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Doomsly the Psychotic

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Chloemew4ever

Eh.
After reading some other comics in this forum I became inspired to create my own, and here it is! ^^ It's my first sprite comic so don't expect it to be too great. o-o; And don't be afraid to give me constructive critisism; I won't flame you for it. xD

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Warning: Contains mild swearing and traces of insanity... =D

Starring!
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A kind of weird title thingy... I dunno
Deformed Doomsly
Ten pages! Er, whoo?
Fluffy's mom... and her nose
The "Wheels on the bus" song... but not as you know it 8D
Confused Doomsly

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Page 1: Fellow frolickers
Page 2: No more happy D=
Page 3: Yay, stupid names!
Page 4: Yo.
Page 5: Awkward
Page 6: What a moron!
Page 7: No sir...
Page 8: A sock?!
Page 9: 'Kay?
Page 10: Spur of da moment! =D
Page 11: Mayonnaise rocks!
Page 12: Stinky lookin'
Page 13: HOLY APPLESAUCE!
Page 14: Meep!
Page 15: Fabulous.
Page 16: Taco bell! =)
Page 17: Mwa ha ha ha ha...
Page 18: Dude!
Page 19: Uhh... don't listen to the narrator ^^;
Page 20: Feh.
Page 21: Back to Fluffy
Page 22: No supper
Page 23: Revenge
Page 24: Poor ickle bloblet
Page 25: Oh, crap...
Page 26: Bonehead
Page 27: Normal
Page 28: Pretty
Page 29: Get over yourself
Page 30: Implode
Page 31: Perverted Blissey...?
Page 32: Holy Feebas on a stick!
Page 33: Fun?
Page 34: DUDE!
Page 35: Crud...
Page 36: Cliché?
Page 37: Darn Wurmples...
Page 38: Rabid Beedrills
Page 39: Creepy nose!
Page 40: Rats.
Page 41: Look who's talking...
Page 42: This sucks...
Page 43: Poor little guy
Page 44: Um, okay..
Page 45: Nubby wings
Page 46: Yeah.
Page 47: *sniff*

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Page 1
Page 2 (Photobucket made this bit too dark... feh o-o)
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8 (a bit shorter than normal)
Page 9
Page 10

Page 45: Nubby wings (crappy looking version)

Fan stuffs...

Fluffy is dumb by Togepuff

I'll try to update the comic as much as I can, but I normally can only get on during tuesdays and every other weekend. =3

Sprites from Pokemonelite2000.com
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+Erin+

Banned
1.the backgrounds are good
2.the dark pokemon sprites are good
3.the plot is good
cant wait to see more
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
Secial Effects= good
Few poses for sprites= bad
Don't use abbreviations for words. Only use them for names. As in BC.
Make Fluffy look at the other pokes. It's kinda creepy when dudes from a comic are staring at me.

_BC_
 
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The Sponge

DISCO INFERNO!
Well, I Actually Like This Comic, The Dark And Evil Stuff Reminds Me Alot Of My Comic "Duskypuff", I Also Like The Stuff Thats Random. That Reminds Me Of My Favorite Show, "Invader Zim"...Can't Wait To See More!
 
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Chloemew4ever

Eh.
Weirdness is my speciality x3 And yes, Demise was based slightly on Gir.

I don't know whether I'll be able to get on here for the rest of the week, so the next update should be on Tuesday at the latest.
 
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+Erin+

Banned
Chloemew4ever said:
Weirdness is my speciality x3 And yes, Demise was based slightly on Gir.

I don't know whether I'll be able to get on here for the rest of the week, so the next update should be on Tuesday at the latest.
Click to expand...
tuesday? oh mi sad now
 
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PikaMew

Call me Kirii!
lol this is a funny comic. But I wonder... what DOES "Pos" stand for??
 
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Chloemew4ever

Eh.
Shinz: If you mean page 8, it was meant to be small. xP I was feeling a little lazy at the time. If you mean the other pages, I dunno... they don't seem small to me. o-o

PikaMew: Are you SURE you want to know what it stands for? =P
 
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Pikaflame

Owned Charizard 0_o
This is a pritty decent comic
the effects are awsome,and i got a good laugh out of it
 
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