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josh09
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okay i worked for about an hour on this i could not find a better name thatn dukky. consructive critisism only.
Chapter 1
Dukky awoke. He checked his clock. It was 7:00 am, the perfect time to go get his pokemon. Dukky ran down the stairs. Eager to get to breakfast so he could get to Prof. Cedar’s lab. Dukky pulled open the kitchen door, his slightly pale face full of confidence shining in the doorframe. His mother said “good morning. How did you sleep?” Her slightly wrinkled face radiating happiness. Dukky responded, “good. I want to get going as soon as possible.”
“So Dukky, which Pokemon are you going to take?” his dad said. His aged face full of cheer. “I don’t really know. Professor Cedar always has rare pokemon to give.” Dukky said while combing his red hair. “I mean last year he had a Dratini and a Beldum.” Dukky said as he swallowed a bagel. His mom said “well I’m sure you’ll do great.” Dukky then grabbed his pack, and sprinted out the door “I’m off” he said.
Dukky’s mother watched happily as he sprinted to Professor Cedar’s lab. She said, “wow one minute your changing their diaper, the other their starting their own pokemon journey.” “yah.” Said his dad. Then his mom spotted a Golem rolling down a mountain. It slammed into a tree, and the massive oak was coming down, straight for Dukky! She ran out the door. “Dukky watch out!” she screamed. Dukky saw the tree coming down. He froze. But just in time is mother pushed him out of the way. The tree crushed her, killing her instantly. “No!!!!” screamed Dukky.
Everyone from town came in to pay their respects. Dukky and his dad were sobbing. As the coffin was lowered into the hole, the tombstone with the imprint Gale Aroheim, Mother, Wife, Friend was put into place. And as Dukky and his dad got home, Dukky got into bed and cried himself to sleep. In a dream Dukky saw his mother coming towards him. She said, “Dukky, I know this loss has saddened you, but you must trudge on.” Dukky said “what?” She responded, “get a pokemon and go on your journey!” Dukky woke up he said “ok mom.”
Dukky got his pack on, and began walking towards the Professors Lab. He had tears in his eyes. He rang the door bell. A frail old man answered the door. “oh Dukky, I’m terrible sorry about your mother.” Said Professor Cedar.
“Its okay. Listen I’m here to- ”
“Yes I know, and I have a pokemon who knows what you’re going through.”
Dukky was puzzled. How could a pokemon know what he was going through? The Professor led him through the corridor. He opened a door to a Craggy Rock environment. There he saw a Cubone. The Cubone was sobbing madly. The Professor said, “ He recently lost his mother. I found him crying on the brick path. “Ill leave you two to bond.” He left the room. Dukky approached the Cubone.
“hi.”
Cubone just sat there sobbing.
“Listen Cubone, I know how you feel” Dukky said
Cubone looked up “cu bone?”
“I lost my mother two weeks ago.”
“cu bone bone” the pokemon replied
Cubone got up and hugged Dukky.
Then The Professor came and shook Dukky’s hand
“Congratulations!” he said.
Then Dukky left with Cubone at his side.
Chapter 1
Dukky awoke. He checked his clock. It was 7:00 am, the perfect time to go get his pokemon. Dukky ran down the stairs. Eager to get to breakfast so he could get to Prof. Cedar’s lab. Dukky pulled open the kitchen door, his slightly pale face full of confidence shining in the doorframe. His mother said “good morning. How did you sleep?” Her slightly wrinkled face radiating happiness. Dukky responded, “good. I want to get going as soon as possible.”
“So Dukky, which Pokemon are you going to take?” his dad said. His aged face full of cheer. “I don’t really know. Professor Cedar always has rare pokemon to give.” Dukky said while combing his red hair. “I mean last year he had a Dratini and a Beldum.” Dukky said as he swallowed a bagel. His mom said “well I’m sure you’ll do great.” Dukky then grabbed his pack, and sprinted out the door “I’m off” he said.
Dukky’s mother watched happily as he sprinted to Professor Cedar’s lab. She said, “wow one minute your changing their diaper, the other their starting their own pokemon journey.” “yah.” Said his dad. Then his mom spotted a Golem rolling down a mountain. It slammed into a tree, and the massive oak was coming down, straight for Dukky! She ran out the door. “Dukky watch out!” she screamed. Dukky saw the tree coming down. He froze. But just in time is mother pushed him out of the way. The tree crushed her, killing her instantly. “No!!!!” screamed Dukky.
Everyone from town came in to pay their respects. Dukky and his dad were sobbing. As the coffin was lowered into the hole, the tombstone with the imprint Gale Aroheim, Mother, Wife, Friend was put into place. And as Dukky and his dad got home, Dukky got into bed and cried himself to sleep. In a dream Dukky saw his mother coming towards him. She said, “Dukky, I know this loss has saddened you, but you must trudge on.” Dukky said “what?” She responded, “get a pokemon and go on your journey!” Dukky woke up he said “ok mom.”
Dukky got his pack on, and began walking towards the Professors Lab. He had tears in his eyes. He rang the door bell. A frail old man answered the door. “oh Dukky, I’m terrible sorry about your mother.” Said Professor Cedar.
“Its okay. Listen I’m here to- ”
“Yes I know, and I have a pokemon who knows what you’re going through.”
Dukky was puzzled. How could a pokemon know what he was going through? The Professor led him through the corridor. He opened a door to a Craggy Rock environment. There he saw a Cubone. The Cubone was sobbing madly. The Professor said, “ He recently lost his mother. I found him crying on the brick path. “Ill leave you two to bond.” He left the room. Dukky approached the Cubone.
“hi.”
Cubone just sat there sobbing.
“Listen Cubone, I know how you feel” Dukky said
Cubone looked up “cu bone?”
“I lost my mother two weeks ago.”
“cu bone bone” the pokemon replied
Cubone got up and hugged Dukky.
Then The Professor came and shook Dukky’s hand
“Congratulations!” he said.
Then Dukky left with Cubone at his side.