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Dokun Region

Discussion in 'Fan Art' started by MrRandell, May 23, 2009.

  1. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Hay!

    I recently started drawing again and I decided to make my own Pokémon Generation!
    I'm still working on the region map, but it will be finished soon.
    Anyway, here are the ones I've already uploaded on DeviantArt.

    This is my DeviantArt page: http://mrrandell.deviantart.com/

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    Last edited: Apr 28, 2010
  2. eMAN

    eMAN <--I look like that!

    Wow those are done really well and the shading is perfect. Just one thing, the Hedgehot looks a lot like Cyndaquil but besides that they are great. I can't wait to see more.
     
  3. Raunchy_fad

    Raunchy_fad Ooh, maaaan!

    These are very clean, but they all do kind of resemble already-existing pokémon. Either way, you've pulled off the Sugimori style pretty well.
     
  4. Profesco

    Profesco gone gently

    Like the above poster, I have to complain that they're almost all simply understudies of existing Pokemon, however cleanly or neatly drawn they are.

    One thing, though- your idea for Phantic's eyes was absolutely brilliant and unique. You could do loads better if you continue to come up with such creative and original ideas.
     
  5. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Thanks for the honoust comments ^^
    I don't think a lemur has been done before?

    Lemide

    It has got kinda the same concept as Soutrich, with the bush and stuff. Anyway, it's not the way I wanted it to be, so I might still change him.

    C ya!
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2009
  6. dawsoc

    dawsoc Yes, I'm still alive

    i liked hedgehot it looked so cute!
     
  7. cicatrix

    cicatrix Rock on!

    I agree with the other posters. They look awfully familiar but they're drawn so well. Make more:D
     
  8. Wow those look really awesome! you did a great job on them; they defiantly look like new Pokemon thats for sure. I really like how you did the shading, very well done indeed.

    Keep up the good work! I hope I'll be able to see more sometime ^^.
     
  9. Rika_of_Thunder

    Rika_of_Thunder a sleepy creature

    These are so cute~! :3 The lines are so smooth~ and so is the shading~ The designs are nice and interesting too~ :3
    Hope to see more~!
     
  10. kirby8933083

    kirby8933083 mai husbando

    Wow, these really are very nice. I dislike how the fire starter's shiny form looks exactly like Cyndaquil. I also dislike how Pawblun and look practically the same Pawranch design wise. :c Pose wise of course they are different. The others looks quite nice in my opinion.
     
  11. Rayquaza Master777

    Rayquaza Master777 #1 May Fanboy

    Those are incredible!
     
  12. SQUIRTLETamer08

    SQUIRTLETamer08 lower shiny ratio!

    They are not bad but like previously stated, some look similar to existing pokemon. Exspecially your fire starter. But great work none the less; love the lemur!
     
  13. shac

    shac Well-Known Member

    Undoubtedly the mole pokemon are the best. And I disagree to those saying they resemble pokemon that have been already made. I think these are quite unique and really nicely done. Can't wait to see more.
     
  14. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    Thank you all. I'll be keeping your advices in mind.

    But here's an other one, an evolution of Mantine!
    Hope you like it as much as I do ^^

    Mantill

    Next will be:
    2 theatre Pokémon
    Smoochum alternative evolution
     
    Last edited: Jun 13, 2009
  15. Kindrindra

    Kindrindra 大事なのは自分らしいくある事

    Well, they're amazing, but I have a bit of a problem with the Mantill's info. The whole part about krill, seeing as the pokemon doesn't have any actual animals, 'cause pokemon are the replacement of animals... but, meh. Me luv 'em ^_^


    See Ya Later!
     
  16. MrRandell

    MrRandell Shiny Hunter

    MAybe I'll make a krill Pokémon then =p
     
  17. yeminied

    yeminied Well-Known Member

    Me thinks you are doing a very good job at making Sugimori - esque drawings. The only problem is that quite a few of your Fakemon look strikingly similar. Mantill has the same type as Mantine, tail and body. It even has a similar name! People have already mentioned about Hedgehot, but also Soutrich looks a lot like Doduo.

    MrRandell, your artwork is so good, please don't ruin it by creating unoriginal Pokemon. It's okay to borrow features from real Pokemon but not just change a couple of features and colors of existing Pokemon.
     
  18. shac

    shac Well-Known Member

    Well, Mantill is a supposedly evolved form of Mantine, so obviously there are resemblances. That's sort of the point is not it.
    And who said we can't have different pokemon based on the same species of animal? There have been quite a few dogs, cats and even different snakes. What's wrong with ostriches? When they themselves have made Dodrio and Altaria...............
     
  19. hmongboy337

    hmongboy337 Pokemon Artist

    whoa. these are great :D
    cant wait to see more.
    keep up the good work.
     
  20. -Raiga-

    -Raiga- Well-Known Member

    I'm really getting tired of people coming in here and saying the pokemon aren't creative when it has been mentioned 10 times already. My favorite is easily Mantill due to its trueness to the simpleness of pokemon design.

    In response the quote above, I sure would like to know what mantine you're looking at. The tail, is not only differently designed, but has two parts to it now, the attenae on its head are different color/position, gills switched out for the red dots, different eye and mouth structure, and to top it off he added the two smaller attenae near the mouth. So yeah, not seeing the similarities that you are.

    Please keep up the good work, as far as originality you are headed in the correct direction between Mantill and Lemide. Make sure you edit your first post with the new ones also, because some lazy people wouldn't look at some of the cooler new ones. Lastly I was wondering if I could make a sprite of Mantill? Just because I have been looking to make a scratch sprite of something for a while now, and I just love the design of it so much.
     

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