DemonBrandon
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please tell me what you think ;229;
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please tell me what you think ;229;
aquakirbyyoshi
~The Closet Maniac~
Hee, cute. I real like the dark shading, it makes her stand out more. What program do you use? ^^
DemonBrandon
Beginning Trainer
photoshop 6 ^^;aquakirbyyoshi said:
Nice. There are a few things that bother me though. The upper portion of her right arm seems too bent, almost like rubber. >.< In contrast, her scarf seems very stiff, add some movement. The left eye is off a bit, I know it can be hard sometimes, but to give the right angle, try to make the eye thinner; it just looks like she's giving me the evil eye as it is now.
Aside from those few things, I see nothing wrong, and as aquakirbyyoshi said, I adore the shading.
Aside from those few things, I see nothing wrong, and as aquakirbyyoshi said, I adore the shading.
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DitzyDream
Guest
zuloon said:
the point of having certain colours stand out more is to create a focal point, or in other words something interesting. Just because they're bright and don't neccesarily match the rest of the picture doesn't mean that it's ruined, dude.
btw, love your style <33
Flame Haze SnS
Yin-Yang
This art is pretty unique. Only thing that bothered my is her face. Her face is tad different from Sugimori's (it's him, isn't it?) art. Her hair style is very unique, though I never seen her as an official art. Anyway kudos to ya!
Divine_Light
Espeon will own all!
Cool, but she looks too old
Alphonse Elric
That's My Rule!!!
Time for some constructive criticism from Phoenix!
- You made the chin look a bit too long, it sort of makes the mouth seem a bit distorted.
- There is a clash in colors. I'm talking about the scarf and the PokéBall. Their main colors are far too bright, but the shading is too dull. It makes it look like either a neon color, or a cel-shade.
- The upper portion of her arm looks a bit bent... It seems as if she has a greenstick fracture, but it isn't really noticeable, so it's okay.
- There is yet another color clash. Since most of her outfit is pink, it would have been better if the background was not purple. Maybe a dull light green or blue would have been a better color, so she doesn't look like sfe's "blending in".
- You made the chin look a bit too long, it sort of makes the mouth seem a bit distorted.
- There is a clash in colors. I'm talking about the scarf and the PokéBall. Their main colors are far too bright, but the shading is too dull. It makes it look like either a neon color, or a cel-shade.
- The upper portion of her arm looks a bit bent... It seems as if she has a greenstick fracture, but it isn't really noticeable, so it's okay.
- There is yet another color clash. Since most of her outfit is pink, it would have been better if the background was not purple. Maybe a dull light green or blue would have been a better color, so she doesn't look like sfe's "blending in".
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Pikip kid
Guest
i always thought her to look smaller & younger like the one on this
http://www.pokesho.com/iconhe.html (second one on the second row)
http://www.pokesho.com/iconhe.html (second one on the second row)
DemonBrandon
Beginning Trainer
wow...that's a good pic^^;Pikip kid said:
puts mine to shame, lol