Digimon:reborn

[cooler3o5]

proluge:
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Time to go home everybody,have a nice summer vacation",said a teacher.
"Lets go to my house I'm having a party"a boy said to two other kids.
"Ok lets go our mom said we could stay at your house for two days anyway Oscar"said a girls voice.
"She is right Oscar our mom did say that"said a boy.
"Well lets go then Kathy Hector"said Oscar.
"Wait we need to go home and get our stuff"said Kathy and hector at the same time.

 

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This hurts to read. The dialogue is really bad. And the story is 0_o....
please read some books and complete a few more yeard of english class.

 

[RaZoR LeAf]

http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=96993

This topic is your friend. I suggest you have sex with it, until your Forum Rule Humanoid babies can recit it's content back to you in 14 languages while your head is underwater. Failing that, you shouldn't breaking any of them when you post.