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Elite Four Stories: Blacks untold drama.

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Black

Well-Known Member
well the title tell's most of what it's about. so tell me what you thank.

Newest:
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credit: http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1825/creditol1.png

comic1: http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/2909/1comicoy6.png
comic2: http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/3638/2comicev2.png
comic3: http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5530/3comicgu2.png
comic4: http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/4002/4comiceb2.png
 
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LuciRuki

Born This Way
Just make it a lot longer. Maybe between 8-10 panels. It does look like it is already going to be interesting. I bet it shows how hard it is to become an Elite 4!!!
 
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LGameboyR

Pokemon Battler
LuciRuki said:
Just make it a lot longer. Maybe between 8-10 panels. It does look like it is already going to be interesting. I bet it shows how hard it is to become an Elite 4!!!
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Thats what you foresee?! Heh I thought it was about him BEING an Elite 4...
 
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Black

Well-Known Member
well your both rightish (I know I said rightish). it show's how hard it is to stay beging a elite four member not to become. and as for the frames I'll put three more on the next comic.
 
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stoopidmahn

Banned
um, the eyes look a little weird when he's staring at the car, and in some panels the walking looks funny, but the story is good, and so is everything else...
 
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inTánsity 47

Staring inTántly...
What is the car thingy?
 
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Umbreon Rider

Tolkien fan 4 eva
The "car thingy" is ermmmm a car thingy!

Very good i will keep an eye on this place
 
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Blaze Dragon

T3h Blazing Ranger!
It seems pretty funny by now
You had a little grammar error: On the 1st Comic, it is "You´re" not "Your"
Also, I´m pretty sure Eevee can´t learn Teleport
 
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Black

Well-Known Member
there's goning to be a storie about that later that show's why his can.
 
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Black

Well-Known Member
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