Electrodes static sprite thread

[Electrode]

Hiya all Welcome two my sprite thread Here I will display all my work I apoligise that its mostly Mixes right now i'm still a beginner but as I progress i'll do more so here they are My static sprites:

He I love the fact that when you mix you can put a weakness with its opisit Yay

Ninetails is my favorite pokémon to mix its just got a thing

I like electic types what can I say

another strength with weakness

aww so cute

My first three way mix

the thing in my sig its not new anymore but i'm too lazy too change it

yay another picachu mix but like it hasn't been done like 500x

I dont like this one its pretty bad

I like this one alot baby stantler but its realy ponyta nad stant

Revamps:



Trainers:


Scratch:


Re-elment:


Rules Read or die:
1.if you post dont just post wow there great or god those suck please give me a crit i'm truly not that much of a spriter yet
2.please dont flame or spam

and thats all for now so please rate gratley apriciated

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Awwwwww, I love that pikamew!!!

 

[Electrode]

Wow that was fast in luke 30 seconds i've got a post well thanks I like it too

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Your sprites are the BESTEST!!!!!!!!!
Suggestion: Pika/Mankey mix.U don't have to take this suggestion, but it would be funny

 

[Electrode]

I'll try but not now tomorrow it'll be up i've got to get off the compter now so once again please ratez

 

[Pokefan26]

I've seen those sprites from someone. I'm getting close to thinking you're stealing.

 

[Starter530]

The ninetales/Flareon could use more Flareon in it.
Maybe give it Flareon's Tail
also, the top part of the fur on its neck looks strange idk maybe its just me

 

[Psychic]

Actually, they're not that good, and I don't know why they're being praised.


Feraligatr/Charizard: The wings should firstly be reversed, as they were placed on the wrong sides, and the tailflame should start lower down. Its bottom jaw should have been recolored to be the color of the stomach, and you could have make the spikes the stomach color or the dark blue of the wings.

Ninetails/Flareon: The mixing job was done rather sloppily, so the mane and ears are positioned too high and too far left respectively.

Magnemite/Pikachu: It's okay, but the simplicity it rather boring. Also, the edit of the shape isn't round enough and the tail should be lower down.

Marowak/Pikachu: Not bad, but I don't like how you made the stomach red, and the tail is too far out. It should be partly covered by the body.

Mew/Pikachu: The positioning of the right ear is bad; it should be lower down so it's partly hidden by the head. The transition between the Mew and Pikachu tail is really bad and looks awkward. You could have edited the Pikachu tail more so it would be thinner and such. And I don't like that you recolored the eyes, but whatever.

Ninetails/Pikachu/Jigglypuff: WHAT DID YOU DO TO IT?! You erased the tails and did a bad job replacing all nine with a single Pikachu tail and therefore leaving it with two legs and a third which is basically a foreleg which is way too long. Hindlegs are always a different shape than forelegs. That's why it looks so bad and awkward; it's too thin and too long. You also confused the two lightest shades on the torso. You should have edited Jigglypuff's lightest color.

Dugtrio/Pikachu: the ears shouldn't be the same on all of them because some are at angles. The tails should be moves down to the left, and Pikachu have black noses, so you should recolor them.

Mewtwo/Pikachu: The right ear should be lower and more to the right and again, the tail transition was horrible. You also could have made the bottom of the tail brown and let it become yellow so it would be more like Pikachu.
Please never make a mix of those Pokémon again. Yellow is sooo not Mewtwo's color.

The...bird thing: Really, really badly done. All you did was a sh*tload of copy/pasting and didn't even try to make the parts fit and bland into each other naturally. Using the same wing twice was a terrible move and it's missing pixels on the bottom of the right one. The legs should also be reversed.

Ponyta/Stantler thing: the shading is weird and whacked out, on the back and especially the hindleg. The front legs are too long for the back ones and the head itself is strange.



I think you need to check out the tutorials and work some more on your spriting. You need a lot of improvement on just the general idea of placing body parts and so on.

~Psychic

 

[Electrode]

I've seen those sprites from someone. I'm getting close to thinking you're stealing.

Okay listen I dont steal sprites and if you find a thread that has the same sprites check my ones by conpairing them with someone elses on pain or photoshop or what ever so just believe me for now

This is for Psychic wow that alot of crit well 'll just say thanks for the crit and i'll study the tutorials more

Heres some new sprites I tried my hand at re-vamping:

 

[jhoto moto]

Aww cool sprites man the only 2 I dont and I must agree with Psychic is Feraligatr/charizard and Nintails/picachu/wigglytuff and try another mix besides picachu it probly on of the easyst pokemon to mix try and if not then try a picachu base instead of the other pokemon

 

[Electrode]

Hey evryone time to update I tried my hand at trainers:

 

[Starter530]

the revamp: good, except too much black outline gotta' fix that
trainer 1: Good, but kinda' plain
trainer 2: Serious outline problems. its jagged delete the corner pixels. go to the sprite tutorials, the pixel art tutorial, it'll tell you what corner pixels are. Oh and alsothe neck ring doesn't look round on the side
trainer 3: Good, excpt his cane looks cut off on the left

 

[intergalactic platypus]

They're pretty good, but the eyes on many of them are kind of small and squinty. Use the eyes of a proportionate pokemon. Oh, and Feralizard has upside down wings and marochus head isn't recolored

 

[castiboy]

not that bad kid, for a begginer. just keep working on your custom parts, because your mixes are too copy-paste-ish and when you make custom parts, they look unnatural. well it's a matter of practice.

This is for Psychic wow that alot of crit well 'll just say thanks for the crit and i'll study the tutorials more

that's the attitude! =D keep it up.

 

[Electrode]

not that bad kid, for a begginer. just keep working on your custom parts, because your mixes are too copy-paste-ish and when you make custom parts, they look unnatural. well it's a matter of practice.

that's the attitude! =D keep it up.

Thanks I got a message from arbiter a while ago for C spriting so I think i'll also put them there

 

[absol3000]

I really like them.

 

[Electrode]

Hey everyone I made A new update I tried my hand at a sratch its totally scratch exept for the body thats from R/S garadose but the rest is scratch:
I call it Hydragash

 

[miken park]

I remeber you showing me the outline of that.. Shade it a bit more, as well as outline shading.Or make it have a colour outline.

 

[Electrode]

I remeber you showing me the outline of that.. Shade it a bit more, as well as outline shading.Or make it have a colour outline.

Yeah I showed you the base but I re-did it because by acident I saved as GIF. so my sprite got dotty so I jsut re-did it and i'm surprised that I forgot the outline shade and could you tell me just what needs to be shaded I just didn't want too over do the shading and get a seriously nastly crit

 

[castiboy]

Hey everyone I made A new update I tried my hand at a sratch its totally scratch exept for the body thats from R/S garadose but the rest is scratch:
I call it Hydragash

work on its shape, it looks really deformed, sorry, you have to make outlines smooth and make the different parts in the right place and all... i suggest you get back to the outline step before passing into something more complex such as shading for this, or you'll have to do alot more to fix it.

i like to see motivated people, but for this kind of things, you should start with hard re elements, that way you'll work on blending, shaping, and shading. or use bases for your fakemon, and not just the main shape from gyarados, but the outline and shading of the base aswell, because it didn't really help...

keep it up, i'll check this topic and help you when i can k? =)