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Dr.Hack

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Frazzler

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This is the first Episode i ever made, dont just read it, hate it and stop. The following are much better!

Basicly a phycotic docter........Enjoy!
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2801/dr16jz.png

Due to lack of like and utter hatting of Dr.Hacks former adventures, to liven thing up abit weve used new sprites and stuck Dr.Hack and the guy who had a huge brain (whos now a robot) in a sewer to live together for a feesable amount of episodes...Enjoy.

Intro=http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/605/dr4cp.png

Episode 1=http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6046/1dr2gd.png

Episode 2=http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/7473/2dr5ta.png

Episode 3=http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/404/3dr5dg.png

Episode 4=http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/9634/4dr1ui.png

Episode 5= Reality T.V!http://img499.imageshack.us/img499/651/5dr7bt.png

Episode 6=http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/1088/6dr5ga.png

Episode 7=http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/6595/7dr6cd.png

Episode 8=http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/285/8dr1gu.png

Episode 9= Uh, just wastefulhttp://img33.imageshack.us/img33/5459/9dr9ww.png

Episode 10= (by no means related to ITV or ITV programming)http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3228/10dr5oe.png
 
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Eric

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This comic is just not funny, but a lot bloody.

Plot: Guy is sitting, doing nothing. Someguy with his brain out of his head comes out of nowhere and asks for help for a random doctor in a broken down house. Lets forget the fact that you wouldn't be alive if your brain was out. So the doctor sticks a knife in the flowery turtles throat and and while the turtle forgets that a knife in the throat can kill him and that the doctor made an obivious statement that he is trying to kill him. F! Well, at least it ain't a pokemon journey.
Sprites: Bad. Just bad. It seems that you went crazy with a circle tool and line tool and this is the result. It's bad and you ruined scratch sprites. Hell, even a recolor (Which are the devil and never use) are better then this crap. F!
Background: Two tone backgrounds. BAD! Two tone background are just a lazy and cheap way of having a background. Find a site with PD backgrounds and use them. F!
Total: F-!

You have a lot to do if you want this to be any good. Practice making sprites and find some backgrounds. And have a good plot that makes sense.
 
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Controller of Flames

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Eric must you always beat me to these things?

While I admire you usng custom sprites, don't. Edited sprites are what you should try to do. Make good material for your comic, if your friends don't get a chuckle out of your comcis, we won't wither. Your boxes are very large, and this comic is way too violent for no real reason.

Also how long have you sprited for, of it is a month or less practice a bit more.
 
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Frazzler

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I realize the old one was rubbish, so i present to you the new one.

Due to lack of like and utter hatting of Dr.Hacks former adventures, to liven thing up abit weve used new sprites and stuck Dr.Hack and the guy who had a huge brain (whos now a robot) in a sewer to live together for a feesable amount of episodes...Enjoy.

Intro=http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/605/dr4cp.png

Episode 1=http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6046/1dr2gd.png

Episode 2=http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/7473/2dr5ta.png

Episode 3=http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/404/3dr5dg.png
 
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Eric

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This comic is a lot better then before. A LOT! My only problem I see is when you did the pee thing. It looked like you just used a line tool and that's it. Make a sprite that is piss, don't use the line tool.
 
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Frazzler

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Thanks Eric, glad you like it more now, C&C still welcome, plus episode 3 is up!
P.s any one got any idea were i can get a pee sprite??
 
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Flygon

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Nobody is going to do that. I've got a suggestion. Go to Sprite Resources, edit the Flamthrower Sprite (maybe Water Gun if you're lucky), and use that. Remember to give credit!

Oh yeah, and also, the purple guy doesn't look very scared when he sees the bird. He looks... well, mild, that's how we should put it. I also feel the comic is quite random. A robot's not gonna worry 'bout catching bird flu, hover away, then evade a blood-thristy monster while some gas like machine is complimenting on how warm the monster's pee-pee is.

Also, please keep in mind that this is not flaming, it is criticing. 'Course, now, you and all your fans are going to chase me outta this thread, right?
 
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Frazzler

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Thanks for the pionters, and know we wont chase you out as i have no fans!
 
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Eric

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You have some grammer and spelling problems. Use spell check on your computer on Microsoft word to make sure you spelled everything right. Also, on the subjuect, "I" not "i".
You went crazy with the line tool. 1. No one can piss in that many streams and from behind. 2. They're just lines, and looks bad compared to the rest of the sprites.
Speaking of sprites, make sure you use sprites right. When Gate is flying, don't use his stand sprites. The purple guy is Gate from MegamanX 6 if anyone didn't know.
 
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Frazzler

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O.k will do eric, more episodes coming soon!

Wadda ya know, Episode 4,5,6 and 7 are up!
 
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P-Man

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Please dont triple post.

I like this. I'll keep my eye on it.
 
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