drawing mantine pre-'lution (i think)

[Metal Force]

will one of the shdows looks like mantine pre-evolution so i took the shadow & i made the pokemon( it doesn't look that much but i did my best also i don't it's real pic ) link= http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/5034/lution5of.png
what do u think of my drawing? & what do u think the shadow would be ? mantine pre-evolution or another pokemon ?
i'll make the other shadows soon & when they come out i'll draw a small sprite for them for now just mantine's pre-'lution

 

[LugiaXD]

the drwing looks wierd also i don't think it gonna look even 1% like ur drawing another thing i don't think it's a mantine pre-evolution i just don't sure it looks a little like him but it doesn't mean that it's pre-evolution

 

[y0u_kNoW_wh0]

Here is my pre evolution:

 

[KirbyXD]

yOu kNoW wh0, you can start another thread with YOUR sprites.
On topic: It looks a bit flat.

 

[ø®ΑпGЗ ♠]

There is too much of the dark shade on the body.

 

[Metal Force]

amm hello this my thread so tell me what do u think of my drawing (aka:i took the shadow & draw in it)

 

[Mewbiraxys]

It sucks, period. The lines ain't so smooth. your idea was good but your drawing is a boo boo.

 

[Dragonfree]

This is a drawing, not a sprite.

*moves*