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Element X

This Fic is PG-15, it contains quite a bit of violence, if the mods think the rating should be upped to a higher level, then that's understandable.
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This fic is already up to chapter two, as I've been writing it for a little while now and posting it elsewhere, anyway, I hope you enjoy reading it, and I hope you will pleasure me with the presence of you writing a review, that would make me very grateful.
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Element X​

Chapter 01: The Coming of Ragnarok


A strong wind whipped around the museum gardens as they closed for the night. The trees were violently shaken as November settled in, winter had come early. As the security was set into place for the night, the museum curator, Dr. Charles Winsley sat at his desk, his candle-lit lantern casting an eerie shadow upon the wall behind him. He was an old man, around sixty at least, his aging face both wise and mysterious, he was often one to give fantastic tours around the museum, the children from the village looked up to him an awful lot, with his vast knowledge of history and science.

Winsley had been working on a theory for a number of years, a theory that would shake mankind forever as it did him when the possibility came into his head. His vast knowledge of Physics and Mathematics had always came in useful, but as he continued to delve deeper into what he may have discovered, he was beginning to wish he had never have stumbled upon the idea. The probabilities rose steadily as he went deeper into possibilities. “The world may end sooner than we think,” he had always thought as he saw those television programmes explaining about natural resources running out, Global Warming taking its toll on the Ice Caps and of course, terrorist activity.

The clock struck eight and the wind outside seemed to become quicken and become fiercer. He looked over to the corner of the room where his true companion and friend sat asleep on a large armchair. A small, grey haired cat was purring softly with its eyes tight shut. As Winsley looked over he smiled and shook his head at the purring, before returning to his paper. They were never apart, always a pair. forever studying the mysteries of the universe and history.

***

“I don’t think you really understand what this will do! You cannot believe that this is the solution!”

“The solution is what it is, this will bring the people back to their place of rest, and we will be at peace once more. We just wasted Ninety Six Billion Pounds if we don’t follow this through.”

“You cannot be serious! Blowing up the sun! Ludicrous, I won’t have it. And that is final. You are fired.”

The man stood and smiled at this comment from his boss, they had always been friends, and he just simply wanted to finish what his family had begun at the turn of the century.

“Why do you stop me continuously? You’re always holding me back. It isn’t fair.”

He walked over to his boss, and friend, his large black boots clapping against the floor with each grand stride. He was extremely tall and wore nothing but black, even now he was wearing a black sweatshirt and black trousers.

“I am sorry, but I cannot allow this to happen, you are fired.”

“No, Joseph, I am not the one who is fired.”

The man in black reached into his pocket and pulled out a large, black pistol, equipped with a silencer, aimed it at Josephs head and pulled the trigger. He walked to the exit of the room and looked at the bloody mess behind him.

“It is you, who is fired, my friend.”

Grabbing his black trench coat as he exited the office block and stepping into the rain, he had only one thing on his mind, the destruction of humanity, and he was to be the one that caused it. All that was left was a museum curator to the south, a small village museum, easy target.

As the rain lashed upon the city of London several flocks of bird had found roost in the gutters of buildings, people walked around everywhere with their umbrellas held above their heads, and the man in black strode towards the company car park. A smug look on his face, he was safe in the knowledge his plan was to go through and now there was nobody to stop him, he had the weapons, and he had the resources, now all he needed were the calculations.

***

“This is very strange. Sir, I think you should take a look at this.”

Out in Nevada desert, a small satellite station had been monitoring the sun for several years. Solar powered and only housing five occupants, the station was barely known to several science institutions within 100 miles of it, never mind the rest of the world.

“What is it Jones? It better not be another Flare like it was last time.”

The commander of the station was a portly man, dressed as ever in one of his favourite Hawaiian style shirts and three-quarter length pants. A pair of sunglasses was tied around his neck, he was the perfect definition of ‘overweight tourist’ but regardless of how he looked, he wasn’t stupid, and he was an interesting man to say the least. Now age sixty, he had travelled around the world in his younger –and more fitter- days in the name of science. His prime interest was Evolution, but after the theory was proven to be the absolute, he turned his intentions to the sun. The sun had been the companion he had in his travels no matter what, “always there to brighten up my day” he had often said… obviously in a literal sense.

“Well sir, it isn’t… that. However, there is a definite change in the radiation levels being given off by the sun at the moment, currently it seems to have cooled down, as it were.”

“Cooled down eh? How much has it cooled down by would you say?”

“Well, on average, the surface temperature is around 5,780,000 Degrees right? Well this drop would ideally have caused that temperature to drop to just below 2,000,000 degrees, which is half of the usual Low point in temperature of the sun. Ideally, a temperature like this is well within capability of causing an abrupt winter, and in end altering the climate of earth very drastically, as Global Warming, except this would be Global Freezing.”

“I see, well, for a temperature drop to go from that high to that low, there would have had to have been a mass loss of Hydrogen. That makes no sense.”

“It’s probably just an anomaly with the equipment then, oh well, at least it isn’t serious.”

***

“I have it, the answer to everything on how the sun could ever be destroyed.”

Winsley had cracked the final mathematical formula of his theory after several hours of hard work and over-doing. A sudden feeling of daunting coursed over his body as he came to terms with what he had found. This information could never be let out.

He stood up and stretched his arms and tensed the muscles in his legs, before walking out of the room and into the nearby kitchen area. The window was still being pelted with rain and the clock read 22:04, a late night for the museum curator. Walking over to the far bench he noticed in the mirror on the wall that the door to his living quarters was ajar.

“Hmm… how did that happen…? I wonder.”

He turned around and walked out of the kitchen into the small hallway. The study was letting light into the hallway and casting a shadow upon the wall opposite. A moving shadow in the shape of a person was the subject of the eerie casting, rustling around the study.

The thought hit Winsley like a bullet into the chest. The man was after his theory and had gotten his hands on it… all because he was after a cup of coffee. Winsley stepped back into the kitchen and walked over to the knife holder, a wooden object with varying slots that would hold several knives, each of different purpose and size. He picked up a large meat cleaving knife and walked back out of the kitchen, standing next to the doorway of the study, his heart beating rapidly and his blood pressure going insane.

The rustling inside the study suddenly stopped, and Winsley looked towards the doorway, still clinging to the knife in his sweat-drenched right hand. Footsteps. Then a pause. Then more footsteps.

“Is he coming to the doorway?”

Winsley stood, rooted to the spot in shock as the man came out of the doorway and looked at him, smiling weakly with the documents in one hand, and a small, black pistol, complete with a silencer, in the other.

“Hello Winsley, thanks so much for these, they’ll help me a lot, oh! What are you doing with that knife my dear friend?”

Winsley stared at the man standing before him, dropping the knife onto the floor and causing a clash as blade hit wood. The stainless steel glinted in the light coming from the kitchen and study, and reflected it onto Winsleys face, blinding him for a brief moment.

“Alex… what… what are you doing here?”

“I am coming to collect what is mine.”

“Those documents are anything but yours!”

Winsley felt the strength returning to him after the shock of seeing his old student standing before him, with a gun pointed directly at his forehead. Alex was exactly as he had always been, Blonde hair, in perfect contrast with the Black clothing he had always worn. He was an excellent child, and had always admired the science of Physics. Alex was never popular in school as Winsley had come to learn as he taught him all he knew. This had seemingly led to Alex resenting a lot of people… perfectly understandable at that age, but this was ten years later, and Alex would’ve forgotten that resentment had he been in correct state of mind… which to Winsleys knowledge, he was.

“What… what do you plan on doing with my theory Alex?”

“Ah! Doctor, I must thank you, I remember you telling me of this long ago… yes… you told me of how it may be possible to wipe out a star… and that you would one day discover whether or not your claim was true…”

“What is your point Alex? Why have you changed your attitude so much since the last time we met, a little over a year ago wasn’t it? Come now, you mustn’t act like this…”

“Indeed… it was a year ago wasn’t it. Remember the present I gave you? That beautiful clock, you have it in your study don’t you?”

“Yes, I do. Your point better be coming.”

“Ah, who has the gun here Winsley? Let me take my time. Anyway… the clock. Well, let us just say that time carries many secrets my friend.”

“What is your point boy? Tell me what you plan to do with my theory!”

“I plan… to take revenge on those that tormented me… I plan, doctor, to put this theory into practice.”

Winsley stood rooted to the spot once more, could Alex truly be serious? He planned to exact his revenge upon a few schoolchildren by wiping out humanity?

“You cannot…. cannot be serious!”

“I am deathly serious. You are an Atheist, aren’t you Doctor? Tell me, are you afraid to die? Enter that black abyss of death?”

“You wouldn’t kill your friend Alex!”

“I already have done so. Goodbye… Charles.”

Winsley felt a ripping pain upon his head as the world around him began to spin around… his eyes were becoming less and less focused, and he could feel himself falling. As he finally felt gravity cause his body to connect with the floor, he uttered his final words as the world around him turned to darkness…

“He has no idea…”

Alex walked out of the living quarters within the museum of Dr. Charles Winsley, who was now but a memory. He replaced the gun into his trousers before entering the lobby of the Museum. The security guards acknowledged him leaving and bid him farewell. He was known to be a great contributor to the museum funds, he had gotten in after hours easily, any museum patron as respected as him would have. Walking over to his jet black Ferrari F60, he turned and looked upon the small museum once more, and gave a salute.

“Farewell Doctor Charles Winsley, my mentor and dear friend.”

He spun around and jumped into the driver’s seat, throwing the documents containing the theory upon the passenger seat and placing his gun inside the glove compartment, taking out a plane ticket to Las Vegas, Nevada as he did so and double checking them. Flight time: 02:00am November 17, 2005. Departure from: Teesside Airport. Destination: Las Vegas International, NV. Six hours away. Smiling slightly and revving the engine, he shot off down the country lane that led to the museum in first gear, leaving a trail of dust behind him, heading for the airport…

***

At the same moment in time, several thousand miles away in an underground facility, located just west of Las Vegas, Nevada, the worlds most powerful Nuclear weapon had been completed, codenames ‘Ragnarok’. The nuke was capable of destruction upon a worldwide scale… and was set for launch in exactly twenty four hours…

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End of Chapter 1
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Chapter 02: Four Days


Alex had fallen asleep as the plane soared over the Atlantic Ocean, on course for Las Vegas International Airport, Nevada. The slight hum of the engines seemed as a lullaby to his mind as he drifted in-between dreams. The flight time was a little over twenty hours… and he needed to be at the facility two hours prior to the launch, meaning he had needed to get as much sleep as possible prior to his arrival. Thankfully, the day before had contained events that had certainly tired him out, and he fell asleep with ease, not even waking to the Air Stewardess offering him his breakfast as the sun rose over the west-Atlantic.

He finally awoke to the sound of the pilot announcing that they were due to land in a mere ten minutes and that Seatbelts were to be fastened for the remainder of the journey. As he pulled up the blind of the window and allowed the brilliant sunlight to filter through the window pane, he could see the desert below him. Smiling, he turned and fastened his belt, and sat down, stretching his arms and yawning. Looking to his right, Alex saw an old woman was sitting knitting what appeared to be a hat. She turned and smiled at him, looking out at the clear blue through the window.

“You know,” She said, “I do say that this earth is beautiful, isn’t she? God certainly did a good job creating this planet, I do hope nothing happens to her… don’t you my boy?”

Alex looked at her a little uneasily, as he doing the right thing? Of course he wasn’t… but he had to do it…

“Yes. It is a nice planet.”

He couldn’t bring himself to look upon the old woman’s face; her glinting eyes would only strike him and his quest farther down. He turned away from her, forcing a smile, and resumed looking into the clear blue outside, and the desert below slowly turning into the city of Las Vegas…

“Yes… she is beautiful… It is a pity that what lives upon her will be her downfall though…”

Alex’s eyes seemed to glaze as he looked out of the window at the bustling city below… his conscience was weighing upon him… was he to be the one that ended it all? His thoughts were eventually interrupted by the loudspeaker,

“Captain speaking, Two minutes until we land, we thank you for flying with British airways and hope you enjoy fabulous Las Vegas. Please ensure you have all of your belonging from the overhead compartments before you exit the craft, and only unfasten your seatbelts when the light goes off. We hope you have enjoyed your flight.”

“At last… now to chase away these ridiculous thoughts and get on with the greatest fireworks display ever…”

Alex leaned back in his seat and felt a rough rumble as the plane skidded down the main runway of Las Vegas International…

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Jones sat at his desk, the anomaly hadn’t left the screen since yesterday and he was getting worried. He eventually got up and walked to go outside, pulling a cigarette from his shirt pocket and a lighter. As he opened the door, he expected a large heat rush from the desert sun as always, instead the temperature remained constant outside as the air conditioning had made it inside. He pulled away from lighting his cigarette and walked back indoors, letting his instinct take him to the Air Conditioning panel and checking the temperature… the air conditioning wasn’t online.

“What the hell? SIR! Can you get here please?”

The commander was asleep in his bed, still in yesterday’s clothes. A bottle of Jack Daniels whiskey was on the bedside cabinet, only half full. He awoke with a start at the sound of his name being called. He sat up and looked over the room, acknowledging himself in the mirror opposite as he did whenever he rose from his slumber.

His eyes were bloodshot and dry, and his sunglasses were askew upon his head. He had several of his shirt buttons undone and his three-quarter length pants were falling off his legs. He jumped up and quickly sorted himself out, not bothering to fix his hair, hair care was never a big thing to him. As he walked out of his room and into the research facility, he looked around for the source of the voice,

“What is it?”

“It’s me sir, Jones, I think that anomaly yesterday may not have been an anomaly. The air conditioning isn’t online, the outside temperature is the same as it is in here, and the anomaly is still there.”

“You’re joking? How can that be!? It makes no sense!”

“I’m not joking sir, you can check yourself, and something is up. And I think we had best alert the scientific authority immediately, the world is going to be facing a crisis if the sun remains at this temperature for more than 72 hours! There will be a second Ice age!”

“Get on the phone to NASA immediately and get them to run a scan for us, if they turn out the same results as us, then we know it is true.”

“Yes sir.”

Jones moved like lightning to the phone and pressed the quick dial for NASA, before waiting for the dial to go through and the phone to begin ringing. As he waited he noticed that, for the first time in his career here, he had seen the commander extremely stressed. He had never seen his boss this uptight… and now, he was going crazy…

The phone was answered promptly, and a young voice came on the line.

“Hello, George Winsley speaking, NASA Solar research Department, how may I help you?”

“Hello, I’m phoning because of a result of a scan we at the Nevada installation have come across. The scan states that the Sun currently has a surface temperature of approximately 2 million degrees, is this correct according to your computers?”

There was a pause before the voice on the other end of the phone replied,

“Yes, there has been the same occurrence here; it has remained for the past twenty-six hours. We will alert the Government once Twenty-Eight hours have passed with this as the result. Thank you for double checking with us before taking action.”

“I see, thank you for the time then, and may us all hope that this time it is indeed a mere anomaly.”

“Indeed. Goodbye.”

Jones placed the phone back into the holder and walked over to the commander once more, before pulling over an office chair and sitting down, running his fingers through his hair. He looked over to his boss, thinking of how long they had been working together… in all these years he hadn’t actually come to know his boss’s, and friends, name.

“Sir… what is your real name? All these years have passed… and yet I don’t know it…”

“Jones, you’re a funny lad you know, my name is Harry, indeed I wonder why you haven’t known it throughout the years we have been working together…”

Jones just smirked and walked outside, lit up his cigarette with his Silver lighter, and looked to the skies.

***

Passport control had taken an age, two flights had landed at the same time, and the result was mass congestion all through customs. Alex had finally made it though into the luggage area, thanking himself for not packing anything other than what he had in the bag slung over his shoulder. Just a change of clothes, some money and a pass card into the facility.

Alex finally reached the entrance to the airport terminal after all the hustle and bustle of customs and the baggage collection. Looking around he spotted his ride to the facility directly opposite. A man in a large black overcoat wearing sunglasses, complete with a burning a cigarette in his mouth, standing in front of a large black car with tinted windows, possibly a Mercedes. Alex acknowledged him and walked over, not noticing the strange air temperature of Nevada compared to what it should be.

“Welcome to Vegas” he thought as he entered the large black car, rather hurriedly. Inside was incredibly luxurious, cream leather seats and a small refrigerator accompanied a good-sized television and a small table, complete with drink mixer.

“Driver, You know the way right?”

“Of course sir, we will be there shortly.”

Alex smiled, allowing the drink mixer to stir him up a cocktail, as he faxed through the calculations of the launch to the facility.

***

“Captain, we have just received word of possible terrorist activity in the Nevada desert from British Intelligence. Should we send some men out there just in case?”

“Yes, I know about it, there are already teams on their way. Precisely sixteen miles out of Las Vegas Airport, easy enough to get to, the teams will be there within the next fifteen minutes.”

Sure enough, two drop teams had been initialized for land at the exact location of the facility in which Ragnarok resided. The team was due to land in approximately twenty-two minutes. Their mission was simple, kill Alexander White, and ensure whatever was going on inside the facility wasn’t going to be going on for much longer.

“Twenty minutes until we raise those idiots, right boys?”

A chorus of “right” streamed through the team captains ears as the engines of the plane masked out all other sound with their extreme volume. The captain was a tall, well built man, as indeed most military officers were. His stereotypical cigar burned slightly as he chewed the other end every now and again. His eyes glinted, he hadn’t been involved in a terror prevention operation since the early nineties, where he and a crack team of commandos had infiltrated a terrorist compound and destroyed blue prints for a weapon capable of causing Yellowstone volcano to erupt. He was a man who loved action, he was indeed, about to see the most action he would ever again witness.

***

Alex finally pulled up to the facility entrance after the brief drive from the airport. He patiently waited as his driver opened the left hand side door and allowed him to exit the vehicle. The driver bid him farewell and stepped into the driver seat once more, and drove off down the path he had just came along.

“If only he knew of whom he was saying goodbye to….”

Alex walked to the doorway of the facility; it was an excellent cover up. A small shack in the middle of a desert, nobody would suspect a thing. Stepping inside he pulled out his Key Card and placed it inside a small slot on the farthest wall, punching in his six-digit pin code. As he pressed the enter key upon the pad, behind him the floor opened up, an electronic trap door. He took his cardkey and walked down the newly revealed stairs. A well lit stairwell lay before him; the air was clean down here, and fresh. He eventually reached the bottom of the stairs, before lay a large room, with several computer terminals, and scientists wandering around aimlessly. A large screen was at the opposite end of the room, completely black, except for the large, red display that read 00:11:25.

A scientist wearing a white lab coat and thick rimmed glasses was walking towards him. His hair was almost as wild as his face expression was vacant… “Incredible hair…” Alex pondered to himself, as the scientist came within a few feet of him,

“Ah! Alex, you are just in time to foresee the launch my friend! The calculations you sent are perfect, and are in place! There are soldiers on the way unfortunately, however they won’t arrive until after Ragnarok has launched, which of course, will be too late.”

“Excellent, where is the execution key? The launch is coming early.”

“Oh ho! Eager to continue are we? Well, let me raise the launch alarm, and then show you exactly what you need to do!”

The scientist, with his large white lab coat and thick rimmed glasses, walked away from Alex and pulled a switch on the wall, clearly labelled “Launch Alarm.” As soon as the switch was pulled, the entire facility went into Red Alert and scientists began walking out of several exits, leaving Alex and the scientist that had greeted him standing alone in the laboratory.

“Follow me Alex… where History will be brought to a fitting Climax.”

Below the large screen with the display upon it were several keys. The scientist motioned for Alex to switch them all, he did so in basic fashion. One, two, three, four. The display ahead stopped and began to open up. A final button was located behind it, with the words LAUNCH written across it.

“Now let me check the surface temperature of the sun Alex.”

The scientist rushed over to a secondary panel and booted it up, a number display came up on the screen.

“NASA is still reading it as less than Two Million Degrees, launch the missile now Alex.”

“Here we go…. Goodbye world.”

Alex pressed the button, and the entire facility began to shake, as if an atomic bomb had just been unleashed directly above. He threw himself down onto the floor as a large rumble could be heard from nearby, followed by an intense Sonic Boom. Ragnarok had been launched.

“It will hit the sun in precisely 96 hours… four days! Let’s get the hell out of here before the military arrive!”

Alex didn’t need telling twice, he bolted straight for the door, the facility collapsing around him. Running up the stairs he finally saw the exit. A figure of a human was stood there, pointing its arm towards Alex. It didn’t take too long for Alex to realise the arm was holding a gun. It took him too long to realise that he had just been shot through the head. Alexander White was killed by the American Military commander, Daniel Blackett.

***

“What the hell was just launched from Nevada?”

NASA had immediately picked up Ragnarok on its radar at the instant of launch; unfortunately they had no clue as to what it was. The radar was simply showing a large dot as the sweeper passed over the point of launch.

“It is travelling at an incredible speed, it is going to break the atmosphere in several minutes, what the hell… commander I’ve never seen anything like this!”

“Can you point out where the damn thing is headed Winsley?”

“Hmm… judging from current trajectory… I’d say… No way, that’s impossible. This thing, going from what I can see here, is headed for the Sun.”

Winsley flashed back to his grandfather over in England. He remembered how he had stated it might be possible to destroy the sun at a certain temperature and with certain weaponry…

“No way…”

“Winsley, snap back to reality, this is a crisis! We must alert the President immediately! If that Missile is headed for the sun, supposing it is comprised of the right alloy, it could penetrate the surface and explode!”

The commander jumped over to the phone and called the White House… the world was facing the biggest crisis it had ever come across.

***

Ragnarok flew through the Atmosphere of Earth, on a due course for the sun… it contained the correct alloy and elements to withstand heat of up to 3,000,000 degrees centigrade. Ragnarok was going to strike in less than four days, and wipe out humanity, and possibly the rest of the Solar System as humans ever knew it.

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End of Chapter 2
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Thanks for reasding so far, and as I said, i hope you review this fic for me, it'd be greatly, greatly appreciated. Next chapter up soon.
-Josh
 
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Josh, Nice fic (or at least i hope it's a fic >_>) All I'd have to say is the ident unless you have to new line to count.... Nice discriptions, and Chap 1 was fairly short...
 
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Dragonair

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Interesting story. Reminds me a lot of my American Literature class, where someone dies in every story we read, but that's okay. :p

I suggest to be a little more "stylish" in writing your next chapter. (Or the chapter after that, or something.)
 
Ron, I'll keep that in mind as I carry onwards, thanks for the comments you guys have posted.
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Chapter 03: One World.

Alex fell back as he felt the searing pain of a bullet smash through his head. How had he been as careless as to realise there was a gun but no gunshot he wondered, as the world around him faded, and he heard another shot… he landed on his back after what seemed to him like an eternity and fell down the stairs, his last feeling was that of immaculate pain.

As he stopped rolling at the bottom… a bullet hole between his eyes, the scientist that had aided in launching Ragnarok collided with him and they both lay motionless in a crimson pool. Captain Blackett ran down the stairs, his gun still ready to fire, and ran into the lab. He was soon followed by several marines. The entire facility was collapsing unto itself; the launch of Ragnarok had caused a minor tremor and the result was the facility blowing up.

As a large fragment of the ceiling landed a few feet in front of the captain, he used his better judgement and called for the marines to retreat from the area, they quickly ran back up the stairs and made it into the small desert shack as the ground around them began to swallow itself.

“It’s like quicksand!”

“It would be captain!” shouted one of the marines over the noise, “whatever was launched has left a gaping hole in the desert, you can see it from here, look!”

Sure enough, around seventy feet away from where they stood, there was a gaping hole in the desert, complete with scorch marks. In the skies above, Ragnarok could be seen as a mere speck in the sky against the mid day sun. As the desert continued to collapse, several of the marines began praying, was this their moment of death?

“What the hell are you thinking boys, we aren’t going to be killed by some SAND for Christ’s sake! MOVE IT!”

The captain placed a new cigar in his mouth, lighting it and taking a few draws, before motioning for all the marines to move in a northern direction away from the facility, which was still standing, miraculously. Above all of the commotion, the Thunderhawk mark II mobile air transport helicopter flew, the sound of its blades masked out by the rumbling of the earth. As the marines ran, the helicopter flew overhead, trying to make its presence known.

The large black beast flew lower to the ground, causing strong gusts of wind to blow across the marines as they ran. They immediately stopped and turned to see the cause of the sudden wind.

“Captain! There’s a chopper here! Come on!”

“What the hell?” The captain spun around to see the large helicopter hovering overhead, its large rotary blades almost hypnotic against the blue sky. “Well move it then! Get aboard!”

The marines didn’t nee telling twice, they immediately spun on their tails and sprinted for the helicopter, which had lowered itself close enough to the ground for them to be able to board with a mere jump.

As the captain ran he lost his footing as the ground shook once more, he tripped and fell onto the floor, looking up in time to see the shack in the distance skyrocket into the air. The facility had exploded, throwing the helicopter into the air. As it was propelled higher it began to flip upside down, and as it did so the blades slowed down, and it began to descend to earth. The captain dived onto the floor once more and looked up in time to see the helicopter, and several of his marines explode.

“GOD DAMN IT! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH PEOPLE NOWADAYS?”

He thrust his clenched fist into the floor as he clenched his eyes shut and keeled over. There had been too much death today. A team of fourteen of Americas finest had been reduced to a mere four, on top of those were the pilots of the chopper, and the two men he had killed inside the facility. His conscience weighed down on him as he stood up, his eyes burning with rage. The remaining marines stood and watched him, waiting for their orders amidst the chaos of the collapsing desert.

“Okay marines, move out!”

He turned once more and sprinted away from the site of explosion behind him, closely tailed by the four remaining marines. Ahead was a rocky area, he had hopes the desert behind would even out and become rocky sand again, for some reason this area consisted of pure sand, like what was on a beach.

He jumped for the rocks, followed by the marines, as the sand behind seemed to take on a mind of it’s own and collide within the centre of the ‘whirlpool.’ As they sat on the rocks, catching their breath and waiting for the dust to settle, they saw a large crater emerge from where they had once been. Nothing was left of the facility, just a gaping hole upon the desert surface.

The captain pulled out his cell phone and searched through the phonebook for the direct number to NASA, clicking the ‘ok’ button he waited a few moments as the dialling tone turned into the sound of ringing…

“Yo… NASA? We have problems…”

***

“It will be the end Mr. President. There is nothing we can do to stop it. We have no missile that can follow it into space, I cannot understand what technology there is within the thing, and now we will never know.”

“I see… well then, I suppose I had best make the announcement.”

The president placed down the receiver of the phone and spun around on his chair to face the window. He looked outside to the skies, a few clouds here and there; blue birds fluttering around the trees in the garden, the place seemed like a sanctuary. His mind drifted to the news he had just received, apocalypse in four days…

Turning around once more, he motioned for the film crew to immediately set up for the worldwide broadcast. In less than five minutes the equipment was set up, the camera was ready to roll and everything was in place. The worldwide announcement was about to begin.

“Mr. President, we are ready when you are.”

Channels from all over the world were apologising for the delay in their programming due to the broadcast, as the President appeared on the screen.

“My fellow people, the world, once again, is at a crisis. New terrorist activity has caused there to be a missile launched from Nevada approximately half an hour ago, on due course with our sun. Normally, this would not be a threat; however the sun is currently in a strange situation of its own. In three days the weather will make a turn for the ultimate, and the world will be forced into a winter, regardless of geographical situation. Countries currently in their winter, fall, or spring season will suffer the worst. Expect every natural weather disaster you can think of when this time elapses.”

The President shuffled around slightly and moved a few papers on his desk, closing his eyes and then looking back up at the camera, his office, beautifully furnished with crimson carpet, ornate decoration and portraits of former presidents on the walls, seemed like a prison cell as he continued to address this news.

“In four days time the world will officially end. The sun will be exposed to extreme nuclear radiation. The terrorists have launched a nuke that is on due course to collide with the sun and explode within 3.2 metres of the correct surface. The apocalypse… is here.”

As the final three words left his mouth, he couldn’t bring himself to believe what he was saying to the world. This message was due to be broadcast everywhere live… he hesitated and looked once more into the camera lens, ignoring the look of terror announced across the faces of everyone else in the room.

“I ask this of you all. Forget all that you have ever taken against one another and unite as human beings for our final hours. This is one world, and there is no more need for fighting and war. That is all from me, I leave you with your friends, family and neighbours. May God bless us all.”

The President looked down as the camera crew stopped recording the broadcast and turned off the equipment, causing the room to fall into a deathly state of silence. The wind outside, accompanied by the sound of the blue birds singing was all that could be heard for several minutes. Eventually, the President stood up and walked over to the coat hanger on the far side of the room, taking down a brown tweed jacket and placing it over his white shirt, accompanied with black tie. As he fastened up his tie, he walked out of the room, still in utter silence, and proceeded out of the white house, admiring the lush green lawns and the evergreen trees that lined either side of the main garden.

“To see all of this disappear… is it a punishment for all that we have done? May God help us now?”

***

Two days until Impact…
One Day until Ice Age…

The world had seemed to forget everything bad about humanity. There was no killing, no looting, and no nothing. The world was at peace. Humanity had strived to survive all these years, and yet, because of one man, it would all be to waste.

The surface temperature had dropped drastically, and certain areas of Russia had already been deemed uninhabitable. In certain areas of the UK it had began snowing, and the roads had turned into a slippy mess of black ice towards the north. The war in Iraq had halted and all of the soldiers had been returned to their families for the closing hours of life on earth.

Since the broadcast made by the president of the united states two days previously, there had been speeches made by Queen Elizabeth of England, Tony Blair, and also the United Nations. All messages had basically contained the same thing, live these last few days in peace. The Roman Catholic church had also made a speech, proclaiming that this was Revelation, alas, Jesus had not yet shown his face to save the day.

“In the final hour Jesus will return.”

Preachers all over the world had been going at this message since the first broadcast, ignoring several people on news programs proclaiming that humanity should throw away its religion and face the ultimate fact. Ragnarok was going to finish us all off. And nothing was ever going to stop it.

A light rain fell all over the world, as the once blue skies turned abruptly into a winter shade of Grey. At night the shape of the missile heading for the sun could be seen between certain hours. Speeding the millions of miles to put an end to all of the misery on the surface, Ragnarok was the final cause of all life.

***

The phone rang in the presidents office, NASA had discovered exactly when the missile would hit. The effect was still inconclusive. The president reached over and lifted the white receiver, bringing it to his ears,

“Hello? President Bush speaking.”

“Mr. President, the Missile will strike at exactly 7.42am Greenwich mean time. That is less than forty eight hours away; the Ice fall will come in approximately three hours time. Please inform the world of this.”

“Thank you, may God help us all.”

Placing the receiver down the President looked to the picture of Abraham Lincoln on the wall. An amazing portrait, it had captured the essence of the man perfectly. The President called in the camera crews once more, and prepared for the final broadcast he would ever make.

Within several minutes the equipment was set up and the camera had began rolling once more,

“My fellow human beings, I regret to inform you that the weather will immediately spin itself around in less than three hours time. I ask that you prepare for this event immediately. As for the missile situation, we have less than forty eight hours remaining here on earth, so please, live them well and in tone with one another. This is the final broadcast made by myself, farewell my fellows.”

He stood after finishing what was undoubtedly rushed and exited the room. The pressure of what he had to face was mounted and kicking into over drive, as it was for the rest of the world leaders…

Ragnarok was due to hit soon and the world was about to face the ultimate natural disaster.

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End of Chapter 03
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-Josh
 

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Well, I did promise you a review, and here it is.

What you have here is good so far. My advice would be to keep it up. Read some other fics on here written by reputable SPPf fic authors, and you'll kinda get some examples. Also, writing a fic takes dedication. So yeah, keep at it, don't get lazy in the middle and end up not finishing it.

FYI, atheist is not capitalized. :D
 
Thankyou all for the reviews so far, you know they are appreciated and taken into account, and I love hearing what y'all have to say aswell. Chapter four is written, I've spent the entire day doing it (Not like I have anything else to do), and I hope you enjoy it!
-Josh
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Chapter 04: Apocalypse, Please.

The wind suddenly picked up all over the world, the weather time frame had elapsed and the earth was about to face the worst weather it had seen in its lifetime.

Elena sat in her home, on the coastline of North East England, looking out of the window at the rain worsening every second. She hadn’t taken the news of the world ending lightly, and hadn’t said anything for the past three days. Her shoulder length blonde hair had lost the terrific volume it once had, and she had become a shadow of who she formerly was. As she sat, with her head in her arms, her mind flashed back to all of the memories she had ever taken into account. What was to happen when the world ended? She wouldn’t be missed – There would be nobody to miss her, she wouldn’t feel love anymore, there would be nobody to love and worst of all, she would die before her time, much like her radiating personality had at the news of the apocalypse.

Elena was inconsolable, her parents had tried talking to her, her friends, everyone had failed in making her feel better, but indeed, how anyone can make another feel better when the weight of annihilation lies upon them also… Elena understood it all; she just couldn’t comprehend her life finishing in such a way. She was to lose all she cared about, much like everyone else. Several people had dubbed her selfish, indeed the way she had gone about this was selfish, but her family understood, she had always been sociable, and even moving away from a friend caused her to become incredibly depressed.

After the weather outside had become a mere grey blur as the rain turned into sleet, Elena finally arose from her transfixed gazing and looked at the television screen, her parents smiled weakly at her before turning their attention to the weather report.

“The mid-Atlantic has become a mass of extreme pressures, as you can see here, there are several Hurricanes being formed.”

Sure enough, as the announcer pointed to the mid-Atlantic, six extremely large swirls of cloud were beginning to form. The map swerved around to the Pacific Ocean, where the same was happening. As the map moved to the Arctic Ocean, the announcer began to speak once more,

“This area of the Arctic ocean has become completely frozen in the past hour. Expect the same to happen to the Indian Ocean in the near future. We advise that you stay inside at all times, and ensure that all windows, doors and any other openings in your home are fully sealed. All areas can expect flooding due to the high amount of rainfall, which will turn to snow in the next hour or so. We will try to return with updates in the next hour, God bless us all.”

With the final four words, the television in the room turned off, and the house was plunged into complete darkness. The glow managing to get through the sleet outside from the streetlamps had disappeared. The power had been wiped out.

“Get some candles please Elena; I’m going to go get some bedding.”

Elena’s mother walked out of the room with her father, navigating the house with a small torch on a key ring. Elena turned and walked over to a small cupboard in the living room, fumbling around until she felt her hands touch a plastic bag. She pulled it out, and emptied it on the floor. Sure enough, there were several candles left.

Flicking the air out of her eyes, she waited for her parents to return to the room, looking once more at the weather outside. It seemed like a wall of sleet, smashing off the windows, making it seem like they could break at any second. She sighed as her parents entered the room once more, her mother carrying several duvets, sheets and pillows. Placing the bedding down, her mother turned and smiled at Elena through the darkness.

“Did you get the candles?”

“Yeah, there are only a few left though; we need to make the most of them.”

“Alright, thank you, can you pass one to your father? He has a lighter.”

Elena picked up one of the small candles and handed it to her father, still equipped with the small keychain torch. He pulled out a pink lighter from his pocket and sparked it up, the small, bluish yellow flame flickering within the darkness of the room, almost like a shining lighthouse. The candle lit up immediately after the flame made contact with its wick, and her father placed it on the floor. The room finally was light enough to make out. Her mother sat on the sofa, sorting out the bedding she had gathered.

Elena just lay back on the carpet and sighed as the flickering candlelight caused shadows to dance all around her, upon the walls of the living room, eventually closing her eyes and entering a dreamless sleep.

***

“Four Hours remain on earth as ragnarok nears the sun. It has managed to maintain the original set course these past four days, and breaks the record for the fastest missile to date. It has also sustained the incredible effects of the suns incredibly gravity and heat, Mr. President, this is the end of the road.”

An official from NASA had once again called the President away from his family as the crisis was nearing the ultimate climax.

“Look, I’m really not in the mood to listen to your technical rubbish. I KNOW the world is going to end, I don’t need you telling me the specifics over and over, and may you leave me and my family for these closing hours? Haven’t you got anyone you’d rather be with at this time?”

“Well… I… Apologies Mr. President, and No, I haven’t got anyone in this world, I’ll leave you alone, sorry about all of this.”

“I’m sorry to hear that son, but you see, you need to respect other people and their privacy, go to the bar area and get yourself a drink, spend these remaining hours happily.”

The President ushered the scientist out of the room, leaving him to go down to the bar area. The scientist walked off, clutching his papers and frowning, before ripping them to shreds and entering the bar, bustling with several other men and women, all enjoying themselves, and forgetting about the weather outside, and the fate before them.

***

Down in Nevada research station, Jones and Harry were living their last few hours on earth the way they had come to love living their free time, playing on video games. The monitors had all been switched off, and the air conditioning had been set to maximum, although the heat it was giving off was still not enough to warm the small facility up.

“You know, Jones, it’s been great working with you all these years, If there is one regret of mine, it is that you haven’t seen as much of the world as I have.”

“Ah, Harry, it’s alright, I think that regret is overshadowed by your stories of the travels you’ve had. You’re a good storyteller you know? You would’ve made a good writer.”

“Oh please, hahah, me? A writer? Absurd. Anyway, let’s not dwell on those regrets, we need to live for the moment, like that, umm… what was his name? Ebineb rapper man said in his song!”

“Harry… it’s Eminem, and that guy is lame.”

Jones twisted his face at the mention of the rap artist; he had never been a fan of rap. He had always admired the classical arts, “birth of all music!” he used to say, indeed, he’d be correct.

“Well I like that song, although I don’t understand any of it aside from the title.”

Jones laughed at his boss, and resumed playing the game flashing around on the television screen.

“I’m going to miss this…”

***

Ragnarok was within the outer layer of the sun, closing in on its detonation point, the core, extremely quickly. The last four days on earth had gone by incredibly quickly; there was no more war, strife, conflict, or indeed anything between humans. The earth had been enclosed within a large grey mass of clouds; the eastern coast of America had been ripped apart by numerous hurricanes, all forming into one incredible super storm, over the past twenty four hours. Thankfully, there had been an evacuation order as soon as the weather turn was announced, and thus the death toll had been lowered substantially, although many remained, questioning the point when the apocalypse had reared it’s ugly head anyway.

The Roman Catholic Church had abandoned hope as the final hour came. They prayed for the final coming over and over, alas it was to no avail. The body of high priests and the pope had remained within Rome, never abandoning the hope of Jesus Christ’s return to save humanity from the ultimate threat.

Elena and her family looked out of her window to the skies, alas nought could be seen, the snow had been falling non-stop and the earth had become a black of ice in several areas. The entire human population looked to the skies as the final hour began to elapse. The earth was silent, almost, alien.
Jones and Harry had dressed up in their clothes and coats and walked outside, standing in the snow falling upon the Nevada desert and looked to the sky, the masses of grey were a tremendous sight over the state, something rarely seen. They smiled as the snow fell down, onto their faces, and the desert floor.

Egypt had bared witness to possibly most tremendous sight of all. The top of the pyramids, now barley visible due to the weather conditions, were covered in snow. The Nile had completely flooded, and Egypt looked more like Venice than it did a desert. Cairo was at peace within itself.

Within the city of Jerusalem, the Jewish people and the Palestinian people had called off all feud and united with one another, watching the skies with the rest of the world. Indeed, the Roman Catholic and Protestant fighting in Ireland had come to much the same fate as this place.

Ragnarok closed in to the sun, thirty seconds until impact. Looking down at the silent earth from here would’ve shown a planet at peace with itself, for the first time in history. If one good thing was to come of the apocalypse, it was the end of all fighting between humans.

The Journeys End had finally come, and Ragnarok smashed into the surface of the sun at awesome speed, heating up intensely in a few milliseconds, and exploding as it reached the core. The radioactive pressure hit the sun immediately, causing it to expand and contract into itself, before exploding with a velocity that would have otherwise been deemed impossible. All humanity saw, was a blinding flash of light in the sky, illuminating everything through the grey skies.

As the sun exploded, it ripped apart a hole within the universe. A black hole had been formed. The explosion had wiped Mercury and half of Venus out of existence, now the second part of the apocalypse was about to enter effect.

As the Black Hole began to gather gravitational energy, natural light in the solar system disappeared from existence, plunging everything into darkness. The spiralling vortex began to open more and more, swallowing up the remains of Mercury, and dragging Venus, as well as Earth towards itself.

The people of earth felt the gravity tighten around them as earth began moving away from its position of orbit towards the black hole. Of course, they had no idea of what was happening. It had all came about so quickly.

Venus was swallowed by the hole as Earth came ever closer to it. The skies above were the first to be ripped from the surface, alas, due to the destruction of light, the fantastic display of the atmosphere leaving earth could not be seen. The gravitational effect continued to strengthen, as earth was moving faster.

As the final piece of the atmosphere left earth, the planet itself entered the hole, passing the event horizon and ceasing to exist.

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End of Chapter 04
Ed Note: This is not the end of Element X. We haven’t even finished the introduction yet, keep reading, I’ll get Chapter 5 up As soon as possible, and thanks for reading too, I hope you’re enjoying this fic.
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Chapter 05: Collisions


Elena dived into her parents arms as the gravitational effect smashed into earth, ripping it apart at the seams. The air around her seemed to be ripping her own body apart, and for a split second she thought she had died. She turned to see the room around her dematerialise into the atoms that made it up, she stood amidst a black field of particles, her eyes looking for what she knew wasn’t there, she felt alone in a black void. Forever lost. If only she had of known every other human being, animal, plant, and inanimate object was doing the same thing.

She looked back to a programme she had watched on the television a while ago, explaining Black Holes. It had stated that, when something crosses the event horizon of a black hole, it feels as if it is unaffected, but to someone watching this thing crossing the event horizon it would appear to break up back into the atoms that form its existence. “Is this what is happening now? Am I really just atoms floating about to everyone else?” she thought as she looked around, the silence was eerie, as was the darkness. There was no light.

Elena fell to her knees, closing her eyes and crying, silently. No sound, no light, just an empty void, filled with the particles of her parents, her home, and everything that she had ever lived around.
Suddenly, an electric pulse ran through her, causing her to stand up. Her entire body began to glow with a cyan glow, white at the centre. She lifted a hand to her face, and watched the glow radiate until the entire area she was within was lit up. “What the hell?” Elena was taken aback by this phenomenon, and felt her body coursing with a newfound energy, something she had never experienced in her seventeen years of life.

A the glow continued to radiate from her body, a blinding light blasted into her eyes, shielding them from whatever the source of the light was with her glowing arm, she looked up, allowing her eyes time to adjust to the new surroundings. Once her eyes returned to their normal state of vision, she looked upwards fully, still shielding her face with her arm. She saw atoms rearranging themselves, millions of miles above her, into a spherical object. As the object completed its reformation, she realised what it was, The Sun had been reborn.

As the glorious light illuminated the area around her, she saw more of the tiny particles floating around, as if a sudden wind had picked itself up. She questioned how she could see the particles, considering her science teachers words of how atoms or particles, or indeed even cells, couldn’t be seen with the naked eye. She shook the thoughts as she witnessed the world begin to rebuild itself around her. The radiance of the Sun had been exhilarating, but, now it seemed to have become weaker. Looking up, she saw the reason for it. Against the black around everything else, she could clearly see the Ozone Layer reforming. The sun shone through several areas, as patches were sealed up.

The ozone layer completely rebuilt itself, and she could see she was now standing in a sphere, a sphere as large as earth itself. She was amazed her eyes allowed her to see so far downwards. She had gotten over any scientific impossibility after she saw the glow surround her body, which was still emanating it’s crisp, cyan brilliance, the strange energy still coursing through her. As she looked up to what would be the skies once more, she saw the atmosphere of earth rebuilding itself, clouds were already forming, and the sky was turning a brilliant blue colour against what was pure darkness.

In several areas outside of the ozone layer, where the darkness could still be seen, she saw the entire solar system materialising before her eyes. It was as if someone had clicked on a light switch as billions of stars appeared one after the other, billions of light years away, their light had just reached Elena. She smiled as she witnessed the planets outside of earth fade from view as the atmosphere took over. She was still floating in a dark void, but now she had a beautiful sky to look upwards towards, as well as the radiance of the Sun, something she thought she had lost forever. Looking downwards once more, she saw the skies on the side of earth untouched by The Sun darken, as the core began to form. The orange ball of intense gravity and heat materialised, spinning in the clockwise direction, the opposite to that of which earth would be spinning very soon.

Slowly, the inner mantle of earth formed, below Elena. The outer mantle materialised after the core, only a few hundred miles below. Finally, she witnessed the world reform its basic shape around her as the crust formed. She saw the canyon that would soon be the Northern sea, and she saw a horizon form due to the near spherical shape earth had taken once more.

There were still millions of particles buzzing around her, and the glow that had appeared before this incredible event was still emanating from her body, indeed it seemed weaker due to the fact she had first seen it in darkness, and now it was as if day time had returned. She had begun to get used to this incredible energy coursing through her, although it was still a strange phenomenon, indeed, nothing in comparison to the natural rearrangement of the particles.

The next event brought a huge smile to Elena’s face. She witnessed the town around her begin to reform, exactly as it was. The North Sea was also ‘refilling’ itself with water. As she watched her house rebuild itself from the ground up around her, she looked at the clock on the mantelpiece, the display read square on twelve, mid day, the hands were immobile though.

Finally, as the glow around her body began to die down, the energy still remaining, her parents reformed before her very eyes, standing and looking confused, as she was, but with huge smiles on their faces nonetheless. There was a brief moment of silence as the world finished the molecular reconfiguration, but as the ticking of the clock on the mantelpiece resumed, life seemed to as well.

“Oh Elena! When I saw you and your father disappear when we smashed into that darkness, I thought you were gone forever!”

Elena’s mother grabbed her tightly and squeezed her, Elena almost felt as if the life was being drained out of her body.

“I… I’m gl- I’m glad to see you two again as well mom.”

As her mother released her, Elena rubber her sides and smiled at her parents. A question had been burning on her mind as soon as time restarted though,

“What happened? And, did you two both… glow?

“I did… a strange reddish glow appeared just before the sun did.” Her father replied,

“Wait, you saw the whole rebirth?” Elena was surprised by the news, “Were you standing in a black space, all alone, before that?”

“Yeah, I was,” He said again, “then the glow appeared and I felt really weird.”

“The same thing happened to me, I glowed Green though.”

Elena was surprised by the news; perhaps the theory on the television programme she had watched was correct.

“Alright, well, I wonder what it was…”

***

“Ow… my freakin’ head… its killing me…”

Alex awoke, he was inside a dark area, sparks dancing around, ejecting from a wire hanging from the ceiling. Looking around, Alex saw a lot of sand; the facility appeared to have collapsed.

“Dang it… the last thing I remember is launching Ragnarok, everything after that is a blur… I wonder what happened…”

Alex stood up, and walked to where the stairwell started, looking upwards, he saw that it had completely collapsed. He pulled out his cell phone, the battery was dead. Replacing it in the pocket of his now scruffy black jeans, he walked around the room a few times. He stopped when he thought he heard footsteps behind him. As he turned he saw a large man with a bullet hole in his head smash a Fire Extinguisher in his face, as everything went black…

***

“Sir… I don’t know what the hell happened but what I witnessed was incredible, it would seem everyone on earth witnessed the universe reform around them.”

“Indeed, tell me, Marley, what is this?”

Marley walked over to where his commander was stood, looking at a large picture taken from a telescope minutes ago.

“It’s just been sent from Nevada, they say that it’s the size of a planet…”

“A planet? Hmm… well, lets see here.”

Marley stood, looking at the picture upon the computer screen, sure enough; a large circular object was visible, extremely close to earth.

“That’s a tad queer… can you get me through to the Nevada branch now?”

“Alright, give me a few minutes.”

The commander walked out of the room, leaving Marley stood looking at the picture. The planet was distinctly similar to earth, everything about it was identical, the positions of the visible land and the positions of what would be Ocean.

“That’s odd… this planet almost looks the same as Earth…”

The commander walked back into the room with a telephone in his hand, as he handed it to Marley he took back the photograph, and began studying it for himself. Marley stood with the phone against his ear, listening to the ringing. Eventually, the phone was answered.

“Hello, Nevada NASA institution, how may I be of service?”

“Hello, I’m Marley Cambridge, from the head NASA institution; I’m calling in regards to the photograph you have just sent.”

“Ah yes, strange isn’t it? That planet is an identical clone to ours, from a geographical standpoint; we don’t know what is on the surface yet.”

“Identical? Tell me, can you give me the orbit speed of that planet, in comparison to Earths?”

“Earth… isn’t moving at all… we’ve remained constant in this position since earth materialised… that planet is on due course to collide with us, according to the calculations in my hand.”
“Collide? Are you serious!?”

“Please… as if I’d say something like that and not mean it…”

“Alright, can you email those calculations? Thanks.”

As Marley pressed the end call button on the phone, he heard his commander’s voice call over to him,

“Seems like he’s found out what I was just told…”

“Marley! What did they say to you?”

“They said that the planet in the photograph is on a collision course with Earth… they’re emailing the calculations now.”

“Collide? Planets colliding? Don’t be absurd, that’s impossible.”

“Not necessarily… Earth isn’t moving… we aren’t orbiting the sun. That planet is… and we’re in the way.”

There was a brief silence as the commanders usually tanned face dropped into a pale shade of white.

“We must alert the world of this.”

“Not until we get the calculations commander, besides, I think that we’ve stirred up enough international panic for the time being, what with ragnarok and all. We’ll just wait until we can confirm these calculations, which should be here now.”

Marley walked over to a computer, and logged onto the internet, heading straight for the institutional email service. Sure enough, the email had been delivered instantly, and inside were the calculations given for the time it’d take for the collision, and the orbit path.

“See, these are all correct. Now that that’s confirmed, you can go tell the president now.”

“Listen Marley, be careful with your attitude.”

Marley gave a funny look as the commander turned away, before looking back at the calculations on the screen. They were all perfect, and it read that the planets would collide in less than twelve hours.

“Mr. President, this is Commander Jon Luc speaking from the planet watch institution of NASA.”

“You had better give me good news this time NASA…what the hell is that thing in the sky?”

“That would be… another planet… Mr. President, I regret to inform you that once again it seems Earth is facing a crisis… there is no way we can stop that planet colliding with us, I am sorry to inform you of this grave event. In Approximately twelve hours, the planet will collide with us, as earth seems to have lost its orbit. That is all. NASA, out.”

The President sat with the phone against his ear for some time, staring blankly into space, NASA had been the bearer of bad news for the past five days, and his term in office had always been hell, now it seemed as if he had reached the final layer. Eventually replacing the phone, he stood and looked out of the window at the daunting figure of the sphere in the sky, growing larger. Shaking his head he once again called for the camera crews, so that he could give yet another speech to the world. As the camera crews finished preparing the broadcast equipment, the President sat down at his desk, sighed, and asked for the filming to begin.

“My fellow human beings, in less than an hour after the miraculous event that occurred with us all, as earth was rebuilt, it appears we are once again facing a crisis. It seems that Earth Is no longer orbiting our sun, and that we have materialised in the way of another planet. I don’t know all of the details, but once again I request you make, what may be, your last twelve hours on Earth, the best possible. That is it. May God bless us all.”

***

As the message was beamed all around the world, celebration quickly retorted back into the melancholy state the world had previously been under. After six hours had passed, the planet set to collide with earth was visible in many skies, and time seemed to have stopped, even though clocks continued to tell the time.

In the UK it had read 18:00, when the skies would usually begin to turn dark, but they still held the blues of mid day. Other areas of the world were bathed in perpetual twilight, or the dim, orange glows of dawn. Time was running out it seemed, and there was yet again nothing humanity could do to save itself. The past five days had been hell on earth for humanity, now it seemed that the ending was, once again, drawing near.
***

“Jesus Christ… why is it that this planet always has something wrong with it?! It’s a joke!”

Elena hadn’t taken the collision news lightly, and instead of acting depressed as she had done previously, she had reached the tip of her anger, her parents looked on with awe as their daughter ripped the house apart, shouting randomly and altogether ‘over reacting.’

“Seriously, we ne…” Elena stopped mid sentence, her face turning from an angered expression to a look of pure fear, “WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?”

She pointed behind her parents heads, sure enough, something was there. Her parents turned around, looking a tad confused. They both looked directly at where she was pointing, but there was just the beige coloured ceiling.

“Can’t you see it? It’s a semi-transparent figure! Just floating there! It’s like a ghost!”

As the last word left Elena’s mouth she realised it was likely to be a ghost, and as the colour drained from her face, she screamed, running out of the room. Her parents just stood, staring blankly into space, and then looking at each other,

“She’s gone mental” her father said after a short while, shaking his head, and then walking out of the room, leaving Elena’s mother standing alone, watching the clock on the mantle piece. The display read 20:32; the collision was due in less than four hours.

Upstairs Elena had hid under her duvet, wondering what it was she had just seen in the living room moments earlier. “Was it a ghost?” she wondered, why had it shown itself to her and nobody else? And why had it shown itself now? It made no sense… As she sat, thinking over the events of today, her mind retorted into a depressed state as she thought of all that she would miss. Thinking about the fact she had had a few moments of false hope angered her, and she couldn’t believe how she was so naïve as to think the world was back to normal.

A good half hour had passed, and Elena still hadn’t moved from under her sheets, when she suddenly felt a feeling of foreboding creep down her spine and course through her body. She opened her eyes and refocused to the darkness underneath her duvet. A ghostly head followed by a neck, and shoulders rose up from her bed. It had no eyes, and glowed in a similar fashion to what she had glowed in the black void. Its mouth seemed to be sealed shut, and a lot of its hair was missing. One of the ghostly figures ears had been ripped off, and a large scab had formed over where it would be. Elena looked onwards in horror as it stopped, inches away from her face. She felt extremely cold and couldn’t find any strength to speak. As if out of nowhere, a strange voice, seemingly far away from where she was began to speak to her,

“Greetings Elena… I am Marquette Élans…”

The voice spoke with a distinct French accent, although the English was very fluent and easy to make out,

“I have come to inform you that… you have been blessed with the power of a Static… supposing you learn how to control your powers… you can harness the soul energy of a deceased person… I feel that one day you will become a great person in this world… farewell, Elena…”

As the voice seemed to fade with the finishing sentence, the ghostly apparition did also. Elena sat, her eyes wide in terror, the feeling of extreme cold and disbelief coursing through her, she couldn’t believe what she was hearing… or seeing. Was it even possible? Was that strange voice even telling the truth? The words, “Blessed with the power of a static” rang through Elena’s head as a feeling of warmth gradually returned to her body.

She pulled the duvet cover off of her head and looked at the clock on her wall, adorned with pictures of Hello Kitty, the display read that it had just gone half past nine. Deciding to ignore what she had witnessed, Elena walked downstairs, to see her mother watching another report on the television, and her father staring out of the window towards the sky, still as blue as it was nine hours ago, with the sun in the midday position.

“Ah, there you are, calmed down a bit yet dear?”

Her mothers smiling face reassured Elena a little, and she simply nodded, deciding against telling her parents of the apparition, she didn’t want a Spanish inquisition to be her last memory. Walking over to the window, and standing next to her father, Elena saw what he was transfixed upon. The sky, as blue as it was, was being overshadowed by a large sphere, the planet due to collide with earth was immediately close; the sky seemed to consist of that planets surface.

“Wow… what an incredible sight… almost indescribable…”

“Yeah, isn’t it? Hard to believe the final thing we’ll see is something as amazing as that… but, look directly upwards, there is what would seem as the United Kingdom… the shape and everything is identical…”

Elena looked upwards, sure enough, there was a piece of land on the other planet that was exactly identical to the United Kingdom, below that was what would be France. Everything was exactly as it was on earth.

“It’s almost like it’s mirroring the surface of earth, I’m no geography expert, but that planet up there Elena, that is earth.”

Elena remained silent. Her father was right; the planet was a perfect reflection of earth… everything about it was the same. Elena turned and walked over to the sofa, sitting down and looking at the broadcast on the television, just a repeat of the broadcast made by the US president earlier.

“I can’t believe the events of the past few days Elena… makes us realise that, although we’re top of the food chain, we’re still insignificant to a lot of factors…”

“Yeah… I suppose you’re right… I wonder what happened though… with the Black Hole I mean, it makes no sense to me… the end of the world was certainly twisted…”

“You’re right there dear…” her mother sighed, “I just wish you could’ve lived a more fulfilling life.”

Elena smiled weakly and then heard the familiar ghostly voice of Marquette Élans,

“You’ll live a wondrous life… trust me my dear… the dead know things… just remember though, we aren’t all friendly…”

Elena gasped and jolted back in her seat at the sound of the voice, startling her mother and father. She smiled sheepishly and just ignored their faces, returning to the images appearing on the television screen, showing graphs and photos of the planet. Her mind was with the ghostly voice though, she knew now it wasn’t an illusion, but what the hell was going on and why was this, ‘Marquette Élans’ person communicating with her all of a sudden?

The clock display read 23:24 as the television suddenly switched itself off, much o the surprise of Elena and her parents. Then they felt it, the second planet had entered the atmosphere of Earth, and the gravity of the two planets was pulling them into one another extremely quickly, while mixing up with everything else. Elena’s mother screamed as the windows of the house, and of the other houses in the street, smashed in unison with one another. The sound was deafening as the glass fell to the floor, and the rose up to the ceiling, before being thrown around the room.

“Get into the hallway!”

Elena’s father grabbed her and her mother, throwing them into the hallway and slamming the door as he dived after them. The hallway was the only area in the entire house that had no windows or glass doors. The three of them breathed heavily, as they felt themselves getting heavier and lighter as the gravity of the two planets minced about with each other. There was an ear splitting crunch and then Elena felt herself being ripped apart at the seams. Drifting away from her parents, who were falling endlessly… then it all went black…

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Elena awoke to the sound of light waves lapping against the shore of a white sandy beach. She sat up and looked around, a light breeze whipped through her blonde hair, which was inexplicably clean, shining in the brilliant sunlight. A Palm trees lined the greens opposite the turquoise water, wafting slightly.

“Am I in heaven?” She asked herself, standing up and scrubbing her eyes with her hands. She looked to the skies, only to be interrupted by a voice she didn’t recognise,

“You are far from heaven Elena. Welcome to New Earth.”

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End of Chapter 05
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PsiUmbreon

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wow... apocalypse twice in 5 chapters... talk about suspense. (I know, it's not true apocalypse, since the world didn't actually end, but... y'know.)
 
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