quicker pace.

“Whirrrr,” came a sound from above. Surprised, Tori raised his head to see a bizarre Pokémon with a green gem in its chest flying above. With another strange “whirrrr” it landed mere ten feet away from him. There was a short pause.

“Uh… hello?” Tori asked it.

“Whirrrr,” it responded, a green flash appearing in its eyes. After a few more silent moments, the glow faded from its eyes.

“Hello,” it responded.

“Oh, you do speak Japanese,” Tori awed.

“In a way. My species communicates in a system of radio waves. I’m using my psychic powers to divert these waves into your language,” the Pokémon answered.

“Oh… I, uh, see. So, what is your species called?” Tori asked reluctantly.

“Vaguely translated into your language, I am one of the Deoxys species,” the Deoxys answered, keeping its smooth, robotic, and slightly hypnotizing voice the same.

“Cool,” Tori said, a bit more confident, “so, what’s your name?”

“My species do not use names. We distinguish ourselves with visible radio waves.”

“Uh-huh,” Tori muttered.

“Perhaps I shall show them to you,” the creature spoke. Waving its hand, a tiny cloud of green waves appeared before Tori.

“Ah, green. Green’s my favorite color, y’know,” Tori remarked in amazement.

“Favorite color?” the Deoxys asked.

“Yeah, don’t you have one?” Tori chuckled, with a know-it-all voice.

“I guess it would be emerald,” it replied, pointed to its cloud of energy.

“Emerald, huh? That sounds like a cool name. I’ll call ya that!” Tori giggled.

“Now tell me-” Emerald began.

“Tori!” Tori interrupted.

“Tori. Have you seen any others like me?” Emerald asked.

Suddenly a dark memory returned to Tori. “Yes,” he answered.

“Where?” Emerald demanded.

“It was four years ago. It was purple. I think it killed my mom,” Tori answered, trying not to have his voice crack in front of his new friend.

“I… feel sorry for your loss. But have you seen it, the indigo one, more recently?” Emerald stuttered.

“No, Rayquaza destroyed it,” Tori struggled to say.

“Rayquaza?” Deoxys asked. But before Tori could go into details, a psychic bolt of energy barely missed him.

“Indigo,” Emerald said as sternly as it could. It arose into the air and assumed defense form, blocking Indigo’s psychic blasts from doing any real damage.

Tori watched horrified as his new friend and his mother’s killer battled in the air. With each attack, they arose higher and higher until they faded out of sight. Mouth agape, Tori stood looking at the sky until a figure started to fall. With a loud thud, Indigo hit the ground, Emerald chasing it in attack form. Indigo got up off the ground onto its two feet and regained normal form. It grabbed the tree next to it, and the tree began to wither away into dust. A Seedot jumped out of the tree, and a Wingull flew away as their home was being destroyed.

When the tree was nothing but a ball of dust floating in mid-air, Indigo absorbed it into the palms of its hands. Not satisfied, it looked for a next target. It glanced upon Tori and began to advance upon him. In shock, Tori did not run; there was nothing to do.

WHAM! From out of seemingly nowhere, Emerald in defense form had leaped in front of Tori and Indigo rammed into him.

“Whirrrr,” Indigo growled. Instead of picking a fight, it turned to speed form and flew off in the opposite direction, picking up the homeless Seedot on its way.

“This is bad,” Emerald said, picking up Tori and flying in a different direction than Indigo. “Tori, look for anyone you don’t want to die.”

Tori let out a light gasp and began to search for his father. “What’s goin’ on?” he asked.

“Indigo is still injured from its ‘death’ with this Rayquaza you mentioned,” Emerald replied, a state of emergency on his voice, “add on the blow I gave him just now and it needs to feed off the life of others. It needs to kill and absorb life like it did to that tree to survive.”

“Oh my God,” Tori gasped. Deciding it best not to comment, he continued surveying the ground for his father. Indigo had cost him his mother, and he was not going to let him take away the only family he had left.

“There,” Tori whispered, pointing out his father. Emerald swooped down low. There was a loud outbursts as people saw the alien creature approach them. Emerald quickly picked up Lund with one hand, holding Tori in the other arm.

“Let go of me, you monster! Killer!” Lund screamed as loudly as he could.

“Please clam down, sir,” Emerald interrupted.

“Dad, this is the good Deoxys, he saved me from the bad one,” Tori exclaimed, exasperated.

“Tori, stop that nonsense!” Lund bellowed.

“Trust me, Daddy,” Tori sighed.

There was an awkward silence, aside form the people down below screaming and yelling. Jay sighed and accepted his son’s statement, as Emerald flew them to safety.

Present
The Weather Station

“…and then Emerald created a shield around this place. Indigo can’t get in. I don’t think he even knows this place exists,” Tori finished.

“So that’s why the Pokémon are acting strangely. The Deoxys are altering the environment with their radiation powers,“ Brock commented, trying to figure everything out, “and that telephone pole that Indigo destroyed while trying to get to us must have been part of the Pokéball system, explaining why we the Pokémon can’t come out of their balls.

“Don’t forget that Indigo destroyed the electricity plant!” the voice of a male teenager from across the room mentioned.

“What about Max, damn it!?” May screeched. She was really hurting. Her little brother was going to die or already dead and she couldn’t do anything about it.

“Indigo only needs to feasts on four souls a day,” Emerald calmly pointed out, “I’m sure we can somehow save everyone by the time Indigo will have gotten to your brother.”

“Yeah, May,” Ash said, smoothly putting his hand on May’s shoulder, “I’m sure he’ll be fine.”

“Oh, Ash…” May sighed, breaking into tears.

“Yeah, babe, I’m sure your brother will live!” the voice of the male teenager from before echoed out. A boy about Ash’s age wearing a brown shirt and red headband walked towards May and Ash, “I’m Sid, and do you mind if I call you the only good thing this situation has produced? Be it fate or space aliens, we have been brought together!”

“Oh…. Uh…” May stammered, trying to think of a way to put this idiot down gently.

‘This guy’s got worse pick-up lines then Brock,” Ash whispered to Pikachu.

‘Pika Pika,” Pikachu sighed.

“So, Emerald,” Brock asked out of the blue, “how are we going to save all those people?”

“Well...” Emerald answered, “I have no idea whatsoever.” There was a loud thud as Ash hit the ground.

A few seconds later
About thirty yards away

The fire was dying down. Water Pokémon from around their area had used water attacks on it, as others did what they could, be it throwing dirt or trying to blow it down. Thankfully, the fire seemed to stay in one spot rather than jump to the forest and destroy most of the Pokémon’s homes.

“Plusle Plusle!” a Plusle asked his friend.

“Minun?” the Minun asked, equally confused.

“Plusle!” Plusle responded.

“Minun Minun Minun!” Minun exclaimed. That purple creature was coming back!

“Poli!” a nearby Poliwag offered to help.

“Plus Plus!” Plusle eagerly agreed.

“Poliwag Poli!” Poliwag announced.

“Minun,” Minun groaned.

“Plusle!” Plusle gasped, jumping behind Minun.

“Mi,” Minun said defensively.

“Poliwag,” Poliwag told them, running off.

Plusle and Minun stood side-by-side and began to run to the afore-mentioned building with the destroyed satellite dish in front.

 

[The Mega Champion]

Yeah, this is DEFINITELY better then the other. Keep up the good work.

 

[Ember]

Awesome! The movie really dissapointed me, but this is way better! Keep up the great work!

 

[Vayne]

maybe you should make a flash movie on it

or if you dont know ask someone who does

 

[Bu†cH]

Will Team Rocket or any other Pokemon die?

You should make a Pokemon 3, 4Ever or Heroes remake.

 

[Lil Brother]

Vayne: Meh... I suck at making flashes, and this story is supposed to be movie-length, I don't think anybody's willing to make an hour and a half flash. XD

Butchimatic: None of the main characters on the show die, but there will be a bunch more death. And all the movies you listed are too awesome to be re-wrote. *redundant smiley here*

Everyone: Thanks for the compliments! Seriously, if no one was replying I would of stopped.

 

[Ho-oh Lover]

I like this fic, it's a lot better than the movie, but I don't like how Tori trusted emerald so quickly, darn... I wanted pikachu to die... will any other ledgendaries come up besides rayquaza? I'm mean if rayquaza is the peace keeper with groudon and kyogre I always very well thought he could control them, but your fic not mine ^^

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[charlizard]

i can help u to find sum 1 that can make a movie out of ur fic