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DMJ's Month 5 Thread

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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
This is a little late, but I'm finally getting around to posting my month 5 thread... this thread is only for my new works, and if you want to see the old ones, visit my old month threads. Don't bump any of my old threads though... anyway, here I go.

Mixes

Riotle.png


Lugru.png


Mixxy.png


**New**

Snorio.png


Battle Scenes

BattleScene-6.png
(Storm-style backsprite by me. Opposing pokemon by Rageman, however edited by me.) (not finished, but I really posted this to show off the backsprite.... I still need to add cast shadow, and an actual move in the scene)

PoisonPigment.png
(Storm-style backsprite by me. Opposing pokemon by me)

Scratches

Shrimp-1.png
Shrimp-3.png


Weake.png


Whale-3.png
Whale-1.png


Old Month Edits

Pokemon-12.png
->
Mawile-2.png


Pokemon-9.png
->
Shuppet.png


RSE Style Berries

ToracBerryRSE.png
GarpesBerryRSE.png
GhasBerryRSE.png
IwikiBerryRSE.png
BorainBerryRSE.png


Storm Style Berries

ToracBerry.png
GarpesBerry.png
IwikiBerry.png
GhasBerry.png
BorainBerry.png
 
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Veek

Sennen Goroshi! XD
Your lines and fusing if very good, top class. However, your shading needs a lot of work. Its rather blocky and not very smooth at all. Shadingshould show the shape of the item, which you fail to do. For instance, your Mawile's jaw is pretty decent but the body lacks shade and smoothness.Other than than, your sprites are very nice and clean.
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
thanks for the quick replies :D..

Yeah, I've been told by everyone that the first Shuppet is better, and I've been told that my shading skills are low. Nothing new, but I'm slowly improving in that area (i think)..

Thanks for your compliment on my mixes too

New Mix: Snorio

Snorio.png
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Hm.... I sure hope this doesnt die...

New Mix:
Riiru.png
Riiru

Oh and some image I made.... yeah, I've taken a liking into Rioru/Lucario recently:

Riiru-1.png
 
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Chaotic Pink

Let the zephyr blow.
Your scratches are getting better. The shading and outlines are improved on previous months works.

The battle scene (1st one) is ok, but the Pokemon's outline on the left isn't clear due to the dark background.
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Yeah I see what you mean (i think)... hm. thanks

I edited my Lugru up a bit:

Lugru.png
->
Lugru-4.png
 
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Moonlight Locust

Wait, am I back? Wow
CC: You need to work on youe shading and changes the outline of first Shuppet. The first one=Better than new one.

Request: Why don't you make a Munchru?
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Oh yeah, I forgot to show you all.. I edited the first Shuppet:

ShuppetRevamp.png


How's it look? And I'll try to do that request too.
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
DPost for update, don't kill me.

Tyrario.png
Tyrario.. I love this one.

EDIT: Edited Version of Weake:
WeakeEdited-1.png
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Crap, I tried not to, but I must triple post.. I'm on the third page anyway... please people, let this last until December 1st.. then I'll be happy.. but I won't just bump this thread, I'll update it as well with a new mix:

Medible.png
Medicham and Elekible (It looked dumb, lost, and confused to me.. so I added the question mark)
 
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~Lucario Master~

Well-Known Member
Ah yes, our contest sprites. Well I have 1 peice of advice. How come the legs are shaded differently from the head thing when both of them are supposed to be shaded the same.
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Yeah, I got the shading completely wrong... I think the mix wouldve came out a lot better if I used Medicham as a base... scratching the legs though was the most challenging part. Shading them seemed easier, but I did it all wrong, so whatever...

Any more comments?
 
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C Spriter
Your scratches are somewhat jagged except, Weake which I think is very good.
dragonmaster_jonathan said:
Crap, I tried not to, but I must triple post.. I'm on the third page anyway... please people, let this last until December 1st.. then I'll be happy.. but I won't just bump this thread.
Click to expand...
Yep, it's been getting pretty hard to get people to post anymore.... :(
 
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Thanks, yeah I think Weake is my best scratch.

New Scratch: Preevo of Shuckle...
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dragonmaster_jonathan

Local Dragonmaster
Yes, it's a Cheep-Cheep (i think that's right) mixed with a Koopa... I'm lieing.

I was kinda hoping you would comment on the sprite itself... what's good, what's bad.. what should be done to improve...
 
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pokemonelite4leader

webmst and spriter
dragonmaster_jonathan said:
thanks for the quick replies :D..

Yeah, I've been told by everyone that the first Shuppet is better, and I've been told that my shading skills are low. Nothing new, but I'm slowly improving in that area (i think)..

Thanks for your compliment on my mixes too

New Mix: Snorio

Snorio.png
Click to expand...

Or its just a fat lucario XD
 
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