Ember's Life

[emeraldrayquaza]

Ok, I swear this is better than my legendary battle one.


The Cast:
Click here for the Cast

The Series:
Episode 1: Intro
Episode 2: Wonderful weather for a n00b, eh?
Episode 3: Enter: CheckBee, n00b destroyer!
Filler 1: No pie for the holidays? Featuring King Dedede and Meta Knight
Episode 4: CheckBee on the battlefeild!
Episode 5: Zorro! Featuring a special guest: Antonio Banderas!
Episode 6: ZAT is what I do to theives!
Filler 2: How on Earth does she do that? Featuring Bowser, Daisy, and Peach.
Filler 3: Somebody needs a vacation... Featuring Dedede, Escargoon, and Meta Knight!
Episode 7: Evolution Solution!

Flaafeon is proud to announce we are KID FREINDLY!!!!

 

[kinglerking]

this isn't bad I'll need to see more before I can truly judge it though

;099;

 

[Emo Saria]

Yeah, this isn't a lot, but I sorda like it! Your a pretty good spriter too, not the best but pretty good!

 

[Bu†cH]

OMG! You've dissed yourself!

Better than the last comic, thanks to your excellent spriting and plot so far.

Great start! Keep it up!

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Thank you all so much! <3

 

[blueaquadog]

This comic is way better. Nice job! You seem to be a great spriter. I can't rate it until I see more though.

 

[Pokefan26]

Great Comic.
Needs a bit of improvement in the mixes.
And it needs to have a plot.(A storyline, or what is it going to be about)
Other than that, good job!
Kinda like Mutational Error, though.

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Episode 2 is up!!!
And I've never read mutational error...

 

[Bu†cH]

YAY! A n00b-offendeing comic, a perfectionist's dream.
The backgrounds are alot better than the ones in your last comic.
Plus, the jokes are so far easily understandable.

I guess the plot will come up the next issue, I guess.
Keep it up!

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Actually, it might just be a bunch of kids and Pokemon messing around. There might be a plot if I can think of one!

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Sorry for the DP, but a holiday filler is up, so check it out!

 

[kapslock]

We, another Mutatonal error comic, wee! Hehe (j/k) reminds me alot about it though. So far so good, but your spriting could be better.

 

[kinglerking]

okay I can judje it now, this comic is absoloutley brilliant!
(then again I'll like anything witha n00b killing machine)

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Thank you guys! Happy Holidays!

 

[Neopolis]

The story and stuff are ok, but the background... Or rather, the lack of. Also, Aquafur and Flaafeon need some more shading.

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Hey, I think my backgrounds are good compared to my first comic >( And Aquafur and Flaafeon are two of the best mixes I've ever made!

I thank you for your advice, but I honsetly think they do not need more work.

One more thing... Episode four is up!

 

[kapslock]

Hehe that was funny, like heck, nude n00b, thats fresh.

 

[Neopolis]

Hey, I think my backgrounds are good compared to my first comic >( And Aquafur and Flaafeon are two of the best mixes I've ever made!

Yes, yes, the mixes are quite good. But they really do lack shading...

 

[emeraldrayquaza]

Yeah, nude n00b was kind of off the top of my head.

And, Neoplolis3, that's about enough from you for the moment.