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cooler3o5

OmegaBeaver! lml,
proluge:
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Time to go home everybody,have a nice summer vacation",said a teacher.
"Lets go to my house I'm having a party"a boy said to two other kids.
"Ok lets go our mom said we could stay at your house for two days anyway Oscar"said a girls voice.
"She is right Oscar our mom did say that"said a boy.
"Well lets go then Kathy Hector"said Oscar.
"Wait we need to go home and get our stuff"said Kathy and hector at the same time.
 

/Exiled/

EternallyParadoxical
This hurts to read. The dialogue is really bad. And the story is 0_o....
please read some books and complete a few more yeard of english class.
 
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