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Earth, Air, Water, Fire

Chapter 7

"The little I’ve learned about him tells me he only listens to people he trust."

"Trust" here should be "trusts".

The girl had changed since last Alec had seen her: her face was pristine and smooth now, all the nasty scars and burns neatly covered neatly covered with makeup.

"Neatly covered" is used twice here, obviously accidentally, so I'd go back and delete one of them.

Just two little things I noticed. :) Good work, Bulba! I'm really enjoying this!
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
Thanks, Scaldaver and OuaT! A very heartfelt thank you, indeed.

I hope you find the story intriguing enough to read to Chapter Thirteen!

Which I am publishing now!

Earth, Air, Water, Fire

Chapter Thirteen

-July 27, 2007-

Natalia was attempting to cut a neat circle in the glass window guarding the entire contents of the jewelry store in Saffron City. She had been hand-chosen by Gabriel along with seven other members of the gang he had formed since Team Skye’s disbandment (they went loosely under the name ‘Pariahs’, a pun based around Gabriel’s last name). Natalia had seemed nervous before the mission began - likely because she had never stolen professionally before this night. Gabriel had proclaimed his faith in her ability, though, and and because of his confidence she agreed to lead the break-in.

“Just keep at it, slow and steady,” Gabriel whispered, taking her arm gently as the hand clasping the box cutter shivered. The patrolling policemen had already been taken care of, their thick bodies dumped carelessly in the alley two stores down. Saffron Jewelers’ location was an ideal business opportunity for both the jewelers and the gang stealing from them - it was nestled in the shadow of the Silph Corporation building, which Gabriel planned to target next.

Thievery was all too easy these days. With shells landing and bullets flying freely as rainfall, stores were open seldom and at odd hours, most employees choosing to stay in the (relative) safety of their homes. The Silph skyscraper, a prime target, was heavily damaged but still standing, a mere shadow of the splendor it possessed in its pre-war days. The doors were boarded up and the building only opened when the Elite Four needed to hold emergency meetings. Its function as an authority hotspot was all Gabriel needed to add it to his list of areas to hit quick and hard. That job would be all up to him; he only relegated smaller jobs to other members of the gang.

Natalia let out a gasp of relief, holding the perfect circle of glass she had just detached from the window. The hole was barely big enough for her slim figure; Gabriel would never be able to pass through. “What now?” she asked, placing the glass carefully to the side and reaching back to pull her hair up, tying the flowing sheets of ruby-red into a tight ponytail. A great crunching sounded in the distance, followed by an explosion, and the far-off silhouette of Mt. Silver was illuminated eerily in the darkening sky.

“This is your mission, Natalia,” Gabriel said smoothly. “You decide.”

Natalia looked him full-on, eye to eye, breaking the Pariahs’ invisible rule that Gabriel was not to be looked at. “I’m gonna go in,” she said, searching his icy blue eyes for affirmation. He did not move a muscle, but she found approval from her leader and nodded, taking a deep breath.

“Just be sensitive. Motion sensors,” her leader reminded her.

“Of course. Like I’d forget that,” she muttered, remembering all too well the first time she’d tripped off an invisible ribbon of detection. Gabriel glared at her, intolerant of insolence. Natalia chose to begin her careful climb into the darkened storefront.

“Gabriel, look at Mt. Silver,” Amy said quickly, her low voice full of urgency. Natalia had one foot through the window but she pulled back to look as well. In unison, the gang gasped, swore, and shouted their shock, for the mountain seemed to be igniting.

“What is that?” Natalia asked, removing herself completely from the hole and going to stand with her seven teammates.

“It looks like NeoEarth has finally spread its fire to Johto…” mused Herzel, Gabriel’s brutal right-hand man, his heavy brow narrowed so that his black eyes disappeared completely in shadow.

“I don’t think that’s it…” Natalia said. The flames were frighteningly beautiful, a magnificent spectrum of bright blues and crimsons ultimately consumed by searing white and pale gold. A scarlet streak shot through the inferno, pulling it out from the mountain, toward Kanto. Gabriel maintained a stony face, calculating as he stared at the spectacular incendiary display.

“Ho-oh,” he whispered, his voice filled with awe, not fear. He lifted his arms and seemed to reach for the flames, which looked to be rippling over the entire region, rapidly spreading further and further outward.

“What’s happening?” Amy asked, parting her thick lips in wonder, her eyes widening as the flames roared toward Saffron.

Gabriel was smiling maniacally. “Ho-oh has come to save us all. His flames...the purging flame from the legend. He’s come from the heavens to end the war.” The area was getting very warm, the speeding inferno closing in.

“What if they burn us?” Natalia asked in panic. “Gabriel, we have to take cover -” And all was engulfed in fire. Natalia felt the flames lick at her, searing her flesh, devouring. She screamed; the torture would not end, the fire was not killing her, but it wasn’t passing her over, either, as the legend had said it would. The crackling of the flames and Gabriel’s joyful laughter rang in her ears, consuming, pressing in on her. The pain was too much, and she passed out for a time.

“Talia?” Her father’s voice sounded so welcoming to her ears, finally drowning out the roaring sound that had been ringing through them for so long. Hector Solos stood before her, ten years younger than he had been at the point of death, fat and healthy-looking. He reached his arms out, and Natalia ran forward, disbelief turning to joy as she ran into her father’s arms, allowing the thickset man to engulf her frail, burnt body. He stroked her ruby hair and chuckled, whispering her name over and over.

“Why did you leave me?” she asked, looking up at his wide face and searching for the answer.

Hector sighed and did not answer. “Why did you keep stealing?” he asked after some time. Natalia looked around, trying to gather up a response for the man, although she knew he was nothing more than a whisper, a memory she had stored in her subconscious. She told him as much, which made her father frown. “You’re avoiding the question. I’m dead; why are you still stealing? Look at what almost happened to you, Talia.” She shivered at this; she had missed the sound of his voice wrapped around her name.

“I think it’s karma, dad -”

“Darn tootin’, it’s karma!” he said immediately, frowning. “Maybe this fire was meant to knock some sense into that twisted head of yours.”

Natalia did not like this dream version of her father. “I couldn’t stop stealing, dad. It was the only thing I could do to maintain structure in my life,” she said quietly, averting her eyes. When she looked back up, her father had turned into Gabriel, whose eyes were narrowed.

“You’ve killed us,” he said, and he burst into flames, his scorched arm reaching out and slapping her burned face without warning.

PAIN.

Natalia opened her eyes and found she was screaming. Her eyes could not see, she was blind. Her face was on fire, she felt the left side melting, twisting, blackening, as if coals were set in it, glowing eternally. She felt a strong set of hands grasp at her, shaking her forcefully. “Natalia.” Gabriel’s voice hit her ears uncomfortably, sounding sharp and unnatural. She continued shrieking, the agony increasing. Gabriel slapped her, sending a fresh pain searing through her damaged flesh. She blinked away tears, understanding that she could now see light at least, and vague shapes/

“Gabriel…” she croaked, her throat dry. She suddenly realized the fires had destroyed her clothing. She was very naked and exposed, and this set a new reason to scream in her. Gabriel’s hand clamped over her mouth. His hand felt very cold against her burning face.

“Shut up. Stop screaming,” he said. Natalia blinked again, her vision clearing further. Gabriel’s face swam into focus. She began to pick out details, dark ashen colors attacking her newfound vision. Gabriel appeared to be unscathed, although he, too, was naked, his lean muscular body shining with sweat and a fine layer of soot. Natalia squirmed, making to cover herself. “Don’t,” he said sternly. “There’s no point. We’ve all been exposed.” The fact that he said ‘we’ve’ gave Natalia hope - it had felt as if she and Gabriel were the sole survivors of Ho-oh’s flames.

Natalia moaned and blinked away the tears of pain. Her face was still throbbing on the left side. She reached up to feel it, pushing Gabriel’s hand away. It felt like leather, stripped raw and burning angrily. Natalia gasped. Gabriel squinted down at her, his familiar cinnamon scent drifting across her nostrils, calming her ever so slightly. “You’re burnt,” he observed, frowning. Natalia let out a noise of derision, to which he shook his head, pressing a finger to her chapped lips. “You’re burnt,” he insisted, gingerly stroking the left side of her face. She yelped at this.

PAIN.

“Gabriel?” asked a husky female voice from very far away. Natalia shook her head, feeling everything swimming, unsteady. Gabriel locked eyes with Natalia, nodded, and stood, turning to walk away.

“Don’t leave me,” Natalia said softly, but he was gone. She lifted her head and finally took in her surroundings. Saffron City looked mostly the same, but in grayscale; the flames had not destroyed the city any more than the machines NeoEarth had deployed. Instead it seemed to have covered the city in a fine layer of charcoal. The jewelry store window remained intact apart from the circle she had cut into it mere seconds ago...or was it days? The sun was high overhead.

PAIN.

Gabriel was bent over a naked female body, and at the sight of his back, Natalia gasped. It was destroyed, melted and charred by the Sacred Fire. It was shining in the sun, bleeding and very raw, the burns glowing an almost beautiful rose color. It took Natalia a moment to absorb this new sensory information before another detail leapt out at her. There were only two people in the street around her. Only Gabriel and Amy, no others. Where was Herzel, where was Dominic, where were Bonnie and her good friend Claire?

“Where is everyone?” she asked, and her face exploded again, every nerve alight.

“Gone,” Gabriel said, taking Amy’s charred hand and observing it, not looking back at Natalia. “They’re all gone. Ho-oh killed them.” His voice betrayed no emotion, just fact. Natalia felt her heart sink. What does this mean, she thought, her mind spinning and spiraling, everything falling away.

“How are we still here?” Amy asked, wincing in pain.

“Arceus knows,” Gabriel mused. Silence rippled through the streets like the purging flames that had decimated the Pariahs. “Legend says the flames killed those beyond salvation, passed over those who were pure, and branded the imperfect ones, sending them away.” He reached over his shoulder, touching the shining burns on his back. “There it is, then,” he said flatly. He smiled ironically at Natalia. “We’re imperfect,” he said, raising his eyebrows. He stood from Amy’s side, walking away from her dark naked body and yelling very suddenly. Natalia felt her face again, understanding the burn was not ever going to heal.

PAIN.

“Mark of the impure,” she whispered. She felt her body shudder. Why, she asked silently, staring up into the deceptively bright blue sky. Why let us live?

“Nobody can live like this,” Amy gasped, grabbing at her cracked, bleeding hand which now resembled a cruel talon more than human appendage. Natalia nodded in agreement, a new feeling rising in her chest.

“How could you do this to me?” Gabriel screamed, glaring at the sky, his arms parted in wonder. Natalia closed her eyes, shutting it all out. What kind of creature does this? she thought, shuddering in revulsion. Her face throbbed in response. PAIN.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

Alec rolled over, staring at the fire he had helped build before he and Logan were given leave to sleep. The group had been taking shifts for the past few hours to allow some peace for each companion, although Alec noted Preston had neglected to assign himself any rest time. Much as he seemed to believe Natalia’s rubbish about penance and sorrow, the older man did not appear to trust her enough to leave her unwatched. Alec could see him sitting a stone’s throw away, speaking quietly with Chase while Natalia sat against the wall, staring longingly at the fire.

“Logan,” Alec whispered, keeping his eyes on Preston to ensure the ex-gym leader couldn’t hear. “Are you awake?”

“Yeah, I can’t sleep,” Logan responded after a beat. Alec smiled, glad to have her company.

“The old man looks terrible,” Alec said, referring to Preston’s pallid skin and the bags extending longer and darker under his gray eyes.

“It’s not our fault he’s not sleeping,” Logan’s voice said. Alec turned his eyes to her. She was staring straight up at the low tunnel ceiling, her shoulder-length blonde hair spread out over her Leafeon, who was again acting as a mint-green pillow for her trainer.

“What are we doing, Juliet?” Alec asked her after a silence.

Logan turned her head but kept her sky-blue eyes up. She seemed to be upset about something. “What do you mean?”

“We’re rushing our way through this tunnel with a Team Skye member so we can...what? Meet some crazy guy in Mahogany Town because he’ll know what to do with my family heirloom? Why?” It was apparent Alec had been meaning to say this for a long time.

“It’s something to do,” Logan said after mulling this over. “Would you rather do something else?” she asked, finally looking at Alec.

“Yes,” Alec said, nodding repeatedly for emphasis. Logan looked at him for a while. “What?” he asked finally. Logan liked to communicate through silence a lot, which didn’t help Alec in the slightest.

“That’s the second time you’ve called me Juliet today,” she said quietly. Alec’s eyes closed slowly, his face flushing. “Who is she?” She paused, then: “...was she?”

Alec had seized up in embarrassment at this revelation. “I’m so sorry, Logan,” he said. He looked over his shoulder, checking on Preston, who was now offering some almonds to Natalia. “Juliet...is wonderful. She was my babysitter,” he said meekly, ashamed he’d ever needed a caretaker. Logan watched him carefully. “You remind me a lot of her. She was like a second mother...better than my real one,” he admitted. It amazed him that Logan allowed something in him to open up so readily.

“What happened to her?” Logan asked gently.

Alec watched Machop curled up in his sleep a few feet away, his small body shivering despite the fire. “She left. A better job came around, I guess.” Alec clenched his fists. “That’s when my parents sent me to school.” He said the last word with utter distaste.

“Why did you leave school?” Logan prompted.

“I...well, I ran away. I couldn’t, I just couldn’t do it. I…” Alec swallowed. “I wanted to find Juliet. I knew she had a place in Goldenrod City with her...husband. I thought, maybe she would take me in. Let me train my Pokémon, become who I wanted to be, not what my parents wanted,” he said bitterly.

“You sound so much like Tracey,” Logan said almost absently. She froze, regretting the statement immediately. Silently, the realization sank in for both of them; each was merely projecting their lost loved one on the other. Logan’s clear blue eyes watered and she turned away, burying her head in Leafeon’s warm body.

Alec didn’t want to stop talking, no matter how bizarre his relationship to the girl might be. She provided him comfort. “I met Natalia a third time,” he blurted out. “A time I didn’t tell anyone about.”

This caught Logan’s attention. She sat up, before looking at Preston’s stooped body through the darkness and lowering herself again. “When?” she hissed.

“When I told you my mom called me,” he said miserably. He recounted the real reason he’d wandered off the other day in explicit detail. “And she told me,” he said finally, Logan’s eyes trained intently on the young man, “that I needed to choose one person I can trust. Besides myself,” he added.

Logan looked surprised and touched. “You chose me?” she asked, smiling despite herself.

“No, I chose Gabriel,” Alec said dryly.

She laughed softly, reaching a hand out for the trainer. “I promise you chose well,” she said quietly, smiling at him.

“Well, I hope so!” he said, chuckling, glad at the chance to laugh.

“That’s still really weird though,” she said, frowning suddenly and looking across the cave at Natalia. “I can’t figure her out,” she continued, biting her lip. “She keeps saying she hates Gabriel...but then why did she work for him for so long?” She shook her head. “Something doesn’t add up with her. Call it a feeling.”

Alec nodded. “When I first met her, I was so convinced she was this sweet woman...she’s a REALLY good liar. I don’t know why Preston trusts her,” he said sourly. “It’s definitely making me wonder about him. Why does Will think he’s so dependable, anyway?” Logan shook her head. Silence stretched again. “Let’s play a game,” Alec said after a time.

“Your choice,” Logan said, grinning.

“Okay. Screw, marry, kill. Me, Chase, and…” His mind went blank. “Tracey,” he said finally. Logan’s smile disappeared. “Sorry...bad choice,” he muttered. “Bad game.”

“Let’s sleep,” Logan said, barely audible. Silence fell again, punctuated only by Logan’s Houndoom whimpering absently in her sleep.

….....................................................................................

-July 27, 2007-

“Open it up. Just...I want to see your face,” were the words Roy Gideon said. Alec understood the true meaning behind them: Just open the thing, we don’t have all day. I have a business to run. His father feigned a look of excitement, which Alec supposed was the most he could hope to get from the man. The newly-turned thirteen-year-old boy hesitated before ripping open the olive-colored wrapping paper, not caring enough to save the pieces.

It was a black box, small but heavy. These did tend to hold the best gifts...Alec felt his heart swell against his better judgment. He looked at his father, the man’s sea-green eyes trained on the box in anticipation. Alec exchanged glances with Amber, his ‘bring one friend only’ choice, who nodded encouragingly. “Open it, dude!” she said, just as curious as her friend. Alec shook his head, took a deep breath, and opened the box.

“See, it’s the latest model,” Roy said, grabbing the Poké Gear from the box and shaking it for Alec. The boy’s heart sank. “I got it straight from the factory. It now has an instant messaging extension, look.” The auburn-haired man demonstrated accordingly. Alec watched in silence, listening to his father extol the beauty and value of this newest upgrade. Eventually the man sensed the boy’s lack of interest. His voice grew steely. “You don’t like it.”

Alec pushed himself back in his chair, the front legs leaving the floor. The waiter serving them shot him a dirty look from across the dark, narrow room and Alec settled down quickly. Roy had taken Alec and Amber to the Sinnoh Garden, a restaurant unique to Mahogany Town that contained the finest delicacies from the Sinnoh region. It was quite nice, quite rich, and quite dull.

“Why don’t you like it,” his father pressed, trying to control his voice. He was gripping his fork rather tight, and Alec swore he could see the man’s wide nostrils flaring.

“He didn’t say he doesn’t like it,” Amber said, danger in her loud voice. As much as she tried to keep peace and calm, it did not take an awful lot to awaken the girl’s irritable core.

“No, Amber, don’t try,” Alec said, folding his arms and looking defiantly into his father’s eyes. “It’s true, I don’t like it. In fact, I think it sucks.” His father leapt up.

“Roy?” came a familiar strong voice that made Alec’s heart swell painfully. Striding towards the Gideon’s table were two people; one, a very tall man with close-cropped chestnut hair, a strong jaw, and a very broad chest. The other was Juliet. Alec suppressed an immediate cry of delight.

The boy’s father took a calming breath, adjusting his jacket and extending a hand, his thin mouth curving into a smile so wide and forced it seemed his face might break. “Hello! Juliet, what a pleasant surprise! I didn’t realize you were in the area.” She took the man’s hand, looking across the table to Alec and winking, her soft brown eyes twinkling. “And this must be your boyfriend?” The muscular man extended his large hand, shaking Roy’s as well; he seemed to have a very firm grip.

“This is James -”

“Call me Jim,” the man cut in, smiling warmly. Alec felt his heart deflating quite rapidly. Boyfriend?

“James,” Juliet said again, wrapping her willowy arm around his waist, “And actually, he is now my fiancée.” She beamed, and Alec noticed she did, indeed, have a sapphire-set engagement ring on her pale hand. His heart crashed to rock-bottom with a thunk. “So Alec,” the woman said, turning her attention to her old friend, “happiest of birthdays.” She gave him one of her familiar, beautiful smiles, the kind that hurt to look at for too long. Alec thought he might be sick. But, he thought, she remembers my birthday…

“Got a new kid to look after these days?” Roy asked. Juliet shook her head, exchanging an excited look with James.

“She’s got a kid of her own coming,” James said, touching her stomach proudly. She touched his large, tan hand and hugged it to her, nodding happily. Amber grabbed Alec’s hand under the table, squeezing very hard.

“We’re hoping it’s a girl,” Juliet said gently. Alec had a very sour look on his face. He remembered she had always longed for a daughter. Amber clamped tighter on his hand, leading Alec to wonder if she was trying to help him cope or merely trying to crush his fingers. Either was possible with her.

“Fingers crossed,” Roy said, his cheer sounding almost genuine.

“Who’s this?” Juliet asked, indicating toward Alec’s straw-haired friend who was gripping his hand so tightly. Amber had been stony silent, as she was apt to do when strangers presented themselves to her.

“Um, this is…” Alec said, struggling to find his own voice, eyes focused on Juliet’s gently swollen stomach. “This is Amber, she’s a friend from school.” He said this accusingly, as if it were Juliet’s fault he had ever gone to technical school in the first place.

“A ‘friend from school’, eh?” his old guardian said, smiling knowingly. Alec felt his blood boil. She couldn’t possibly think he was even remotely interested in Amber. A scream sounded at the front of the restaurant.

“Look at Mt. Silver!” a man’s voice yelled. There was a flurry of movement in the dimly-lit area, and a great mass of bodies stood almost in unison, pushing toward the large glass windows that looked out on the mountains. James shielded his fiancée from the stampede, infuriating Alec.

Roy looked vaguely concerned, although he showed no interest in investigating the source of the urgent voices ringing through the Sinnoh Garden. “What’s all the commotion?” he wondered aloud.

“Is it getting warm?” Amber asked simultaneously. Alec did notice the rapidly rising temperature, although he had thought this was due to his jealous rage over Juliet and her muscular boyfriend. I could have muscles like that if I tried…

“Flames! Flames from the mountain!” shouted their waiter, running away from the window toward the kitchens, knocking chairs over. Roy moved from behind the table very quickly.

“What’s he talking about?” Juliet asked, peering toward the window. The roaring crackle of incineration hit their ears just as the scarlet flames shot through Fractal Avenue, quick and unstoppable. The windows seemed unaffected, but somehow the fire passed straight through, engulfing everything and everyone in flames.

All was screams and chaos. Alec fought to see, coughing and choking, grasping for Juliet. Amber was crying somewhere to his right, Roy screaming. Why aren’t the flames killing me? Alec wondered vaguely. He couldn’t see, the fire was filling his vision, his ears, his mouth, pouring down his throat. He felt a hand grab his arm. “Juliet?” he called. “I can’t see!” Everything was red, white, and hot. It was too much for Alec’s thirteen-year-old body. The boy blacked out, still calling his old protector’s name.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

“They’re not sleeping, you know,” Chase said, his eyes glancing darkly at Logan and Alec’s motionless bodies by the fire.

“Yes, I know,” Preston said, not looking up from his journal. “Were you expecting them to?” He turned a page, squinting to read in the dark shadow that threatened to engulf himself, Chase, and Natalia in their vigil away from the fire.

“I guess not...still, everyone could use the sleep,” Chase said, a little louder perhaps than he had to, his head turned toward the fire. He could swear he saw Alec shoot him a dirty look.

“We still have a ways to go before reaching the exit, I think,” Preston said, still poring over the yellowed pages of his book. A card slipped out from the back cover, one that Chase had not seen while he and Alec were in possession of the journal. “Oh, for Arceus’s sake,” Preston muttered, fishing around in the dark for the small piece of paper.

“What is that?” Chase asked, nodding toward the card.

“It’s nothing, really,” Preston said, hastily sliding the card back in between the pages of the journal. Chase tilted his head forward, eyebrows raised. “It’s my wedding vows,” he said finally, unable to shake Chase’s curious look. “It’s so dark in these caves,” he continued quickly, clearing his throat and looking back down at his own writing and glancing longingly at the fire. “Had I just accepted they wouldn’t sleep anyway, maybe I would have chosen different seating arrangements.” The graying man shifted uncomfortably on the flat rock he was leaning against. He let out a sudden gasp of pain.

“Are you okay?” Chase asked, snapping his head back from Logan. Natalia also looked up, her cocoa eyes glittering anxiously at the noise that Preston had emitted.

“It’s this leg,” he groaned, reaching down to touch his heavily bandaged right leg. “I can’t keep going like this. I need to treat it.” He went to undo the bandages, his fingers fumbling uselessly.

Chase grabbed the older man’s calloused hands. “Preston. I think you need to sleep. Have you seen yourself?” He was referring to the man’s pale face, sunken cheeks, and heavily shadowed eyes. “You haven’t slept since we left your house. C’mon, you need to. Your body needs to heal!”

Preston shook his head insistently. “No, I need to stay alert. Will told me to protect you children. And I need to make sure she doesn’t do anything against her word.”

“For the last time, we are young adults. Logan and I are of age. I can drive a car. Okay? I can keep an eye on everyone, including Natalia.” Preston shook his head again, stubbornly fighting exhaustion.

“I promised on my father’s name I wouldn’t try anything,” Natalia said, standing up with Chase. “I really think you ought to rest. The last thing you need is to get sick. Come on,” she said, reaching an arm out.

After several more pleas, Preston finally allowed himself to be carried to the fireside, where Alec and Logan had fallen completely silent. After carefully lying him down on some padded blankets and pillows, Natalia re-dressed the man’s leg, returning the favor he had granted her the other day after rescuing her from Amy and Brodie. Chase helped where he could, although medicine was foreign to him. Preston looked ready to pass out.

“We’ll get you to the hospital first thing in the morning,” Chase said, realizing silently he frankly had no idea what time it was; he had not used his Poké Gear in ages.

“Keep an eye...I’m trusting you, Chase…” Preston said deliriously. It did not take any further persuasion to convince the man to sleep. He finally closed his eyes, his hollowed cheeks releasing tension and his brow lifting peacefully. Natalia and Chase returned to the sentry post Preston had erected away from the fire.

“He really needs a doctor,” Natalia said, a note of genuine concern in her voice. Chase nodded, looking curiously at her for a long moment before averting his gaze. “What?” she asked.

“You seem so...normal. I mean, Preston treats you like an equal but a potential threat. Alec and Logan hate you. Everything I’ve heard about you...well, makes you seem like a terrifying killer. You don’t come across that way.”

Natalia threw a small rock into the darkness, listening to its echoing trajectory through the tunnel before looking back at Chase. “I’m not normal,” she said despondently. The two sat in silence. Logan’s Houndoom barked once.

“Oh, that reminds me!” Chase said, a complete non sequitur. He released his Nidoking, the tall purple beast flexing his strong arms and pounding a stumpy foot on the ground. “For extra security,” he said upon Natalia’s questioning look.

“Ah, yes,” she said. She understood the true need for ‘extra security’. It was a long time ago indeed when she would have questioned why everyone was frightened by her. Nidoking took a stoic step away from the two, puffing his chest and beginning his silent vigil.

“Do you play chess?” Chase asked after some time. Natalia frowned, unsure of the young man’s angle.

“I do. I mean, I did,” she said, looking at him searchingly. “Once upon a time. It was my favorite game,” she added.

Thank you!” Chase said excitedly, his eyes lighting up. “It’s a guilty pleasure game of mine. I play with Logan, but it bores her. I have a board…care to play?” Natalia wore an expression of extreme skepticism. “To pass the time!” he continued, already reaching into his bag.

“Why not?” Natalia said finally. Chase set up the board on the tunnel floor, producing a bag with red-and-white pieces and pouring them out. Natalia felt a surge of nostalgia at the sight of the game pieces.

“Want to be red or white?” the young man asked.

“Red,” Natalia said immediately. She had always chosen red when playing with her father (‘just like your hair!’ he would always say fondly.)

“Good, I’m always white,” Chase said cheerfully. Natalia’s eyes lingered on his unnaturally-colored hair and wondered if he always chose his player color for the same reason as she did.

“I haven’t played for a long time,” Natalia warned. Chase nodded, setting his pawns in a protective row in front of his king.

“I’ll guide you through,” he promised. “I didn’t always play, I started about five years ago,” he said conversationally, handing a pair of rooks to his opponent. “I spent a long time in a hospital, the doctor there taught me how to play. It helped me pass the time,” he continued. Natalia remained silent, looking at the faceless queen he handed her and remembering her father’s warm voice, saying ‘No, no, my Red Queen, you can’t move your knight that way!’ She smiled at the memory.

“I’ll start,” Chase said, already engrossed in the game. He moved a pawn two spaces. “So, why did you agree to come with us?” he asked, looking up at the Team Skye member, his soft brown eyes merely curious.

“It’s not exactly like I had a choice -”

“But you did,” Chase interrupted, “Preston told me what you did to those two teammates of yours. He had an injured leg and Logan can’t fight to save her life. You could’ve taken them and escaped easily.” Natalia moved a pawn one space. “But you didn’t,” Chase said, pressing. He moved his right bishop out three spaces, thought better of it, and moved a knight instead.

“I was done with Team Skye. With Gabriel. All the awful things he’s done, I just...I feel bad for Alec -”

“Doesn’t everybody?” Chase muttered, rolling his eyes. Natalia gripped a rook. “You can’t move that yet, all its pathways are blocked,” he said.

“Oh, right. Well, okay. Yes, I felt bad for Alec and all the pain we’ve...I’ve put him through. Gabriel has exiled me from Team Skye...so I meant it when I said I want him taught a lesson. I’m going to help you defy him!” Chase did not respond; he was staring at the board, deep in thought. “Preston listened to my story and seemed to trust my honesty, he said everybody deserves a second chance.” She moved another pawn.

“Did he give you a big speech about hugging?” Chase asked sardonically. Natalia cocked an eyebrow. “Never mind,” he said, taking her pawn with his knight. “Bad move,” he added, smiling.

“I told you I was bad at this,” Natalia said, returning the smile.

“Well, if Preston trusts you, I guess that’s good enough for now,” Chase said. It shouldn’t be, Natalia thought darkly. “Why is Alec so special, then?” he asked, almost involuntarily, his eyes suddenly locking onto her face.

“Well...I mean, Gabriel has a plan, a big plan involving Ho-oh. Everything he’s done, everything he was planning on doing, was about Ho-oh. The Rainbow Wing is supposedly an essential part of controlling the Pokémon...remember back in Olivine City, Champion Will arrived on that Lugia he’s somehow tamed...that was because Gabriel wanted to commune with its brethren. He was...obsessed,” she admitted. She went to move her queen, but Chase grabbed her hand. She flinched at the touch of his warm fingers, and he quickly broke the contact.

“Can’t move her yet,” he said gravely. “You say this all in the past tense...isn’t Gabriel still after Alec? And Ho-oh?”

“Ah, well...see, when I say he kicked me out...I think he disbanded the group. Amy and Brodie were telling me as much in the caves,” Natalia said, glancing nervously at Preston. She knew he alone could catch her in a lie. “I think the Team finally realized how crazy the man’s plans were.”

“Why did you join Team Skye, if you hate Gabriel so much, if you think he’s crazy?”

Natalia contemplated telling the carefully fabricated story she had rehearsed an exhausting amount of times with Gabriel, or the complete truth. “I was in a...very complicated relationship, two years ago. His name was Shawn. He was beautiful...long, sandy hair, these real soulful eyes. Not too intelligent, but he loved me. I always said I was smart enough for both of us,” she said, smiling slightly, her deep brown eyes distant. “But he did love me. Or...I thought he did. He discovered, one day, what my face really looked like. He was...revolted. He couldn’t stand looking at me. He kicked me out, leaving me quite friendless. I’m not good at the whole friend thing,” she said quietly, clutching at her arm. “He told me, “You’re not worth loving.”” Chase whistled. “Yeah, he was real friendly. Well, I was out on the street. I was alone, very truly. That’s where I met Gabriel. I...I joined Team Skye because Gabriel was the only one who would have me,” she whispered. She moved her left knight three spaces. Well, mostly truth is a stepping stone, she thought.

“What’s wrong with your face?” Chase asked after a spell. Natalia looked at him, a searching look that made him feel quite naked. There was an intelligent, piercing quality to her gaze that was difficult to avoid. The girl reached up slowly, wiping the left side of her face slowly, revealing the angry red burns concealed underneath the mask. She waited for the revulsion, the hatred.

“Gabriel did this to me,” she said quietly.

Chase blinked. “And?”

“Well, Shawn was right, wasn’t he? I look like a freak.”

Chase moved a pawn forward. “You look fine to me,” he said simply.

Natalia stared at him. “Look at me!”

He obeyed, taking in her long, straight ruby hair, the way her angular face melted on the left side, the olive skin and arched eyebrows drooping like wax. The burns glowed faintly.

“I am looking at you,” he said. “And it’s your move.”

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-July 28, 2007. Early Morning.-

“What about the two that were with him? And his Pokémon?” Preston asked, squinting at a dark shape for a moment before ascertaining it was a charred piece of war machinery, nothing more. He and Will had been scanning the battlefield, or the remnants of a battlefield, ever since Ho-oh’s fire engulfed the continent the night before. The incident would forever be remembered as “The Day of the Ashes,” or less elegantly, “The Purge.” All members of the Pokémon League Official Task Force that were able were combing the area of the final battle for burn victims.

Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire had done many things - the rift between NeoEarth and their own world was closed, presumably with all the worlds’ inhabitants returned to their rightful sides. Many people had ceased to exist - it seemed they had been vaporized by the flames. Others, like Will and Preston, had remained completely unharmed. But a third faction seemed to exist, a small percentage of people Ho-oh had been unsure about. They were left damaged, burnt horribly and disfigured. Karen and Lance were still completely absent, although the search was still underway.

“Tracey’s Pokémon died with their trainer, as is wont in such a case. Logan and Chase escaped relatively unscathed, though traumatized. The girl, in particular, seems to have...snapped?” Preston cocked his head. “I understand she was very close to Tracey. It’s possible she’s just unsure how to handle his loss,” Will continued, stomping on a piece of still-burning equipment.

“I guess that’s to be expected,” Preston said, trying to recall his immediate reaction to the death of his wife. “Is she seeing someone?”

“Dr. Hume is looking after her.” Will sighed, glancing around the charred remains of the Indigo Plateau. He and Preston had not slept for nearly three days, although the graying ex-gym leader looked far worse for wear than Will, who somehow still managed to look resplendent. “Where do we begin? How do we rebuild from here? Ho-oh’s flames reportedly only destroyed the immediate battle areas. But they killed people all over. A rough estimate put out this morning,” he said, scanning his beat-up Poké Gear, “says about ten percent of our population is gone. Just...gone.”

Preston bowed his head. “All those people...Ho-oh just decided they were beyond redemption?”

Will shook his head numbly. “All we have to go off of is the legend. The impurities were cleansed. Ho-oh just chose who lives and who dies. But these...burned people. Burnt, excuse me. That’s a new phenomenon...legend never said anything, not, not about that.” He shuddered. Koga’s daughter Janine had been found burnt, all her beautiful violet hair destroyed. “He marked those who can still be saved,” Will said hollowly.

“Well,” Preston began, before stopping himself. He was beyond words at the moment. He dug his boot into the ashen ground absently, running his fingers through his hair. “Did any of you see Karen on the summit?” he asked finally, realizing he had never found her while scanning the area.

Will’s face fell. “Well...apparently, she was waiting for Tracey at the shrine. Chase says Tracey started the fire almost as a defense. I think...Preston, I think it’s pretty clear Karen was our enemy.” Preston nodded silently. “Right under our noses,” he finished sadly.

“I don’t suppose we should tell anyone. Let them think she’s still missing, like Lance.” Will did not respond. “Or should we?” Preston asked, looking searchingly at his friend.

“We can only wait for so long. The entire structure of our government will be changed, Joe. The Steward is dead, the Champion is missing...Karen is gone, four gym leaders out of commission…”

“Four?” Preston asked sharply.

“Yes. Erika is already preparing to be sworn into the Elite Four, for the time being. Her assistant Nikki is prepared to take the Celadon Gym...but if we count Janine as unfit to continue...Emerson was confirmed dead two days ago, and Pryce…”

“What about me?” asked a shaky voice. Will and Preston jumped. They scanned the field wildly, looking for the Mahogany Gym Leader. “Right here,” said the ancient voice from behind them. Pryce was buried underneath the empty shell of a NeoEarth helicopter, his entire lower body hidden. “I didn’t want to interrupt,” the old man said, his bruised, lined face breaking into a smile. His shock of white hair was mostly gone, as was any color he had once contained in his skin.

“Arceus’ Plates!” Will yelped, indicating to Preston. The two immediately hoisted the burnt aircraft off the old man’s broken lower body. Preston looked away in revulsion. The fire had done its number on Pryce; his lower body was essentially a ravaged charcoal mess, melted and twisted beyond hope of repair.

“Guess I was judged salvageable,” the man prompted feebly, reading Preston’s mind.

“I’ll call the medics in immediately!” Will said, grabbing his Poké Gear. Preston touched his friend’s arm, shaking his head. “What?”

“He needs immediate help. These burns...do they hurt?” Preston asked, pulling out his first aid kit and kneeling beside the withered old man.

“I think? I can’t really feel them,” Pryce said hoarsely.

Preston snapped the kit open, producing a tube of gel. “You’ll be in a wheelchair forever,” the graying man said, squeezing a large amount of gel onto the left leg and beginning the painful process of treatment.

Pryce closed his eyes, wincing and breathing unevenly.“What were you saying about the government?” he asked after a while. Will didn’t answer, staring at the final product of Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire.

Preston knew Pryce was very interested in politics, but this seemed an odd moment to discuss them. “Just relax, Pryce,” he said softly.

“Will I be removed from my gym?” Pryce asked, his raspy voice shaking nervously.

“There’ll be a vote. Before anything else is decided, I think we’ll need a new elected leader,” Will said hesitantly. Both Preston and Pryce turned their heads to the Elite Four member instantly. “What?” he asked, nonplussed.

“It’s going to be you,” Preston laughed, capping the tube again. Pryce’s legs were still grossly unfit to look at, but at least the very long healing process had been triggered.

Will blushed but did not speak. “It could be anyone in the Elite Four,” he said finally.

“I nominate Karen,” Pryce said wryly. Will laughed in spite of himself.

“My vote goes to Will,” Preston said, his gray eyes locking with his friend’s magenta ones. “Will, the Lugia Master, Will the Champion.”

“Thanks, Joe,” Will said gratefully. Preston nodded brusquely. “I would gladly vote for you, you’re more the leader…”

“I’m not a leader,” Preston said very firmly. “I’m retired. I’m a healer now. It’s going to be you, I know it.” Will smiled.

“Well, now that the lovefest has ended,” Pryce said, his voice barely above a whisper, “can we work on getting me out of here?”

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-2009-

Preston was having a very vivid nightmare. He saw Carrie, broken, pale, delirious and very pregnant, lying in a hospital bed, her eyes bleary and unseeing.

“Don’t let them hurt the child,” was all she muttered, over and over. Preston tried to reach her, but there was a large break in the ground between them, empty space between his world and hers.

“Carrie, I’m coming,” he tried yelling, but he was silenced by a half-man, half-bird with piercing blue eyes and crimson feathers. He had long legs that ended in cruel black talons, and his face was elongated, ending in a pointed beak.

“The only way across is with my help,” the man/bird said in a cold voice, fire springing out of his back.

“Carrie!” Preston yelled, ignoring the beast and trying to jump the void. She was so far away...he was never going to reach her...his leg snapped in the second before the leap, and the crippled man tripped, falling into the negative space separating the lovers forever…

“Preston, we need to get you help,” said a voice, a male voice, from far away. Preston screamed, his leg on fire. Two sets of arms were tugging at him, pulling him back to reality. Reluctantly, painfully, Preston opened his eyes. Alec and Logan had him by the shoulders, pulling him upright. Chase was kneeling in front of the man, concern etched into his soft features.

“Natalia,” Preston croaked, staring around wildly.

“Down here,” said a female voice. Preston blinked incredulously once, twice, staring at his leg. Natalia was bent over the broken limb, tending it as best as she could. “It’s inflamed,” she said, throwing the bloody bandages aside and dabbing at the leg with a wet cloth. Preston released a guttural yell, eyes watering. “That won’t help anything,” Natalia admonished, looking up at the man’s pale, sweat-covered face.

“We need to get him to the hospital,” Logan said, exchanging glances with Alec.

“I need to get to Carrie,” Preston said frantically. Natalia’s face darkened.

“Preston, we’re going to use your Sawsbuck. Okay? We’re going to…” Chase’s words were drowned out by another scream from the older man, who was beginning to hyperventilate.

“We can’t do this,” Natalia said impatiently, “not with him conscious.” Preston’s heart pounded heavily in his chest. Natalia’s carefully made-up face was screwed up in concentration. “Alec, knock him out.”

“No!” Preston yelled.

“What?” asked the youth simultaneously..

“I’ll do it,” Natalia said quickly, getting up and grabbing a rock. “I’m so sorry,” she said, and Preston felt a blunt object club his head. Everything swam, his vision going dark. Good, he thought fleetingly, now I can see Carrie again.

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Pink Harzard

So majestic
Well, I had a good Christmas and I'm here for a review ^^
*sips some leftover glühwein*
So, let's begin:

She had been hand-chosen by Gabriel along with seven other members of the gang he had formed since Team Skye’s disbandment.
Some criminals never know when to stop.

The patrolling policemen had already been taken care of, their thick bodies dumped carelessly in the alley two stores down. Saffron Jewelers’ location was an ideal business opportunity for both the jewelers and the gang stealing from them - it was nestled in the shadow of the Silph Corporation building, which Gabriel planned to target next.
Killing police and target the Silph building, this sounds pretty serious.

Thievery was all too easy these days. With shells landing and bullets flying freely as rainfall, stores were open seldom and at odd hours, most employees choosing to stay in the (relative) safety of their homes. The Silph skyscraper, a prime target, was heavily damaged but still standing, a mere shadow of the splendor it possessed in its pre-war days. The doors were boarded up and the building only opened when the Elite Four needed to hold emergency meetings.
The after-war chaos is pretty visible.

A great crunching sounded in the distance, followed by an explosion, and the far-off silhouette of Mt. Silver was illuminated eerily in the darkening sky.
Wait. It is still war?
And wasn't that the Eruption caused by Tracy's Quilava to sacrifice himself for Ho-oh?

“Gabriel, look at Mt. Silver,” Amy said quickly, her low voice full of urgency. Natalia had one foot through the window but she pulled back to look as well. In unison, the gang gasped, swore, and shouted their shock, for the mountain seemed to be igniting.
Or maybe Mt. Silver is a volcano. Just kidding, it was Tracy

“I don’t think that’s it…” Natalia said. The flames were frighteningly beautiful, a magnificent spectrum of bright blues and crimsons ultimately consumed by searing white and pale gold. A scarlet streak shot through the inferno, pulling it out from the mountain, toward Kanto. Gabriel maintained a stony face, calculating as he stared at the spectacular incendiary display.
Ho-oh. *le nod*
What a beautiful discription of the flames.

“Ho-oh,” he whispered, his voice filled with awe, not fear.
Great minds think alike :p

“Arceus knows,” Gabriel mused. “Legend says the flames killed those beyond salvation, passed over those who were pure, and branded the imperfect ones, sending them away.” He reached over his shoulder, touching the shining burns on his back. “There it is, then,” he said flatly. He smiled ironically at Natalia. “We’re imperfect,” he said, raising his eyebrows.
That explains. But they still have a change to become a better person, being not killed. That is what I think.

her shoulder-length blonde hair spread out over her Leafeon, who was again acting as a mint-green pillow for her trainer.
That sounds so cute :3

“What are we doing, Juliet?” Alec asked her after a silence.
Juliet? Is he reffering to Romeo and Juliet or did I miss something?

Logan liked to communicate through silence a lot, which didn’t help Alec in the slightest.
xD

“Juliet...is wonderful. She was my babysitter,” he said meekly, ashamed he’d ever needed a caretaker. Logan watched him carefully. “You remind me a lot of her. She was like a second mother...better than my real one,” he admitted. It amazed him that Logan allowed something in him to open up so readily.
O, that Juliet. So cute. Logan reminds him of her. :3

“Become who I wanted to be, not what my parents wanted,” he said bitterly.
Very good. Alec doesn't look like a jerk now, but like someone who wants to pursue his dreams.

“You sound so much like Tracey,” Logan said almost absently. She froze, regretting the statement immediately. Silently, the realization sank in for both of them; each was merely projecting their lost loved one on the other. Logan’s clear blue eyes watered and she turned away, burying her head in Leafeon’s warm body.

Alec didn’t want to stop talking, no matter how bizarre his relationship to the girl might be. She provided him comfort.
Indeed a weird relation. Don't tell Chase.

“No, I chose Gabriel,” Alec said dryly.
Haha.

“Okay. Screw, marry, kill. Me, Chase, and…” His mind went blank. “Tracey,” he said finally. Logan’s smile disappeared. “Sorry...bad choice,” he muttered. “Bad game.”
Bad boy. Making such a stupid choice.

“Open it up. Just...I want to see your face,” were the words Roy Gideon said. Alec understood the true meaning behind them: Just open the thing, we don’t have all day. I have a business to run. His father feigned a look of excitement, which Alec supposed was the most he could hope to get from the man.
A Froslass is warmer than this father is.

“See, it’s the latest model,” Roy said, grabbing the Poké Gear from the box and shaking it for Alec. The boy’s heart sank. “I got it straight from the factory. It now has an instant messaging extension, look.” The auburn-haired man demonstrated accordingly. Alec watched in silence, listening to his father extol the beauty and value of this newest upgrade. Eventually the man sensed the boy’s lack of interest. His voice grew steely. “You don’t like it.”
No sh*t, he doesn't like it.

“Call me Jim,” the man cut in, smiling warmly. Alec felt his heart deflating quite rapidly. Boyfriend?
More dissapointment on his birthday. I feel bad for Alec.

“Look at Mt. Silver!” a man’s voice yelled. There was a flurry of movement in the dimly-lit area, and a great mass of bodies stood almost in unison, pushing toward the large glass windows that looked out on the mountains. James shielded his fiancée from the stampede, infuriating Alec.
I hope his dad gets burned. O, that doesn't sound nice from me. *crawls in the shame-corner*

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What? No results of the fire? Cliffhanger...

Thank you!” Chase said excitedly, his eyes lighting up. “It’s a guilty pleasure game of mine. I play with Logan, but it bores her. I have a board…care to play?” Natalia wore an expression of extreme skepticism. “To pass the time!” he continued, already reaching into his bag.
Extra points for mentioning one of my favourite games. I wish I could play with him. My chessplaying is rusty however.

“Want to be red or white?” the young man asked.
Isn't it black and white? Or does the red and white combination represent the Pokéball?


“What’s wrong with your face?” Chase asked after a spell. Natalia looked at him, a searching look that made him feel quite naked. There was an intelligent, piercing quality to her gaze that was difficult to avoid. The girl reached up slowly, wiping the left side of her face slowly, revealing the angry red burns concealed underneath the mask. She waited for the revulsion, the hatred.
Poor girl.

Chase moved a pawn forward. “You look fine to me,” he said simply.

Natalia stared at him. “Look at me!”

He obeyed, taking in her long, straight ruby hair, the way her angular face melted on the left side, the olive skin and arched eyebrows drooping like wax. The burns glowed faintly.

“I am looking at you,” he said. “And it’s your move.”
And hereby I present Chase the award for accepting people who are treated as outcasts. Chase is a example for many people.

Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire had done many things - the rift between NeoEarth and their own world was closed, presumably with all the worlds’ inhabitants returned to their rightful sides. Many people had ceased to exist - it seemed they had been vaporized by the flames. Others, like Will and Preston, had remained completely unharmed. But a third faction seemed to exist, a small percentage of people Ho-oh had been unsure about. They were left damaged, burnt horribly and disfigured. Karen and Lance were still completely absent, although the search was still underway.
Looks like there is still a lot of work to do. And a legendary who is unsure about people. That is new for me.

“Tracey’s Pokémon died with their trainer, as is wont in such a case.
Hm. Isn't it want, instead of wont? I'm not sure myself.

Ho-oh’s flames reportedly only destroyed the immediate battle areas. But they killed people all over. A rough estimate put out this morning,” he said, scanning his beat-up Poké Gear, “says about ten percent of our population is gone. Just...gone.”
So many died O_O?

“We need to get him to the hospital,” Logan said, exchanging glances with Alec.

“I need to get to Carrie,” Preston said frantically. Natalia’s face darkened.

“Preston, we’re going to use your Sawsbuck. Okay? We’re going to…” Chase’s words were drowned out by another scream from the older man, who was beginning to hyperventilate.

“We can’t do this,” Natalia said impatiently, “not with him conscious.” Preston’s heart pounded heavily in his chest. Natalia’s carefully made-up face was screwed up in concentration. “Alec, knock him out.”

“No!” Preston yelled.

“What?” asked the youth simultaneously..

“I’ll do it,” Natalia said quickly, getting up and grabbing a rock. “I’m so sorry,” she said, and Preston felt a blunt object club his head. Everything swam, his vision going dark. Good, he thought fleetingly, now I can see Carrie again.

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Preston...


Well this chapter explained a lot and gave a good cliffhanger too. Please make Preston survive.
 

Glover

Pain in Rocket side
Well, this will be the third time I try to review this, hopefully the forum software is not hungry today...

My apologies on not getting back sooner, I have a story in my head, and 19 pages later, the main character has so far managed to go from her bedroom to the forest behind her house and back home with an implied stop at a supermarket... This would be why I stopped writing mmy last fic when it turned into a big hairy uncontrollable monster... And heads up, I will be asking you to take the time to flip through it for me!

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On the good side, Pokémon were the strongest assets
Not fond of the "good side" I think you're trying to paint the "Pokemon world" as good vs. evil, but its too blunt. And I think the harder part is actually that I keep trying to read "On the other hand" since you are comparing the two sides of the war.

knowing Chase was sitting beside Will o
Lugia are big, but they aren't that big. Most ridibng Pokemon see the trainer straddling the shoulder, not the back. Weight balancing being the primary reason, and I think Lugia actually use those spinal plates for maneuverability if your puuytting someone back there. Cwertainly room for a second person behind Will though on its neck.

“You heard what he said,” the white-haired youth said quickly to Will, who seemed confused at this statement. “Let’s go.” The man nodded, beckoning to the three to join him on Lugia’s broad plate-covered back.
Ah, you are putting them up there... I'll shut up then.

“Show him your knee, for Ho-oh’s sake!” Alec said bitterly. Preston did not look good; his face was haggard, collapsing from fatigue, the bags under his eyes more pronounced and his skin a distinct gray color. That he was being as patient as he was with Chase was astonishing to the fourteen-year-old boy, whose own temper was very short.
Careful, Alec, you're starting to show actual concern...

“Magby, give us some light,” he said, and Magby bleated feebly; it seemed he had been having quite a good nap. After a slight delay, his small body glowed translucently, and the familiar purple candles of Will-o-Wisp ignited, floating eerily just beyond his tiny crimson form.
Still lovign the inguinuity of this

“I think he had a map of the tunnel system in here,” Alec said
And here I thought he was navigating on wits alone... cheater.

Alec said tersely. “I had to make my own money to buy my first Poké Balls myself, after...after I left home,” he continued carefully. “And nobody ever gave me a Pokémon. I had to wrestle with Larv...Pupitar myself, it was not too fun,”
*Like*

and the other looks ready to cry,” he said, not in a mean way.
How do you NOT say that in a mean way?

(Preston, he had been called)
Again, Parenthesis. I thinkmost of us figured out who it was back when you said "Olivine Guym leader," but you would've gotten away with "His friend, Preston"

Why is Karen always the bad guy in these kinds of stories?

“I don’t have anything to give you,” he said blankly. The boy had very few personal possessions, Logan knew. With one fluid movement, he produced the solution: he pulled his blue cardigan from his thin body, draping it instead around his best and oldest friend. “Take care of everyone, won’t you?” he asked, pulling back and looking her in the eyes.

Logan nodded, not trusting herself to speak. Tracey pulled her into a hug, which lasted for an eternity, the two clutching tighter and tighter.
*sniff*

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We fell about thirty-five feet, by my estimation, so honestly we’re quite lucky to be as well-off as we are. Unscathed.”
35 Feet? That's taller than the ceilings of most department stores. It's too unbelievable that they would come out as they did because a fall from twenty feet can seriously injure, if not kill

I was gonna say something but I saw Sidey already had. Personally, when I see the floor giving out, I see Logan and Preston as much floor surfing as I do anything. An outright fall of thirty-five feet would kill, but a fall with ground under them not three feet away wouldsignificantly cut the drop, I think,,

Props by the way on the sacrifice, I get hesitant about such setups but you really executed it well. I was afraid that Ho-Oh would be Tracey, but I'm glad it wasn't.

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Reading Broken Things by Huswell?”
I see what you did there...

“Ever read Water-type Down?”
On the other hand, I fervently disapprove of Pokemonification of random concepts purely for the Pokemonification of it. Watership Down is purely a reference to a location. Make it about Buneary, if you must, but the book title really should stand. (Assuming you are talking about the right book...)

“Now Joe,” she said coyly, “Do I look like a woman capable of that kind of violent behavior?
...Maybe?

The hand holding the gun was like the rest of Amy’s body, slender and dark. But the other hand was gloved in sleek forest-green leather. Logan frowned, looking at Preston, more than a little worried about his sanity in his present state. “Why does that matter -”
A man calling himself Pheonix now having employed possibly two people who've been touched by the Phoenix?

Logan shouted, “NO!” but not before the woman pulled the trigger. Logan slammed her eyes shut just in time, the last image burned in her brain Preston’s weary face frozen in disbelief. She heard the body hit the ground with a sickening crash.
poor guy

Morty smiled mischievously. “Burn the bachelor pants.” J.T. blushed; it was common knowledge that the man owned a set of ridiculous Horsea-covered flannel pants that he wore at every available opportunity when alone in his apartment. The others laughed again and lunged at the groom’s suitcase, digging for the horrid pants. J.T. grudgingly allowed Jesse to torch the pants with his Growlithe, the final step of acceptance that he would never be alone again.

Like a phoenix,
My initial first thought was "too much", but that thought was quickly replaced by another, that what if Arceus, or the Unown or someone has been seeding Preston's past with clues all along? I wonder, f Preston ever had a chance to connect the dots?

Chase shook his head, his voice soft.“So that was the sound of one of THEIR guns. NeoEarth’s guns. It just doesn’t sit right in our world.”
...Pardon? Is Chase talking about the different of a Flintlock "pmpth" vs the sharper retort of say a Glock or what? Because physics is physics.

Alec considered this, then: “Well, still! It’s a gun! Somebody just freaking shot a gun in the same cave as us!”
Oh my God, Alec is the one who is getting to the important detail!

“Oh, for Ho-oh’s sake, is it another cave-in?” Alec cried, but he was saved a verbal answer by a practical one. A group of several Lairon were storming from the direction of the gunshot, icy blue eyes wild and solid silver armor flashing in outrage.
I'm not sure which I'd rather, Lairon coming at me or a small earthquake...

Lairon in Johto? Were there ever Aron in the FR/LG maps or is this just one of your transplants? I only ask because I'm thinking Ryhorn would've done the same gig

“Magby, Smokescreen!” The miniscule red creature puffed his cheeks, producing great clouds of black smoke. In seconds, Chase couldn’t see three feet ahead of him.
...Ta Da!

That poor man, she thought,
That is not remotely close to the first thing I would be thinking if the person beside me, wehom I had previously thought of great respect for putting me before him, someone who was my only real hope of gettting out of this cave, was shot. Even someone who's been through a War, you bond to certain brothers and you can't just compartmentalize their deaths as part of the war the way anyone else dieing could be.

“You must not have many decent people on your Team if you think I would just leave you like this,” Preston said, reaching toward her shoulder again. Logan seemed just as confused as Natalia.
Worth framing

“Preston,” she said, not bothering to keep her voice down, “She’ll be fine, let’s go.”
Logan must be deaf. Nice contrast between the to lines, by the way

the Diglett’s Cave
Drop the "the" there, Digglett's Cave is a formal title.

“We have ways of making you talk.”
That line is just begging to be written in a german dialogue. Dad always tossed that line around and I have no idea what its a reference to but 18 years of "Ve haff vays of making you talk" gets to ya.

How do we capture the birds?”
Well, here's a hint, Gonzap, this ain't it. Unless you happen to know a collector in the Whirl Islands...

the flux of Pokémon that continued attacking had reached insane heights,
Typical of these two, always seeing a fight where there shouldn't be one. ITS A STAMPEDE GENIUSES, GET OUT OF TEH WAY

Pupitar, Chip Away!” Alec said half-heartedly.
Actually dissapopinted here. For all the fuss and bother of "Oh no it evolved" I was hoping to see Pupitar's premiere battle to be more than coming into it halfway

“Use Roar,” said a familiar voice. Alec raised his eyes in disbelief. Standing on the other side of the remaining Lairon and Aggron were five figures, two of which were Pokémon.
More battle mechanics issues... So let's have the Pokemon who previously caused a Cave-in simply by saying his name to now belt it out in an intensidfied, almost painful attack form, In the cave and direct it at Pokemon who are already running for their lives from an alien and threatening noise...

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Oh look, a wild chapter appeared while I was writng this!

She had been hand-chosen by Gabriel along with seven other members of the gang he had formed since Team Skye’s disbandment
Umm... No *ship* Dick Tracey? I think we knew this already...

(they went loosely under the name ‘Pariahs’, a pun based around Gabriel’s last name).
again with the parentheseses

Hector sighed and did not answer. “Why did you keep stealing?” he asked after some time. Natalia looked around, trying to gather up a response for the man, although she knew he was nothing more than a whisper, a memory she had stored in her subconscious. She told him as much, which made her father frown. “You’re avoiding the question. I’m dead; why are you still stealing? Look at what almost happened to you, Talia.” She shivered at this; she had missed the sound of his voice wrapped around her name.

“I think it’s karma, dad -”

“Darn tootin’, it’s karma!” he said immediately, frowning. “Maybe this fire was meant to knock some sense into that twisted head of yours.”
"Hi, my name is Hector Solos, I'm Karma.

This is me taking back most of the things I've said about this whole Ho-Oh destiny thing. I offically love your verson of sentient, soul awakening fire. This Ho-Oh is cool.

“Nobody can live like this,” Amy gasped, grabbing at her cracked, bleeding hand which now resembled a cruel talon more than human appendage. Natalia nodded in agreement, a new feeling rising in her chest.
Called it!

“What are we doing, Juliet?”
who?

ogan watched him carefully. “You remind me a lot of her. She was like a second mother...better than my real one,” he admitted. It amazed him that Logan allowed something in him to open up so readily.
Nevermind!

“Well, if Preston trusts you, I guess that’s good enough for now,” Chase said. It shouldn’t be, Natalia thought darkly. “Why is Alec so special, then?” he asked, almost involuntarily, his eyes suddenly locking onto her face.
This needs broken up. Different thoughts, different people.

“Ah, well...see, when I say he kicked me out...I think he disbanded the group. Amy and Brodie were telling me as much in the caves,” Natalia said, glancing nervously at Preston. She knew he alone could catch her in a lie. “I think the Team finally realized how crazy the man’s plans were.”
Keep digging, sistah...

Natalia contemplated telling the carefully fabricated story she had rehearsed an exhausting amount of times with Gabriel, or the complete truth. “I was in a...very complicated relationship, two years ago. His name was Shawn. He was beautiful...long, sandy hair, these real soulful eyes. Not too intelligent, but he loved me. I always said I was smart enough for both of us,” she said, smiling slightly, her deep brown eyes distant. “But he did love me. Or...I thought he did. He discovered, one day, what my face really looked like. He was...revolted. He couldn’t stand looking at me. He kicked me out, leaving me quite friendless. I’m not good at the whole friend thing,” she said quietly, clutching at her arm. “He told me, “You’re not worth loving.”” Chase whistled. “Yeah, he was real friendly. Well, I was out on the street. I was alone, very truly. That’s where I met Gabriel. I...I joined Team Skye because Gabriel was the only one who would have me,” she whispered. She moved her left knight three spaces. Well, mostly truth is a stepping stone, she thought.
And this.

Natalia contemplated telling the carefully fabricated story she had rehearsed an exhausting amount of times with Gabriel, or the complete truth. “I was in a...very complicated relationship, two years ago. His name was Shawn. He was beautiful...long, sandy hair, these real soulful eyes. Not too intelligent, but he loved me. I always said I was smart enough for both of us,” she said, smiling slightly, her deep brown eyes distant. “But he did love me. Or...I thought he did. He discovered, one day, what my face really looked like. He was...revolted. He couldn’t stand looking at me. He kicked me out, leaving me quite friendless. I’m not good at the whole friend thing,” she said quietly, clutching at her arm. “He told me, “You’re not worth loving.””

Chase whistled.

“Yeah, he was real friendly. Well, I was out on the street. I was alone, very truly. That’s where I met Gabriel. I...I joined Team Skye because Gabriel was the only one who would have me,” she whispered. She moved her left knight three spaces. Well, mostly truth is a stepping stone, she thought.

Chase moved a pawn forward. “You look fine to me,” he said simply.

Natalia stared at him. “Look at me!”

He obeyed, taking in her long, straight ruby hair, the way her angular face melted on the left side, the olive skin and arched eyebrows drooping like wax. The burns glowed faintly.

“I am looking at you,” he said. “And it’s your move.”
Blind. Side.

But a third faction seemed to exist, a small percentage of people Ho-oh had been unsure about. They were left damaged, burnt horribly and disfigured
People who still had a purpose in life.

Janine had been found burnt, all her beautiful violet hair destroyed. “He marked those who can still be saved,” Will said hollowly.
Why did he torch the Daddy's Girl?

“Arceus’ Plates!” Will yelped, indicating to Preston. The two immediately hoisted the burnt aircraft off the old man’s broken lower body. Preston looked away in revulsion. The fire had done its number on Pryce; his lower body was essentially a ravaged charcoal mess, melted and twisted beyond hope of repair.
Somehow, I have to wonder how much was Ho-Oh and how much was fire+metal helicopter=microwave

He had long legs that ended in cruel black talons, and his face was elongated, ending in a pointed beak.
What I said earlier about Tracey...

“No!” Preston yelled.

“What?” asked the youth simultaneously..

“I’ll do it,” Natalia said quickly, getting up and grabbing a rock. “I’m so sorry,” she said, and Preston felt a blunt object club his head. Everything swam, his vision going dark. Good, he thought fleetingly, now I can see Carrie again.
A Grass type with Spore, or Sleep Powder on Preston's belt, that will be used as a guerney, and she goes for the rock...

typical
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
Just some fun I've been having while collecting and compiling information about my main cast: I've been picking underscoring from LOST (my absolute favorite show) that I feel fits each of the characters. Music is such a nice way to define the essence of a person, not capturing every single thing about them, but perhaps their most prevalent characteristics. Tell me if you think these work.

Consider:

Alec Gideon

http://i44.*******.com/11bpzpw.jpg

http://youtu.be/5z5B-zCfC6s

Tracey Morgan

http://i43.*******.com/2cdu88h.jpg

http://youtu.be/A_btA1bS53w

Chase Tang

http://i43.*******.com/2njjz7n.jpg

http://youtu.be/sdAf6Kk2ejQ

Logan Clements

http://i41.*******.com/208cnck.jpg

http://youtu.be/D-loc0eW_aQ

J.T. Preston

http://i41.*******.com/jb34wl.jpg

http://youtu.be/t0RqDWZnTUA

Gabriel Pahria

http://i42.*******.com/w0mlur.jpg

http://youtu.be/YAcajVxX4q4

Natalia Solos

http://i41.*******.com/v7f4nm.jpg

http://youtu.be/1xTtDxzcr-E

Chapter 14 should be ready in one or two days. It's all written...I just need to transcribe.
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
And wasn't that the Eruption caused by Tracy's Quilava to sacrifice himself for Ho-oh?

The very same. Only see, the Eruption sparked a much BIGGER fire...Ho-oh's Sacred Fire.

Or maybe Mt. Silver is a volcano. Just kidding, it was Tracy

Yes, this.

What a beautiful discription of the flames.

Why thank you! *blushing*

That explains. But they still have a change to become a better person, being not killed. That is what I think.

mAyBeEe

O, that Juliet. So cute. Logan reminds him of her. :3

Sweet in a very twisted way. I agree.

Very good. Alec doesn't look like a jerk now, but like someone who wants to pursue his dreams.

Good. Don't need our hero looking like a jerk!

A Froslass is warmer than this father is.

Ahahaha agreed. Roy Gideon will not be winning any father of the year awards.

I hope his dad gets burned. O, that doesn't sound nice from me. *crawls in the shame-corner*

Alas, simply being a dick does not mean one gets burnt, or else pretty much four people would escape unscathed.

Extra points for mentioning one of my favourite games. I wish I could play with him. My chessplaying is rusty however.

Mine too! I used to play all the time though. I got second place in my fifth grade tournament :p

Isn't it black and white? Or does the red and white combination represent the Pokéball?

Ding ding ding! Bingo.

And hereby I present Chase the award for accepting people who are treated as outcasts. Chase is a example for many people.

Chase is pretty cool in this regard.

Hm. Isn't it want, instead of wont? I'm not sure myself.

Actually, look up that word usage. It's a separate meaning from the word 'want'.

So many died O_O?

Yhhheah...Ho-oh is ruthless.

Well this chapter explained a lot and gave a good cliffhanger too. Please make Preston survive.

Oh, don't worry. I'm glad you're worried for his well-being, though.

Thanks for the review, Harzard!

My apologies on not getting back sooner, I have a story in my head, and 19 pages later, the main character has so far managed to go from her bedroom to the forest behind her house and back home with an implied stop at a supermarket... This would be why I stopped writing mmy last fic when it turned into a big hairy uncontrollable monster... And heads up, I will be asking you to take the time to flip through it for me!

Naturally!

Not fond of the "good side" I think you're trying to paint the "Pokemon world" as good vs. evil, but its too blunt. And I think the harder part is actually that I keep trying to read "On the other hand" since you are comparing the two sides of the war.

Hmm, fair point. I was trying to go from the sort-of 'narrator is biased from the Pokemon world side', but maybe that's too specific a lens.

Careful, Alec, you're starting to show actual concern...

He can do that, on occasion.

How do you NOT say that in a mean way?

Apparently, the way Brodie did it.

Why is Karen always the bad guy in these kinds of stories?

Dude, just look at her!

Props by the way on the sacrifice, I get hesitant about such setups but you really executed it well. I was afraid that Ho-Oh would be Tracey, but I'm glad it wasn't.

Hmm...yeah that'd be bizarre.

On the other hand, I fervently disapprove of Pokemonification of random concepts purely for the Pokemonification of it. Watership Down is purely a reference to a location. Make it about Buneary, if you must, but the book title really should stand. (Assuming you are talking about the right book...)

Who's to say, though, that Water-type Down had anything to do with its namesake? Could be a completely different story about Water types being taken down in battle :p

A man calling himself Pheonix now having employed possibly two people who've been touched by the Phoenix?

sYmBoLiSm

My initial first thought was "too much", but that thought was quickly replaced by another, that what if Arceus, or the Unown or someone has been seeding Preston's past with clues all along? I wonder, f Preston ever had a chance to connect the dots?

Veeeery interesting theory.

Lairon in Johto? Were there ever Aron in the FR/LG maps or is this just one of your transplants? I only ask because I'm thinking Ryhorn would've done the same gig

Artistic license. I like the Aron line better. So sue me.

That is not remotely close to the first thing I would be thinking if the person beside me, wehom I had previously thought of great respect for putting me before him, someone who was my only real hope of gettting out of this cave, was shot. Even someone who's been through a War, you bond to certain brothers and you can't just compartmentalize their deaths as part of the war the way anyone else dieing could be.

Yeah, but Logan REALLY meant it. 'That poor man' meant in the most possible empathy. :p (Logan just has an interesting outlook on life.)

That line is just begging to be written in a german dialogue. Dad always tossed that line around and I have no idea what its a reference to but 18 years of "Ve haff vays of making you talk" gets to ya.

Bahahahaha

Typical of these two, always seeing a fight where there shouldn't be one. ITS A STAMPEDE GENIUSES, GET OUT OF TEH WAY

Glover, I might have to insert you as a character in this story.

Actually dissapopinted here. For all the fuss and bother of "Oh no it evolved" I was hoping to see Pupitar's premiere battle to be more than coming into it halfway

Ah, but see, Alec didn't WANT to use Pupitar. Trust me, big things coming Pupitar's way.

"Hi, my name is Hector Solos, I'm Karma."

His college nickname.

This is me taking back most of the things I've said about this whole Ho-Oh destiny thing. I offically love your verson of sentient, soul awakening fire. This Ho-Oh is cool.

Well shucks! I think so, too.

People who still had a purpose in life.

Ding ding ding!

Why did he torch the Daddy's Girl?

Hmmm why DID he?!

Somehow, I have to wonder how much was Ho-Oh and how much was fire+metal helicopter=microwave

The world may never know.

A Grass type with Spore, or Sleep Powder on Preston's belt, that will be used as a guerney, and she goes for the rock...

typical

Look, Natalia goes for practicality.

Thanks Glover!
 

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We Do Not Sow
Trivia: This chapter was completed two weeks ago, but has been undergoing the most amount of editing I've ever done. I hope it's not completely illegible at this point. I've ripped my hair out a lot over this guy.

Earth, Air, Water, Fire

Chapter Fourteen

-2009-

“Would you hold still?” Amy said to her partner impatiently, although she herself was wincing at the many bruises Natalia had inflicted on her in the vicious hand-to-hand combat they’d engaged in earlier. Embarrassed to have come off worse in a physical fight, she was barely able to contain her frustration, forcing calm upon herself as she gingerly dabbed at Brodie’s bleeding forehead. The two were still in the small chamber off the main tunnel where they had been interrogating their teammate.

“I will if you just -” he said through gritted teeth, jerking wildly at each touch of the ripped cloth, “-be more...gentle…” he managed.

Natalia had escaped, somehow, along with Preston and the blonde girl. Amy couldn’t shake the suspicion they’d left together. “She took the gun, too,” Brodie had moaned after regaining consciousness in a pool of his own blood.

“I didn’t think she had that much fight in her,” Amy said, her voice shaking dangerously, “she never struck me as the physical type.” Brodie gasped. “Oh shut up, you can’t hurt that much, it’s just a scratch,” she snapped. Brodie clamped his jaw shut. “What’s Gabriel going to say when we tell him?” she asked with sudden urgency.

“Do we have to talk to him?” Brodie asked after a pause. He looked quite nervous at the prospect of admitting failure to the man who had dangled him upside-down twenty feet off the ground just for forgetting to deliver a message.

“Of course we do,” Amy said impatiently, already producing her Poké Gear. Gabriel insisted he only be disturbed with calls for real, serious problems...this was definitely one of them. Amy raised her finger over the device, allowing it to hover over Gabriel’s number. Her hand was shaking slightly. “We have to call him,” she said, convincing herself just as much as her teammate. She pressed the call button. Brodie stared anxiously at the screen of the machine as it rang for their leader.

Gabriel’s face appeared, barely lit, looking rather hollowed and corpse-like with the shadowed relief thrown on his tight face. He looked irritated at the interruption. “Why are you calling me this time, Amy?” he said quietly. Brodie already regretted everything, despite the fact he himself had done very little that could be blamed for their failure. Gabriel just naturally had that effect on people.

“Gabriel...it’s Natalia. We intercepted her in the Purpleheart Tunnels. It seems she was tracking Alec Gideon independent of your orders.” Gabriel’s face betrayed no emotion. “We interrogated her, of course,” Amy proceeded with care, “until...we were interrupted. It was Joe Preston, that retired gym leader? We tortured his wife?”

“Yes, I remember,” Gabriel said, no change in his tone, although somehow Brodie felt his blood run cold at the sound of the man’s silky voice. “Was he still with Alec?”

“No, it seems they were split up. And well, I tried to -”

“She tried to kill him,” Brodie offered helpfully. Amy hissed at him, her neck tightening, showing an angry vein pulsing below her delicate chin.

“You tried to...what?” Gabriel asked. A sudden outbreak of barking was heard off-screen on Gabriel’s end. “Deal with them,” he said, looking off-screen.

Amy frowned. “What was that?” she asked, her ice-blue lips pursing together.

“Don’t avoid my question,” Gabriel said, unphased. Amy brushed the perfectly-cut black fringe away from her eyes and glared at Brodie, who shrugged in defense. She bit her lip, thinking her answer over carefully. “Well…” Gabriel pressed. More barking and snarling off-screen. “I specifically said no deaths,” Gabriel said, his voice barely a whisper and yet causing Brodie to flinch as if he had yelled.

“Gabriel, the man was already injured. Honestly, why not? He’s just an obstacle at this point, a distraction -”

“Or a valuable tool,” Gabriel said, his gloved hand rising dismissively. “How many times do I need to remind you? It’s in our nature to manipulate. Humans are infinitely manipulative, but they cannot be -”

“Foolish if killed by a fool,” Amy finished, nodding. “Gabriel, why don’t you ever just talk like a real person?” But his words were always true, or had been up to this point. Gabriel stiffened at her words. Brodie’s jaw dropped in awe of her brashness.

“Find them and bring them to Ecruteak,” Gabriel said finally, glancing off to his left. “The plan is so close to fruition. Ascension day.” His face glowed eagerly.

“But Natalia, Gabriel, I think she’s with them -”

“Natalia is of no concern to me,” Gabriel said, his clear blue eyes seeming to pierce straight through the screen at his subordinates.

“Boss, you didn’t see her in action back there, she had me knocked out in two seconds flat,” Brodie said urgently.

Gabriel shot the lanky man a look of disgust. “I know her weaknesses,” he said simply. “I will use them to our advantage when the time comes.” He shot another eager look off-screen. “Natalia is exactly where we need her to be,” he promised. And then, before Amy could protest: “Get them to Ecruteak.” Without a second glance he terminated the link, leaving Amy and Brodie to puzzle over a blank screen.

“What were those noises that kept distracting him?” Brodie quipped. Amy stood, stretching her long limbs and shaking her head. “Could they have been Pokémon?”

“I don’t know. Probably. We can talk about it on the way,” Amy said, staring at her Poké Gear.

“On the way…?”

“They have at least a half day advantage on us,” Amy said steadily. “If we’re going to catch them, we need to leave now.”

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“But the maps say…”

“The maps are wrong, Alec,” Chase snapped, pointing at the solid wall in front of the group. The stone glistened innocently in the flickering light provided by Houndoom’s Will-o-Wisp. Alec had offered the use of his Magby again, but Magby seemed to disagree with the choice, yawning and shaking his misshapen head. “This is a non-negotiable solid wall, it in no way resembles Preston’s maps.” He indicated to the page in question, which showed the continuation of the tunnel to a winding, ascending path, ending in a chamber that led to the exit.

Chase pounded his fist against the slippery stone barrier in frustration, looking back at his companions: Alec, peering at Preston’s journal in confusion; Houndoom, pacing restlessly, her dark eyes staring balefully at Chase; Logan and Natalia leaning against Preston’s Sawsbuck, the older man carefully arranged and fixed to his Pokémon’s back. “The map’s done all it can do,” the bearded young man said, looking at Logan. She avoided his gaze.

“Well, we’ll have to find our own way out,” Natalia said.

“How do we do that? We’re deep underground and we’ve hit a dead end, if you haven’t noticed,” Alec said hotly.

“Look, I know a bad situation when I see one, and this man is going to die if we don’t get him out of here in the next six hours,” Natalia retorted.

Logan was sponging Preston’s forehead with a rag, attempting to stem the fever that threatened to consume his body. “Can we call someone?” she asked, no one person specifically coming to her mind.

Chase, however, began laughing. Alec stared at him, utterly bewildered.

“Chase...what’s so funny…” Logan asked slowly.

Chase continued laughing and held up his Poké Gear, pushing it toward the low ceiling, standing up on tip-toe. “If I can get the reception for it...I know exactly who to call.” He walked away from the wall, slowly searching for a reception area. “Aha!” He made a show of browsing his contacts for a specific name.

“Who could he be calling?” Natalia asked. Nobody answered her.

The Poké Gear rang four times before being interrupted by a male voice. “Chase! Oh thank Arceus, I was just about to try calling you again.” Alec, who was closest to Chase, could make out Will’s graceful torso on the video screen, his scarlet shirt and navy-blue vest unmistakable. “I kept calling for Preston, but his Poké Gear appears to be -”

“Broken,” Logan said immediately, leaving Natalia with Preston’s body so she could stand closer to Chase. “We...had an accident, it’s entirely shattered. Mine, too.”

“That’s unfortunate...hello, Logan, it’s nice to see you well,” the Champion said, smiling unevenly at the girl as she came into view. He seemed distressed and distracted. “Is Preston with you, then?” he asked, peering closer at the small screen. Logan and Chase both hesitated.

“He’s...well, we don’t know exactly how bad it is, but he’s hurt his leg...and he’s gone unconscious,” Chase said finally.

“But you do know how bad it is,” Natalia hissed from Sawsbuck’s side, her arms stretched protectively over Preston’s limp body.

“Who is that?” Will asked, but Natalia did not move forward, instead shrinking further into the shadows. Chase and Logan shrugged.

“Will, it is pretty bad,” Alec said, also stepping into the Poké Gear’s line of sight, his green eyes wide in the dim light.

The Champion did not seem happy with this development. He clasped his hands together, wringing them and muttering to himself. “This is a very bad time for anyone to be unavailable,” he said finally.

“What do you mean?” Logan asked, nonplussed. Will looked back at the screen, moving his mouth but not making noise.

“Will?” Chase asked, shaking the Poké Gear. The image flickered. “I’m losing reception,” the trainer said through gritted teeth. He held the device higher, smacking it in frustration.

“Where are you?” Will’s voice cut in through the faint static sounds now emanating from the machine.

“The Purpleheart Tunnels!” Alec said loudly.

“Okay...tunnels…” Will said, frowning and closing his eyes, muttering again, adjusting his glasses. “Okay. Chase? Keep Preston safe, please. We need him far too much to lose him. I’ll see you soon.” The Poké Gear shut off.

“See us soon?” Logan said. “He’s not coming to get us, is he?”

“Sounds like it,” Chase said, smiling slightly. He had forgotten the sense of hope Will’s presence inspired. Natalia did not seem so heartened by the news.

“We should make ourselves easier to find,” Logan said assertively.

“How?” Alec asked. The three stared at the blank stone wall, stumped. Chase opened his mouth to speak, frowned, and shook his head.

“Broadcast a homing signal from your Poké Gear.” Natalia said, stepping toward the ghostly light surrounding Houndoom. Alec and Logan looked coldly at her, but she ignored them, her face set.

“How...do I do that, exactly?” Chase asked.

Natalia took the gear in her small hands, showing Chase the big orange button at the top. A look of embarrassed comprehension crossed the young man’s face. “Does anyone have a ground-type Pokémon? Or one that can use dig?” she asked, handing the device back to him.

“I do,” Alec said slowly, taking a step away from the Team Skye member.

Natalia observed this protective movement sadly and nodded. “Use it to burrow up. Maybe it can reach the surface and take Will to us.”

“Why are you helping us?” Logan asked, her blue eyes scanning the girl suspiciously. Alec took a step closer to her.

“I have my reasons,” Natalia said, averting her gaze from Logan’s cold stare.

“It’s a good idea,” Chase said, he alone looking at the ruby-haired girl and acknowledging her like a human being. “Do you have any better ones?” he shot at his friends. Logan and Alec had no answer for this. “Then do as she says,” he said.

Logan looked imploringly at Alec, who bit his cheek and kicked at the packed earth floor. Chase lifted his Poké Gear and hit the emergency homing signal embedded in the phone, staring defiantly at Logan.

“Logan?” Alec asked.

“Do you want to be found? Will is probably going to arrest you, or something,” Logan said to Natalia.

“I know,” was the girl’s only response.

“Do it, Alec,” Logan said tersely. Alec reached for Pupitar’s Poké Ball. “I don’t understand you,” she said flatly, staring at the older girl, her eyes flickering over the stained white sundress.

“Don’t hurt yourself trying,” Natalia said, retreating back to Sawsbuck, laying a gentle hand on Preston. “It’s not possible to understand someone who doesn’t understand herself,” she said quietly.

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-2005-

Chase moved his knight in final triumph. “Check. MATE,” he said, grinning.

Dr. Hume chuckled, shaking his head and reaching out, toppling his king over. “You got me,” he said, standing and turning to walk away.

“Don’t you want to play another?” Chase asked, reaching out instinctively. The older man strode behind his desk, taking out a folder and scribbling something on the front. “Guess not,” Chase said, packing the pieces away in disappointed defeat.

“Chase, I think it’s time you went home,” the doctor said, crossing to the front of his desk and leaning against it, holding the folder out to the fifteen-year-old.

Chase stared at it dumbly. “Really? I’m...you think I’m ready? I’m...better?” Dr. Hume chuckled, adjusting his large coat so it didn’t interfere with his legs as he took a seat at the edge of the table. “Why are you laughing?” Chase asked.

“Chase, nothing was wrong with you. All you were suffering from was temporary amnesia and shock. Now, look. You’re clearly remembering things! You’ve mastered the complicated game of chess.” Dr. Hume stroked his bushy white beard. Chase quite liked it; he was planning to grow one as soon as he was able. “You remember your family’s names?” he asked, peering at Chase over his square glasses.

“Mary, Rory, Jonathan,” Chase recited, picturing very clearly his mother, father, and brother.

“Excellent. Yes, I think it’s time we get you out of here,” the old man said, jumping from his desk and handing Chase his file. “Here’s all the records of our sessions. As a sign of faith. Just in case you need any assistance remembering! You have my number, yes?” Chase nodded. “Good. Not that I don’t believe you’re completely ready to take the world by storm, but just in case.” The doctor winked.

“Oh, this is going to rock!” Chase said, standing and pumping his fist. Dr. Hume smiled, turning to walk back to his desk. “Dr. Hume, um...if you don’t mind my asking...since I’m no longer a patient, really…” The doctor turned again, deciding just to plant himself in one place until Chase left the room. “What exactly happened to me? I know I remember everything, my past, my Pokémon, my family...but…” Chase touched his hair delicately; it outshone the doctor’s own thin hair in its colorlessness.

Dr. Hume shook his head, sighing. “Chase, when you were found, you were bruised, wounded, and unconscious...and also quite alone. If you can’t remember what happened to you...nobody can.” Chase sensed the man was not being entirely truthful with him, but he accepted the answer all the same. Something about the sad smile Chase gave him made the doctor cry out. “Ah! Yes! Before you go,” he said, reaching into his desk drawer, “these should help.” He offered a small bottle of pills to the boy.

Chase took them hesitantly, staring at the label. “Antidepressants?” he asked warily.

“They help the memory,” Dr. Hume said, smiling.

Chase did not entirely believe it, but he took them all the same, reaching out to shake the man’s hand. “You have my Pokémon and stuff?” the boy asked. “And don’t I have to sign some papers, or something?”

“Once you’ve packed everything,” Dr. Hume said, smiling. Chase nodded, turning to leave. “Oh, Chase? One final thing.”

“What?”

“Remember what I told you, two sessions ago? We were talking about your relationship to Kira, how you were worried she wasn’t going to love you enough, not like this.”

Chase nodded slowly. “And you told me, ‘You will always be searching for love. Don’t expect it from someone when it isn’t there.’”

Dr. Hume nodded, impressed. “And you worried your memory was getting worse! Just remember that, Chase. You’re a remarkable man, and when the right girl comes along...you’ll know it.” He smiled gently. “Close the door on your way out.”

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Later that day…

“Mom, I’m free!” Chase said excitedly, looking at his Poké Gear. He was indeed out of the hospital, enjoying the bright almost-white sky of a warm summer day, the feeling of grass beneath his off-white trainers and the wind rustling his hair. The boy’s mother and father stared at him from their webcam, physically continents away from their son. A side-effect of being in a Kanto hospital: visitors from Hoenn were not often expected.

“Honey, I’m so relieved,” his mother said, his father shaking his head in agreement.

“Dr. Hume said you’re all set?” his father asked, his bald head flashing in the bright light of the Tang’s kitchen.

“Yes! I’ve already called Kira, I think we’re going to patch things up. I feel great,” Chase said, grinning. “Like, I could take on the world,” he continued, his mind racing with his newfound freedom to do things. “I could skydive! I could enter a Poké-race! I’m starving. I could eat a Ponyta.”

Mary Tang frowned. “You’re sure you’re okay?”

Chase shot her a goofy grin. “Yeah? Why?”

Rory agreed with his wife’s concern. “You seem...very cheerful,” he said, glancing uncertainly at his son’s soft features.

“Well, yeah! I’m gonna take on the world!” Chase shouted happily. “Hey, you know what?” he asked. His parents shook their heads, eyebrows raised. “I’m gonna call Will. Challenge him to a battle.”

His parents exchanged worried looks. “Will...of the Elite Four?” his mother asked.

“Yeah! Why not, I’m basically the greatest. Look at my track record!” Chase grinned again. “Look, I’m gonna do that now.” He went to hang up.

“No, no, Chase!” His mother reached out, concern leaving her face to be replaced by tender adoration.

“What is it, ma?” Chase asked, clearly anxious to call Will.

“It’s so rare we get to see your face,” Rory said, his expression softening as well.

“I love you guys!” Chase said, smiling at his parents. He waved. “Talk to you soon.” Before they could protest, he hung up. The boy stretched his long arms, squinting in the sunlight and turning to his Pokémon, who were blinking expectantly at him: Grovyle, Nidorino, Tyrogue, Absol, Banette, and Drowzee. “If we’re going to fight an Elite Four member, we’re going to need to train,” he said.

Grovyle raised a thin green arm, voicing concern.

“Oh, Arceus’ PLATES, you’re right! I need to call the guy first,” Chase said, laughing. His Pokémon exchanged worried glances, ones that were lost on their trainer.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

Pupitar had eagerly eaten through the wall of the tunnel, presumably heading upward to find Will. Natalia was again re-dressing Preston’s leg, using her rudimentary medicinal skills as best as she could, leaving the three younger group members to sit in a huddle around Houndoom, who seemed to enjoy the attention, especially when Logan stroked her sweet spot just below her right ear. The Pokémon was showing definite signs of fatigue from such a prolonged use of Will-o-Wisp. Alec had offered Magby’s help again and Magby had refused again just as quickly.

“I wonder what Will wanted,” Logan said, scratching Houndoom’s ear. Nobody had an answer. “You know, Tracey’s parents had a Houndoom just like this,” she said.

Chase released an anguished yell and stood, stomping away from the light, toward Natalia.

“What’s his problem?” Alec asked.

Logan shook her head. “I don’t know.” She continued preening her Pokémon, watching Chase’s stooped figure.

“What happened?”

Logan looked at Alec, confused. “Happened...when? What?”

“You told me Tracey died, but never mentioned his family. How did they take it?” Logan froze. “You don’t have to tell me,” Alec said hastily.

“No, no, it’s just...Tracey’s parents died, about a year before he did. Maybe more. He visited them right before the end. He had siblings, too, they’ve gotta be...Arceus, Courtney might be six by now.” Logan shook her head, resuming her gentle, rhythmic strokes of Houndoom’s fur.

“I wonder how my parents would react, if I died,” Alec said.

Logan looked up sharply. “Why would you say something like that?” she asked, incredulous.

Alec shrugged. “Just wondering,” he said honestly.

Chase had reached Natalia’s side. “Need any help?” he asked.

She looked up at him, her brown eyes searching him for an ulterior motive. “I...I think I’ve got it under control,” she said.

“Where did you learn so much about...medicine stuff?” Chase asked.

Natalia laughed; something happened to her face when she laughed that made Chase’s stomach lurch pleasantly. Her eyes lit up and it seemed as if years of hardship lifted from the made-up face, exposing a radiant, youthful joy. “I wouldn’t say I know all that much about ‘medicine stuff’,” she said. Her face darkened as it settled back to neutral. “I worked in a lab, a long time ago. I picked up a thing or two about basic anatomy.”

“A lab? Well, geez, why didn’t you become a scientist, or engineer, or...something?” Chase glanced back at Logan and Alec; he felt Logan’s eyes drilling into him.

“If only,” Natalia said. She was still staring curiously at Chase. “Why did you come over here? Why not stay with your friends?”

“I needed to check on Preston,” Chase said shiftily, staring quickly at the older man, whose hollowed cheeks were glistening with sweat.

“He’s hanging on, bless him,” Natalia said. “He’s a fighter, this man.”

Chase nodded in agreement, leaning in closer to investigate; Natalia jerked back, breathing in sharply. “What’d I do?” Chase asked, bewildered.

Natalia hugged herself. “People who get that close to me only ever want to hurt me,” she said.

Chase looked at her for a long moment, his expression full of empathy, pity, and a hard emotion Natalia could not identify. The boy reached out, touching her unblemished cheek. She recoiled, but he reached forward, gently taking her cheek again. “Hasn’t anyone ever kissed you?”

Natalia did not move; she seemed trapped between a lie and a truth, her tongue caught. She was trembling but she did not look away. She held his gaze steadily, her eyes moving quickly back and forth, looking into him. For the absolute briefest moment, Chase’s eyes flickered in the direction of Logan and Alec, and then soft brown eyes met deep, cocoa-colored ones, and Chase leaned forward.

Several things happened at once: Chase and Natalia’s lips met and they pressed into one another; Logan, who had been watching, yelled out, because the Team Skye members from her time with Preston in the tunnels were lurking in the shadows behind Sawsbuck, gearing up to attack their teammate; and also the ceiling exploded in a beam of powerful orange-white light.

“What the...what?” Logan shrieked, shielding herself just in time. Debris flew everywhere; boulders, dust, shards of crystalline exotic iodes from the floor above. Sunlight streamed into the tunnel, hampered only by the giant silhouette of a Lugia. Will had arrived.

….....................................................................................

-2007-

“Tell me how you’re feeling, Logan.” The doctor Chase had recommended, Lionel Hume, was sitting across from the sixteen-year-old, whose robin’s-egg eyes seemed completely lost.

“Scared. Alone. I...alone. The thing is, doctor, I knew who I was with Tracey. He and I...got each other. I don’t know. I don’t know! I don’t know who I am anymore.”

The doctor took a note. “Well, we’re going to help figure that out. Tell me about your family, your home life,” he said, his voice calming in its own raspy way.

“Well, um, my mom and dad...were busy a lot, when I was a kid. Mom was always interested in my schoolwork, and she seemed very happy to hear I wanted to train Pokémon...Dad didn’t mind, I guess. He seemed confused as to why I didn’t have many other interests...no, like, favorite bands, or anything. Which wasn’t true, anyway.” She stared at the ceiling. Dr. Hume said nothing, simply writing furiously. “My favorite band was Quagsire 7,” she said absently.

“So you spend a lot of time on schoolwork?” Dr. Hume prompted.

Logan laughed hollowly. “No, not at all. Tracey and I would go out to the forest a lot, play with the local Pokémon...I spent more time with him than my parents,” she confessed.

“Of course.”

“I don’t want to forget him. I know that’s why I’m here. He’s dead, but he’s not gone,” Logan said firmly.

“Logan, of course we don’t want you to forget him. We just want to help you...remember. And appreciate your time with him. And then...ultimately...to let him go.”

….....................................................................................

Six months later…

“She’s better, but not entirely. At this point, I think it’s better she travel and get her mind off things than anything else,” Dr. Hume said, standing outside the hospital, giving Chase a quick up-to-date on his companion. “You’ll be okay with her?” he asked.

“Of course. More than okay,” Chase said.

Dr. Hume took in his former patient’s healing battle wounds, the white hair creeping back to its long, unkempt state from his military buzz cut. “Good. Excellent. Just give me two minutes more with her.” He retreated to the waiting area, where Logan awaited the doctor anxiously.

She stood up from the cushy blue chair by the door when he walked in. “Is Chase here?” she said eagerly.

“Yes, he’s waiting outside.” Dr. Hume said. She immediately went for the door. “Now, Logan, a final word?” She turned back to the older man. “It’s advisable you travel with Chase, at least for a while. He’s someone familiar, yes?” Logan nodded. “Good. Now remember what we talked about. It seems clear you will always need someone to care for. That’s ‘your thing’, right? Someone to pour yourself into, because you just have so many feelings in there!” He laughed uncomfortably, clearing his throat. “Chase may not be that person. It might not even be a person. Perhaps a Pokémon. They can be very therapeutic.”

Logan seemed to have zoned out, as she had heard all of this before. “Can I go?” she asked, looking outside.

Dr. Hume sighed. “Yes, of course. You have my number.” He opened the door for her. “Good day, young trainers,” he said, giving a final familiar wave to Logan and Chase before closing the door with a click.

Chase looked his old friend over, taking her in; her long curtains of blonde hair, red cheeks, and sky-blue eyes were just as familiar as ever. Logan seemed elated to see him; she greeted him with a long, passionate kiss. “Let’s run away,” she said, breaking away from the boy and grasping his jacket.

“I...hello yourself!” he said, stunned. What did they do to her? he wondered.

“I don’t like Kanto anymore,” Logan insisted, looking up at her friend. “Let’s go somewhere...exotic. Where we’ve never been.” She kissed him again.

“Um...wow, okay. Okay! Let’s go somewhere.” Chase glanced warily at the hospital. I hope they actually helped her, he thought, biting his cheek.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

Alec surveyed the damage Will had created by ordering the Hyper Beam that blew a hole through the ceiling. Logan, Chase, and Natalia seemed fine, although the latter was skulking in the shadows. Preston remained prone on Sawsbuck’s broad back; the Pokémon looked quite shaken up, pawing the ground restlessly and throwing his magnificent head back, snorting. Houndoom’s light had extinguished, although the sun streaming through the Lugia-sized hole overhead rendered the added light unnecessary.

The wall broke open to Alec’s right; his Pupitar emerged, a triumphant look in her face at having succeeded in her task. “You did well,” he told his Pokémon, reaching out to stroke her cold gray shell. Pupitar looked at him, incredulous; she had not heard a compliment from her trainer for a long time, especially not since her evolution. Alec pulled out her Poké Ball. “Rest,” he said tersely, looking at Will, who was dismounting Lugia already, hurrying to check on his old friend.

“Tar…” Pupitar said quietly, allowing herself to reduce to a concentrated red beam of energy, shrinking back into the orb.

Alec simply stared in awe at Lugia; he had never seen it before. The oft-overshadowed kindred of Ho-oh, the rumor had always been that Ho-oh ruled the heavens while Lugia presided over the earth; so it had been until the creature met Will. The story went that the Psychic had proved so synchronized with the Pokémon that Lugia had forsaken its post in the Whirl Islands to remain close companions with the now-Champion of the Elite Four.

Lugia seemed to sense Alec’s wonder, slowly turning its head and giving him an appraising look, taking a step forward and puffing its chest, letting out a deep, earthy wail that pierced Alec’s heart, making him long to laugh and cry at the same time.

“Lugia…” the boy said, reaching out.

“Alec, move,” Will said tersely. He and Chase were carrying Preston’s body through the sea of dirt and rock coating the area. Logan was right behind, carrying two Poké Balls, presumably having just returned Sawsbuck and Houndoom. Natalia was still hanging on the periphery of the area. “Here’s the situation,” Will said, carefully fixing Preston across Lugia’s neck, “there’s been a meeting called together of the Official Pokémon League committee. Something ominous is occurring in Kanto, something we don’t entirely understand, but it sounds extremely dangerous. And we need Preston at the meeting.”

“I thought he retired?” Alec said, moving so he was aligned with Logan, off to Lugia’s left.

“Yes, well, it might be time he came out of retirement,” Will said, glancing around the cavern. “Who is that?” he asked Chase, pointing to Natalia. She was kneeling over two bodies Alec had not noticed before.

“She’s a member of Team Skye,” Logan said, her hand clamping around Alec’s. “She’s been traveling with us through the tunnels because Preston thought it was noble, or something.”

“She’s tried to kill me,” Alec said blankly.

Will squinted, trying to make out her face. “The one from the siege, from the gym?” the Psychic asked. Alec nodded. Will folded his arms.

“Well, look, Preston’s been unconscious, and she didn’t hurt us! She helped us!” Chase said. Logan shot him a look that very clearly indicated exactly how much she had seen before Will’s arrival.

“That’s true…” Will said slowly. “What’s she looking at? Hey, you there, what are you looking at?”

Natalia stood quickly, turning and putting her hands up. “Fellow teammates,” she said, pointing to the gray uniforms. “They must have tracked us through the tunnel.”

Logan alone seemed to register what this meant. “Did you knock them out...again?” she breathed.

Natalia shook her head, her eyes fixed quietly on Will. “No, only Amy. Brodie was already knocked out by the explosion.” She took a step forward. “Should I...come quietly, then?”

“Don’t arrest her,” Chase said quickly.

Will cocked his head. “Preston trusts you…” he mused.

“Chase!” Logan hissed, but Will seemed to have already decided.

“Come with us. But I’m not leaving anything to chance.” He stepped forward, producing from his belt a pair of handcuffs. “As Champion of this region, thus head of the police force, I must insist you wear these. But once Preston is revived, and that will be quickly,” he said, looking at his friend, a shadow crossing his face, “he will likely make a case for you.”

Natalia seemed to expect no less. She stepped forward with a look that almost seemed gratified, proffering her wrists. Will, surprised at how calm and willing she was, locked the cuffs around her arms. They hung off her. “You need a decent meal,” he said, smiling very slightly. Natalia did not smile.

“What about these two?” Logan asked. She and Alec were still looking apprehensively at Amy and Brodie.

“I’m afraid I don’t have room on Lugia’s back. Let’s just leave them here, I’m sure they won’t hurt anyone.” All eyes snapped to him, incredulous. “What, I’m kidding! Get a sense of humor,” Will said quickly, looking at Lugia, his eyes shining a deep crimson color.

“What the…?” Alec asked, startled.

“He’s a psychic, remember? He can communicate telepathically with his Pokémon,” Logan said patiently.

“Oh, right,” Alec said, his wonder at the Champion’s prowess renewed.

“Lugia will take all of us to Goldenrod. My Espeon will bring these two to Officer Jenny,” Will explained, already releasing his Pokémon and pulling out his Poké Gear to message the head of Goldenrod’s police branch.

Logan gasped with joy at seeing the Pokémon. “Your Espeon needs to meet Leafeon when we get to the city,” she said, beaming and petting the violet-colored lynx. Espeon purred, closing her pale eyes and cocking her head in pleasure.

“I’m sure she will,” Chase said impatiently. “Will, we need to go.”

“Of course. Everyone, climb on! There should be room on Lugia’s back...I’ve carried some of you before,” Will said, smiling at Logan and Chase. Espeon crossed to Amy and Brodie, glowing a bright saffron and extending the glow to the two bodies. In a flash, all three figures were gone.

Eagerly, Alec clambered onto the giant creature’s back first. Chase and Logan followed, Logan immediately sitting beside Alec on the plate-covered area just between the wings. Chase offered a hand to Natalia, who was having difficulty climbing with her hands bound.

“He kissed her,” Logan said in Alec’s ear.

The boy’s eyes widened. “What?”

“Right before Will arrived. I’m beginning to think you and I are the only ones she hasn’t tricked yet.”

Alec looked at Natalia, the girl’s ruby hair falling loosely across her olive-skinned face and bare shoulders. “She’s not a good person,” he said carefully.

“I know. But you are,” Logan said encouragingly, squeezing his hand. “And we’ll just stick together, you and me.”

“Forever and always,” Alec said, reading her mind. The two watched Natalia sit down unsteadily beside Chase.

Will climbed on last, checking to make sure Preston was secured. “Watch him. And her,” he said to Chase. Natalia lowered her eyes. “Alright, everyone. Hold on tight!” Lugia spread its gigantic wings and Alec gasped, his young face filled with amazement as the bird lifted off, leaving the earth it guarded behind.

….....................................................................................

-2008-

“Aaah! Congratulations!” Logan screamed, hugging Chase and jumping up and down. The trainer had just defeated his umpteenth opponent in the Unova League Championships, thus qualifying him to move on to the final four. “Two more battles, and you’re the winner,” she said, kissing him and feeling the stubble of a new beard sprouting on his face.

“Lucky break,” Chase said, grinning and stroking her long blonde hair.

“Lucky? You’ve worked hard to get this far,” Logan admonished, hitting him playfully. “If only Tracey could see you now,” she said proudly.

Chase nodded, pulling at the necklace around his neck. “He’s always with me,” he said softly.

“There’s our winner!” called a voice. Mary and Jonathan Tang had come to support Chase in the big tournament, flying all the way out to Unova despite Mary’s reluctance to travel. “I told your father if he didn’t come, he’d be missing out,” she said, pushing Logan aside so she could smother her son with kisses.

“Mom,” Chase protested, glancing around the enclosed waiting area; luckily, most people were still in the massive Vertress Conference stadium. Chase was the spitting image of his mother; both had soft features, gentle brown eyes and prominent, handsome noses. Jonathan took more after his father, his hair strawberry-blonde instead of black, although he, too, had inherited a large nose. He patted Chase on the back, laughing good-naturedly. “You’re smothering me!” Chase yelped.

Logan took this opportunity to slip away, glad to escape. Since the war, she had discovered a growing anxiety around crowds; the tournament was an absolute nightmare. Any chance to be alone was taken gladly by the teenager. She looked over her shoulder; Chase was too buried under congratulations to notice her disappearance.

“Good,” she said, breaking into a run through the tight blue corridor, desperate to breathe fresh air. Finally, sunlight glowed up ahead; the girl burst through the glass emergency exit, feeling warm summer breeze whip around her face.

Despite the hot and humid summer, not a day went by for Logan without pulling on Tracey’s deep blue cardigan, hugging it closely to herself. She breathed deeply, enjoying the liberation. The immediate area surrounding the massive silver stadium where the Unova League was being hosted was very well tended. Beautiful firs and oaks towered impressively on the opposite side of the fenced-in area. Through the branches, Logan could hear the twitter of Pidove and the hum of Cottonee and Leavanny. Unova contained so many Pokémon unique to its region; already she and Chase had captured quite a few, although Chase was insistent none would permanently join his team.

“I’ve already got everyone I need,” he’d said firmly.

Logan glanced around, alert; it seemed she was quite alone. She pulled out her Poké Gear, turning it on, her fingers hovering over the keyboard. Checking once more to be sure she was not being watched, she dialed the number she had seen advertised on the television last night. The screen remained blank; it seemed this number was audio-only. She placed the device to her ear.

“Hello, please hold for Madame Geller,” droned an electronic voice. Logan hopped the fence, holding the gear to her head in growing anticipation.

“Hello, may I ask who is this calling?” came a voice laced with a mysterious, untraceable accent.

“Logan Clements. You said in your ad on TV you can speak with the dead?”

“Madame Geller can commune with those passed beyond our world, it is true,” she said.

Logan’s heart leapt. “How much would I have to pay to speak to someone?” The line went dead. Logan frowned, looking at her gear; she was out of the receptive area. She had taken only a few steps into the forest; she could still see the stadium to her right. “Damn,” she uttered. “Someone needs to patch the reception on these things.” Suddenly, a wave of guilt hit her. After all the hard work Dr. Hume went through to prevent this, she thought.

Chase had heard her uttering Tracey’s name absently one too many times for comfort and given Logan a stern talking to last month. “The most important thing to remember is that he is gone,” Dr. Hume had pressed when Chase had insisted she call him. “Tracey is gone, Logan, nobody can reverse that.”

A mewing sound broke Logan from her thoughts. An Eevee limped out from under the trees, its right paw bleeding. “Oh, you poor thing!” Logan cried, reaching out to pick the tiny brown creature up.

“Eeeee!” it cried out, withdrawing clumsily; it seemed the damaged paw had been bitten, from the way the blood was matted and concentrated in spots.

“I won’t hurt you,” Logan promised, stepping forward again. The Pokémon’s large black eyes blinked at her warily, although the creature did not retreat further. It crouched, trembling, whimpering softly. “You poor thing,” Logan said, very slowly kneeling down in front of it.

The Eevee licked its paw, yelping at the pain. “May I?” Logan asked gently; Eevee flinched. “Shh, it’s okay,” she said softly, reaching slowly into her bag and pulling out a Full Heal. “This might help,” she said, offering the potion to the Pokémon.

Eevee’s ears flattened, its lips curling suspiciously. “Hey, hey, shh, it’s okay!” Logan said soothingly. The Pokémon hesitated; her voice seemed to be warming it up, at least enough to stop hissing. “I’ll take care of you,” the girl whispered. “Come on, little guy -” Eevee mewed. “Girl?” This was met with silence. “Girl,” Logan concluded, pushing the potion toward the creature. “It’s safe.” Eevee stuck her pink tongue out, carefully lapping at the liquid.

Dr. Hume’s voice echoed in her head: “You’ll need somebody to take care of.” She hadn’t understood this cryptic message until now. Eevee’s bright black eyes stared up at her, glistening with gratitude. Here is somebody I can take care of, she realized, her heart swelling.

Logan’s Poké Gear rang. Oh, now I have reception, she thought, pulling out the device. Chase’s number. She answered, the boy’s face pressed into the full screen.

“Logan! Where’d you go?” he cried. “The tournament isn’t gonna wait for you!”

The girl smiled. “Coming, Chase. Stop being such a worrywart.” She stood up, looking down at Eevee. “Oh, and I think I’m bringing a friend.” Eevee mewed.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

Preston blinked slowly, clearing his blurry vision. There was a very bright light overhead; it took several more blinks to understand he was merely staring at a fluorescent hospital lamp. There were several forms in the small room with him, all blurred silhouettes to his weary eyes. It took him several moments to understand that his leg was no longer ailing him. Where before it had felt as if a knife had been lodged permanently in his shin, biting through his hamstrings, now his leg merely throbbed dully every few heartbeats, almost a memory of pain more than the actual sensation.

“Preston?” came an anxious voice. Preston winced; it had been a while since he’d experienced sound. He opened his eyes, struggling to see through the sleepy film of fluid from the tranquilizers. A form close by stepped suddenly closer to the bed. The man had long violet hair, horn-rimmed glasses, and very pale skin at the moment.

“Will!” Preston cried, exalted to see his old friend. He became very aware of his surroundings at this moment; he was in a hospital wing only meant to house one person; the room felt crowded with so many visitors. Preston counted five, and suddenly his tired face split into a smile. “Does this feel familiar to anyone?” he asked, pushing himself upright.

“Sorry?” Will asked, confused.

“Well, not too long ago, you and I were in a hospital room with these very same people,” the older man said, indicating Alec, Logan, Chase, and Natalia. “Although she wasn’t in handcuffs.” Preston frowned at this. “Why is she in handcuffs? You haven’t arrested Natalia?” he asked.

“Well, no,” Will said, “not exactly. I didn’t know whether we could trust her.”

“I think you can,” Preston said. He took Will’s hand very seriously. “Take the cuffs off her, for Ho-oh’s sake.”

Will obeyed this request; Natalia massaged her wrists. “How’s your leg?” she asked softly.

Preston smiled. “I think it’s better, thank you. Anybody feel like catching me up to speed?” Everybody looked at one another, not sure what to say. “Don’t all jump at once,” Preston said dryly.

“Well...um, your leg was pretty bad,” Alec said from the furthest point of the room; he and Logan were standing together. “Logan dressed it, and we...well, we tried -”

“Natalia helped,” Chase interrupted. Logan shot him a look. “She actually did most of it,” he finished.

“Yes, well,” Logan said. “And our Poké Gear was broken in the fall, so Chase used his to call Will -”

“And I came to pick you up immediately. Nurse Joy’s looked at your leg and patched it up pretty seamlessly. You may have a limp for a while, but the bone was reset, bonded, and the skin was regrown. The miracle of modern medicine,” Will finished, smiling.

Preston nodded, taking in the information and releasing a tired sigh. “I feel as if I’ve just run a marathon,” he said shakily, leaning his head back.

“You said you had something to ask Preston,” Chase reminded Will.

“Ah, yes. Well...Preston, if it isn’t too much to ask…”

Preston repositioned himself so he was sitting completely, his legs tucked under the sheets but everything else upright. “What is it?” he asked, sensing the trepidation in Will’s voice.

“Well...the Official League Council is meeting shortly in the Radio Tower, Joe, and...well, we need everyone present. It’s urgent, apparently, and we’d like it if you were there.”

“Will, I can’t -”

“Erika’s gone missing,” Will said. Chase and Logan started at this; they were both on friendly terms with the Elite Four member. “We need someone to sit in her stead at the meeting, someone who can be trusted. Please, Joe.” Will leaned forward imploringly.

Preston rubbed his stubbled cheeks, running his fingers through his graying hair and keeping his eyes fixed on Will. “I retired, Will. I’m too old for this, I came back for the war, but -”

“Pryce is twice your age; eighty-five and still going, Preston,” Will said abruptly. “I know you feel your time with us is past, but you have an obligation as a capable trainer and prominent presence in the community to help us when we need you.” He stood up for effect. “It’s not right to hide when we need you most,” he said steadily.

Preston looked at his old friend for a long moment without speaking, wheels turning in his head. “Alright,” he said finally. “One final time.” Will smiled. “I better get a hell of a sendoff,” Preston muttered, shaking his head. This is crazy, he told himself. J.T. Preston, what have you gotten yourself into?

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Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
As I've continued pinpointing my characters, charting out backstories, etc., I figured I would share with you the latest addition I've made to my chart...

If any of you are unfamiliar with the MBTI Chart, I highly recommend doing some research into it - some really fascinating stuff with lots to say about human nature, and honestly it really helps me because once I've nailed down the Myers-Briggs type for each of my characters, I know precisely how each will react to certain situations.

This is the Website with a rundown of the basics.

Also I've added birthdays. Not as exciting, but.

SO:

Alec Gideon - B. July 27, 1996. ESFP
Chase Tang - B. May 6, 1990. ENFJ
Logan Clements - B. July 18, 1991. ISFP
J.T. Preston - B. February 25, 1960. INFJ
Natalia Solos - B. February 2, 1985. INFP
Gabriel Pahria - B. June 8, 1981. ESTJ

Chapter 15 is complete and I'm doing some minor edits. Hope you guys enjoy these next few chapters!
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
After a long wait (well, relatively long as of late), here is Chapter Fifteen!

Earth, Air, Water, Fire

Chapter Fifteen

-2009-

Alec gazed up at the Goldenrod Radio Tower, remembering its architectural grandeur from his visit to the big city not two weeks earlier. It feels like a lifetime, he reflected, trying and failing to remember his life pre-Olivine. Since becoming aware of the vast importance of the Rainbow Wing to Gabriel’s mission, becoming aware of the fact he was hunted solely for possessing an item, his life had been chaos.

It felt as if he’d been strapped into a roller coaster; an image suddenly came to mind of himself sitting at the front of a long line of cars that were all the colors of the rainbow. Beside him sat Logan, behind him, Chase. Preston’s deep voice narrated the twists and turns of the coaster, and ever looming at the end of the track was a wide, dark tunnel with a tall facade - a grotesque face in the likeness of Gabriel, his mouth wide, ready to engulf the car. Natalia, of course, sat at the power box, finger poised to flip the switch connected to speed and direction at any point.

“It’s beautiful, isn’t it?” Logan asked, mistaking Alec’s reverie for admiration of the Radio Tower. The boy blinked, his sea-green eyes slowly re-focusing on reality. Preston and Will had led the group to the building which would play host to the Official Pokémon League Council as they discussed whatever danger was currently plaguing the continent.

“My friend Jesse used to work here,” Preston said, admiring the massive black spires of the tower itself, which rose up behind the building containing the offices and equipment essential to the maintenance of Johto’s popular audio programming. Night’s rest had done everyone good, but none moreso than the former gym leader. His face had regained some color; his cheeks looked less hollowed and the man’s deepset gray eyes now seemed to swim with energy and focus. He walked with a cane-assisted limp, but otherwise he seemed to have made a full recovery.

“The meeting’s on the top floor,” Will said from Preston’s left.

“I want to join in,” Alec said abruptly.

Preston gave him an appraising look. “Well, of course. We were going to include you whether you liked it or not, Alec.”

The boy blinked in surprise; this was not the response he’d expected. “Really?”

“Yes, of course. The council will want to talk to you about the Rainbow Wing, I expect,” Preston said, shifting his gaze to Will, who nodded.

“What about us?” Chase demanded, stepping forward.

Will surveyed the young man, along with Natalia and Logan. “These meetings are meant for League Officials only. I suppose I could make a case for you, Chase...all the help you lent me during the war. But Logan...and especially you,” he said to Natalia, “you’ll probably have to wait outside.”

“I’m coming in,” Chase said immediately, his mind made up before Will had even finished speaking. Logan looked incredulously at him.

“I want Logan to come in,” Alec said, reflecting on Natalia’s stressed insistence he keep those he trusted close.

“I should be allowed in,” Logan agreed, looking imploringly at Preston, sure that he at least would see reason.

“Why can’t they all come in?” Preston asked his friend. “It’s only fair.”

“Look, the council won’t approve, okay? The meeting shouldn’t take long,” he promised, choosing to look slightly to Logan’s left instead of directly at her.

Alec and Logan both began protesting, but Preston shook his head warningly. “It’s Will’s decision,” he said. He ran his fingers through his hair distractedly. “Alec, Natalia, can I have a word?”

Natalia, who had been standing a few lengths away from the group, looked surprised at her inclusion in Preston’s request. She nodded, convening with Alec and the tall man a safe distance from Will, Chase, and Logan.

Alec looked back at Logan, eyes wide in apology. The blonde girl’s face was set in a determined neutral, but he sensed deep hurt at her exclusion.

“What’s the matter?” Natalia asked Preston. Alec shifted his attention to the older man.

“Nothing is the matter, per se. I just wanted to warn both of you.” Natalia and Alec’s faces displayed identical expressions of confusion.

“About what?” Alec asked, alarmed.

“Well, Alec, when we go in there...I know this council. I worked with these people for fifteen years. They will want to influence your decision on what to do with the Rainbow Wing. They’ll want to take it, although Will and I both think, and will defend this, that the Wing is your family heirloom...your birthright. So, when we’re in there...don’t hesitate to defend yourself.”

“I won’t,” Alec said, taken aback.

Preston smiled, the rare smile that reached his eyes, and slapped Alec’s back. “Spoken like a man,” he said proudly. His face shifted back to neutral, regaining its grave solemnity. “Natalia, the council will also likely vote to have you arrested. Even Will, although at least he’s not supporting punishment, wants to exploit you for information about Gabriel.”

“I won’t give it, I’ll lie,” Natalia said automatically.

“I’m aware,” Preston said evenly.

“And that’s fine with you?” Alec asked, suspicion clouding his young face. What is this man thinking? he thought, scanning Preston’s face.

“Alec, Natalia has as much right to her secrets as you and I do. She’s done some bad things, and in her own time she will atone for them. But who are we to force her to do anything?”

Natalia looked gratefully at the graying hair and stubbled cheeks of this almost-stranger who believed in her more than anyone since her own father. “If they demand to question me…” she began, but Preston shook his head.

“You’re granted radio silence,” he promised. Alec shook his head, dumbfounded.

Will had called the head of security to let the group into the tower, leaving Logan and Chase to deal with one another, alone for the first time since entering the Purpleheart Tunnels.

“Why are you leaving me out here?” Logan asked, looking determinedly at the river that ran across the Goldenrod Plaza instead of at her old friend.

“I want to be in on the meeting. It’s not my fault you’re not invited,” Chase said shortly.

“You’re leaving me alone with her,” Logan hissed, turning her head to look at Natalia, the Team Skye member speaking conspiratorially with Preston and Alec.

“Look, Logan, you need to chill out about Natalia. I think Preston’s right about her...the girl’s not a saint, but -”

“Oh, of course you’d say that!” Logan burst out angrily.

Chase recoiled. “I...what?”

“Look, I saw you kiss her. I understand, I get it, I haven’t been here for you, I’ve been too caught up in my own problems, but seriously? Letting her suck you in with those big brown eyes and pouty lips? ‘Oh, I’m such a damaged soul,’ she’s a snake, Chase, a criminal who’s tried to kill Alec and who works for a man who kills for sport! How could you?” Logan’s voice was rising with emotion.

“What, you think I did it out of some sort of revenge?” Chase laughed humorlessly, shaking his head. “Look. I can’t get over you. I probably never will get over you. But it’s abundantly clear that you will never reciprocate feelings to the same level I have. What does that mean for me? Do I give up? Do I just stop hoping that one day, somebody or something will make me feel nearly the amount you do? I like her, okay? And unlike you, she shares many of my passions and interests! Natalia is a person. She’s intelligent and intuitive, and unlike you, she’s able to look outside of herself and care for other people. Her life is ten times worse than yours, but instead of complaining about it night and day, she devotes herself to - look, to helping us escape the tunnel, to taking care of Preston.” Chase was pacing now, clearly unloading years of frustration. “If anybody is being fooled here, Logan, it’s you, sucking yourself in with lies and judgments about other people that allow you to feel better about yourself.” Logan began to speak, but Chase plowed on, unstoppable. “Tracey’s dead, he’s been dead for two years, Logan. Two years is an awful long time to remain trapped in the past.” Logan’s eyes were swimming with angry tears.

Will returned from his call, oblivious to the confrontation of epic proportion taking place. “It’s time,” he called, indicating to Preston, Chase, and Alec. “They’re letting us in.”

“Give her a chance,” Chase muttered feebly, his rant cut short.

Logan was trembling, crossing and uncrossing her arms in effort to contain her frustration. “Can I say something?” she asked steadily.

“Go ahead,” Chase said.

“I’m sorry,” she said, completely sincere, unfolding her arms and holding them out to Chase. He cocked his head in surprise, accepting the embrace and holding onto her a moment longer than was necessary, allowing her to bury her head in the crook of his neck, as she always did when they were dating. Logan sniffed, pulling away and placing her hands on Chase’s chest. She looked at Natalia. “I...I’m not giving her a chance, Chase. I can’t. But I am sorry, for everything I’ve ever done to hurt you.”

Chase nodded. “Okay.” He walked away without further comment, joining Preston, Alec, and Will at the glass doors to the tower.

“Will you be alright?” Preston asked, concerned, looking at Natalia and Logan.

“We’ll be fine,” Natalia assured, not moving any closer to Logan.

“Yeah. We can check out the National Park, Alec says it’s nice!” Logan said with a false cheerfulness.

“Good. Take your time,” Preston said, smiling gently. The Radio Tower doors opened smoothly.

“Enjoy the meeting!” Logan said. She and Alec joined eyes. Be careful, she thought silently. Alec seemed to hear her, nodding and smiling at her reassuringly. He waved and then the men were gone, the doors shutting behind them.

“Shall we?” Natalia asked after a long silence.

Logan looked at the girl’s carefully concealed burns and limp white dress, the cocoa colored eyes full of pain and deceit. “Let’s do this,” she said resignedly. The two began walking steadily away from the tower, neither girl looking at the other, shut completely in their own worlds.

….....................................................................................

-1989-

“Alright, then, sir. You ready to meet the lot?” The man speaking was Olivine’s current gym leader, Eddard, who was turning fifty-three in August and gearing up for retirement. J.T., who had been Eddard’s apprentice for some time now, was preparing to be sworn in as the city’s next gym leader. His nerves had rendered him quite pale, but otherwise the young man looked strikingly like his mentor at the moment - he had grown his dark brown hair long and allowed stubble to coat his strong jaw in an effort to impress the older man.

“Ready,” J.T. said, his broad shoulders tense and heavy brow furrowed.

Eddard opened the doors into the Olivine Meeting House, where the full force of the Tohjo branch of the Pokémon League Council was congregated. As was tradition, all were seated in a Poké Ball-style formation - a circle of simple chairs, twenty-one in all, with one stool situated in the center for the Champion to occupy. To Preston’s left were seated all the Kanto gym leaders; to his right, the Johto. The four corners of the circle were filled by Elite Four members Bruno, Agatha, Lorelei, and Lance.

The room was rather warm, which J.T. found comforting - he was more than slightly intimidated standing in a room full of legends. Eddard had done his best to prepare his successor for this moment, but it was much easier learning about the Tohjo hierarchy than it was occupying it.

“Eddard!” a friendly voice cried. All side conversations ceased as J.T. felt twenty pairs of eyes turn toward the pair representing Olivine. The friendly greeting had come from Willow, the Azalea Town gym leader. She was an elegant older woman with cropped gray hair, possibly the oldest figure in the room, although Agatha could likely contest the title.

“It’s about time,” said a spectacled man J.T. knew to be named Emerson. “Talk about ‘fashionably late’.”

“We hit traffic,” Eddard said, which evoked hearty chuckles from many people, especially a portly man J.T. recognized as Chuck. The Olivine Gym was two blocks away from the meeting house and it took at most two minutes to travel from one place to the other.

“Is this the boy?” asked a stooped, balding man clutching a cane - Pryce, the Mahogany Town leader.

“He’s beautiful,” cooed Cresta, the Cerulean leader famous for her polygamous lifestyle.

“I’m twenty-nine...” Preston said to Pryce, indignant at being called a boy.

“Well isn’t he wonderful,” Emerson said dryly.

“Can we get a move-on?” asked a silver-haired pretty woman J.T. knew as Ecruteak’s new leader, Karen.

“Sit down, Eddard,” said a grave voice. Champion Theon, who had been lurking peripherally outside the circle, suddenly crossed to the center of the gray room, indicating to Eddard’s seat between Pryce and Chuck.

J.T. averted his eyes reverently; Theon was known through the land as the most powerful and ruthless trainer in three generations. Eddard squeezed J.T’s shoulder, leaving his apprentice and seating himself easily among his peers. J.T. felt very alien, feeling the most important figures in Tohjo giving him a full evaluation. I should have dressed better, he thought, watching Emerson’s eyes linger on his carelessly cuffed sleeves.

Theon seated himself, crossing his legs and looking at J.T. appraisingly. The man had not moved two steps from the door; it seemed his legs were frozen. There was no chair for him, J.T. noticed, which only increased his anxiety. “Well, come into the circle, then,” Theon urged.

J.T. took a deep breath, closing the door behind him and moving slowly into the circle, his feet dragging as if bound by a String Shot. He knew everyone was watching, some more fondly than others - he didn’t think Emerson was capable of smiling. The walk felt treacherously long, although by the time he reached Theon’s seat in the center, he couldn’t have taken more than a dozen steps.

“Is this the only reason we’re here?” asked a loud voice - Sansa, the Celadon Gym Leader, was well-known for permanent ear damage caused in infancy by a Loudred.

“Shh,” warned Dogen, the fighting guru of Saffron City, staring intently at Theon’s steely gaze.

Theon seemed to be making a full appraisal of the replacement Eddard was offering. “Remind me your credentials, Joseph?” It was clear he knew them quite well; it seemed he was testing J.T.’s awareness of his own ability.

“Winner of four World Championships, sir. Johto, Kanto, Johto again, and Sinnoh.”

“Oh, I remember you!” said a dark-skinned man with small eyes - Flint of Pewter City.

“Yes, yes, J.T., right?” asked Claire the dragon tamer. J.T. nodded, grateful at the woman’s warmth. She smiled encouragingly.

“He certainly looks different with that hair,” Cresta said approvingly to Dogen.

“You will, of course, need to sign all the proper forms and decide on the type of Pokémon you wish to specialize in before we make this official,” said Theon slowly. “He has completed his apprenticeship with you, right?” he asked Eddard.

The Olivine Gym Leader nodded, smiling. “With flying colors,” he said proudly.

“Very well. He’ll do nicely, I think,” Theon said, allowing a rare smile. “What type were you considering for your focus, Joseph? Will you continue your master’s excellent work with Ground types?”

“Well, sir, I wanted to train Normal types,” J.T. said, locking eyes with Norman, the Goldenrod Gym Leader. “But seeing as Johto already has a gym with that specialty, I think I might…”

“Well, that’s nonsense,” Theon said dismissively. “Train Normal types and don’t apologize. We can have two gyms of that nature. I believe you’re considering moving to Hoenn soon, anyway, isn’t that right?” he asked the blue-haired man.

“That’s right, Theon, sir,” Norman said respectfully.

“Then it isn’t an issue. Right, then, thank you very much. You may stay as we continue the meeting and observe the conduct of a standard council session. Alakazam, create a chair for this man,” Theon said, releasing the golden Pokémon and indicating the space between Eddard and Pryce, the latter of which moving his chair aside to make room.

“Thank you, sir, so much,” J.T. made to bow to the four corners - standard fare in a meeting, Eddard had said, one bow to every Elite Four member, who in him or herself represented the four main elements of earth, air, water, and fire. This tradition was of course more significant when the Elite Four had actually conformed to Ground, Flying, Water, and Fire type-Pokémon, but it remained in practice out of respect to ancient ritual.

“Hold on,” said a quiet voice, a dark-haired man in a black suit whom J.T. identified as Giovanni of Viridian. “He hasn’t taken the oath.”

“Yes, yes, where’s your sense of honor, boy?” Emerson snapped.

“Oh shut up,” Claire said, rolling her eyes.

“Joseph?”

“J.T., sir, or Preston, if it pleases you,” J.T. said quickly.

“Preston, then,” Theon said, appropriating the one name J.T. would be referred to officially as a gym leader, “I’m sorry, son, it slipped my mind. The oath, please.”

J.T. swallowed. “Yes, of course, sir.” He felt his hand slide to his pocket, where he had the entire oath written on notecards. He glanced at Eddard, who nodded encouragingly.

“To this great tradition of our world, I pledge myself,” he recited, wracking his brain to recall the exact wording without resorting to cards. “I pledge to encourage and challenge trainers to become their best selves in this beautiful Pokémon-gifted paradise. To the good of the people and their safety, I pledge myself.” He ran his fingers through his thick hair, straining. Eddard mouthed ‘Arceus’. “To the trifecta of our deities - to Lugia, master of earth, Ho-oh, master of sky, and Arceus, master of all, I pledge myself. Fealty and honor are my priority. I, Joseph Thomas Preston, pledge myself to the Tohjo Pokémon League.” He bowed deeply to each member of the circle.

“You forgot the line about dignity,” Emerson said crossly.

“Let it GO,” said Claire sharply.

Theon shook his head at Emerson and slowly began clapping for J.T. The other league members joined in, politely applauding their newest member. Eddard beamed at his successor.

“Thank you, Preston. NOW you may sit.” Theon nodded at Alakazam, who conjured a chair from thin air with his spindly, clawed fingers. J.T. sat, thankful to remove himself from the spotlight. Eddard clapped him on the back. “Now, I open the floor to any announcements or complaints from Tohjo,” Theon said, business again as usual.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

Preston put a hand on Alec’s shoulder; the boy looked apprehensive. “Just stick to your guns if the Wing comes up,” he said, smiling. The men had reached the top floor and were standing outside the Radio Tower’s meeting room.

“I’ll be alright,” Alec promised, his dark eyebrows knitted together in determined stolidity.

“Well then. Are you ready to meet the lot?” Preston asked. Alec nodded. “Let’s go, then,” he said, looking to Will to bring them in.

“You have no idea how much I appreciate this, Joe,” Will said, putting a hand on the door. “If there’s anything I can do…”

“I’ll think of something,” Preston promised, smiling gently. He looked at Alec, whose hands were balled into fists, and was again forcibly reminded of himself at a younger, bolder age. “Let’s get this over with.”

Will opened the door, revealing a pure-gold room with a long table, twenty-five chairs set up along the perimeter, twelve on each side and one at the head of the table on the far side.

“Here’s the man of the hour,” Pryce called, although which of the four entering the room he was referring to was anyone’s guess. Preston surveyed the room, reflecting that the council had changed radically in the twenty years since he had been sworn in. The few that remained had aged tremendously - some showed it worse than others, Preston among the unlucky bunch, although Pryce and Blaine were possibly the worst offenders. How people like Claire and Surge retained their youth was beyond him.

“How are you all?” Will asked, taking his seat at the head of the table. There were many murmured, generally positive responses to the question; all eyes remained glued on Alec, Chase, and Preston.

Chase had just given a small cry of recognition; he had just laid eyes on Nikki, the new gym leader of Celadon City.

“Do you know her?” Preston asked.

Chase nodded vigorously. “She was Erika’s second-in-command back in the day. I didn’t realize she’d been promoted.” Nikki was a gorgeous young woman with long, silky dark hair, amber eyes and striking elegance; she was giving Chase a very curious look. “I may have asked her on a date once,” he admitted sheepishly to Alec.

“She’s hot,” was the boy’s response. Preston chuckled, shaking his head.

“Well? Are you going to introduce us?” Pryce asked.

“Where are my manners? Everyone, this is Alec Gideon. Mr. Rainbow Wing,” Will said. Whitney gave a nod of recognition; Jasmine leaned forward, putting her arms on the table. There were still red marks on her wrists where Gabriel had bound her last week. “And you all know Chase Tang. He was my lieutenant during the war.”

“Was he any good?” Surge barked, chewing his tobacco incessantly.

“The best,” Will said very seriously. “That’s why I brought him in.”

“Where’s Logan?” Nikki asked automatically.

“She’s, um...well, she’s outside somewhere,” Chase said hesitantly.

“Hm. We’ll catch up later, I guess,” Nikki said, her striking features darkening in vague disappointment. “Phoebe and I will take you guys out for lunch or something.” Phoebe was Nikki’s girlfriend; Chase had figured that out the hard way.

“Nice to see you back at the table, Preston,” Claire said, smiling at her old friend. “Well, if you were sitting at it,” she added.

“Yes, yes, sit down! Alec, let me introduce everyone,” Will said, standing and indicating to his left. “Here we have Koga and Bruno. Kanto Gym Leaders: The Harrisons from Pewter City - Forrest, Brock, and Flint. Misty, Cerulean City. This is Lieutenant Surge, head of the Vermilion Gym. Nikki representing Celadon City. Sabrina, from Saffron. This is Janine, Koga’s daughter, she’s been Fuchsia’s gym leader since her father moved up. Moving across the table,” Will said, his eyes twinkling as he shifted to the right, “this is Blaine for Cinnibar Island, and rounding out Kanto is Blue from Viridian City.” He took a deep breath. “Johto! This is Falkner, Violet City. Meet Bugsy, our youngest leader, he’s Azalea Town’s keeper. You have battled Whitney, Goldenrod’s very own. Morty, from Ecruteak.”

“Fun fact, Will and Morty were groomsmen at my wedding,” Preston whispered to Chase.

“...Jasmine, Preston’s own replacement. Chuck of Cianwood, Pryce of Mahogany, who is celebrating his sixty-fifth year as gym leader, and of course, Claire. Blackthorn’s proudest.” A woman with square glasses and a forbidding air cleared her throat. “Ah, and of course, Lorelei, recently re-integrated back into the council after an early retirement.”

“That was a mouthful,” Preston observed.

Will laughed, taking a sip of water and indicating to the one empty chair beside Lorelei. “This is supposed to be Erika’s spot. Today, Joe’s butt will have to do in her stead.” This elicited a few chortles. “Everyone, move down and around...yes, there, good. Preston and Alec, here, and Chase, you can sit across from them.” He indicated the three seats closest to him.

The men took their seats, Chase beside Nikki, Alec sandwiched between Preston and Claire.

“Hello,” the blue-haired woman said pleasantly.

“Hi,” said Alec, breathless. Preston chuckled; Alec seemed to be completely overwhelmed in the presence of so many celebrities.

“How much did Will pay you to be here, Preston?” Chuck asked, beaming heartily at his peer.

Preston shook his head amusedly. “No amount of money could get me back in this seat again,” he said firmly. “Although, I do miss the banquets,” he admitted.

“Joe is here because he wants to help,” Will said.

“Admit it, you miss us,” Morty said, drawing more laughter.

“All this excitement with Gabriel and Team Skye has forced me outside again,” Preston said carefully. “And that’s why we’re here, right?” The laughter stopped.

“Well...no, Joe, actually...no,” Will said slowly.

“But then why am I here?” Alec asked, bewildered.

“The Rainbow Wing is certainly an issue to be discussed,” Will said, “And maybe we should get to that first. Alec, could we see the Wing?”

Preston suddenly began laughing; many eyes turned to him in confusion.

“Is something funny, Preston?” Koga asked, crossing his thin arms and frowning.

“Well, ‘Wing’ sounds awfully like ‘ring’, doesn’t it?” Preston looked at Will, expecting the humor to strike his friend as well. “Old Professor Tolkien would get a kick out of this,” he said, his face falling as he realized he was alone in the joke. “Morty, you read Tolkien, right?” he asked. Morty shook his head.

“What are you talking about?” Bruno asked, perplexed.

“Oh, read a book, for Arceus’ sake,” Preston said crossly. He wished Emerson were still alive; since his death, the council had become increasingly pervaded by non-readers. “I’m bringing the book club back when this is all done,” he muttered.

“Anyway...Alec, the Rainbow Wing?” Will asked, shooting a furtive glance at his old friend before turning back to business. He moved his violet eyes to Alec, peering over the frames of his glasses.

Alec hesitated; his hands clutched his green bag protectively. The Wing was the one item he had to remind him of his grandfather, Preston remembered; the boy had told him it made him feel stronger knowing it was always with him. Chase kicked Alec’s shin under the table. “Ouch!” the boy cried out.

“What are you waiting for?” Chase asked.

“Remember what I said,” Preston whispered encouragingly.

Alec’s fingers trembled as he opened his bag, reaching deep down below the clothes and items, medicine and protein powder, to the hidden inside pocket at the bottom. The younger members of the council leaned forward, anticipation mounting; Forrest made a noise that sounded somewhat like a Swinub.

“We’re all friends here,” Will reminded gently.

Suddenly the Wing was held aloft; Alec seemed to have bitten the bullet, pulling it out quickly and proffering it so all the room could see. Many people gasped; Bugsy stood to see it better. Morty’s face was uncharacteristically alive, pulled back in intense interest.

The Wing was stunning; ‘Wing’, of course, being a misnomer, the item was in actuality a preserved feather, just one that had fallen to earth during Ho-oh’s cleansing all the thousands of years ago. Enclosed in a perfect transparent gem casing, the Wing shone with every color on the prism, the primary colors being scarlet and gold at the core. The feather seemed to glow, pulsating slightly with an otherworldly light.

“Arceus’ Plates…” Nikki breathed, transfixed. Brock and Whitney were crying slightly at its terrible beauty.

“Now I see why Gabriel wants it,” Chase said in awe.

“I want to keep it,” Alec said stubbornly, lowering the Wing so it was still visible, but held protectively to his body.

“Not a good idea,” Sabrina said immediately. “If Gabriel wants something, he won’t stop until he gets it.”

“Remember Jesse?” Morty said across the table to Will.

“Jesse?” Claire asked.

“It happened in this building,” Whitney said softly.

“Jesse was one of our very good friends, growing up,” Preston said levelly. “He worked as a security guard here. Gabriel, before being the official leader of Team Skye, was part of a small group of miscreants who almost all either were or are members of Skye. He came here to steal...something, I don’t know what,” he said, his eyes down, his voice catching.

“He killed two people, Jesse and his own brother, to get what he wanted,” Will finished. The council remained silent for a moment. “Alec, I know I told you it was your right to keep that Wing. But...from everything that’s happened to you in the name of secrecy...look at Joe’s leg! That girl you’ve been traveling with, the one that works with him, is a known criminal who’s been arrested twice! The Wing is dangerous and too many people want it.”

“Natalia’s been arrested?” Chase asked.

“Later,” Preston said quickly.

“Natalia? Solos? Skinny girl, red hair?” Jasmine asked, horrified. Chase nodded. “She’s the one that knocked me out and dragged me to the lighthouse. You’re traveling with her?”

Alec looked at Preston, who frowned, nodding slowly. “She’s proven herself trustworthy.”

“Trustworthy? Oh, Joseph,” Morty said, shaking his head. “I forgot how gullible you can be.”

“Gullible?” Preston repeated indignantly.

“How do you know she’s not still working for Gabriel?” Claire asked.

“Preston, she’s got those burns on her face,” Alec said urgently.

“Burns?” Will asked sharply. “She did...you’re right,” he said slowly, recalling the first time he’d laid eyes on the girl outside the Olivine Gym.

“Burns...like mine?” Pryce asked. “Or hers?” he continued, nodding at Janine.

“Possibly,” Preston said. “But that doesn’t mean anything.”

“She got those burns in a fire,” Chase said defensively.

“Ho-oh’s fire,” Nikki clarified darkly. “That proves it, then, she’s been marked corrupt by Ho-oh itself, she must be bad! What other proof do you need?”

“But what if she isn’t?” Preston asked, standing for emphasis. “What if those burns signify a deep importance, potential to do great acts of good? Lookat Pryce. Look at Janine! Maybe they were a little morally unsure before the war. But since being marked, they’ve become pinnacles of goodness and virtue.”

“They were never members of Team Skye,” Morty said quietly.

“Have her arrested. If she’s good, she’ll get time off for good behavior,” Blaine said fairly.

“But,” Preston began, but Morty stopped him.

“Joseph, what if Gabriel meant for her to join you? What if she’s part of his plan?

….....................................................................................

Natalia glanced to her left nervously; Houndoom bared her fangs menacingly, jowls quivering. Logan was walking on her other side, staring forward determinedly as the two made their way through the Goldenrod National Park. The park was stunning, surrounded on all sides by tall, well-tended trees, guarded carefully by unobtrusive but secure wire fencing. Sunlight streamed through the lime-green canopy, the beams of light occasionally broken by Ledyba and Hoppip fluttering about lazily. Great patches of dark forest-green grass reached up past Natalia’s ankles; thankfully, the tall grass was mowed down in sections so that trainers might cross through easier.

Logan had headphones stuffed into her ears, listening to music at an incredibly loud volume, so that Natalia could hear every pulse of the driving beat and strings that mixed beautifully with guitar - the signature of Quagsire 7.

“Who’s your favorite member?” she asked finally. Logan did not answer. “Of the band?” she asked, louder. A nearby Pidgey squawked angrily.

Logan looked determined to maintain her silence, but finally she pulled a bud out of her ear. “What?” she asked shortly.

“My favorite’s Adam,” Natalia said, smiling.

Logan stared at her. “You listen to Quagsire 7?”

Natalia nodded. “Mhm! My dad took me to one of their concerts when I was thirteen. Before he got sick. They’re pretty great,” she said, glad at the opportunity to speak freely without fear of crucifixion; Logan at least looked at her without a sneer now.

“Tracey and I went to one when I was seven. We had to go all the way to New-”

“-Bark Town?” Natalia asked. Logan nodded inquisitively. “August 1998? The Victory Tour?”

“Yes!” Logan said. “You too?” Natalia bobbed her head up and down, a smile spreading across her damaged face. “We must have been at the same one. That’s unbelievable. The power of music, huh?” She smiled too, impressed.

“Who’s Tracey?” Natalia asked innocently.

Logan’s smile shriveled; her face tightened and the familiar look of disgust returned to her face. “You don’t need to know that,” she said.

“Okay. Sorry.” Natalia felt her heart sink; she had been close to getting the answer, she could feel it. Give it time, she thought patiently. Logan had placed the earbud back, closing herself off. This is worse than jail, Natalia reflected, looking between Logan and Houndoom, her unassigned guard. At least in jail, you’re actually alone in the silence.

A Stantler came into view in front of them on the flower-strewn path, calmly grazing on some onion grass. Logan gasped. “Oh! Oh I’ve always wanted one of them! Gah he’s so cute!”

Natalia looked at the quadruped, taking in its handsome tawny fur and crooked horns. “Not exactly what I’d call cute…” she muttered.

Logan didn’t seem to hear her. She removed her earbuds, wrapping them around her newly-repaired Poké Gear and reaching for her belt. “Stantler are Normal type…” she said to herself, sighing and glancing at the Poké Balls around her waist. “Let’s see how this goes. Houndoom, watch Natalia.” She pulled a Great Ball from her belt and held it up. “Gurdurr, go!”

Houndoom paced circles around Natalia, who had taken a seat on a park bench, her dark brown eyes glittering with excitement. There was a certain thrill that came with any attempt at capture.

A gray humanoid creature emerged, one which Natalia had never seen before. It seemed rather formless, similar in appearance to the Machop line but softer, as though made of clay. Its face was offset rather strikingly by a large red nose, like a Tamato Berry. On its shoulder it carried a rigid metal beam which made for a very foreboding aura. It gritted its teeth, which were gray and coarse as cinder blocks.

“Gurdurr, Brick Break!” Logan called authoritatively. Gurdurr picked up its weapon with both hands, swung it lazily and effortlessly twice, and wound up. Stantler continued chewing, not bothering to move; it didn’t have to. Gurdurr’s attack was aimed at its trainer.

“Logan!” Natalia shouted, and Houndoom instantly bolted to her trainers’ side, barking angrily.

“Gurdurr, no!” Logan cried in exasperation.

Natalia pulled a Poké Ball from her dress pocket, getting up and running to Logan’s aide.

“Crobat, go!” The purple bat emerged excitedly, having been cooped up a little longer than was enjoyable. But Logan had already returned her Pokémon, sadly staring at the Great Ball. Stantler, annoyed by the noise, snorted and began a quick trot in the opposite direction.

“Crobat, Air Cutter!” Natalia called, but by the time the attack was released, the Stantler had run away, leaving Logan standing in forlorn silence. Houndoom nudged her head against Logan’s hand while maintaining firm eye contact with Natalia. “I’m sorry it got away,” she offered.

“It’s alright,” Logan said, returning Gurdurr’s ball to her belt. “I was stupid to try using my Gurdurr.”

“What was wrong with it?” Natalia asked.

“He doesn’t trust me as his trainer. Despite all my accomplishments, because I never completed a badge quest in Unova, where I caught him, I guess…to him, I’m nothing special.” Logan said the last three words with a certain reluctance.

Natalia returned Crobat to its Poké Ball with a gentle woosh and looked around. “Are there any landmarks you know of that we could hit -” But Logan was already pulling her earbuds back out. “Wait.” Logan complied. “Look, I know you don’t trust me -”

“Spot on,” Logan said.

“...but I want you to. I can help you with your Pokémon, let’s do a trust exercise, okay?” Natalia said tentatively.

“Like a game? I can’t stand games. What, like chess?”

“Not exactly. Look...I - I know what you’re going through, with your Gurdurr. My Crobat was the same way, for a long time. Can I...can I try something? It might increase your...compatibility.”

“I’ve tried everything, okay? Treats, massages, vitamins, battling…” Logan shook her head.

“Team-building games? Like the berry toss?”

Logan nodded again. “Everything.

Natalia seemed emboldened by this word. “I promise you haven’t tried this. Building trust with a Pokémon...it’s not just about being qualified to guide it in battle. He had to believe you’re not holding anything back, that you’re just as dedicated to the cause as he is,” she said, echoing the words of Amy, who had taught her this lesson.

“I’m listening,” Logan said, unplugging her ears again.

“Do you have a Psychic Pokémon?” Natalia asked, thinking of Amy’s Xatu.

“I do, actually,” Logan said, her hand drifting hesitantly to her belt.

“That makes this easier. Does it know Psychic?” Logan nodded. “Okay. I’ll walk you through this...if you’d like.” Logan still seemed unsure. “I want to help,” Natalia insisted.

“I guess I just don’t know why,” Logan countered.

“Do you question everyone’s actions this much?”

“No, you’re special,” Logan said.

“Thank you,” Natalia said softly, bruised by the coldness of her words. “Look, I understand you think I’m still going to hurt Alec somehow. That I have some big master plan. But...I’m asking you to just let me help you with Gurdurr. If anything else, it helps pass the time.” Don’t get in too deep, Natalia, she warned herself.

Logan sighed, a deep, cleansing release, as if expelling a great amount of toxic air. “Alright. Let’s do this.” She released her Kirlia and Gurdurr, crossing her arms. “Work your magic.”

Natalia shivered. Gabriel had said these exact words to her not a week ago in reference to Alec.

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-1998-

“I’m sure you’ve all noticed the empty seat in our circle,” Lance said, continuing his long strides around the room; although since becoming Champion he had adopted Theon’s ‘round table’ practice, he had gone a step further, gathering the council around a physical table. He had yet to sort out exactly where he himself was placed among the ranks, however, as his former spot in the circle was now occupied by Karen, who had been promoted from Gym Leader to Elite Four recently. Ecruteak had turned from Dark-type to Ghost in the transfer, and the new gym leader (Morty) was now lounging comfortably in the Ecruteak chair.

“Where’s Giovanni?” Willow asked, concerned. J.T. glanced around; indeed, the Viridian seat was unoccupied.

“Is he running late again?” Flint asked, shaking his head disapprovingly.

“That’s not the issue,” Lance said, and it was clear this worried him - sweat was glistening on his large forehead. “I’m afraid Giovanni has left the council...for good.”

J.T. frowned. “What are you talking about?” he asked, exchanging a worried look with Will, who was sitting next to him at the east point of the circle.

“We have on good word from Koga that Giovanni is the mastermind head of a criminal empire.” There was a ripple of heads turning and worried whispers from the council as all bodies turned to look to the Fuchsia City Gym Leader.

Koga crossed his arms, his stern expression unchanging. “I have eyes and ears in many places, as most of you know,” he said, his low voice barely raised but every word landing in the tense silence, all eyes glued on him. “Giovanni never kept it a secret he enjoyed power, and after our discovery he was smuggling goods from Silph last year, this shouldn’t come as a surprise. Word is, he’s headed a group of peons calling themselves “Team Rocket”. An insider told me he is conspiring to capture your experiment, Blaine.” In unison, the group looked a Blaine, whose eyes widened in shock.

“Mewtwo? But it’s not amenable for training, we tried -”

“And now Giovanni will try again. This Team Rocket could be a real threat to us, and I think Theon would want -”

“Well Theon’s not here,” Lance said sharply.

Koga stopped himself, lowering his eyes to his fishnetted hands. “Apologies, Lance, sir.”

Will leaned in towards J.T. “I think Lance is in over his head, here,” he whispered. J.T. nodded, watching the Champion warily.

“In happier news, we have a newcomer to the council,” Claire said brightly, her intent of distraction clear.

“Oh, yes, how rude of me. You’re all, I’m sure, familiar with Brock, Flint’s oldest son,” Lance said, mopping his forehead with the corner of his black cape.

“Now hold on,” Emerson said, frowning.

“Yes, let’s continue talking doomsday,” Claire said dryly. Pryce seemed quite delighted at the prospect. “Welcome to the council, Brock, dear.”

“Thanks,” Brock said, smiling at the older woman. “I think you all know by now Dad and I will be sharing Gym Leader duties, so that Dad has time to get to know his other children,” he continued.

“How many is that, now?” Chuck boomed jocularly.

“Brock is the first of twelve,” Flint announced proudly, “with number thirteen on the way. Cheaper by the baker’s dozen,” he said, grinning.

“Now that’s how you raise a family,” Chuck said.

“Preston, you’re married to Carrie for what, three years now?” Emerson asked, peering over his small spectacles at J.T.

“Just about,” J.T. said, feeling the question coming already.

“When are you two going to get started?” Emerson asked.

“We...we don’t know,” J.T. said, his stomach lurching unhappily at the subject. It had been asked so many times, and always the same answer had to be given.

“You’d be a wonderful father, Preston,” Willow said kindly. Claire, Sabrina, and Erika voiced their support for this statement.

“Maybe one day,” he said, smiling a smile that did not reach his eyes. He raised his eyebrows, shaking his head. “I don’t know,” he said again.

“Team Rocket,” Pryce said, attempting to steer the conversation back into matters that interested him.

“Yes, yes,” Lance said, his posture going rigid as he began pacing again.

“Why don’t we take an interim?” Will suggested gently. This was met with much enthusiasm.

“Let’s do that,” Lance said, clearly relieved. “We’ll meet back here in ten minutes.”
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
And Part Two...since one post apparently was too long.

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-2009-

“Break’s over, everyone,” Will said, poking his head into the recess chamber outside the Radio Tower’s conference room. He smiled and withdrew, allowing Pryce to wheel by in his chair.

“So, I am allowed to keep the Rainbow Wing, right?” Alec said once more as he and Preston began their way back into the meeting room.

“The council voted on it, thirteen to ten, you saw,” Preston repeated, smiling at Alec. “You can keep it. On the one condition -”

“No, I’m not sharing it with the members of the group for ‘safety’,” Alec said stubbornly.

“We’ll talk about it,” Preston said bracingly, settling down at his place near the head of the table. He looked around at the council still milling about; Chase and Nikki were chatting amiably, Claire kindly asking Alec about his Pokémon. The older man leaned toward the head of the table, where Will was frowning over a chapter of Mind Over Matter. “It’s really worth a read,” Preston said.

“Hm? What?” Will asked, marking his spot and looking up.

“The book I was talking about earlier. The Lord of the Rings. It’s a carry-over from the NeoEarth Renaissance.” Right before the Purge, a group of culturists from their side acquired a large amount of literature, art, and film from NeoEarth, so that they might learn how the other half lived. “The mythology alone is worth the time. I would have the book club read it, but seeing as it collapsed after the war -”

“We’ll talk about this later, Joe,” Will said, watching Misty and Brock take their seats and clearing his throat. “And we’re back!” he said brightly, giving Preston an apologetic look before turning his attention to the council. “Now we really have to address the actual reason we’ve convened today. Important as the Rainbow Wing issue was, the bigger problem is actually gaining momentum in Kanto. Janine?” He turned to Koga’s daughter, sitting and gesturing to her.

The girl shared Koga’s strong features; she was dressed in similar attire as her father, a loose-fitting full body suit with a hood pulled over her head. She stood, surveying the room. “Some of you may recall a time before the war with NeoEarth when one of the most prominent criminals in Kanto was a boy named Otenchi. He used the moniker ‘Blade’ often.” Chase and Nikki gasped, as did most of the leaders from Kanto. “He was presumed dead, killed by Ho-oh’s flames during the Purge, as he was absolutely silent after the war.”

“Isn’t that what happened?” Chase asked, his eyes wide.

“Unfortunately not. Much to my surprise, yesterday I was paid a visit at the Fuchsia Gym by a tall bald man with three scars across his face. Otenchi was radically changed by Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire, given the same physical disfiguration I was gifted.” She lowered the hood, revealing a bald scalp shining with angry red burns and welts. Alec winced; the burns looked identical to Natalia’s. “He and I had mixed in some criminal operations in his early days...most of you know my criminal record. He returned to Fuchsia, no doubt hoping he had re-found an ally in me now that we looked the same.”

“He’s alive?” Nikki asked, horrified.

Janine nodded. “And full of even more anger than before. He has joined forces with Domino, a surviving admin from the days of Team Rocket.”

“Rocket...I haven’t heard that name in a decade,” Preston said quietly.

“They’re recruiting, rather successfully, for a massive-scale project. What their ultimate goal is...I can’t say. But when I refused to join, he flared up in anger. He cut me,” she said, her hands touching her abdomen unconsciously. “He said nothing of their plans. He simply told me to fear for the citizens of Kanto.”

“That sounds like him,” Chase said grimly.

“I pose this question,” Will said, standing. “As Champion, it’s my absolute duty to look into this. Who will come with me in this investigation? Who will come with me to Kanto to drive Otenchi and Domino back, before it’s too late?”

Preston stood immediately; it took him a moment to realize Alec had, too. “What about Gabriel,” he said firmly. Alec clearly had the same question.

“Joe, Gabriel...really hasn’t done anything, in a while,” Bruno said, looking over Koga’s head at Preston. “Team Rocket coming back...now that is ominous.”

“But Team Skye is here! They’ve been back!” Preston said, incredulous.

“Rocket’s more dangerous,” Surge grunted.

“Joe, I would never dream of leaving Johto unprotected,” Will said evenly. “Why do you think you’re here?”

“What?” Preston asked blankly.

“You want Preston to take your place here,” Alec said, connecting the dots first.

Will nodded. “A temporary Champion title. Head of police force, etcetera. I wouldn’t trust anyone else as much as you to keep Johto safe,” he said to his old friend.

“That’s a great idea,” Morty said.

“It really is. Come on, Joe!” Claire agreed.

“My dad would be so pissed right now,” Falkner said, grinning; Emerson had never been good at hiding his animosity towards Preston.

“Look...Will, I can’t. I can’t do what you do! I don’t know how to make life or death decisions, I lead with what feels right, not what is right! I’m not a leader,” Preston said.

“I know, I know, you’re a ‘healer’,” Will said, rolling his eyes at his friend’s own words. “Kanto needs me right now, Joe. And Johto...I think Johto needs you.”

Preston looked at Alec. The boy seemed as unconvinced by Will’s words as he was.

“You’ve done it before,” Jasmine said.

“That was gym leader duties. Being in Will’s position...having everyone’s well-being in my hands!”

“I think he’s being selfish,” Pryce whispered to Blaine; everybody heard him.

“I’ll do it,” Morty said. Preston looked at his friend, surprised; Morty was normally very passive in situations like this. “If you’re going to be so stubborn, Joe, I’ll do it. It can’t be too tough, right? Plus, chances are if Gabriel attacks anywhere, it’ll be in my city. Ho-oh, the Tin Tower? Yeah, I’ll do it.”

Will looked hesitant. “Hm…”

“Why do we even need this? Aren’t you just going to pop over to Kanto real quick and do what you’ve always done?” Chase asked.

Will looked at Janine. The girl swallowed, shaking her head slightly. “I guess Janine doesn’t want to tell you the part she conveniently left out.” Will pulled off his horn-rimmed glasses, polishing them delicately.

“Will…” Lorelei said, looking unnerved by the leader’s hesitance.

“Apparently, Domino has learned how to control Mewtwo.”

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“I sometimes worry that everyone hates the person I’ve become,” Logan said. Kirlia’s eyes glowed a bright turquoise, penetrating directly into her trainer’s mind, scanning it. Natalia had taught the trust method verbatim from Amy’s lesson: tell a truth, have a Pokémon scan your brain, and confirm it was honest. A back and forth for even half an hour went a long way in softening a Pokémon towards its trainer. Indeed, Gurdurr did seem warmer towards Logan, even after only ten minutes.

“I know that feeling,” Natalia said softly.

Logan looked at her, having forgotten the older girl was there. “Kirlia is basically acting as a lie detector,” she said slowly.

“Exactly,” Natalia said, nodding.

“Tell me a truth,” Logan demanded, turning Kirlia on Natalia.

The ruby-haired girl froze; she had not expected this. “I don’t think that’s necessary,” she said hastily.

“Yes, I think it is,” Logan said. “You want me to trust you? You gave me the system. I’m just using it. Tell me the truth. Kirlia will know.” Natalia stared, folding her hands together protectively. “Do you really want to help Alec?”

“Yes!” Natalia said emphatically. Kirlia moved the pink protrusions on her mint-green helmet, her eyes glowing again. The Pokémon nodded. Truth.

“Do you really hate Gabriel?”

“Yes,” Natalia said, venom in her voice. Truth.

Logan narrowed her eyes. “Did you say something to Chase to turn him against me?”

“Never!” Natalia said. Truth. “Look, I don’t like interrogation. Please? Gabriel did this to me. A lot. Can we at least take turns, or something?”

Logan tapped her foot, arms crossed. “Fine. But I’m going to keep asking you blunt questions.”

“Fair. Okay. Who was Tracey?”

Logan frowned. “Why does it matter so much to you? Tracey was...my other half.” Truth. “Are your burns from Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire?”

Natalia automatically touched her face, torn. “Yes,” she admitted finally. Truth. “Would you die for Tracey?”

“He did for me. So...yes. Arceus’ Plates, why are you asking me this? That’s my question.”

Natalia opened her mouth.

Logan’s Poké Gear rang. She pulled it out, looking down at the glossy new screen. “We aren’t done,” she said to Natalia, hitting the answer button. “Hello?” she said, turning the video chat on. Chase’s face appeared.

“Hey. We’re done,” he said, not looking her quite in the eye.

“Oh. Okay, cool. Meet us in the National Park?”

“Done,” Chase’s voice said behind her. He, Alec, Preston, Morty, Will, and Will’s Espeon were standing behind the girls, apparently having just teleported.

“Hi,” Logan said breathlessly, closing her Poké Gear. Gurdurr raised his steel beam in defense. “No, no, Gurdurr, it’s okay. These people are friends,” Logan told her Pokémon. Reluctantly, the red-nosed creature lowered his weapon.

“Since when does your Gurdurr listen to you?” Chase asked, surprised.

“Well...um, she helped,” Logan said, pointing reluctantly to Natalia, who had backed away slightly, afraid of the verdict the council had reached about her.

“Do you need to interrogate me?” the girl asked Will.

Preston shook his head. “Radio silence, remember?” he said, smiling.

“I really need to leave as soon as possible, Joe,” Will said hastily. “Not to rush you or anything, but...do you know what you’re doing yet?”

“Yeah, what are we doing?” Alec asked. “We don’t really need to go to Mahogany Town anymore.”

“But you are staying with us,” Preston said strictly. “That Wing only stays with you if you agree to keeping us as your guard.” Alec nodded glumly.

“Don’t look so thrilled,” Logan said. Chase snorted; the two locked eyes for a brief moment. Chase looked away.

“Natalia, however, is free to go,” Preston said kindly to the Team Skye member.

Natalia seemed at a complete loss. “Go where?” she asked, genuinely unsure.

Preston frowned. “Well...that’s up to you, isn’t it?” he said, scratching his stubbled gray cheek. “You must have someone to go to.” Natalia was silent.

“You could always come with us,” Chase offered.

“Yes, but come where?” Logan asked, pointing out the lack of decision made on that front.

“Morty, sir...could I challenge you to a gym battle?” Alec asked. “At the Ecruteak gym, right?” Natalia’s head snapped up quickly at this.

“Of course,” Morty said, pleased at the challenge. “Come to my humble abode,” he said, his smooth voice playful. Alec laughed, his fists clenching in excitement.

“Okay. That’s all sorted out. Good. Do you need me to take you guys?” Will asked, his need for action infectious.

“If you wouldn’t mind?” Preston asked.

“Why can’t Kirlia take us?” Morty asked, indicating Logan’s small humanoid Pokémon.

“She doesn’t know Teleport,” Logan said immediately, used to the question.

“Ah, yes,” Morty said.

“Let’s go, then!” Will said, putting a hand on Espeon’s head. Preston, Morty, Alec, Chase, and Logan gathered around Espeon, Logan hastily returning Gurdurr and Kirlia to their Poké Balls.

“Are you coming, Natalia?” Chase asked. Logan shot him a searching look.

“I don’t know…” Natalia said, pulling at her long red hair.

“Come with us, Natalia,” Preston said, extending a hand. “It would be our pleasure.”

Natalia felt tears before squeezing her eyes shut, stepping into the circle around Espeon.

“Ecruteak City,” Will reiterated to his Pokémon.

Preston took Natalia’s hand, squeezing it tight, smiling reassuringly at her. “You can trust me,” he said gently.

It’s not you I’m worried about, Natalia thought.

Espeon let out a shrill mew, glowing a pale scarlet and enveloping everyone, so that suddenly the only noise in the National Park was the hum of a passing Yanma.

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Knightfall

Blazing Wordsmith
Well, I came into this story not knowing what to expect. I had seen this story on the forums for some time, yet I never was intrigued enough to read it until now. And my, my, what a story it is.

I’ll begin with a compilation of my thoughts of the story so far and then move on to a review of your latest chapter.

The story is great so far. Alec, as a main character, is well-rounded. He’s the hero in possession of an artifact that can help control Ho-oh, and he treats that fact with the respect it deserves. He knows that he’s likely to be in danger because of it. However, he has his drawbacks as well. He’s stubborn, often over-confident, and he’s still a kid for the most part. He has a ways to mature, but, these qualities, in my opinion, only add to the realism of the character.

Anyways, while I do like the way you choose to start out the story --a fast-paced action sequence in Olivine City. You do a good job at introducing the characters and the general conflicts, however, this leads into one issue I had with this story.

You are in a rare position to have a story that is one in a series, and naturally, the events and characters of the prior stories make an impact in this one. However, I have not read the stories that came before this, so that left me somewhat confused to see the terms “NeoEarth” and expecting me to know who Tracy was and the events around him right off the bat. I admit, I had a difficult time getting through those parts because I had little context to go on. That also extends to Team Skye and their purpose originally.

But! This is where your writing skills come into save the day. Over the course of a few chapters, I pieced together the general background info and was able to make sense of most of it. While I am still fuzzy on the exact reason why that whole conflict between NeoEarth and the Pokémon Earth took place, I now know enough to understand the scenes. Team Skye was a bit easier to figure out as their goals and backstory are plentiful in the text.

I do like how you format your chapters. Jumping back to the past multiple times a chapter was at first a bit frustrating to me as I didn’t know who these people were, but I grew to like them. The scenes going through the experiences that lead to Tracy’s death, Preston’s wife and their marriage and her eventual torture, and Natalie’s past and Ho-oh’s purge by fire are very well done and are sequenced in at the right moments. While some might tell you that having too many scenes per chapter creates for an unfocused atmosphere, you manage to keep the story’s focus.

So, moving onto the actual plot so far. Granted, I’ve not read many Trainer stories, but I know that the formula of giving a main character an artifact of power somehow, be it family heirloom (See Frodo from Lord of the Rings and of course, Alec) or finding it by chance (See, partner Pokémon from Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky, and countless other heroes who find stuff) is one that’s tried and true. While it can easily be seen as cliché, you make it work well with Alec (And trust me, I’m a similar offender with my character. xD)

Basically, we have Team Skye, lead by the mysterious Gabriel, wanting to control Ho-oh. I assume their final goal is world/region domination of some sort, right? I don’t remember if they made their final intentions clear or not. The only way to control the god-like legendary bird is to possess the Rainbow Wing, which young Alec has because it’s a family heirloom. When said Team tries to ambush him at Olivine, they fail and Alec is assigned guardians while Skye’s tactics get more brutal and clever. At least, that’s how I see the basic plot outline so far. And, it’s good. Add in all the interesting characters and a healthy dose of background info for each and you’ve got yourself a promising story.

The chapters are well written and you know when to include the action when there’s been an ample amount of character development and dialogue. That’s one thing I really enjoy about this story: you always keep the plot moving in some way. Even though, technically, the characters haven’t ventured that far from Olivine (They got to the caves and then they spent a few chapters in there before getting rescued.) So, I suspect there’s still a lot more to this story than what I’ve seen so far. My opinion on the story so far is that I quite enjoy it.

Especially with the most recent developments in Chapter 15. So, let’s get rolling with that.

First off, I am pleased you opened with Alec’s thoughts. It’s good that you explored his confused thoughts a bit and sheds a bit more light on him. And then there’s Preston and Alec’s conversation. I’ve failed to mention so far how much I enjoy Preston as a character. You make his dialogue and behavior very organic. He fits the “older mentor” type perfectly, and even then he has very human flaws and tragic memories.

Now, I have my own theories on how the conflict with Natalia being in the group is going to go, but I’ll remain silent for now. I will say that you’ve done a great job in fleshing her character out to the point where I am not certain where her loyalty is cast. Between her and Preston, I’m not sure which character I enjoy reading more. Both of their pasts are equally emotional and you do an excellent job in making their current actions and personalities reflect their development.

Moving on. While I said I enjoyed the flashbacks of Preston’s past, I am really intrigued in how you display the League government. Seemingly every story has a different take on how the Pokémon League runs the region and how much power they have, and I like how you display yours. Despite how close Kanto and Johto are, I’ve never seen them (or their government) act so unified as you have them here. So yes, even though the council scenes weren’t all that exciting, I was genuinely intrigued in how their political system worked. It’s just my opinion and I am weird in that way in looking into what seems like background information, but it helps build the world in my eyes.

Perhaps it’s because I haven’t read the previous installments, but Chase and Logan are the two least compelling characters for me. Granted, you flesh them out and develop them just as well as the others. Preston, Alec, and Natalie all seem to be made for this story. Their stories are fresh and while a lot are told in flashbacks, they contribute to the current action. However, Chase and Logan’s pasts, when they come up, are all about Tracy and the conflicts that happened in the past installments. That isolated me a bit from them, unfortunately. So, while I think they’re sound characters, I do not believe that they are a perfect fit here. It may be just me and my feelings towards them, but anyone who hasn’t read your past works might know what I am talking about here.

So now, the final parts of the chapter. It might be just me, but I feel that the sudden revelation that Team Rocket is apparently revived came out of nowhere. You don’t seem to build it up at all, unlike Team Skye. While the apparent threat of Mewtwo being controlled by one of their former admins is intriguing, I can’t help but feel that it was hastily put in. Perhaps if you had foreshadowed them more during the story I could see it as a valid and effective plot point. But for now, it just seems really sudden and just an excuse to split the League’s fighting power between two regions (If you did indeed foreshadow it and I’m just being forgetful, then I do apologize for misremembering.)

And, of course, the Lord of the Rings mentions were fun to read. Again, another reason why I enjoy Preston’s character. ^^

A small thing I noticed was that the Pokémon battles/action seemed surprisingly few for a story of this genre. Not that it’s a bad thing, no, not at all. It is actually very nice to see the human characters attempt to solve their own problems with seemingly minimal assistance from their partners. I understand that they are often included in scenes, but they seem to take a more passive role than straight out battling at every turn., which is nice to see. You’re exploring their uses beyond just that for battling (Alec’s Pupitar’s tunnelling, and Logan’s Kirlia’s powers being used to aid her and Natalie in getting to know each other better).

Well, it’s time for my final thoughts. Once again, I will say that I am very glad that I read this story. It takes a refreshingly new look at the first two regions in Pokémon and, in my opinion, gives them a history that I’d love to read more into. The characters, for the most part, are likeable and their human flaws only make them more relatable to the audience. The conflicts, even though not entirely defined yet, are exciting and make for excellent opportunities to develop them even further. Despite my earlier concerns about not understanding some of the history right off the bat, that is rectified as the narrative moves forward. The story is formatted well and had very few grammatical errors that I noted, and none that were particularly distracting.

I believe that about sums it up. A great story with a promising future. And I do plan on reading more (even if I might not always leave a review *sweatdrop*), you can count on that. Keep up the impressive work, Bulba! Any writer who can continue a fanfiction story-arc ten years after they first posted it honestly deserves some sort of award. That sort of dedication is what I wish for.

Knightfall signing off... ;005;
 

Pink Harzard

So majestic
Wow, the group has already problems with team Skye and now the Rockets return? It seems like things are getting more intense.
The use of Kirlia as a lie detector is pretty awesome. I like it.
 

Sidewinder

Ours is the Fury
Chapter 12

he knew the older man only wore the glasses during these regular book club meetings so that he might seem more academic

I'm glad you called on that. You'd be surprised at how many people actually do that lol

Ah, here: ‘And as breath left his lips, he felt his body broken, and one final thought crossed Kieran’s mind: I don’t understand.’ How does that not move you?” Desmond asked, and several others nodded sympathetically, J.T. among them.

That was really funny as well. Like they're nodding just to seem to be part of the group or because they think they're supposed to

its wings draped sadly around its violet body in the corner of the stony recess.

You may want to rephrase that sentence. How can wings be draped sadly? Read kinda odd to me

Logan shouted, “NO!” but not before the woman pulled the trigger. Logan slammed her eyes shut just in time, the last image burned in her brain Preston’s weary face frozen in disbelief. She heard the body hit the ground with a sickening crash.

Nice. Though I fear some miraculous intervention took place. Can't tell where you're going with this. Maybe death? Hmmm

Jesse asked, stroking his grand black mustache and chuckling heartily. He had been hitting J.T. with quips like this all weekend, poking fun at the fact that he had been a bachelor for thirty-five years

I liked that you touched on that bit as well. My groomsmen did the same thing before I got married haha

She looked resplendent,

****ing awesome word usage!

It just doesn’t sit right in our world.”

I felt like the usage of 'our world' was a bit too grand and epic given his panicked state. Might use 'here' instead. Reads better

Preston was lying prone, but she saw no signs of a bullet wound.

Knew it!

“I’m Dr. Hume

Referencing 'Lost' perhaps?

, Electivire, pumped his large meaty fists together and released a cry that was less deafening than the one that had caused the cave-in, although apparently far more lethal. Immediately the wild Pokémon scattered, all thoughts of attack put out of mind in desperation to escape the screeching noise emerging from the big yellow tiger-like form.

Wonderful description for Roar. Very eloquent, I really dug it

Chapter 13

One thing real quick. The breaks between stories which explore other time periods is getting really distracting. I'm struggling to keep up with the characters because its happening too often and too fast without something to trigger the flashbacks. I'm not saying examining the past is a bad thing, its actually a great way to explore character history, motivation, and plot points, but when you're doing it five to six times a chapter, it makes the reader struggle with the actual story (at least it does for me). I realize it's an easy thing to fall into, and I'm sure it might not seem to big to you, but you also know the story a hundred times better than we do, so you can flip thought these time periods and flashbacks with ease. But since we the readers are reading on a chapter by chapter basis with weeks sometimes in between updates, it makes it harder (again, at least for me) to make a real connection with the characters. Dig?

Of course. Like I’d forget that,”

The word being underlined threw me off a bit. You could italicize it and achieve the same effect

Natalia had one foot through the window but she pulled back to look as well. In unison, the gang gasped, swore, and shouted their shock, for the mountain seemed to be igniting.

I actually really love the NeoEarth bits. I guess they're using Napalm? Either way, Cool!

Her face was on fire, she felt the left side melting, twisting, blackening, as if coals were set in it, glowing eternally

I felt like eternally was an odd word choice there

You’re burnt,”

Wow, I love the almost casual disgust he has in his voice there. The paragraphs were she's describing the feeling is also very cleverly done. You did a great job on this

Mahogany Town because he’ll know what to do with my family heirloom?

There's that underlining again. For some reason it just irks me

“Juliet?” he called. “I can’t see!” Everything was red, white, and hot. It was too much for Alec’s thirteen-year-old body.

Very nicely put there as well. When it comes to descriptive feelings and visual points you're really maturing. I like it

“I was done with Team Skye. With Gabriel. All the awful things he’s done, I just...I feel bad for Alec -”

I don't buy that *coughfullofshitcough*

I am looking at you,” he said. “And it’s your move.

The way he did that was really cool. Looking past the obvious while acknowledging it at the same time. Loved it

Her assistant Nikki is prepared to take the Celadon Gym

Random thought...Is Nikki the name of one of the trainers in Celadon Gym, or is it a name you made up?

Chapter 14

One more quick thing before I start the review on this chapter. It has to do with your posting of pictures to give us a visual likeness of the characters. Basically, I feel like your characters would be served a bit better if you stopped doing it altogether. Mainly because when you put a face to a person you've been reading about, it can change them for you. If you just describe the characters a little more fully, readers will be able to form their own picture of what the character looks like. Especially when the pictures you put up are of famous actors, readers unconsciously channel their work into the visualization of the character and make new opinions on the characters based on the picture. For Example, I can't imagine Logan Lerhman doing half the **** that Alec has done lol. Food for thought

Brodie had moaned after regaining consciousness in a pool of his own blood.

Be aware of physiology. I see what you were getting at with that passage but a pool of blood from a person is a alarming amount of blood. Too much blood loss will lead to far worse problems than her just dabbing at his head. He may not have even be concious. Dig?

Gabriel said, no change in his tone, although somehow Brodie felt his blood run cold at the sound of the man’s silky voice.

Awesome sentence, I really liked it

Gabriel, why don’t you ever just talk like a real person?

That made me actually LOL

“Why are you helping us?” Logan asked, her blue eyes scanning the girl suspiciously. Alec took a step closer to her.

Exactly what I was thinking. Logan is quickly becoming my favorite character. Not only is she intelligent, but she seems to almost operate with a sixth sense

Chase said, laughing. His Pokémon exchanged worried glances, ones that were lost on their trainer.

I swear, Chase is probably the most oblivious person I've ever read lol

hampered only by the giant silhouette of a Lugia. Will had arrived.

omg now I'm jacked up

“Logan, of course we don’t want you to forget him. We just want to help you...remember. And appreciate your time with him. And then...ultimately...to let him go.”

I felt for Logan so much there. It really pulled on me emotionally. Wonderfully done

Pupitar looked at him, incredulous; she had not heard a compliment from her trainer for a long time, especially not since her evolution.

I'm still sore at Alec for the way he acted when Larvitar evolved. His reaction was almost personally insulting. Pupitar deserved that little moment. You made me hate him a little less lol

Lugia seemed to sense Alec’s wonder, slowly turning its head and giving him an appraising look, taking a step forward and puffing its chest, letting out a deep, earthy wail that pierced Alec’s heart, making him long to laugh and cry at the same time

Another beautiful sentence. I'm really enjoying these chapters. Nicely done

his young face filled with amazement as the bird lifted off

Your take on Lugia is different from other versions I've read and seen. I've always pictured it as more of a water dragon, like a powerful seahorse capable of flight. Your referring to her as a bird is an interesting take

“I retired, Will. I’m too old for this, I came back for the war, but -”

That seems like too much of an uncharacteristic cop-out for me from Preston. I mean, he's already involved, why would he object?

Chapter 15

“Well, Alec, when we go in there...I know this council. I worked with these people for fifteen years. They will want to influence your decision on what to do with the Rainbow Wing. They’ll want to take it, although Will and I both think, and will defend this, that the Wing is your family heirloom...your birthright. So, when we’re in there...don’t hesitate to defend yourself.”

I was wondering when something like that might happen. It wouldn't surprise me if someone got physical with Alec in order to try and grab it for themselves. Especially since every member of the council will have a different idea of what they want to do with it

Logan looked at the girl’s carefully concealed burns and limp white dress, the cocoa colored eyes full of pain and deceit

So I take it that Logan doesn't like her? haha

although Agatha could likely contest the title.

Haha nice

I liked the meeting of the council bit. It was not only very well written, but you did a good job showing hints of their personalities as well

“Well, ‘Wing’ sounds awfully like ‘ring’, doesn’t it?” Preston looked at Will, expecting the humor to strike his friend as well. “Old Professor Tolkien would get a kick out of this,” he said, his face falling as he realized he was alone in the joke. “Morty, you read Tolkien, right?” he asked. Morty shook his head.

“What are you talking about?” Bruno asked, perplexed.

“Oh, read a book, for Arceus’ sake,” Preston said crossly. He wished Emerson were still alive; since his death, the council had become increasingly pervaded by non-readers. “I’m bringing the book club back when this is all done,” he muttered.

I reread that like four times because it was so damn hilarious lol

“Joseph, what if Gabriel meant for her to join you? What if she’s part of his plan?

Finally some sense! Thank you Morty!

“He doesn’t trust me as his trainer. Despite all my accomplishments, because I never completed a badge quest in Unova, where I caught him, I guess…to him, I’m nothing special.” Logan said the last three words with a certain reluctance

In the games I know high level pokemon wont obey you without the right number of badges, but outright attacking their trainers, that's a lovely little twist

“You’d be a wonderful father, Preston,” Willow said kindly. Claire, Sabrina, and Erika voiced their support for this statement.

This seemed way too off base and random for me. WTF does it matter if he'd make a good father? They have much more important things to worry about. As important as they know this is, I doubt they would waste time on silly compliments when so much is at stake

Part 2

“The book I was talking about earlier. The Lord of the Rings. It’s a carry-over from the NeoEarth Renaissance.” Right before the Purge, a group of culturists from their side acquired a large amount of literature, art, and film from NeoEarth, so that they might learn how the other half lived. “The mythology alone is worth the time. I would have the book club read it, but seeing as it collapsed after the war -”

Lmao I am loving that he won't let this go haha. Very humorous

“Apparently, Domino has learned how to control Mewtwo.

Everyone is ****ed

Arceus’ Plates, why are you asking me this? That’s my question.

Be careful how often you use that particularly profound exclamation. It's a good one, but it seems like you're using it every chance you get

Chase s******ed; the two locked eyes for a brief moment. Chase looked away.

formatting mistake there

Espeon let out a shrill mew, glowing a pale scarlet and enveloping everyone, so that suddenly the only noise in the National Park was the hum of a passing Yanma.

Lovely way to end the chapter
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
The story is great so far. Alec, as a main character, is well-rounded. He’s the hero in possession of an artifact that can help control Ho-oh, and he treats that fact with the respect it deserves. He knows that he’s likely to be in danger because of it. However, he has his drawbacks as well. He’s stubborn, often over-confident, and he’s still a kid for the most part. He has a ways to mature, but, these qualities, in my opinion, only add to the realism of the character.

That's so lovely to hear. I'm glad that as a focal point for the story, you find Alec credible and not too cliche.

You are in a rare position to have a story that is one in a series, and naturally, the events and characters of the prior stories make an impact in this one. However, I have not read the stories that came before this, so that left me somewhat confused to see the terms “NeoEarth” and expecting me to know who Tracy was and the events around him right off the bat. I admit, I had a difficult time getting through those parts because I had little context to go on. That also extends to Team Skye and their purpose originally.

But! This is where your writing skills come into save the day. Over the course of a few chapters, I pieced together the general background info and was able to make sense of most of it. While I am still fuzzy on the exact reason why that whole conflict between NeoEarth and the Pokémon Earth took place, I now know enough to understand the scenes. Team Skye was a bit easier to figure out as their goals and backstory are plentiful in the text.

This is something I was struggling with. By writing in the same continuity as my previous stories, the first few chapters did indeed frontload a ton of information to readers. I'm glad you stuck it out and have become...I guess..oriented? For the rest of ze story.

Basically, we have Team Skye, lead by the mysterious Gabriel, wanting to control Ho-oh. I assume their final goal is world/region domination of some sort, right? I don’t remember if they made their final intentions clear or not.

Ahh, you noticed their clear intention has not been stated yet. I promise you, this is intentional. And it will become clear by Chapter 17.

The chapters are well written and you know when to include the action when there’s been an ample amount of character development and dialogue. That’s one thing I really enjoy about this story: you always keep the plot moving in some way. Even though, technically, the characters haven’t ventured that far from Olivine (They got to the caves and then they spent a few chapters in there before getting rescued.) So, I suspect there’s still a lot more to this story than what I’ve seen so far. My opinion on the story so far is that I quite enjoy it.

Yeah this is a story more driven by motivation and interaction than necessarily physical movement.

I’ve failed to mention so far how much I enjoy Preston as a character. You make his dialogue and behavior very organic. He fits the “older mentor” type perfectly, and even then he has very human flaws and tragic memories.

Thank goodness. Preston is my favorite character to write for. I try not to use the 'older sage' trope so often used in fiction (Dumbledore, Gandalf, Obi-Wan Kenobi, etc.) and sometimes fear that's all people will make of him. Because Preston is a guy with forty-nine years of experience, making him the wisest but also the most weathered man in the story.

Now, I have my own theories on how the conflict with Natalia being in the group is going to go, but I’ll remain silent for now. I will say that you’ve done a great job in fleshing her character out to the point where I am not certain where her loyalty is cast.

Oh, soon you will know. Veeery soon.

Between her and Preston, I’m not sure which character I enjoy reading more. Both of their pasts are equally emotional and you do an excellent job in making their current actions and personalities reflect their development.

If Preston is my favorite, Natalia is the character I am most personally invested in. She's wonderfully easy to write; something about her makes her stories literally just pour out of my (metaphorical) pen. (I actually write with a pencil).

Moving on. While I said I enjoyed the flashbacks of Preston’s past, I am really intrigued in how you display the League government. Seemingly every story has a different take on how the Pokémon League runs the region and how much power they have, and I like how you display yours. Despite how close Kanto and Johto are, I’ve never seen them (or their government) act so unified as you have them here. So yes, even though the council scenes weren’t all that exciting, I was genuinely intrigued in how their political system worked. It’s just my opinion and I am weird in that way in looking into what seems like background information, but it helps build the world in my eyes.

I'm sorry you didn't find the council scenes exciting, per se. While I know the council was an almost purely-expositional sequence, writing this chapter was the geekiest nerd period I think I've ever experienced. To figure out the precise ways the canon characters from the games interact with and protect the world they govern was just such a rush for me. I briefly introduced this council in 'Destined', so the idea has existed in my head for years, but it's certainly expanded and refined itself from those rough days of seventh grade past.

Perhaps it’s because I haven’t read the previous installments, but Chase and Logan are the two least compelling characters for me. Granted, you flesh them out and develop them just as well as the others. Preston, Alec, and Natalie all seem to be made for this story. Their stories are fresh and while a lot are told in flashbacks, they contribute to the current action. However, Chase and Logan’s pasts, when they come up, are all about Tracy and the conflicts that happened in the past installments. That isolated me a bit from them, unfortunately. So, while I think they’re sound characters, I do not believe that they are a perfect fit here. It may be just me and my feelings towards them, but anyone who hasn’t read your past works might know what I am talking about here.

This is something I know I *should* be worried about, but honestly I'm not. The reader should be getting the sense, as one would if one were Alec or Preston or Natalia viewing Chase and Logan (especially Logan), that these are people who have grown tired of the world they live in, almost as if they are living arbitrarily in a world that has passed them by. My hope is that in the coming chapters you begin to sense Chase revitalizing, however.

So now, the final parts of the chapter. It might be just me, but I feel that the sudden revelation that Team Rocket is apparently revived came out of nowhere. You don’t seem to build it up at all, unlike Team Skye. While the apparent threat of Mewtwo being controlled by one of their former admins is intriguing, I can’t help but feel that it was hastily put in. Perhaps if you had foreshadowed them more during the story I could see it as a valid and effective plot point. But for now, it just seems really sudden and just an excuse to split the League’s fighting power between two regions (If you did indeed foreshadow it and I’m just being forgetful, then I do apologize for misremembering.)

Hmm. Perhaps a foreshadowing or two might have gone a long way. A disclaimer: Team Rocket is not important to the story of EAWF. The importance of the group is that they are a potent threat that has risen in Kanto, drawing Will away from Johto. His choice to bring most of his forces to Kanto may prove to be folly in the coming chapters...

And, of course, the Lord of the Rings mentions were fun to read. Again, another reason why I enjoy Preston’s character. ^^

The parallel was just screaming to be drawn.

A small thing I noticed was that the Pokémon battles/action seemed surprisingly few for a story of this genre. Not that it’s a bad thing, no, not at all. It is actually very nice to see the human characters attempt to solve their own problems with seemingly minimal assistance from their partners. I understand that they are often included in scenes, but they seem to take a more passive role than straight out battling at every turn., which is nice to see. You’re exploring their uses beyond just that for battling (Alec’s Pupitar’s tunnelling, and Logan’s Kirlia’s powers being used to aid her and Natalie in getting to know each other better).

This is a group of people not too drawn to battling. This world is one which encourages the trainer's life, but of the main group, only Alec is still super-pumped about using Pokemon as objects for battle (and unfortunately, he is pretty dismal at it >.>). Preston and Chase will battle when it's necessitated, and both are more than competent, but they have other baggage keeping them from being full-fledged battle machines. And Logan...her interest in battling for sport has waned. All members of the group do view Pokemon as very useful friends and companions, though, which is why I am exploring their other uses beyond simply "Pikachu, Thunderbolt!" every third sentence.

I believe that about sums it up. A great story with a promising future. And I do plan on reading more (even if I might not always leave a review *sweatdrop*), you can count on that. Keep up the impressive work, Bulba! Any writer who can continue a fanfiction story-arc ten years after they first posted it honestly deserves some sort of award. That sort of dedication is what I wish for.

And I have no doubt you will continue applying that dedication in coming years :)

Thanks for that wonderfully articulate review, Knightfall!

Wow, the group has already problems with team Skye and now the Rockets return? It seems like things are getting more intense.


You bet!

The use of Kirlia as a lie detector is pretty awesome. I like it.


Kirlia can be pretty awesome.

Thank you so much, Harzard!

Chapter 12

I'm glad you called on that. You'd be surprised at how many people actually do that lol

My cousin is one of the worst offenders :p

That was really funny as well. Like they're nodding just to seem to be part of the group or because they think they're supposed to

False academic-ism? If that's a word?

I liked that you touched on that bit as well. My groomsmen did the same thing before I got married haha

As they did to my older brother. Guys will be guys, I suppose.

Referencing 'Lost' perhaps?

Well, now that it's in the open, a sound-off to all the Lost references made that I can think of so far:

-Emerson is a nod to Michael Emerson, the fantastic Ben Linus
-The character name Ben Locke = Ben Linus/John Locke
-Alec's Juliet is described precisely as Juliet Burke
-There is a character named Desmond and a character named Dr. Hume
-The flashback formula you find so disorienting is a classic trope of Lost

There are lots of others as well, including Chapter 16, which I just finished and will be posting shortly.


Chapter 13

One thing real quick. The breaks between stories which explore other time periods is getting really distracting. I'm struggling to keep up with the characters because its happening too often and too fast without something to trigger the flashbacks. I'm not saying examining the past is a bad thing, its actually a great way to explore character history, motivation, and plot points, but when you're doing it five to six times a chapter, it makes the reader struggle with the actual story (at least it does for me). I realize it's an easy thing to fall into, and I'm sure it might not seem to big to you, but you also know the story a hundred times better than we do, so you can flip thought these time periods and flashbacks with ease. But since we the readers are reading on a chapter by chapter basis with weeks sometimes in between updates, it makes it harder (again, at least for me) to make a real connection with the characters. Dig?

This is so interesting and makes so much sense. At this point of writing, with only approximately three to four chapters left, I can only plead forgiveness and say "It's too broke to fix it now'. The flashbacks, I hope, are becoming a little more...connected? To the main story. This is a piece which is very, very influenced by memories. This will be apparent in the coming chapters.

The word being underlined threw me off a bit. You could italicize it and achieve the same effect

This is something I've actually stopped doing for the past three chapters or so, on your suggestion. Just an odd stylistic thing I never really gave second thought to.

I actually really love the NeoEarth bits. I guess they're using Napalm? Either way, Cool!

Nah, just some good old flames.

Wow, I love the almost casual disgust he has in his voice there. The paragraphs were she's describing the feeling is also very cleverly done. You did a great job on this

Thank you, good sir!

Very nicely put there as well. When it comes to descriptive feelings and visual points you're really maturing. I like it

That's so kind of you :)

I don't buy that *coughfullofshitcough*

You aren't alone.

The way he did that was really cool. Looking past the obvious while acknowledging it at the same time. Loved it

Chase can be pretty tolerant.

Random thought...Is Nikki the name of one of the trainers in Celadon Gym, or is it a name you made up?

Made 'er up. She was a character in 'Destined'

Chapter 14

One more quick thing before I start the review on this chapter. It has to do with your posting of pictures to give us a visual likeness of the characters. Basically, I feel like your characters would be served a bit better if you stopped doing it altogether. Mainly because when you put a face to a person you've been reading about, it can change them for you. If you just describe the characters a little more fully, readers will be able to form their own picture of what the character looks like. Especially when the pictures you put up are of famous actors, readers unconsciously channel their work into the visualization of the character and make new opinions on the characters based on the picture. For Example, I can't imagine Logan Lerhman doing half the **** that Alec has done lol. Food for thought

Hrmm, I completely get that. I think this is an aesthetic thing for me, going to school for theatre, any time we as actors read a piece we are encouraged to think of the characters we are playing as being embodied by other people so we might imitate their movements. So I sub-consciously write these characters with mannerisms of specific people in mind (that being said, I have yet to find any one person who I feel would amply play Natalia correctly.) I will cut that out, though. Apologies!

Be aware of physiology. I see what you were getting at with that passage but a pool of blood from a person is a alarming amount of blood. Too much blood loss will lead to far worse problems than her just dabbing at his head. He may not have even be concious. Dig?

Aaah, true. Is it obvious I am not a scientist? Hahaha

That made me actually LOL

Amy can be quite frank. And Gabriel likes to wax poetic.

Exactly what I was thinking. Logan is quickly becoming my favorite character. Not only is she intelligent, but she seems to almost operate with a sixth sense

Logan is certainly the 'no ********, please' character. I'm so glad you like her. She's a survivor - she's the only character who has existed in my head since 2004 when I first laid my thoughts on 'One of Many'.

I swear, Chase is probably the most oblivious person I've ever read lol

Hey, he was excited!

omg now I'm jacked up

Will tends to have that effect.

I felt for Logan so much there. It really pulled on me emotionally. Wonderfully done

This section was rough for me, so I'm glad the emotional payoff was satisfying for you.

I'm still sore at Alec for the way he acted when Larvitar evolved. His reaction was almost personally insulting. Pupitar deserved that little moment. You made me hate him a little less lol

Well that's good! Alec's got some flaws that he's trying to battle and overcome in a short span of time. He'll get there.

Your take on Lugia is different from other versions I've read and seen. I've always pictured it as more of a water dragon, like a powerful seahorse capable of flight. Your referring to her as a bird is an interesting take

Well, I mean...Lugia and Ho-oh...the Legendary Birds...right? Riiight? (Thinking of the second Pokemon movie, where Lugia was like...king of the Kanto Trio)

That seems like too much of an uncharacteristic cop-out for me from Preston. I mean, he's already involved, why would he object?

Preston ain't no leader. (Except, of course, a gym leader).

Chapter 15

So I take it that Logan doesn't like her? haha

To the max.

I liked the meeting of the council bit. It was not only very well written, but you did a good job showing hints of their personalities as well

The council as a collective is my favorite character.

I reread that like four times because it was so damn hilarious lol

Preston is personally offended by the illiteracy around him. How could he not speak up?

Finally some sense! Thank you Morty!

Morty the Ghost Guy: Speaking sense since 1998. (That's when G/S came out, right?)

In the games I know high level pokemon wont obey you without the right number of badges, but outright attacking their trainers, that's a lovely little twist

It only makes sense, in my head. They go outta control in the games.

This seemed way too off base and random for me. WTF does it matter if he'd make a good father? They have much more important things to worry about. As important as they know this is, I doubt they would waste time on silly compliments when so much is at stake

I wanted to highlight the human tendency to go on tangential topics of lighter value when something heavy happens. I guess it didn't work...>.>

Everyone is ****ed

Basically.

Be careful how often you use that particularly profound exclamation. It's a good one, but it seems like you're using it every chance you get

I use it in place of any time someone would say "Oh my god..." or "Jesus". Guess that reflects how often I use the lord's name in vain...

Thank you for that LONG review, Sidewinder! You da man!
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
Earth, Air, Water, Fire

Chapter Sixteen

-2009-

Teleporting was possibly the most bizarre sensation Alec had ever experienced. If he could have seen his body during the process, it seemed likely it would have more resembled jelly or plasma than flesh and blood; Espeon’s attack seemed to liquify its targets. The only good thing that could be said about the journey, Alec thought, was that it ended quickly and he didn’t vomit.

“I forgot how odd that felt,” Will muttered once the group re-materialized at the Pokémon Center in Ecruteak City. “Now I remember why I prefer flying.” He reached his hand out to help Alec, who had appeared on the soft semi-paved road in a very unflattering pile of limbs. Only Preston and Morty seemed familiar with the post-Teleport sensation, and they in turn were helping Chase, Logan, and Natalia regain their bearings.

“Welcome to Ecruteak!” Morty said once all were properly standing on two feet again, gesturing behind him with great pride in his home city.

“This place is gorgeous,” Logan breathed. Chase nodded, taking in the city’s color palate with relish - in stark opposition to the grand gold-and-silver color scheme that dominated Goldenrod, this city had a rich of-the-earth feel, resplendent with maroons and royal purple. The buildings seemed older, more robust; full of time and memories.

Towering above all other structures were the city’s historical sister towers: The Old Tower and the Tin Tower, the latter much newer and taller. The Old Tower had been re-baptized ‘The Burnt Tower’ when it mysteriously succumbed to Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire during the war; although still standing for the most part, it was off-limits to the city’s occupants until renovation could begin. Builders had been itching to get their hands on the structure for years before the war, but in its advanced state of decay, riddled with wild Pokémon and supposedly haunted, the site’s contractors chose to turn a blind eye to the inferior tower. They looked instead to the Tin Tower, which now boasted in its many tiers the largest shrine to Ho-oh in any region.

Alec viewed the building with contempt; it had been his grandfather and father, a family team who’d completed the Tin Tower’s construction, continuing the Gideon legacy of renown and splendor that Alec was expected to uphold.

“Can you give us a tour of the city?” Chase asked Morty eagerly. Logan nodded in excited agreement.

Preston cleared his throat. “I don’t know if we should waste more of Morty’s time than we have to; he’s just agreed to honorary Champion responsibilities, after all.”

“Oh, I don’t mind,” Morty said, waving Preston off. “Let’s send Will off properly, and then I’ll take you on a personal tour.” He turned to look at his violet-haired friend. “Is there anything you need from me? Or vice-versa? Before you leave.”

Will shook his head after some thought. “All the papers have been signed. The people turn to you only in a time of crisis.” The Champion looked at Preston for a brief moment, disappointment clouding his eyes. “Ah, well. I must be off! Kanto needs me!” The Psychic returned his Espeon to its Poké Ball, instead releasing Lugia. “Teleporting over long distances is dangerous,” he explained. “Plus I hate the sensation,” he repeated, smiling slightly at Alec, who moaned an agreement, and winking at Lugia. “You’re much better at getting me places,” he promised the Pokémon, who merely released a single melancholy note of response.

“You’ll be missed,” Preston said quietly, stepping forward and reaching a hand out for his friend.

“I’ll be rid of those Rockets before you know it,” Will said, taking his friend’s hand and shaking it vigorously. “I’ll have the brunt of the League Council behind me. Plus, I can be pretty awesome,” he said, grinning. Preston pulled him in and embraced his old friend.

“We can always count on Joe to be touchy-feely,” Morty said loudly, smirking at the two men’s prolonged embrace. “I think some other people would like to say goodbye.”

Will laughed and pulled away from Preston. “Is somebody jealous?” he teased, walking to Morty and grabbing his hand, shaking it crisply.

“How could anyone be jealous of you two? It’s only true love,” Morty mocked.

“I might remind you, I am the only one of us who ever married,” Preston said, his gray eyes twinkling in a rare full smile. It seemed to Alec suddenly the men were twenty again, joking and teasing without a care in the world.

Will turned to Chase and Logan, shaking each of their hands. “I leave Chase in your care,” he said solemnly to Logan, who smiled politely at the joke and looked at Chase, who seemed to have stiffened at this jest instead of laughing.

The Champion turned and walked to Alec, proffering his hand. “Keep that Wing safe,” he said gravely, nodding toward Alec’s bag.

“I will, I promise,” the boy said.

Will nodded and leapt nimbly onto Lugia’s long back. “Off we go, then!” he said, his eyes glowing scarlet, synchronizing with the elegant creature. “Call me if there’s a problem,” he said to Morty. His final words were directed at Preston: “I trust you.” And the two were off, climbing into the sky, a perfect pairing of trainer and Pokémon. Champion and deity, they lifted into the endless blue, wind blowing through Will’s long hair, until they were distant specks.

“He never said goodbye to you,” Chase said suddenly, looking at Natalia with pity.

The girl shrugged. “I didn’t expect him to,” she said quietly.

“Right, let’s begin the tour!” Morty said, breaking the slight uneasiness coming from Logan and Alec toward the Team Skye member. “Would anyone like to go inside the Pokémon Center?”

“I think everyone has seen a Pokémon Center at this point,” Preston pointed out. “First-timers to Ecruteak would be more interested in seeing the towers, Morty.”

“I figured as much,” Morty said, turning his gaze to the north and clapping his hands together. “Alright then! To the towers!”

“Wait!” Logan said; everyone looked at her, Morty mid-step. “I want to see if I can find a Technical Machine for Kirlia.” Upon Preston’s questioning look, she clarified: “I want to teach her Teleport; like the feeling or not, it’s pretty damn useful.”

After a slight disappointed pause, Morty recomposed himself. “Alright! To...the Poké Mart!” he announced, turning east and indicating the others should follow.

Although it took twenty minutes, Logan was finally able to barter with the unkind TM salesman at the counter for a reasonable price. The blonde girl walked away in triumph carrying a pale disc labelled “Technical Machine 106: Teleport” in a gem case.

“Are we all set?” Morty asked, looking at his Poké Gear, refreshing the screen and frowning. “We want to get moving before it gets dark,” he said.

“Shouldn’t we get dinner first?” Preston asked. Morty sighed. “We don’t have to!” the older man said. “I just didn’t know how long the tour would take.”

“I’m hungry,” Alec said.

“I could eat,” Logan agreed.

“Alright, fine. To dinner! And then the tour...and battle…” Morty said, clearly unhappy at the current balance of power. “Let’s go to the Kimono Sisters’ Sushi Palace. It’s divine. I’ll pay, my treat,” he said, although he didn’t sound too thrilled at the prospect.

“I’ll pay,” Preston said, seeking to pacify his friend. “For everyone,” he emphasized, looking at Natalia, who was gazing intently at the Tin Tower, a worried expression on her face. “Natalia?”

The ruby-haired girl turned her back on the tower, re-focusing her energy toward the conversation. “I can pay for myself,” she said uncertainly, looking at Preston with her uncomfortably aware gaze, intelligence and instinct mixed together behind the dark cocoa eyes.

“Nonsense. It’s on me,” Preston said kindly. Natalia nodded gratefully.

The group began traveling in a loose formation of three pairs; Morty and Preston leading, Alec and Logan close to them, with Chase and Natalia trailing behind slightly from the rest of the group.

“Preston had a suggestion for a way to keep the Rainbow Wing safe,” Alec said under his breath to Logan, shooting a look back to Chase and Natalia, feeling Natalia’s piercing gaze on him; she appeared deep in conversation with Chase by the time Alec laid eyes on her, however.

“What’s that?” Logan asked gently, pulling the boy’s focus forward again. “I think she’s alright, for now,” the girl said slowly, “At least, she doesn’t want to hurt you. Kirlia confirmed it.”

Alec allowed this information to wash through him; it would take a while to accept that as a truth. “Um...okay...well, Preston wanted me to rotate the Wing around the group? That way, if Gabriel somehow manages to get me, he’ll see I don’t have the Wing and hopefully release me.”

“Or kill you,” Logan said immediately, worried, biting her lower lip.

“Yeah, that could happen too. But...well, I was thinking about what Natalia said, about trusting someone. And...well, I’ve kind of put this idea together...no one does it alone, you know? And, well, I’ve spent my whole life kinda shutting everyone out...maybe, maybe Preston’s idea isn’t so crazy.”

Logan scrutinized his young face uncertainly. “So…”

“So I want you to carry the Wing. At least for a little while,” Alec said, his voice full of determined certainty.

Logan blinked, frowned at Preston’s broad back in front of her, and nodded finally. “Okay...okay. Only as long as you want,” she said, her face set.

“I’ll give it to you later. When she isn’t watching,” Alec said darkly.

“Hey, Alec!” Chase said, his voice unexpectedly close. He and Natalia had closed the distance between the two young pairs. Alec yelped, turning to look at the white-haired young man. “Sorry…” Chase continued, frowning.

“No, no, sorry, you just...came out of nowhere,” Alec said quickly. “What’s up?”

Chase looked at Natalia, who was avoiding Alec’s eyes. “Well, Natalia and I were trying to figure out who Juliet is.”

Alec’s lips parted in surprise. “I...what?”

Chase shook his head, eyebrows raised. “I don’t know. When we teleported, we both heard you calling that name. And I think I’ve heard it before?”

“It’s a pretty common name,” Logan said fairly.

“Juliet was my guardian, for a number of years,” Alec said carefully, eyes on Natalia. “Juliet Mitchell.” The way his mouth formed her name said more than any words could; words could not convey the beauty and grace Juliet had possessed in amazing quantities.

“Like...babysitter?” Chase asked.

“No! ...well, yes. But she was my best friend. And she protected me from...well, a lot. And when I got sent to technical school...she was released.” He paused, unsettled; Natalia’s face was full of pity and...was it hunger? He couldn’t read the carefully made-up face most of the time; Natalia normally kept a careful guard on her expression. “She left me,” he said finally, “and got married to some tall, muscular sleazebag. Actually, no, he was really nice. But I hated him,” Alec admitted.

“Sounds like you really loved her,” Chase teased. Alec remained silent. “And you said you’d never been in love!” Chase said, his suspicions confirmed. “With your babysitter? Interesting.”

“I’ve seen bigger age gaps,” Logan said defensively.

“Me too,” Natalia said; it was the first time she’d spoken and it was with hesitance. Alec noticed her face had regained its careful neutral. “My father remarried twice, each woman progressively younger.”

“We’re here!” Morty said before anyone could respond to Natalia’s sudden offering; the Kimono Girls’ Sushi Palace loomed above them, a magnificent two-floor restaurant with a facade bearing ornately carved Eevee evolutions, the doors flanked by Umbreon and Espeon gargoyles, ears flattened and mouths wide open in mid-hiss.

“It’s been a while since I’ve eaten here,” Preston said, admiring the ancient architecture.

“Let’s go in, shall we?” Morty asked, pulling the door open and beckoning everyone inside. Alec and Logan went first, followed by Preston and then Chase. “Are you coming?” Morty asked to Natalia, who was standing carefully outside the door as if it were electrically charged.

“Yes,” Natalia said quietly, stepping inside and re-integrating with the group.

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-1993-

Natalia was sitting alone again. Lunch hour outside the protection of Ms. Phelps was nearly unbearable; none of her fellow third-year students wanted her near. The girl with the dorky glasses was too smart, too intense, had no sense of fun. This seemed to be everyone’s opinion at The Trainers’ School in Violet City.

“Natalia,” said a voice, exasperation creeping at the edge of the soft tones. Ms. Phelps was carrying a tray back to the teacher’s lounge; the sight of her brightest pupil from fourth block sitting alone usually evoked frustration. “Didn’t I tell you to try and make friends?” she said, stopping across the table from Natalia and trying to appear stern, although her plump cheeks and kindly demeanor did not allow for much intimidation.

“I did try! I was at a table with Alie and Sarah and Kendra, and all they did was make fun of me! Asking about my dad’s weight problems, pretending to be me…” Natalia put her hands in big circles over her eyes and pulled her front teeth over her lip, enhancing the buck-toothed quality. “‘Me, Ms. Phelps! Pick me!’” Tears were forming in the eight-year-old’s eyes, and she pulled at her long red ponytail for comfort.

Ms. Phelps sighed. Her eyes drifted across the crowded cafeteria, searching for a friendly peer that might sit with Natalia. Although the faces were cheerful and bright, none of the children seemed interested in the small ruby-haired girl’s plight. “Alright. Come on, then, bring your lunch with you.”

Natalia’s face lit up; occasionally the blonde woman softened and allowed the girl to have lunch with her in classroom 23D before the rest of fourth block piled in. These private lunches allowed Natalia to connect as she simply couldn’t with her fellow students. “Thank you, Ms. Phelps,” her small voice piped as she stood up, eager to leave the hostile environment.

As was usual, the only light in 23D was the gentle glow provided by the class Ledian, whose alien bug-like body lit up in the dark. Ms. Phelps flipped the light on, indicating Natalia should sit in the comfy chair at the back of the classroom while she made a call. She dialed, waiting through three rings before a voice sounded on the other end. “Hi, honey. Just checking in before the afternoon begins…”

Natalia wandered slowly to the back of the room, not in a straight line, taking in her surroundings (although she had been in 23D nearly every day for the past three months). She stopped at the Ledian, whom the class had named Theon, after the infamous Champion. “Hey, buddy,” she said softly, reaching a small hand out to touch with the Pokémon’s round-tipped leg. Theon crooned happily, shutting his eyes and flaring his spotted red wings.

“Sorry about that,” Ms. Phelps said, hanging up the phone at her desk and moving to join Natalia.

“Who was that on the phone?” Natalia asked, moving aside and allowing Ms. Phelps to feed Theon his special treats the class had prepared as a snack.

That was my boyfriend. We met at book club, we’ve been dating for two years.” Ms. Phelps smiled. “Don’t look so shocked, Natalia.”

That Ms. Phelps had a life outside the school, that she spent time with another person other than her students, had never crossed Natalia’s mind. “Can I meet him?” she asked.

“I’m sure you will, one day. He’s wonderful, really. Joseph loves kids!” A sudden shadow seemed to cross Ms. Phelps’ face. “Anyway. Sit down, Natalia!” she said, again pointing to the cushy blue armchair in the rug-covered play area in the back of the room. The blonde woman took both trays of food and settled them on a desk, pulling a chair around so Natalia could see her properly while they ate.

Natalia carefully clambered onto the comfy chair, allowing her small limbs to splay out casually so her white frilly dress fell limply at her feet. She took her tray from Ms. Phelps carefully, sorting out her peas so they were arranged in height order around the edge. “Alie said I should be transferred. That I’m not supposed to be in our class. I don’t belong,” the girl said, her eyes still focused on her peas.

Ms. Phelps chose her words carefully. “Natalia. You are...very smart. I don’t know if your peers, or even your parents, really understand this. Your father certainly tries. It’s likely you don’t belong in my class, honestly. But...what’s holding you back is your grades. I just can’t recommend you for honors, dear, without at least all B’s.”

Natalia adjusted her glasses so she could see Ms. Phelps properly, swinging her feet anxiously. “I tried really hard last week,” she promised.

“No, I know. I just...I guess I don’t understand? Why don’t you even try to do your work, Natalia? You’ve proved to me how easy it is for you.”

“It’s too easy,” Natalia said instantly, taking a sip of Pecha Juice. “And it’s stupid. I’m not trying to hurt your feelings,” the girl said placatingly, “I just don’t want to do work that doesn’t challenge me.”

“But don’t you see, Natalia,” Ms. Phelps said, frustration creeping back into her voice, “I can’t give you more of a challenge unless you follow the rules.”

“I don’t like rules. They were made up by people who’re all big and important, but not smart people.” Natalia took another sip of her Pecha Juice, picking at her potato salad. She was not being unreasonable, she was simply speaking her mind.

“See, Natalia, it’s this attitude that keeps you from making friends. Sometimes...you have to pretend, just a little, act like you’re more like them than you are.” The woman was trying to catch Natalia’s cocoa-brown eyes with her large blue ones, but Natalia was staring at Theon now.

“Isn’t that lying?” Natalia asked. “Isn’t it wrong, to pretend to be what I’m not?” Her eyes finally met her teacher’s.

Ms. Phelps’ pale cheeks were flushed; she somehow seemed unnerved by the question. “Sometimes I forget you’re eight years old,” the teacher said, her voice small. “Natalia, I want to see you happy. The last thing I want for you is to see you an outcast your whole life.”

The bell rang, signaling the end of lunch period. Natalia’s heart began beating slightly faster. She hated the transition into Reading Class. Alie, Sarah, Kendra, and Justin were all in the class. The girl locked eyes with Ms. Phelps. “Can I hide?” she asked quietly.

“No, Natalia. But you have permission to go to the bathroom,” Ms. Phelps said, smiling and handing her the hall pass. The common excuse to hide Natalia’s special lunches with Ms. Phelps was that she’d been in the bathroom for the first three minutes of class.

Natalia took the pass, sniffling. “Thank you for loving me,” she said, throwing her tiny body around Ms. Phelps’ short, curvy waist.

Ms. Phelps took the girl’s ruby-haired head in her hands, bending over and kissing her forehead. “Go to the bathroom,” she said, smiling gently.

Natalia bolted, running so that her feet nearly collided with one another, frantic to beat the crowd of students. SMACK. Her sneaker caught on the leg of a chair, catching the girl by surprise. Her eyes widened, her hands flying out to cushion the inevitable collision with the ground.

“Natalia!” Ms. Phelps shrieked, hurrying over to help the girl up.

Natalia had scraped her hands on the rough carpet, scarlet blood blossoming slowly over her olive skin. Her glasses had broken; her eyes were open in terror. The sound of small footsteps pounded down the hall, echoing across the lockers and drifting in through the open door.

“They’re going to see me!” Natalia cried, panicking, her small chest heaving. She did not move from the floor.

“I’ll keep them outside,” Ms. Phelps promised, handing Natalia some towels from the sink. “They won’t be allowed in until you feel safe.” I’ll never feel safe from them, Natalia realized.

Kendra’s words hit her ears unpleasantly as the girl shouted from the doorway: “Eww, look at Natalia. She’s all covered in blood!” Several more jeers sounded and Natalia’s head shot up, her expression one of pure humiliation.

“Teacher’s pet! She’s eating lunch with Ms. Phelps!” Justin cried incredulously to the excited children behind him.

Natalia was mortified. Blood dripped all over her white dress, but her hands did not hurt nearly as much as the laughter stinging at her ears. She sat up; her glasses hung uselessly off her left ear, and her face was coated in tears. Ms. Phelps was at the door, reprimanding her students, pushing them into the hallway. One face stood out from the rest; Shawn, the boy who sat behind her and sometimes cracked jokes during class. He was the only one not laughing.

Ms. Phelps slammed the door on Justin and Alie, turning to Natalia, a look of sincerest apology on her face. “I’m so sorry, Natalia.”

“What’s wrong with me?” the girl asked softly. What have I done wrong?

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-2009-

After dinner proved to be a success, Morty finally gave his tour of the city, although (as he noted several times) it was rather rushed. The tour ended, as most official guided tours did in Ecruteak, with the Tin Tower. “Forty-five stories,” he said, craning his neck to look up to the very top of the glossy bronze building. “Despite the name, she’s built with nearly all steel and solid as a Skarmory. Isn’t that right, Alec?”

Alec nodded; he did not seem keen to linger on his father’s pride and joy.

“Forty-five floors…” Preston mused, also glancing up. “I couldn’t do it. Heights aren’t my favorite.”

“Not even to see the shrine?” Morty asked.

Preston shook his head, chuckling. “No, thanks.”

“I’ve seen enough shrines for a lifetime,” Logan said; Chase nodded in agreement.

“Can we see the gym?” Natalia asked. She, too, seemed uncomfortable in the presence of the tower.

Morty blinked, a little disappointed. “Of...yes, of course. Come on, then, let’s go,” he said, turning away from the magnificent tower and leading the group toward the Ecruteak gym.

“Why don’t you like the tower?” Chase asked Natalia as they fell into stride behind Alec and Logan.

Natalia looked at Chase, holding her breath, unsure of whether she would tell another compulsory lie or not. “It’s...well, it’s a shrine to Ho-oh. I’m not exactly the biggest fan,” she said. Well, you aren’t lying, she reasoned objectively.

Chase’s eyes drifted over the left side of her face. “So, why haven’t you...I dunno, gotten surgery done? I’m sure there are ways to repair the burn.”

“No,” Natalia said immediately. “Ho-oh’s Sacred Fire is forever. And besides...Ho-oh marked me for what I am. An other. An outcast. I’m fine with it.”

“Well then, so am I,” Chase said, the corners of his mouth upturning, producing a dimple on the right side of his face Natalia found comforting. His face suddenly went blank, then darkened, a brooding look taking over.

“What’s wrong?” Natalia asked.

“In the meeting, somebody said...you were in jail, twice.” Chase did not elaborate, looking expectantly at the Team Skye member for an explanation.

Natalia began laughing, which was the last response the young man had expected; Logan turned back to frown at the two, confused at Natalia’s sudden outburst. “That’s what you find disturbing? Oh, Chase,” she said, almost pityingly, “You have the most screwed-up moral compass. None of you ask the right questions,” she continued, uncomfortably aware she was echoing a favorite saying of Gabriel’s. “Yes, I’ve been to jail twice. I was a member of Team Skye for about...five years, I think? It’s a miracle it’s only been twice. August’s been arrested, I think, eleven times now.” She stopped smiling at the look on Chase’s face. “Look, I’m not saying it’s something I’m proud of. But...honestly, the crimes I was arrested for...were really petty.” Not nearly the worst of my sins.

Chase seemed to be having trouble digesting this worldview. “Look, I’m not judging, I promise. I’ve actually been in jail once. Briefly! I was framed! But...wow.” He shook his head, eyebrows knitted together.

Natalia’s face softened. “What?” she asked quietly.

“You’ve been through a lot,” Chase said, reaching out a hand for hers. She pulled back instinctively, which Chase seemed to expect. He extended only his left pinky finger, nodding toward it, looking her in the eyes. “Trust me,” he said.

Natalia reached out, her hand quivering slightly. Their pinkies met, intertwining tenderly, and Chase smiled. The two swung their locked-together hands and continued walking, Natalia’s heart pounding in an odd combination of thrill and fear, excitement and loathing.

Alec saw Preston’s eyes on his, checking that the Wing was securely tucked away in the boy’s bag, and felt a smile cross his face. It’s safe, he thought, but not with me. He had secretly handed the Wing off to Logan in the restaurant, under the table and hidden from the older man’s searching gray eyes.

“Do you feel ready for your second-ever gym battle?” Preston asked, pulling back so Morty was leading the group alone, joining instead with Logan and Alec.

Alec shook his head up, down, left, and right. “I...really don’t know,” he confessed, causing Preston to smile gently.

“You know Morty specializes in Ghost-types, right?” Logan asked, as if to prod some great discovery from Alec.

“Yes, I wasn’t born yesterday,” Alec said crossly, “and you know I only have three Pokémon to choose from, none of which have the advantage enough to fight Ghosts?” he retorted; he was starting to get cold feet about the challenge.

“Play to your Pokémon’s strengths,” Preston said encouragingly. “Does Machop know Foresight?”

“No…” Alec said; all of his Pokémon were only taught moves that directly influenced damaging an opponent - even Magby’s Smokescreen seemed more useful than an attack that only even affected Ghost-types.

“Okay, well, you probably don’t want to use him,” Preston reasoned.

Morty cleared his throat. “We’ve arrived,” he said, his silky voice full of anticipation.

The Ecruteak Gym was nowhere near the ornate constructions Alec had seen housing the Goldenrod and Olivine gyms, or even the Mahogany Gym in his hometown. This structure was low, only one floor - and barely a floor, at that. It was a mainly wooden structure, delicate wooden slats supporting long white-and-beige flats of plywood. Around the simple, solid doorway were carved calligraphic symbols and phrases in ancient languages Alec could not speak, although he assumed they were describing the qualities of the crudely-drawn ghosts spaced across the door.

“You know, I haven’t seen your gym in five years,” Preston said, his gray eyes wandering over the inscriptions. “I see you worked in a Stephens quote,” he muttered appreciatively, squinting and leaning in to look at a longer string of letters.

“Only for those who know,” Morty said softly, smiling secretively at his friend. “Shall we go in?”

“The deal is I get to challenge you after Alec, right?” Chase asked for clarification as the group passed through the doors into the markedly colder interior.

“Of course. If time permits,” Morty said carefully. They passed through the anteroom into the main chamber, which was completely devoid of light save small flames that burned a pale blue intermittently through the engulfing cold blackness. Alec couldn’t see anything, only sense Logan’s warm body next to his, their shivering hands gripping tightly to one another.

“Is this necessary, Morty?” Preston asked loudly, his voice echoing strangely through the cavern-like room. “All the theatrics?”

“I suppose you’re right. Shut it off, Tom!” Morty said, his normally quiet voice amplified in the odd acoustics of the room. Suddenly, with a great click, the room was lit quite plainly by overhead lights, revealing a near-empty, violet papered room with torches spread evenly around the space. In the very center was a spiral staircase. “I normally make this part of the challenge, that an opponent has to work his way through the dark to find me. Only once he has struggled can one make the descent,” he said, indicating the hole in the floor leading downward.

“There’s a reason Olivine’s gym is consistently rated higher than yours,” Preston said so only Alec and Logan could hear; Logan giggled. Chase and Natalia had barely entered the room, and much like Alec and Logan, they appeared to be comforting one another, though why by entwined pinky fingers was beyond Alec’s comprehension.

“Favored guests, shall we descend to the spirit world?” Morty asked, grinning.

“Oh, shut up,” Preston said, although he, too, was smiling.

The spiral staircase led down to a single black door. Under the scare room Morty had devised was a simple, small, enclosed space, full of mist and also only lit by torches. A field was sketched in dark chalk on the white floor, a subversion from most battlefields. Across the room was one door. “This place is creepy,” Logan said, her teeth chattering from the cold.

“Remind me why you love Ghost Pokémon so much, Morty?” Preston asked, pulling his jacket tighter.

“They’re a connection to those we’ve lost,” Morty said simply. He crossed to the far side of the battlefield, opening a keypad on the wall beside the only other exit. “Okay, Alec.Your information, please? Name, Hometown, Pokémon you will be using.”

“Uhm...okay. Alec Gideon, Mahogany Town...Pupitar.”

Morty punched some keys very fast; a screen on the wall above him lit up, displaying Alec’s name and hometown. “Two Pokémon minimum. And do you have a middle name?” he asked, his tone rehearsed.

“Magby will be my second. And...yeah. No! No middle name,” Alec said; he hated that his father’s name was a legal part of his and refused to mention it unless it was necessary.

Morty punched a few more keys, a Pupitar and a Magby icon appearing next to two Poké Balls along with health bars indicating their stamina, currently on full. “Let’s get started, shall we?” Morty said, clapping his hands together.

“Let’s sit over here,” Preston said to Logan, indicating to a single bench Natalia and Chase had already settled onto.

“You’ll be great,” Logan whispered encouragingly to Alec, who nodded.

Preston put a hand on his shoulder. “You can do this. Just remember Ghost Pokémon, and Morty’s battle style, are all about stealth and tact. Very unlike yours,” he said, patting Alec’s back and grinning. “I believe in you,” he said, backing away with Logan, so only Alec and Morty still stood on the battlefield.

“A two vs. two, single-style battle, challenger substitution only. Agreed?” Morty asked, his pale eyes glistening with adrenaline.

Alec squeezed his fists, clenching and unclenching, steeling himself for the fight. “Yes, that sounds good,” he said hastily, realizing he hadn’t responded.

Morty’s Poké Gear rang from his belt. He rolled his eyes, picking it up and hitting a button on the device, glancing at the screen for a second. He nodded, turning the phone off and refocusing on the fifteen-year-old boy poised to battle. “Sorry about that. Let the battle begin!”

“What was that?” Preston asked, but Morty did not respond. He reached for his belt, producing not one, but six Poké Balls. “Morty? What are you doing?”

Natalia’s face was white; suddenly she yanked her hand from Chase’s, standing. “Don’t you dare!” she yelled, but it was too late; Morty released a small army of six Ghost Pokémon, pressing a button on his Poké Gear and yelling a command in a foreign language. The exit to the floor above slammed shut.

“Morty?” Preston asked, distressed.

Morty smiled sadly at his friend. “I’m sorry, Joe. But this is how it has to be.” The door behind his flew open; Team Skye members began pouring in from the room beyond.

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Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
Chapter 16B (Apparently I need to begin writing shorter chapters...)

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-2002-

The sky was murky; clouds covered the darkening blue canvas, blotting out the setting sun and causing a faint feeling of unease. Natalia shivered; not from the cold or the ominous sky, but from anticipation. Shawn had said he would meet her with food and they would eat dinner under the stars again. A branch broke about a mile to the right of the clearing; the seventeen-year-old’s head snapped to attention, her instinct telling her to stay alert regardless of the excitement building in her stomach.

This had been her life for two years; since running away from her own home and her horrible stepmother, Natalia had found solace in the only boy who’d shown her kindness in her youth. Shawn Ashford had listened to her story intently, agreeing after careful deliberation to help her out, but not to take her in - “My mom would not approve,” he’d said, which was perfectly true because his eyes said so. Natalia spent her days alone mostly, but at night, once Shawn was free from school, the two would spend hours running, laughing, holding hands - but never kissing. Kissing was for relationships, Shawn said.

“Why can’t we be in a relationship?” Natalia had asked. Shawn simply laughed and hopped into a tree; he didn’t like talking about serious things or commitment. After eleven thirty, when the Ashford house was asleep, Natalia would let herself in and sleep on the floor so that nothing would be disturbed in the morning - no pillows or blankets to hide.

The branches continued snapping, signaling Shawn’s imminent arrival, or so Natalia hoped. She straightened the pretty sundress Shawn had given her (borrowed from his sister), making sure her long ruby-red hair was pushed over her shoulders just so carelessly.

“Ouch!” a voice said from her immediate right.

“Shawn?” she called.

“I stepped on a Shroomish,” the boy said, finally emerging from the brush; his floppy hair was standing on end, spores and leaves sprinkled sporadically through the fine sandy strands. “I don’t think it liked me,” he said, his mouth curling up at his own joke.

Natalia laughed, standing and closing the distance between them. “You’re a mess, look at you!” she cried, helping him brush the debris from his head. Her hand brushed his face tenderly; he coughed, shaking his body fitfully until she removed her hand. “Something wrong?” she asked hesitantly.

“What? No, no, sorry, battling a bit of a cold,” Shawn said quickly, reaching out and holding her hand, smiling so his hazel eyes shimmered and his nostrils flared.

“Take better care of yourself, young man,” Natalia scolded playfully. “This book I’m reading says so long as you get proper sleep -”

“Book? I...what book?” Shawn said sharply, his posture straightening so he towered a full nine inches over his friend. “You didn’t ask me for one…”

“Oh, no, it’s - I just, was browsing, you know, and I happened to -” Natalia began, but Shawn cut her off.

“You didn’t steal it, did you?”

Natalia was silent; her dark brown eyes lowered, her glasses flashing in the fading sun. “I didn’t…”

“Are those new glasses? They are, the frames are different!” Shawn said, peering closer at his friend, who removed the square-framed spectacles and folded them nervously, shaking her head frantically. “What did I say about this? Natalia! You don’t need to steal. I’m here for you, providing for you -”

“I guess I didn’t want you to think I was a burden,” Natalia said softly.

Shawn stared at her, his eyes wide, nostrils flared. His narrow jaw worked rapidly, shifting back and forth as the boy considered her statement. “You’re...not, a burden, Natalia…” he said slowly.

“But I know I am! I always feel awful asking you to do anything for me, you don’t owe me anything, and I know you aren’t doing too great financially. And…” Natalia stopped herself, crossing her thin arms protectively around herself.

“What?” Shawn asked, a hard tone embedded in his voice.

“No. ...Shawn, maybe I should leave. I can’t keep living out here like this. You clearly don’t want me -”

“How can you say that? After everything I’ve done for you -” Shawn began angrily.

“Do your parents know?” Natalia asked quietly. “Do they know where an eighth of their food and supplies are going? Do they know you’ve been harboring a thief?” Shawn put his hands to his head, running his fingers to the back of his scalp guiltily. A thought occurred to her. “Didn’t you say we were going on a picnic?”

Shawn swallowed. “Look, Natalia -”

But this set her off. “Don’t treat me like that! Like a child who needs her ears shielded! I know what I am and what you think of me! How do you think your mother would feel if she knew you going out with a girl every night, making empty promises, and making her sleep on the floor?” The full force of the abuse she was suffering was hitting Natalia in waves, hot and heavy seismic waves that made her olive skin flush.

“Natalia, chill out!” Shawn said nervously, holding his hands out defensively. “Seriously, just...okay? You’re always so intense, it’s like...it’s all or nothing with you. Arceus’ Plates!” Natalia’s eyes widened, stung by his words. “I didn’t bring a picnic, no. Because...I want to bring you home for dinner.” He cocked his head. “I want my parents to meet you.”

Natalia stopped her heavy breathing, shocked at his sudden kindness. “Really? You-you’re sure?”

Shawn nodded. “Look, Natalia, I know you. Far too well. Yeah, you’ve got some problems. You think some rules are...beneath you. But you’re pretty special. What’s that thing Ms. Phelps always used to say?” He reached his hand out for her, moving his head toward the exit of the forest.

Natalia took the proffered hand, touched. “‘A friend is someone you knows you, but loves you anyway.’” she said, smiling. “You love me, Shawn?”

A slight pause, then: “Yes. And I’ll do anything to help you, I promise.”

The two continued walking out of the forest; Natalia was still attempting to re-adjust her perception of Shawn; she had been so sure he was getting tired of her.

She heard a sudden snapping to her left; immediately she hissed, training her eyes on the offending area the sound had come from, shifting her weight defensively. “Who’s there?” she asked.

“Chill out, Natalia,” Shawn said, his eyes shifting around nervously all the same. “Probably just a wild Pokémon. Maybe it’s a very flat and angry Shroomish,” he finished seriously. They continued walking, Natalia’s ears perked for any sudden intrusion.

“You ever miss the Trainers’ School?” Shawn asked presently; he had changed his focus from Pokémon to Biology since Natalia dropped out. “Ms. Phelps’ class?”

“Where we first met,” Natalia said tenderly. She smiled sadly. “Remember that day you guys came back from lunch -”

“And you were in old 23D alone with Ms. Phelps, hands all blood and dress soaked with tears,” Shawn said immediately, his face solemn. “Yeah, I remember. Vividly.”

“I knew then that you were good,” Natalia said, squeezing his hand. Shawn smiled, his lips pursed so that his face stretched in a bizarrely unnatural way. “Are you okay?” she asked.

A siren sounded; three uniformed officers stepped out of the surrounding trees in a triangular formation, closing in on Natalia and Shawn; Violet City’s Officer Jenny stood in the middle. Shawn let go of Natalia’s hand, a look of extreme guilt and trepidation on his face.

“What? What’s happening?” Natalia asked, her heart racing to fever pitch; this didn’t make any sense.

“Natalia Solos, we have in confidence you’ve been stealing from our good city for the past two years, probably longer. We’ve got it all on tape,” Officer Jenny added; one of her guards held up screenshots of Natalia, barely disguised, carefully concealing essentials in her coat and staring shiftily at the cameras, her deep brown eyes frightened. The expression was mirrored on the girl’s face now, horror spreading through her body.

This is it, she thought; and the immediate image that flashed into her head was that of her father’s face the last time she had seen him, in his hospital bed, pale and sickly, but with a look of pride that his daughter was showing guilt for her illegal actions. “What if it doesn’t stop?” she’d asked him. This is the end, there’s no escaping. Natalia looked for an escape route; her limbs were tensed, accustomed to the earthy environment. Her eyes landed on Shawn, standing next to one of the officers.

“I’m sorry Natalia,” he said, his eyes lowered. Traitor!

“You...did you set this up?” Natalia asked, her voice brittle, ready to snap.

“I had to. I couldn’t LIVE with this secret inside me,” he said, guilt turning to accusation as he spoke. “I mean, it’s a criminal act, Natalia!”

There was nowhere to go. No one to go to. How could he, Natalia thought, rage mixing with her fear; she had trusted him. He never loved me, he was repulsed by me. Ms. Phelps would know how to make things better; too bad she’d been married and beyond her reach for a number of years. Natalia missed her blonde hair and rosy cheeks now more than ever.

“Ms. Solos, please don’t make this difficult,” Jenny said; an Ariados appeared beside her, its lethal purple and maroon markings clashing awfully with the lush green of the forest.

I can’t stay here. Natalia leapt, catching onto a low-hanging branch, her instincts like lightning; she felt feral, ferocious. She heard shouts below; Ariados was closing in on her, scaling the tree adjacent. Self-generated images flashed through her head, threatening to blind her. Her father’s face, sagging in disappointment; Shawn’s face, twisted with loathing; Ms. Phelps, unique in that she alone was smiling.

A spiderweb snagged her, catching at her lower right ankle. “No!” she shouted, her shriek echoing through the clearing. She struggled, but Ariados’ web stuck, tugging, pulling, constraining. This is it. She was pulled from the tree, free-falling toward the ground. I’m not a good person, she realized, her blood chilling as the realization shot through her in an icy deluge.

She passed out on impact.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

They were surrounded on all sides. Both exits were sealed off and the perimeter of the room was lined with gray-and-blue-uniformed men and women. Preston, Logan, and Chase had leapt up to join Natalia in a tight group around Alec, facing outward. Chase was breathing heavily, more surprised and bewildered than frightened.

“Joe, we don’t have to fight or do anything drastic,” Morty said, his silky voice apprehensive; Preston looked livid, his gray eyes wild and lips tightened to a line, his haggard face drawn. “Gabriel just needs that Wing, he and I have discussed -”

“Why?” Preston asked, his voice low, dangerous. “Why did you betray us? The League, the Council...me.” Chase’s hands reached out, closing on Logan’s and, after a moment’s hesitation, Natalia’s; her hand was cold and trembling.

“Betray is such a strong word,” Morty said carefully. “Gabriel approached me last week, very kindly, and...well, at first I was reluctant, but what he had to say made sense. He just needed my help with one thing, and that was making sure you ended up here, Alec, in the city where Ho-oh will be reborn from the ashes. He needs the Wing to harness Ho-oh’s ability! That’s all!”

“Why not just take it from me?” Alec shot from between Logan and Preston.

“Gabriel needed to make sure everything was in order. His plan will be perfection if you play along, Alec. Don’t make me use force, please,” Morty said, his hand drifting toward one of his Gengar.

“Natalia, what are you doing?” A husky female voice from across the room rang out; a Skye member with straight black bangs and lips painted icy-blue stepped forward. Chase recognized her as one of the two bodies from the Purpleheart Tunnels. “You don’t belong with them. Remember what Gabriel said about you!”

“I’m...I’m not going to fight them, Amy,” Natalia said firmly; Chase squeezed her hand. He saw Logan shoot an appraising look toward the ruby-haired girl.

“You were good, Morty, you were so good,” Preston said, pulling the circle tighter around Alec.

“You’re not getting the Wing,” Logan said.

“Be reasonable…” Morty said, his arms outstretched, his voice pleading but his eyes narrowed.

“Enough of this. Get the Wing, Brodie,” the one called Amy said to her scrawny, sandy-haired companion.

“Fight me!” Alec shouted, releasing Machop, Magby, and Pupitar. Chase heard Preston sigh behind him, but it seemed clear to the young man that Alec had the right idea.

“Only because you asked,” Amy said, raising her black-gloved hand. In unison, her teammates released their Pokémon, filling the room with about eighty creatures, all either perching on their trainer’s shoulders or hovering in the air behind them.

“Alec...we don’t have to fight…” Morty said, but he was raising his hands, pointing his Ghost Pokémon forward.

“He’s not fighting alone,” Logan said, releasing five Pokémon: Leafeon, Houndoom, Gurdurr, Blastoise, and Yanmega. “Right?” she asked Chase, but he was already letting out his team: Nidoking, Servine, Torkoal, Heracross, Starmie, and Froslass.

“I never thought I would have to do this,” Preston said numbly. He shook his head at Morty, setting his tired face and releasing Sawsbuck, Ursaring, Braviary, Mamoswine, Electivire, and Manaphy.

“The Manaphy man,” said a square-jawed woman Chase recognized from the Olivine street battle; a Swellow perched on her shoulder. “So noble,” she said, her lip curling mockingly.

“Natalia,” Amy said urgently, “stop pretending. Come on, you know Gabriel’s plan.” Her heavy-lidded black eyes bore into Natalia’s wide brown ones; Natalia hesitated a split second. Logan bit her lip, staring at the girl.

“Braviary, Rock Slide. Manaphy, Hydro Pump,” Preston commanded, covering Natalia’s split-second indecision. It was like a cloudburst; the older man’s order broke the tense spell in the room, allowing a ripple of command and response to release from both sides; Team Skye, and Alec’s protectors.

“Pupitar, Chip Away! Machop, Karate Chop!” Alec cried, focusing on a group of Staraptor and Pidgeot diving toward him.

“Crobat, Poison Fang!” Natalia ordered, releasing her one Pokémon and sending it at Amy, whose eyes widened in shock; she countered with a Xatu, its brightly colored wings spread defensively.

“Chase!” Logan shouted; a Skarmory had lifted Servine’s small green body into the air. Her own Yanmega was struggling to release itself from the grip of a Dragonite.

“Servine, Grass Pledge!” Chase shouted, trusting his other Pokémon to fend for themselves for the moment; their battle instincts were strong. The snake-like Pokémon writhed, releasing a stream of brilliantly-colored leaves and plants that enveloped Skarmory; they were deflected uselessly on its chrome armor. The bird crowed, squeezing its gray talons so they pierced into Servine’s creamy underbelly.

“Dark Pulse!” Logan commanded. Her Houndoom unleashed a monstrous black-and-purple wave of negatively charged energy at Amy’s Xatu; it collapsed, its Psychic hold on Crobat released.

“Thanks!” Natalia gasped, smiling at Logan; the blonde did not return the smile.

“Don’t hesitate ever again,” Logan said, turning away and running to catch Leafeon, who had just been dropped by an Unfezant.

“Torkoal, help us out!” Chase called to his small orange Fire-type. Skarmory was still holding Servine firmly, but it was now climbing, its steely body glowing; it appeared to be gearing up for a Sky Attack.

Preston and Morty seemed to have forgotten the rest of the fight, locked in a personal battle, the two most experienced trainers in the room.

“Night Shade!” Morty yelled, his Gengar and Dusclops releasing the attack in unison.

“Sawsbuck!” Preston said. The stag leapt in front of Mamoswine, who the ghostly attack was aimed at; the Normal-type absorbed the chill waves effortlessly, their power negated. “Ursaring, Shadow Claw!”

“Double Team, Mismagius! Gengar, Dream Eater!” Morty ordered.

Preston flinched; he had neglected his Electivire for a split second, allowing one of Morty’s Gengar to put it to sleep. It was now descending on the tiger-like creature, melting into a shadow.

“Blastoise, Skull Bash!” Logan yelled; Chase allowed himself a moment of frustration.

“I told you to get rid of that move!” he cried at Logan.

“I make my own decisions, thanks!” his old friend yelled, grunting as a Fearow swooped low, its wide wings bashing her shoulder.

The Pokémon were closing in faster and faster; no matter how well the small group was doing, Skye had numbers to their advantage.

Servine was still in trouble; Torkoal’s flames had not been able to hit Skarmory, who was freely weaving through the air, cackling at the Grass Pokémon’s defenselessness.

“Froslass, can you get up there?” Chase asked his geisha-like Ice/Ghost Pokémon, who was busy with a Charizard. He looked up, biting his cheek; Servine looked awfully pale.

In fact, too pale. The Pokémon was beginning to glow, a pearly light emanating faintly from his small body. Chase grinned in spite of his surroundings; Sceptile’s son was finally evolving, although the circumstances weren’t ideal for celebration.

“Brave Bird!” screamed Alec’s current opponent, a young boy no older than sixteen, his Noctowl eyeing Machop hungrily. Machop looked terrified; his large eyes widened and he covered his blunt face with his thin arms, his teeth bared.

Pupitar arrived a split second before the owl made contact, taking the full brunt of the attack with her stony smooth body. Despite her type advantage, Alec could still see her fatigue. Magby was already down, defeated with a single Water Pulse from a powerful Swanna. We’re losing, Alec realized, fear creeping through him. He looked at Logan, the current holder of the Wing, running alongside her Houndoom toward her Yanmega, her sky-blue eyes hard, and felt a wave of guilt for pulling her into this situation.

Preston and Morty were still six for six, neither backing down.

“Shadow Punch!” Morty called, directing his Dusclops towards Manaphy. “Joe, we don’t have to do this,” he insisted, trying to catch his friend’s eye.

Preston ignored him. “Chase, Logan, Alec! Natalia! Get around me!” he said, his eyes scanning the battlefield. “Horn Leech,” he said immediately to Sawsbuck, intercepting the attack Mismagius had been aiming at the stag.

Chase heard Preston’s call and stared around for his Pokémon, now spread all over the field. His Starmie had lost a limb and was working on regenerating the pointed arm, Nidoking standing defensively over the jewel Pokémon. Servine was now a Serperior, near twelve feet long and coiled dangerously around Skarmory on the ground, crushing it. Torkoal, Heracross, and Froslass were down.

Logan grabbed Alec’s hand, pulling him toward Preston’s tall figure. “Machop’s been taken down,” Alec said, his voice shaking. “I caused this.”

“It’s okay,” Logan said soothingly, pulling the boy urgently past her Houndoom, who was biting an Altaria viciously, shaking her head.

Natalia was nowhere to be seen. Logan had lost Yanmega and Leafeon in the fight, and hoped that Preston had a plan that would keep her from using her own failsafe strategy to keep Alec safe.

“Ice Shard!” the older man said, his quiet voice hoarse from fatigue; his gray eyes were bright, however, alert and determined.

“What’s your plan?” Logan asked.

Chase fought his way to stand beside her and Alec, carrying Torkoal’s prone body in his arms. “Where’s Natalia?” he asked immediately.

“I don’t know,” Logan said, looking over the field again. The girl’s signature deep ruby-colored hair was nowhere to be seen; Amy and Brodie had disappeared as well. “Preston! Your plan!” she said more urgently.

The older man pushed his Manaphy between them. “Manaphy - Protect!” he said, running his fingers through his hair. “Surround us,” he clarified. The small blue creature glowed, raising its fingerless arms and creating a green bubble of pure energy that enveloped Preston, Logan, Alec, and Chase, extending just enough to include the trainers’ remaining Pokémon. “That will buy us some time,” the older man said, wiping sweat from his lined brow.

A crashing sound, followed by a pulsating hum; Morty’s Pokémon were sapping the bubble of its power, along with the still thirty-strong flock of bird Pokémon outside the shield.

“I have a plan to keep Alec safe. Only Alec, but, well...we were assigned to protect him,” Logan said, her lips pursed, her hand still gripping the boy’s.

Preston looked searchingly at her. “I’m listening,” he said, flinching as a Dragonite hit the field with a Hyper Beam; Manaphy whimpered, its small body shriveling from stress.

“I didn’t use Kirlia to battle for a reason,” Logan said slowly, aware that Alec would likely hate her idea. She released the small pixie-like Pokémon, looking apologetically at Alec.

Preston nodded, already understanding. “Do it.”

“Do what?” Alec asked.

“We were charged to keep you safe, always,” Preston said to the boy. Alec’s eyes widened.

“You wouldn’t -”

“Teleport, Kirlia,” Logan whispered. Before Alec could protest further, the Pokémon glowed elegantly, her light swallowing Alec, and suddenly the boy disappeared with a faint pop.

“Why didn’t you take us?” Chase asked indignantly. “Where did you send him?”

Logan shook her head. “I don’t know. Kirlia’s never used that move before. She’s not experienced enough to do it safely to more than one body, yet.”

“So...Alec could be anywhere?” Chase asked.

Preston nodded. “Anywhere is better than here,” he said gravely. The Protect broke suddenly; Manaphy collapsed, spent. Silence spread across the field.

“Where’s Alec?” Morty cried.

“Where’s Natalia?” Chase repeated. Neither question could be answered.

….....................................................................................

-2004-

Natalia stared down at the map of Vermilion City she’d gotten at the Pokémon Center. Upon her release from the Violet City jail the past month, she’d been determined to find the one person she knew she could still trust to listen to her story and possibly help her: Carrie Phelps, her former grade school teacher.

The woman had agreed on the phone to meet her at Vermilion City’s local coffee shop, Winston’s. If she had been surprised to hear Natalia’s voice on the phone the previous week, her lyrical voice did not betray it. Natalia didn’t mention jail or her massive anxiety about trusting the wrong people; she didn’t want to scare another person off as she had Shawn.

“You know, Joseph and I are having a baby,” Ms. Phelps had said matter-of-factly.

“Oh! That’s incredible! Boy or girl?” Natalia had asked.

“The doctor says we can’t know for sure yet, but I’m hoping for a girl,” she had answered happily.

Natalia felt she had walked too far; Winston’s was nowhere to be seen, but she could see the Diglett Tunnel up ahead. “Damn,” she said, peering intently at the map. She began running back toward the city’s harbor, her eyes scanning the landscape for anything, a marker, a sign. The Kanto sea sparkled brightly to her left; she felt disoriented, frustrated at the confusing set-up of the City’s map, with all its colorful dots and slashes and triangles.

Her pace picked up, her face fully trained on the map, her ruby hair falling fast and loose across her face. She suddenly collided with a strong body with such force she felt her feet leave the ground; the rest of her body hit pavement roughly, her hands too tangled up with the map to catch herself properly. She felt the wind leave her lungs.

The man she had hit laughed, extending a hand to the fallen girl. “That’s my fault entirely. My apologies,” he said. Natalia looked up, her vision blurry; her glasses had fallen off. She found them to her right, putting them on and sitting up; her white dress was a dirty mess. She took the man’s hand, allowing him to pull her thin body off the ground.

“Thank you,” she said unsteadily, her eyes finally able to assess her savior. The man was lean but built, dressed smartly and luxuriantly. He had icy blue eyes and reedy, crimson-colored hair.

“Where were you running?” he asked, bending down to pick up the City Map for her.

“I...I, oh Arceus, um, I was trying to find Winston’s coffee shop. I’m meeting a woman, or I’m supposed to be...thank you,” she said, taking the map from him.

“Winston’s?” The man frowned. “You’re about five blocks out of the way. You really don’t know where you’re going, do you?” His face softened. “Here, I’ll walk you. I’m Gabriel,” he said, holding out his hand.

“Natalia,” she said, accepting it hesitantly; rarely were strangers so kind.

The young man gestured north. “After you, Natalia,” The two began walking up Main Street. “Who is this mystery woman you’re meeting? Mother? Friend? Lover?” he asked, his icy eyes watching her reaction like a hawk.

“Well, actually, my old grade school teacher. She and I both live in Johto, normally, but I...well, I needed to get away, and she was here visiting family, so we agreed to meet for coffee! Carrie Phelps, do you know her?”

His expression did not change. “Ah...you haven’t heard?” he asked delicately.

Natalia furrowed her eyebrows. “What?”

“I’m afraid Ms. Phelps will not be waiting at Winston’s,” he said, his tone somber. “She was tortured to insanity three days ago. She’s under emergency care at the Vermilion Hospital.”

Natalia’s heart stopped; her blood ran cold. How can that be? “You’re sure? Carrie Phelps, she’s married now, her husband’s name is Joseph, um…” She realized she had never even learned the last name of her teacher’s spouse. “She’s supposed to…”

“She’s gone, Natalia. I’m sorry.” He didn’t look sorry.

Natalia frowned. “How did you know her?”

Gabriel paused. “A friend of a friend, you could say. We did have one very intimate conversation before she...erm, snapped,” he said, carefully appropriating the correct term.

“But...no...she...she was pregnant! Her baby!” Natalia was reeling; it felt as if she were falling again, her world spiraling away from her.

“The baby isn’t dead, they don’t think,” Gabriel said. “She may still live, her baby too.” He seemed quite unaffected by this dreadful news.

Natalia stumbled. My last chance, she thought. “I don’t know where to go,” she confessed out loud. “I don’t think there’s anyone who will have me.”

The lean man looked her over. “Don’t you have family? Friends?” Natalia shook her head. “Nobody at all? You’re sure?”

Natalia was quite sure. “The only people who ever loved me are gone,” she said. “My dad died a few years ago, he…” She was beginning to hyperventilate.

“Well...if you’re quite certain you’re alone…” Gabriel was now staring at her, through her, with his icy-blue stare. Natalia sniffed; he seemed to exude a pleasant scent, like cinnamon. “I have a proposition.”

It took a great deal of persuasion to convince the young woman that joining Team Skye was a viable option, but the team was, after all, comprised of social outcasts, pariahs like Natalia. Gabriel took her under his wing, introducing her to Skylar, their leader, as well as some of their key captains; Aiden, Owen, Amy...the list went on. It seemed the team extended outward forever.

Natalia remembered vaguely that her father had staunchly hated the team, calling them ‘vagabonds who wanted nothing but chaos’. The irony that they were now her guardians and protectors was not lost on the girl.

“How do you like the outfit?” Gabriel asked, smiling at the girl’s blue jumpsuit. Amy was helping her with the shoulders, which were a little snug.

“I feel like I belong to something,” Natalia confessed. “It’s...wonderful.”

“You’re in the right place, sister,” Amy said, crossing around to observe her critically from the front. “We’re family here.”

Gabriel took Natalia’s face in his velvet-gloved hand. “Very good,” he said after careful inspection. He hit her face lightly; she gasped, stung. “I’m sorry,” he said automatically, again not sounding it. “That’s how I show respect.” His voice was slightly colder these days; it had lost the warm, charming quality she remembered from their first meeting. “What’s wrong?” he asked, looking vaguely perturbed by her sad expression.

“What would my father think, if he could see me now? Or Ms. Phelps?” she said quietly.

Gabriel exchanged glances with Amy. “Natalia, they’re gone. I’m the only one who will have you now,” he reminded her. “I mean, we, of course, Skylar, et. all,” he corrected himself as a lazy afterthought. “You will always be an outcast, Natalia. But with us...you can be alone with us,” he said softly.

Natalia couldn’t shake the uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach, nor the image of her father’s disappointed face, but she steeled herself.

“What’s my first assignment?” she asked. There’s no turning back from this, she accepted grimly. You are a bad person.

….....................................................................................

-2009-

“Gabriel, it’s Morty. They used a Kirlia to teleport Alec Gideon out of here. We have no clue where he is, and they won’t say anything.” Morty had the Poké Gear pressed to his ear, pacing back and forth in front of Preston, Chase, and Logan. His Gengar had them paralyzed with a Disable Attack on the floor in the same spot Manaphy had created its shield. Their Pokémon had been stripped from them and taken into the back room.

“How could I have been so blind?” Preston said through clenched teeth; Disable allowed for limited movement of the head, but his entire lower half was petrified.

“How could we have known he was in contact with Gabriel the whole time? There were no hints,” Logan said soothingly from behind him; attempting to console a person was very difficult with no physical contact.

“He’s a very good liar,” Chase agreed. He was in Preston’s line of sight, his long limbs contorted oddly by the Ghost Pokémon’s stronghold.

“Really? Okay, well, I’ll stay here then,” Morty said into the phone. “Alright. Yeah, talk to you later.” The gym leader hung up, turning to address his old friend. “How are you feeling? Comfy?” he asked, laughing lightly at his small joke. His face returned to neutral very quickly. “I am sorry, to be doing this to you, Joe,” he said, his voice low. “If you knew Gabriel’s plan...well, you’ll know soon. We just need you out of the way until Alec is located, then you’re free to go. We only want him.”

“Will trusted you,” Preston said, unable to change expression, struggling desperately to narrow his eyes, curl his lip, anything; only his jaw and eyelids seemed mobile. “He trusted Johto’s safety to you.”

“Johto is safe,” Morty said. He could not seem to look Preston in the eye.

The door to the back room opened; Amy and a broad, squat man a full head shorter than her walked in, passing Preston, Chase, and Logan without a glance. “The holding cells are ready,” the black-haired woman said to Morty.

“Oh. Good...good! Yes, um, I guess, lock them up,” Morty said.

“Brodie, bring in some reinforcements,” Amy said into her Poké Gear.

After a moment, the machine answered: “What?”

“Oh, never mind,” Amy said furiously, switching the device off. “Just go and get some extra bodies, just in case...though they shouldn’t be a problem…” Amy’s eyes flickered over Preston’s still-healing leg, Chase’s long features, Logan’s slight figure. The shorter man nodded, running with surprising speed to the back room.

“How’s everything at the Tower?” Morty asked Amy, his eyes shifting nervously toward Preston.

“Gabriel’s prepared the pyre, the shrine, the outfit...everything is ready.” Amy looked at the three frozen figures by her feet. “Let’s go elsewhere, shall we?” She turned and walked swiftly towards the stairs leading upward, giving Morty no choice but to follow, leaving Preston, Chase, and Logan in the care of Gengar.

“He can’t be trying to bring Ho-oh back,” Logan said incredulously, once the door to the upper level was shut.

“You didn’t think that was his plan all along?” Preston asked grimly. “It seemed kind of obvious to me. That sounds just like Gabriel, always attempting to harness power that isn’t his...harming anyone who gets in the way,” he finished bitterly, thinking of Carrie.

“What do you mean?” Logan asked slowly.

“I told you Team Skye caused my wife’s death. Did I ever tell you who led the assault on my Carrie?”

“Gabriel?” Logan cried, horrified.

If Preston could have nodded solemnly, he would have. “Carrie had been visiting her parents in Vermilion City. She was over in Kanto for a week-long trip. I had to manage the gym, see. I...got a phone call, the most horrible call, on that Tuesday night….the nurses could only say she had been found lying unconscious in a field beyond the Diglett Tunnel...she was maimed, scarred, burned...she was found with a boy, they said, a teenager, also unconscious.” Chase gasped. “They took her to the hospital, they said, but my poor wife kept saying one name, over and over...his.” Preston’s voice darkened. “I was by her side six hours later. They...did everything they could, but she was broken. Washing away.” Tears were welling in his eyes, threatening to blind him; he could not brush them aside or prevent them from falling, hot and salty, down his stubbled cheeks. “She was pregnant, they tried everything they could to keep her alive, but…”

“I was there,” Chase said. Although Gengar was still holding their bodies firmly with its attack, the young man’s body was convulsing. “It’s coming back to me...I remember now. Oh, Arceus’ Plates, I remember, I remember it all! That was me, I was there, I was that boy.”

“What?” Logan and Preston asked in unison, alarmed.

Chase’s face was not changed, but his eyes were red and his cheeks flushed. “I watched Gabriel torture your wife,” he said slowly. “That’s why I thought she looked familiar in those pictures. I tried protecting her, he was asking her about you, he kept saying...that…” Chase was gasping for air. “He was looking for the legendary birds, and he said you would know, or something...Arceus’ Plates, oh sweet Ho-oh…”

“Chase…” Logan said in a small voice.

Preston’s heart was hammering. For a week he had been traveling with a young man who had seen his wife in her last sane moments, who had watched Gabriel inflict his evil upon her.

The door behind them opened. The squat man was back, followed by Brodie, the woman with the square jaw, a man taller than Amy, even, with long gray hair falling beyond his shoulders, and three more figures Preston could not see from his position.

“Alright, get a firm hold before Gengar lets go,” Brodie said nervously, pointing so that there were two Skye members to each body. “No, Angie, you get the old man,” he said quickly.

Logan shrieked behind Preston.

“Gengar, you can release them,” Brodie said.

Preston felt mobility return to his body, but instantly the square-jawed woman and tall man clamped down on either arm, dragging him up roughly so that a streak of hot pain shot through his right shin.

“You...you filthy, disgusting…” Logan was screaming. Chase was protesting, too, but Logan’s cries were so severe Preston craned his neck to look back.

Flanking Logan were the squat, broad man, and, dressed in a crisp new uniform, her long ruby hair pulled back, Natalia.

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Glover

Pain in Rocket side
If he could have seen his body during the process, it seemed likely it would have more resembled jelly or plasma than flesh and blood; Espeon’s attack seemed to liquify its targets. The only good thing that could be said about the jour
I wonder if it wouldn't be unlike or synonomous to a Pokemon midst evolving?

“Teleporting over long distances is dangerous,” he explained
;)

it had been his grandfather and father, a family team who’d completed the Tin Tower’s construction, continuing the Gideon legacy of renown and splendor
As architects? Or dd they build the sucker just the two of them?

“I think everyone has seen a Pokémon Center at this point,” Preston pointed out. “First-timers to Ecruteak would be more interested in seeing the towers, Morty.”
I awlays hated those NPCs, "This is a Pokemon Center! It looks like every other Pokemon Center! Yay!"

“Wait!” Logan said; everyone looked at her, Morty mid-step. “I want to see if I can find a Technical Machine for Kirlia.” Upon Preston’s questioning look, she clarified: “I want to teach her Teleport; like the feeling or not, it’s pretty damn useful.”
Again I ask, how does a Kirlia not know Teleport? Its like a Magikarp who can't splash, or a Metapod that can't Harden?

Alright, fine. To dinner! And then the tour...and battle…” Morty said, clearly unhappy at the current balance of power.
Ah, Morty. Welcome to a Democracy. Reminds me of a story that was sold in the USPS a long time ago about Daffy Duck running for President to change the world, only to discover that he couldn't actually DO anything without the rest of Congress.

“Let’s go to the Kimono Sisters’ Sushi Palace. It’s divine.
... It's Sushi...?

. “I can pay for myself,”
Can. Won't.

I don’t know. When we teleported, we both heard you calling that name. And I think I’ve heard it before?”

“I’m sure you will, one day. He’s wonderful, really. Joseph loves kids!”
Its a small world after all

“What’s wrong with me?” the girl asked softly. What have I done wrong?
Just the luck of the draw, kid.

Morty blinked, a little disappointed. “Of...yes, of course. Come on, then, let’s go,”
You should be proud, Morty. The Gym is yours, after all.

“You have the most screwed-up moral compass. None of you ask the right questions,”
Or perhaps you've been answering the wrong ones?

“Of course. If time permits,”
This is Alec, I don't think that's gonna be an issue. Even if he does well, his pickings are slim

Morty smiled sadly at his friend. “I’m sorry, Joe. But this is how it has to be.” The door behind his flew open; Team Skye members began pouring in from the room beyond.
Did not see that coming, how did Nat?

Chapter 16B (Apparently I need to begin writing shorter chapters...)
NEVER!!!

Gonna be honest, I skimmed this. I'm sure you're setting up for something and I'll regret doing that, bu It held no interest for me and was an unwelcome interuption to the main story. There's such a thing as too much Backstory, and this was it. It reminded me that natalia is self-loathing, but I knew that, and if it needed to be told, it coulda been summarized and tucked into the last section where Chase asked her about being in Jail, either as a small flashback there or as her actually telling him that a previous boyfriend set her up.

“Joe, we don’t have to fight or do anything drastic,”
Yeah, I'm pretty sure you do.

“The Manaphy man,” said a square-jawed woman Chase recognized from the Olivine street battle; a Swellow perched on her shoulder.

“Braviary, Rock Slide. Manaphy, Hydro Pump,” Preston commanded
See, this is why I wouldn't make a good character in your story. It'd be "Electivire, that half of the room. Discharge, Ready? Go!" And anything not Skarmory would be done...

Actually I am a HUGE fan of Motor Drive on all creatures, particulalry Electivire and Emolga, and would LOVE to see Skye try to get past Preston and I's Electivire if both of them were pumping a fairly good sized room full of Electricity and feeding off of each other's attacks. I at least taught mine Fire Punch too, so after crippling... I digress.

There's a lot of mis-matches here. For Pokemon with excellent battle instinct, and history in battling en-masse, a Charizard-on-Froslass is an obvious oops. Hopefully, Preston can teach their Pokemon to work in tandems better.

Similarly, while the Dark type Houndoom was a good match for Xatu and freed up Natalia's Crobat, the fact that it was wasted on that while a Servine was within "made into lunch" range of a Skarmory is a bit alarming. I;m sure Skarmory eat things bigger than that (but obviously not so large as a Surperior...) and why was a Torkoal not suddenly aimed for the Steel type?

A good battle scene, and one I'm gonna re-read. You did nopthing wrong, its just kinda telling that for all their experience, Chase and Logan have a long way to go...

Flanking Logan were the squat, broad man, and, dressed in a crisp new uniform, her long ruby hair pulled back, Natalia.
Am I surprised? Not really. I had higher hopes, but at this point I'm pretty sure the only person she is not playing for a fool is Ms. Phelps, and she's dead. That's including Natalia in the pool of people she's playing...

Fun! I look forward to the next chapter, as usual. I get the feeling we're wrapping up soon though, not immediately, but we're closing in on the climax and I think moreso than the story is what kind of weight and changine it brings for the trainers.

Morty smiled sadly at his friend. “I’m sorry, Joe. But this is how it has to be.” The door behind his flew open; Team Skye members began pouring in from the room beyond.
I think that should be Doors behind him.

This is why I read other people's reviews, Thanks Pink Harzard
 
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Pink Harzard

So majestic
Wow that new chapter was pretty fast. But I accidently started to read part B first ^^' Review will be in the right order though

Teleporting was possibly the most bizarre sensation Alec had ever experienced. If he could have seen his body during the process, it seemed likely it would have more resembled jelly or plasma than flesh and blood; Espeon’s attack seemed to liquify its targets. The only good thing that could be said about the journey, Alec thought, was that it ended quickly and he didn’t vomit.

That sounds cool and kinda gross at the same time. I can't remember that a Espeon can learn Teleport however...

“This place is gorgeous,” Logan breathed. Chase nodded, taking in the city’s color palate with relish - in stark opposition to the grand gold-and-silver color scheme that dominated Goldenrod, this city had a rich of-the-earth feel, resplendent with maroons and royal purple. The buildings seemed older, more robust; full of time and memories.

This reminds me so much of my Heart Gold game. I just love the way Ecruteak looks.

“Plus I hate the sensation,” he repeated, smiling slightly at Alec, who moaned an agreement, and winking at Lugia. “You’re much better at getting me places,” he promised the Pokémon, who merely released a single melancholy note of response.

That sounds so sweet. He treats Lugia like a partner and not a tool.

And the two were off, climbing into the sky, a perfect pairing of trainer and Pokémon. Champion and deity, they lifted into the endless blue, wind blowing through Will’s long hair, until they were distant specks.

First calling them trainer and Pokémon and then the other discription just show how special they are.

“I think everyone has seen a Pokémon Center at this point,”

That made me chuckle.

The blonde girl walked away in triumph carrying a pale disc labelled “Technical Machine 106: Teleport” in a gem case.

Seems like you created a new TM ;)

Natalia was sitting alone again. Lunch hour outside the protection of Ms. Phelps was nearly unbearable; none of her fellow third-year students wanted her near. The girl with the dorky glasses was too smart, too intense, had no sense of fun. This seemed to be everyone’s opinion at The Trainers’ School in Violet City.

A outcast at that age? I feel sorry for her. I didn't had a cheerful childhood myself.

“I did try! I was at a table with Alie and Sarah and Kendra, and all they did was make fun of me! Asking about my dad’s weight problems, pretending to be me…” Natalia put her hands in big circles over her eyes and pulled her front teeth over her lip, enhancing the buck-toothed quality. “‘Me, Ms. Phelps! Pick me!’” Tears were forming in the eight-year-old’s eyes, and she pulled at her long red ponytail for comfort.

Kids never bully others. It breaks them. I speak of experience.

Ms. Phelps sighed. Her eyes drifted across the crowded cafeteria, searching for a friendly peer that might sit with Natalia. Although the faces were cheerful and bright, none of the children seemed interested in the small ruby-haired girl’s plight. “Alright. Come on, then, bring your lunch with you.”

I love that teacher. She is such a sweetheart.

“See, Natalia, it’s this attitude that keeps you from making friends. Sometimes...you have to pretend, just a little, act like you’re more like them than you are.”

But what if you don't want to do that. I was stubborn as a kid. I maybe still am.

“Isn’t that lying?” Natalia asked. “Isn’t it wrong, to pretend to be what I’m not?”

You hit the nail girl.

Natalia took the pass, sniffling. “Thank you for loving me,” she said, throwing her tiny body around Ms. Phelps’ short, curvy waist.

:'/ It is sweet and sad at the same time. If you get what I mean.

“What’s wrong with me?” the girl asked softly. What have I done wrong?

Dude, you sure remind me of my own past.

“Not even to see the shrine?” Morty asked.

Preston shook his head, chuckling. “No, thanks.”

“I’ve seen enough shrines for a lifetime,” Logan said; Chase nodded in agreement.

That reminds me of one on Mt Silver...

''Favoured guests, shall we descend to the spirit world?” Morty asked, grinning.

Lol'ed at Morty trying to be spooky.

Preston put a hand on his shoulder. “You can do this. Just remember Ghost Pokémon, and Morty’s battle style, are all about stealth and tact. Very unlike yours,”

Auch

Natalia’s face was white; suddenly she yanked her hand from Chase’s, standing. “Don’t you dare!” she yelled, but it was too late; Morty released a small army of six Ghost Pokémon, pressing a button on his Poké Gear and yelling a command in a foreign language. The exit to the floor above slammed shut.

“Morty?” Preston asked, distressed.

Morty smiled sadly at his friend. “I’m sorry, Joe. But this is how it has to be.” The door behind his flew open; Team Skye members began pouring in from the room beyond.

Morty why? Traitor. (just something that went through my mind when I was reading that ;) )

I have to go now, so part B will be done tomorrow.


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Here is the review of part B. Sorry for being late.


Bulba the Great! said:
This had been her life for two years; since running away from her own home and her horrible stepmother, Natalia had found solace in the only boy who’d shown her kindness in her youth. Shawn Ashford had listened to her story intently, agreeing after careful deliberation to help her out, but not to take her in - “My mom would not approve,” he’d said, which was perfectly true because his eyes said so.

Her life is getting worse by the years. Natalia is Lucky for having someone who cares for her.

Natalia spent her days alone mostly, but at night, once Shawn was free from school, the two would spend hours running, laughing, holding hands - but never kissing. Kissing was for relationships, Shawn said.

Friendzoned :p

“Take better care of yourself, young man,” Natalia scolded playfully. “This book I’m reading says so long as you get proper sleep -”

“Book? I...what book?” Shawn said sharply, his posture straightening so he towered a full nine inches over his friend. “You didn’t ask me for one…”

“Oh, no, it’s - I just, was browsing, you know, and I happened to -” Natalia began, but Shawn cut her off.

“You didn’t steal it, did you?”

When did this stealing habbit begin? Just after she ran away home?

A siren sounded; three uniformed officers stepped out of the surrounding trees in a triangular formation, closing in on Natalia and Shawn; Violet City’s Officer Jenny stood in the middle. Shawn let go of Natalia’s hand, a look of extreme guilt and trepidation on his face.

“What? What’s happening?” Natalia asked, her heart racing to fever pitch; this didn’t make any sense.

“Natalia Solos, we have in confidence you’ve been stealing from our good city for the past two years, probably longer. We’ve got it all on tape,” Officer Jenny added; one of her guards held up screenshots of Natalia, barely disguised, carefully concealing essentials in her coat and staring shiftily at the cameras, her deep brown eyes frightened. The expression was mirrored on the girl’s face now, horror spreading through her body.

Busted!

“I’m sorry Natalia,” he said, his eyes lowered. Traitor!

“You...did you set this up?” Natalia asked, her voice brittle, ready to snap.

“I had to. I couldn’t LIVE with this secret inside me,” he said, guilt turning to accusation as he spoke. “I mean, it’s a criminal act, Natalia!”

That had to be a hard choice for Shawn.


“Betray is such a strong word,” Morty said carefully. “Gabriel approached me last week, very kindly, and...well, at first I was reluctant, but what he had to say made sense. He just needed my help with one thing, and that was making sure you ended up here, Alec, in the city where Ho-oh will be reborn from the ashes. He needs the Wing to harness Ho-oh’s ability! That’s all!”

Did Morty never thought about what Gabriël will do with the wing?

“I never thought I would have to do this,” Preston said numbly. He shook his head at Morty, setting his tired face and releasing Sawsbuck, Ursaring, Braviary, Mamoswine, Electivire, and Manaphy.

Wait? Preston is the one with Manaphy? That was a supprise for me. Or maybe I missed something.


“Blastoise, Skull Bash!” Logan yelled; Chase allowed himself a moment of frustration.

“I told you to get rid of that move!” he cried at Logan.

“I make my own decisions, thanks!” his old friend yelled, grunting as a Fearow swooped low, its wide wings bashing her shoulder.

Okay, that made me smile because this shows that everyone haves his or her own style.

“Froslass, can you get up there?” Chase asked his geisha-like Ice/Ghost Pokémon, who was busy with a Charizard.

I never imagined Froslaas as a geisha. But it does make sense, looking to the bow on her back.


He looked up, biting his cheek; Servine looked awfully pale.

In fact, too pale. The Pokémon was beginning to glow, a pearly light emanating faintly from his small body. Chase grinned in spite of his surroundings; Sceptile’s son was finally evolving, although the circumstances weren’t ideal for celebration.

Mid-battle evolution, Cool.

“Brave Bird!” screamed Alec’s current opponent, a young boy no older than sixteen

I remember in Diamond and Pearl team Gallatic members in the Veilstone building say to your character that you are to young to join. Seems like team Skye thinks differently about it.

Logan grabbed Alec’s hand, pulling him toward Preston’s tall figure. “Machop’s been taken down,” Alec said, his voice shaking. “I caused this.”

Does Alec feel sorry for Machop? Good thing if he starts to care for his Pokémon.

“I didn’t use Kirlia to battle for a reason,” Logan said slowly, aware that Alec would likely hate her idea. She released the small pixie-like Pokémon, looking apologetically at Alec.

Preston nodded, already understanding. “Do it.”

“Do what?” Alec asked.

“We were charged to keep you safe, always,” Preston said to the boy. Alec’s eyes widened.

“You wouldn’t -”

“Teleport, Kirlia,” Logan whispered. Before Alec could protest further, the Pokémon glowed elegantly, her light swallowing Alec, and suddenly the boy disappeared with a faint pop.

“Why didn’t you take us?” Chase asked indignantly. “Where did you send him?”

Logan shook her head. “I don’t know. Kirlia’s never used that move before. She’s not experienced enough to do it safely to more than one body, yet.”

“So...Alec could be anywhere?” Chase asked.

What if he falls in a volcano or in the middle of the sea? This isn't very safe.

“I’m afraid Ms. Phelps will not be waiting at Winston’s,” he said, his tone somber. “She was tortured to insanity three days ago. She’s under emergency care at the Vermilion Hospital.”

Natalia’s heart stopped; her blood ran cold. How can that be? “You’re sure? Carrie Phelps, she’s married now, her husband’s name is Joseph, um…” She realized she had never even learned the last name of her teacher’s spouse. “She’s supposed to…”

“She’s gone, Natalia. I’m sorry.” He didn’t look sorry.

Natalia frowned. “How did you know her?”

Gabriel paused. “A friend of a friend, you could say. We did have one very intimate conversation before she...erm, snapped,” he said, carefully appropriating the correct term.

This is just horrible. Natalia just lost the last person she could trust. And the big cause of it explains it. That makes it that more dramatic.

“But...no...she...she was pregnant! Her baby!” Natalia was reeling; it felt as if she were falling again, her world spiraling away from her.

“The baby isn’t dead, they don’t think,” Gabriel said. “She may still live, her baby too.” He seemed quite unaffected by this dreadful news.

Gabriël, you big unforgivenable duck.

It took a great deal of persuasion to convince the young woman that joining Team Skye was a viable option, but the team was, after all, comprised of social outcasts, pariahs like Natalia. Gabriel took her under his wing, introducing her to Skylar, their leader, as well as some of their key captains; Aiden, Owen, Amy...the list went on. It seemed the team extended outward forever.

Natalia remembered vaguely that her father had staunchly hated the team, calling them ‘vagabonds who wanted nothing but chaos’. The irony that they were now her guardians and protectors was not lost on the girl.

And that is how such organisations get their members.

“Gabriel’s prepared the pyre, the shrine, the outfit...everything is ready.”

Sounds like ritual equipment

Preston’s heart was hammering. For a week he had been traveling with a young man who had seen his wife in her last sane moments, who had watched Gabriel inflict his evil upon her.

That is very heavy stuff.

Flanking Logan were the squat, broad man, and, dressed in a crisp new uniform, her long ruby hair pulled back, Natalia.

I think Natalia doesn't want it. But the force of a group is heavy to withstand.

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If Gabriël succeeds in awakening Ho-oh, I expect a epic battle between Ho-oh and Lugia. I just have the feeling that could happen.
 
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Pokemon Sprite Maker
I started reading this story in January. I decided that I'd get a forum account and help with feedback once I caught up. All I can say that hasn't been said is that I absolutely loved the part in chapter 14 where Logan finds the Eevee in the forest and heals her.
 

Bulba the Great!

We Do Not Sow
I wonder if it wouldn't be unlike or synonomous to a Pokemon midst evolving?

That's sort-of how I pictured it...although the image I more closely associate with Teleportation is the beam of light that sucks a Pokemon back into its ball.

As architects? Or dd they build the sucker just the two of them?

Ahaha they were the head of a team of builders. The Gideons aren't THAT mighty.

I awlays hated those NPCs, "This is a Pokemon Center! It looks like every other Pokemon Center! Yay!"

You and me both, brotha.

Again I ask, how does a Kirlia not know Teleport? Its like a Magikarp who can't splash, or a Metapod that can't Harden?

My reasoning was: If Logan taught Kirlia Teleport, why would they ever need to walk anywhere? Plus Logan didn't see the need to keep the move...pretty dem useless in battle.

... It's Sushi...?

The BEST sushi!

Or perhaps you've been answering the wrong ones?

Bingo.

This is Alec, I don't think that's gonna be an issue. Even if he does well, his pickings are slim

This is true.

Did not see that coming, how did Nat?

She's in ze know.

NEVER!!!

I can't tell if this is sarcasm or not. I hope you don't actually mind the length...

Gonna be honest, I skimmed this. I'm sure you're setting up for something and I'll regret doing that, bu It held no interest for me and was an unwelcome interuption to the main story. There's such a thing as too much Backstory, and this was it. It reminded me that natalia is self-loathing, but I knew that, and if it needed to be told, it coulda been summarized and tucked into the last section where Chase asked her about being in Jail, either as a small flashback there or as her actually telling him that a previous boyfriend set her up.

Hmm...a valid opinion. I wanted to include this section for a couple of reasons. Natalia is a character whose flashbacks function in a different way: She's so constructed and careful about her image that she lies, often. Flashbacks are the only way to demonstrate the actual truth of her situations. She did mention Shawn to Chase...but she twisted the truth so badly I needed to show the true story. This was, perhaps badly done, but also used to introduce the over-arching theme of this chapter: Betrayal. Natalia has been set up and betrayed so often. I wanted this to demonstrate where she acquired her acrobatic/stealth skills as well, from her time in the wild. But you do make me question its existence...

See, this is why I wouldn't make a good character in your story. It'd be "Electivire, that half of the room. Discharge, Ready? Go!" And anything not Skarmory would be done...

Actually I am a HUGE fan of Motor Drive on all creatures, particulalry Electivire and Emolga, and would LOVE to see Skye try to get past Preston and I's Electivire if both of them were pumping a fairly good sized room full of Electricity and feeding off of each other's attacks. I at least taught mine Fire Punch too, so after crippling... I digress.

Too bad Preston was fighting with a personal vendetta against Morty...and also Preston subscribes less to mass destruction, and more to "Do only the damage necessary, protect everyone'.

There's a lot of mis-matches here. For Pokemon with excellent battle instinct, and history in battling en-masse, a Charizard-on-Froslass is an obvious oops. Hopefully, Preston can teach their Pokemon to work in tandems better.

Similarly, while the Dark type Houndoom was a good match for Xatu and freed up Natalia's Crobat, the fact that it was wasted on that while a Servine was within "made into lunch" range of a Skarmory is a bit alarming. I;m sure Skarmory eat things bigger than that (but obviously not so large as a Surperior...) and why was a Torkoal not suddenly aimed for the Steel type?

A good battle scene, and one I'm gonna re-read. You did nopthing wrong, its just kinda telling that for all their experience, Chase and Logan have a long way to go...

If they were perfect, it would have been a very quick fight. I'm glad you enjoyed ze battle :)

Am I surprised? Not really. I had higher hopes, but at this point I'm pretty sure the only person she is not playing for a fool is Ms. Phelps, and she's dead. That's including Natalia in the pool of people she's playing...

QUITE insightful. :)

Fun! I look forward to the next chapter, as usual. I get the feeling we're wrapping up soon though, not immediately, but we're closing in on the climax and I think moreso than the story is what kind of weight and changine it brings for the trainers.

Four chapters to go!

I think that should be Doors behind him.

This is why I read other people's reviews, Thanks Pink Harzard

Good catch, both of you!

Glover, you're the best. Thank you.

Wow that new chapter was pretty fast. But I accidently started to read part B first ^^' Review will be in the right order though

Curse those page changes!

That sounds cool and kinda gross at the same time. I can't remember that a Espeon can learn Teleport however...

With the magical existence of TM 106 it can :D

This reminds me so much of my Heart Gold game. I just love the way Ecruteak looks.

Same! The remakes did such a good job of making Johto a truly beautiful and historic-looking place.

That sounds so sweet. He treats Lugia like a partner and not a tool.

Best friends, one mind in two bodies.

A outcast at that age? I feel sorry for her. I didn't had a cheerful childhood myself.

Preach. Natalia's experience is very close to mine in elementary school.

Kids never bully others. It breaks them. I speak of experience.

It's such a terrible way of creating false self-esteem at that age.

You hit the nail girl.

Natalia tells the uncomfortable truths.

:'/ It is sweet and sad at the same time. If you get what I mean.

I know exactly what you mean :)

Dude, you sure remind me of my own past.

Perhaps we should bond over this at some point? PM me if ya want. Because again, same.

That reminds me of one on Mt Silver...

CoNnEcTiOnS...

Morty why? Traitor. (just something that went through my mind when I was reading that ;) )

That was also Preston's inner monologue.

Here is the review of part B. Sorry for being late.

You were right on time in my book :)

Friendzoned :p

Ah, the friendzone.

When did this stealing habbit begin? Just after she ran away home?

It began when she stole for her father...and unfortunately just expanded from there.

That had to be a hard choice for Shawn.

I think he made the wrong one, but it was indeed a difficult situation.

Did Morty never thought about what Gabriël will do with the wing?

Nah.

Wait? Preston is the one with Manaphy? That was a supprise for me. Or maybe I missed something.

Yeah, he was the very same trainer! I think I had a flashback about it in Chapter Eight.

I never imagined Froslaas as a geisha. But it does make sense, looking to the bow on her back.

That's how I always identified it.

I remember in Diamond and Pearl team Gallatic members in the Veilstone building say to your character that you are to young to join. Seems like team Skye thinks differently about it.

All ages are good, here.

Does Alec feel sorry for Machop? Good thing if he starts to care for his Pokémon.

He's learning a lot in his time with Chase, Logan and Preston.

This is just horrible. Natalia just lost the last person she could trust. And the big cause of it explains it. That makes it that more dramatic.

Yeah :/

Sounds like ritual equipment

Yessir...

I think Natalia doesn't want it. But the force of a group is heavy to withstand.

It really is.

If Gabriël succeeds in awakening Ho-oh, I expect a epic battle between Ho-oh and Lugia. I just have the feeling that could happen.

The story ain't over yet...

Thanks, Harzard. You're a rock star :D

I started reading this story in January. I decided that I'd get a forum account and help with feedback once I caught up. All I can say that hasn't been said is that I absolutely loved the part in chapter 14 where Logan finds the Eevee in the forest and heals her.

This is the sweetest thing I have ever seen. Thank you so much for making an account specifically to comment, Lux. It seriously means the world to me.
 
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