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<Diamond's Art>

Flame Haze SnS

Yin-Yang
I like the fierce Groudon. The only problems are that Groudon's arms and tail are bit too fat. Try to make their limbs and tail look regular (only fiercier) and Groudon'll look much more fiercier than before. Kudos to ya for good sketch! ^_^
 

.Bambi.

Be Wise, Tell Lies.
That Groudon is awesome 0_0
It's excellent, but it's tail is quite big and should be smaller. Though it does remind me of the fake Groudon from the 6th Movie.

"OMGWTFBBQ" Brendan makes me lol =D
 

Diamond

Thunder Trainer
Thanks for the comments...I'll take those into consideration when I next draw Groudon.

Another New-Old Pic:


 

Act

Let's Go Rangers!
Whoa, face proportions have been absolutely killed here.

The center of the eyes should be halfway down the face, the tip of the nose halfway from there, and middle of mouth halfway from there. The girl's ears are also way too far in-- they're under her eye. It's very funky looking. Yes, even in anime. Stylized drawing is the manipulation of rules, not the totally disregarding of them.

Also, the coloring is nice, but the body proportions are a little weird, too. Her torso and arms aren't really long enough. Though I am quit distracted by the fact that her eye is in her forehead.

The guy has similar problems on his face. And the body-- even though it's supposed to be smaller-- isn't really proportional. It just looks weird.

I don't find anatomy tutorials particularly helpful or I'd tell you to run through them. Your best bet is to draw some realistic people first, and then practice on getting your anime down.
 

Diamond

Thunder Trainer
Thankies Act, I'll take that into consideration next time I draw a face...I've neglected them for far too long...Agh! and the high eyes, they keep haunting me, even when I do realismT_T....I won't make that mistake again...I won't make that mistake again...

Well, it keeps me going...Thanks again for your commentss.
 
Your drawings have a unique style to it, I like it. Keep drawing you do a great job!
 
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