Elite Four stories: the untold storie of black

[Black]

hello I'm doing a comic about a trainer who is getting the greatest reward to be admited into the Elite Four. But he also finds all the problem's that come with the job.
credit: http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/1825/creditol1.png


cover: http://img285.imageshack.us/img285/3678/coverhm6.png

newest:

comic1: http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9642/1comicew6.png

 

[charizard987]

looks good,but this should be in the Fan-Comics theard,anyway I like the flash back warp thing,

 

[Black]

some one messed up becouse now im in the sprites page!
Can some one plz move me to the fan comic page.