Okay so I apparently have lots of catching up to do! Last I read was the Regis so I'll comment on the ones after that!
Finneon/Lumineon: My first comment after reading the Finneon drabble was how I would've liked more description of the scene, but then I realized you wouldn't have space for the punchline if you did.
But then I get to Lumineon's drabble where you do have space for description, and in the end I felt it was much stronger. I also agree with [Imaginative]:[Clockwork] in that I like the quieter direction you took with Lumineon's drabble - it was literally just a kid telling Lumineon to turn on, but I think the more solid setting lifted it up more for me.
Flabébé/Floette/Florges: The Flabébé drabble made me laugh because that really is the most odd of typing decisions they made in 6th gen. I thought Floette's drabble was the strongest, partly because it's been a while since you made the Pokemon the main character of the drabble. I like how it captures the peculiarities of the Pokemon more directly than the others. Florges's drabble took a darker turn than I thought, but then again all these fairies seem to be much more brutal than their light-hearted appearances suggest.
Phantump/Trevenant: THE PHANTUMP ONE BROKE ME. I already knew I was in for a ride because Phantump's dex entry is like Cubone levels of depressing, but how it deals with the situation so succinctly really adds to the impact. Every sentence contributed to strengthening the emotions that came out of the whole piece, and it's probably my favorite drabble of yours so far! The Trevenant one is also really good. I feel like the humor here is much more dynamic than a lot of your other drabbles. Kinda reminds me of the Heliolisk one which I also really liked!
Yamask/Cofagrigus: Okay so OF COURSE it's the Yamask entry right after the Phantump entry and while I like the Phantump one a bit more (it's those last two lines that do it, really), I think this Yamask one is the most ambitious drabble you've written for the entire project, and I thought it paid off. I thought it was really smart that instead of going the obvious route and talk about the human-turned-Yamask's death, you talk about
another death that seems to precede (and possibly lead to) the Yamask's own. That's heavy stuff, and it brought out a lot of punch-you-in-the-gut emotions that isn't even easy to pull off with 10,000 words - the fact you pull it off with 100 really goes to show how good of a writer you are!
Then I read the Cofagrigus one and holy crap, I didn't expect you to make that reference at all! The over-the-top way you portrayed the situation really works for it, and I like how it works as a slight meta jab as well.
Ditto: I find this really funny because it reminds me of a conversation I wrote for my project where an NPC talks about this. And figuring out that Route 34 actually has wild Ditto makes this even funnier. Like the Cofagrigus one, I think the over-the-top way you wrote this made it much more enjoyable. Probably the funniest one of all the ones I read for this review.
Your drabbles just keep getting better and better, bnb, and like I said, the Phantump and Yamask drabbles in particular are my favorites of the entire project so far. (Why am I not surprised that I'm gravitating toward the more dramatic ones. Silly DM.) That doesn't take away from the strength of the humorous ones, though - I particularly liked how you handled the humor of the Trevenant, Lumineon, Cofagrigus, and Ditto ones as well. Really great job, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
