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Elemental Island 2 (contestshipping)

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corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
ok, the old one was closed, so this is the new one, enjoy! this Thread is rated PG13 due to language. If i feel that a future Chapter needs a different rating, I will post it at the beginning of the post. I have a pm list, just let me know if you want on it!

Elemental Island: Chapter 1
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As May and Drew stand on the beach looking out over the ocean, they reminisce over all that has happened recently, especially May and Drew tying in the Kanto Grand Festival.

May turns to look at Drew and says, "I can't believe that we're leaving each other."

"It's not like it's a surprise, we're different, you and I"

"How could you say that?" May screamed. "Especially after all that we've been through!" May ran off crying loudly, causing many people to give Drew weird looks.

On his way back to the Pokemon Center, Drew skulked in his own stupidity. "Women," breathed Drew.

"I hear ya," hissed a voice from the bushes behind him.

"wha... AAAH!!!"

A man in a Cacturn outfit grabbed Drew from behind and dragged him off into the woods.

As he was dragged deeper into the woods, Drew began to formulate a plan. After about 5 minutes of walking (or dragging, in Drew's case), they reached a clearing with a lone tree in the center surrounded by a thick wall of trees. Very little light shone through here creating an eerie darkness.

"Come on out Ariados, use Spider Web to pin him to the tree," demanded the man in the Cacturn clothing. A red light erupted from the Pokeball to reveal a menacing spider which shot webs at Drew, making it impossible to escape.

Drew moaned and seemed to mumble something.

"What’s that?" sneered the man. "Does wittle Drewie want his mommy?" The man walked closer as he laughed to hear what Drew was saying.

"You b*stard!" yelled Drew. He kicked the man in the knee-cap and, with great effort, grabbed a pokeball from his bag. "Please be Flygone," he prayed. To his luck, out popped Flygone. "Use Steel Wing to cut me loose, then use Flamethrower on Ariados!"

Flygon's wings glowed a silvery-white and sliced through the web with ease. Then it doubled back and shot orangey-red flames at Ariados, taking it out in one hit. "All right Flygone, let's get out of here!"

"Not so fast," said the kidnapper.

"And what, exactly, are you going to do about it, Harley?" said Drew in a stern, commanding voice.

"I'll give you a taste of this, a stolen Spinda!" yelled Harley as he threw a Pokeball up in the air. The red light dissipated to reveal a cute panda-like Pokemon.

"That's not right, and you know it!" yelled Drew. "Stealing Pokemon is low, even for you!"

"The man was dying, I did him a favor by taking his Spinda."

"YOU TOOK A DYING MAN'S SPINDA!?!?!?" screamed Drew.

"He couldn't have done it without me," said a voice from the shadows. Jesse walked out with and evil smirk on her face. "Harley and I have teamed up, and to celebrate, we took the old buzzard's dearest Pokemon," said Jesse in a way so maniacal that only truly evil people can achieve that tone of voice. Jesse cackled and yelled, "come on out, Scyther! Hold him down!" Scyther came out of its ball and pinned a perplexed Drew to the ground.

Just then, a rustling in the trees could be heard as a person with a Beautifly could be seen emerging from the forest.

"Beautifly, use String Shot to immobilize Scyther, then use Silver Wind to send them flying!" yelled a p*ssed off May.

A String Shot Emitted and wrapped up Scyther and was followed up with the most powerful Silver Wind ever seen. Jesse blasted off with her new boyfriend and turned into a little speck in the sky.

"Thanks," said Drew as he struggled to get to his feet.

"Any time," said May. Then she blushed and looked around for something to change the subject. "Hey, what's this?"

"Spin!" cried Spinda.

"I think that I'll take care of you for now," Drew addressed the Spinda. He took the Pokeball from May and recalled Spinda. "It's stolen," he explained to May, "I'm going to use it in the going away contest in Viridian and hope that someone claims it. Would you like to come with me?"

May's eyes welled up with tears and she flung her arms around Drew's neck and kissed him with all of the passion that she had been retaining for the past year.

Drew broke apart for a moment and asked, "so that's a yes?"

"Shut up," said May, and she pulled him back in for another kiss.

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I hope you enjoyed it (again)! Next time: Chapter 2: How CHARming!

corsolakid ;222;
 
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Asi lindo!! (I'm in Spanish class.) It means "So cute." Love that chappy, even if it is the same as the last one!!

May's eyes welled up with tears and she flung her arms around Drew's neck and kissed him with all of the passion that she had been retaining for the past year.

Mis Dios!! (My God!) That was just... amazing!! XD (Ignore me, I'm loco.) (Crazy).

Well, Kitteh shall go update a fic now. Peace out.

~Kitteh ;258;
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
eh, Je suis tres bon! (i'm in french) (I'm very good!) i aim to please. I'm really proud of that part, i can never acheive a romantic feeling when it comes to kissing scenes, but i've finally done it! This is DEFF. one of my best peices EVER!!! *pats self on back* yay! Ce n'est pas mal, non? (It's not bad, no?)

Au-revoir! (good-bye!)

corsolakid ;222;

EDIT: yay! rank change! Marsh Trainer! (I think)
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
Uh...-reads over the part where May and Drew kissed-
Too fast, don't ya think? I mean...^^;;
OH WHO CARES! -gets hyper-
MAY AND DREW KISSED! KISSED! HOORAY!
EDIT: Flygon...isn't spelled Flygone ^^;;
 
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corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
yah, i thought it was going a little fast, but i had to... heat of the moment. i keep on making the Flygon mistake, i don't know why. i'll try to get the second chapter out this weekend. tah-tah!

corsolakid ;222;
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
sooo... yah, i'll put up the second chapter tomorrow. i'm gonna write it during the show! it helps so that i get personalities and word selection correct. it's May that i'm needing work on, Drew is alot like me, so i've got him covered.

corsolakid ;222;

PS: .::Lynee::., do you want on the pm list? the other posters are on it from the last Elemental Island thread.
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
sooo... yah, i'll put up the second chapter tomorrow. i'm gonna write it during the show! it helps so that i get personalities and word selection correct. it's May that i'm needing work on, Drew is alot like me, so i've got him covered.
0_o...Aren't you a girl? -checks your profile- Oops...I got misleaded...XD You are a boy...Do you have a sister? She might help you with your work or get your female friends to help you...
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
my sister is 10 (just turned, still acts four), and my friends don't know that i'm OBSESSED with the whole Pokemon francheise. it's almost slipped several times, but i saved myself, my school is VERY judgemental. and yes, i'm a guy. it's not so muck the what girls act like think (i hang out with many chicks), it's how May acts that i want to focus on.

corsolakid ;222;
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
my sister is 10 (just turned, still acts four), and my friends don't know that i'm OBSESSED with the whole Pokemon francheise. it's almost slipped several times, but i saved myself, my school is VERY judgemental. and yes, i'm a guy. it's not so muck the what girls act like think (i hang out with many chicks), it's how May acts that i want to focus on.
Oh...it might help if your friends are obsessed with Pokemon...like mine XD They just make up random things that might happen with May and Drew, and I just put it in my story XD I don't really need to take a very long time to get Drew/May's personality done, though. I just remember, Drew is cool/arrogant May is all those nice girls...but not to Drew. You just have to get familliar with their personalities
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
i know of one person that i might be able to talk to about pokemon, and we don't know each-other that well. she's dating a popular guy, i'm dating a well known girl, and yet, she doesn't know me... odd (i'm quite well known at my school as well) maybe around noon, or... later, tomorrow is when i'll get out the chap, i've got several ideas in my head, it's a matter of writing it down.

corsolakid ;222;
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
i know of one person that i might be able to talk to about pokemon, and we don't know each-other that well. she's dating a popular guy, i'm dating a well known girl, and yet, she doesn't know me... odd (i'm quite well known at my school as well) maybe around noon, or... later, tomorrow is when i'll get out the chap, i've got several ideas in my head, it's a matter of writing it down.
Or her boyfriend might not be allowing her to get near you xD...Okay, let's just drop the subject of this lovey-thingy...and...yay! The next chapter is coming out fast!
 

Wind Waker

Now that's Effulgent
really nice plot there, woah there are alot of contestshipping fics out here so i'm trying to keep up. It could develop very well as per usual. good job!
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
Alright, this chapter was to long, so I broke it in two. This is the first half, the second half will be out later today, or tomorrow. This chap is rated PG13 for mild language… VERY mild. This first half will be everything before the appeals in the Viridian contest. It will seem cut off… partially because it is, don’t complain, the second half will be out soon.

Chapter 2: How CHARming! (Part 1)
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“Look!” cried May, “it’s the Viridian Contest hall!”

“What gave it away?” sneered Drew.

“I just know, OK?” yelled May. Then she punched his arm to show her anger.

“God! No need to get violent!”

“Well, why do you always have to be such a jack*ss?” retorted May.

He held a rose in front of her and said, “It’s the only way that I know how to act, I’m used to being rejected and hatred.”

“And that’s why I’m here.” said May. “Now, let’s go and register for the Contest before they close registration!”

*one hour later*

“Yes, we would like to register for the contest.” said May.

“You got here just in time, we only have two positions left and the contest starts in 20 minutes.” informed the receptionist. “All I need are your Contest Passes and the names of the Pokémon you’re using.”

“Ok, I’m using my Eevee,” said May.

“And I’m using Spinda,” input Drew.

“Alright, I just need you to let your Spinda out of its ball so that I can take a look at it.”

“What?” questioned Drew. “I’ve never heard of Pokémon inspections before.”

“It’s been reported that a coordinators Spinda has been stolen, I just need to make sure that you don’t have it.”

“Oh, I see,” said Drew. “This is the Spinda that was stolen, I defeated the coordinator that stole it and I plan on finding it’s trainer here at the contest. It is last contest for a while, I figured that they’d be here.”

“I understand,” said the receptionist. “The trainers wife is entered in the contest, she’s backstage.” She looked at the clock. “Oh! You’d better get going, the contest is about to start!”

“Thank you so much,” said May, “our main concern is that the Spinda gets back to it’s trainer.”

*just as contest begins*

“Hi! I’m Vivian and this is the Viridian contest, the final contest of the year! I’ve just been informed that Kanto’s Champions are here tonight and one of them has rescued the stolen Spinda that we’ve all been worrying about!” The crowd went wild.

Backstage, an old woman walked up to Drew. “I assume you are the wonderful boy who saved my dear husbands Spinda?”

Drew looked up at her and said, “that’s true, I rescued it from a thieving coordinator.”

“After the contest, I’m willing to trade you this Charizard for my husbands Spinda.” the woman offered.

“I can’t take your Charizard, the Spinda is rightfully yours, you could take it from me right now if you wanted to. It wouldn’t be right to have to trade you your Spinda.” replied Drew.

“Nonsense! It’s the least I could do. That Spinda was my husbands first Pokémon, it inspired him to build this contest hall.”

“Your husband built this contest hall?” squealed May.

“Yes,” she turned back to Drew, “and he would want you to have this Charizard, after you competed in the contest.” persisted the woman. She put out her hand, “I’m Dianna, by the way.”

Drew shook her hand and said, “I’m Drew, and if your husband wishes for me to take the Charizard, how can I refuse?”

“Thank you,” said Dianna, “you have no idea how much Jamison will appreciate this!”

“I’m glad to help!” said Drew.

Vivian’s voice came over the loudspeaker, “Next up is Drew and his rescued Spinda!”

“That’s me, gotta’ go!” yelled Drew as he got up.

“Good luck!” said May as she kissed him, “show them all who’s boss!”

“Drew,” yelled Dianna, “I almost forgot, Spinda knows Assist!”

“Thanks,” yelled Drew as he ran towards the stage.

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End of part one, part two will prolly be out tomorrow. I hope you enjoyed this part, please review, I enjoy reading people’s opinions!

corsolakid ;222;
 

corsolakid

ima gonna smile now!
it's 'cause the name Dianna is right below the name May, your eyes saw Dianna rather than May. an old woman kiss would be creepy, and May would have to beat her up. (THAT would be a good chapter!) (not really, but oh well) the second part will either be out tonight, or tomorrow, dpending on how soon i finish the chapter. Later!

corsolakid ;222;
 

Wind Waker

Now that's Effulgent
I don't see why it has to be a two parter.....o right the suspense....THE SUSPENSE! Great work!
 

Stephy

candies!!!11
W-Woah...A Charizard? 0_o...I never expected that but Drew having a Charizard is...not matching...

Originally Posted By corsolakid
He held a rose in front of her and said, “It’s the only way that I know how to act, I’m used to being rejected and hatred.”

XD He's used to being rejected and hatred?
 
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