Everstone

blueguy · Oct 29, 2005

<< everstone >>

[All custom content, including, but not limited to, maps and overworlds, unless denoted in the Credits, is by blueguy and cannot be used without permission]

>> Story

Anna is the daughter of reknowned pokémon professor Marcus Grey. When a meteor, its properties strange and interesting, crashes down upon Scarlet City, the professor goes to investigate... Little does he know that he is plunging himself into a web of mystery, darkness, and most importantly... stones.

>> Cast

Anna Grey
Anna is a very intelligent and quiet girl, always observing her surroundings to the most exact detail. Anna can be awkward in social situations, but she is very much a chatterbox. She also happens to be the daughter of a highly regarded professor of stones. Other children have always patronized her in order to be in good graces with her father.

Will Greenwood
Will is a painter, and enjoys nature and scenery. He has had his smeargle, Flourish, since he was a toddler, and the two have an artistic bond. Will's father, Professor Frederick Greenwood, works together with Professor Grey in the analysis of stones. Will is very creative and expressive, always displaying his emotions and opinions rather than bottling them up.

Professor Marcus Grey
Marcus Grey is a widower, a father, and a professor all at once. He broke into the field when he discovered the true use of the Everstone, and has since identified many other precious stones and their purposes.

Elise Greenwood
Not much is known of Elise yet.

>> Terminology
[UATM = Unnamed at the moment]
[Blue text box = Narration by Anna]
[Grey text box = Speech]

>> Table of Contents
I - Missing
-- [1] [2] [3] [4] [5]
II - UATM
-- [6] [7] [8] [9]

>> Latest Page

>> Credits

Coronis for Eevee, Smeargle, Clefable, and Cleffa's front overworlds.
Avatar for the basis of Jack's overworlds (based on Psychic O/W).

Omega X · Oct 29, 2005

Hmm... gotta check later pages, but it's a good start nevertheless.

Mastercougar · Oct 29, 2005

In-ter-esting! One thing I like is that you use overworld style but don't do the regular journey plot. I also like how you're delving into some anime issues instead of game issues.

Just to verifiy, the blue textbox is the Clefable's translation, right?

Good work, O guy of blue, and keep it up!

blueguy · Oct 29, 2005

Mastercougar said:
In-ter-esting! One thing I like is that you use overworld style but don't do the regular journey plot. I also like how you're delving into some anime issues instead of game issues.

Just to verifiy, the blue textbox is the Clefable's translation, right?

Good work, O guy of blue, and keep it up!

Thank you very much! To verify, the blue textbox is Anna's narration... There's a terminology section in the first post which you may have missed.

Thanks! I will.

Omega X said:
Hmm... gotta check later pages, but it's a good start nevertheless.

Thank you.

Please refresh when you go to the first page! You'll see it shows that she is in Mount Luna. This takes place in a new region!

Flygon · Oct 29, 2005

Odd... Reminds me of a fan fic I once read called One Stone.

May's brother · Oct 29, 2005

It's very good so far. almost better than pokechow. i can't wait for the next eposode!

blueguy · Oct 29, 2005

May's brother said:
It's very good so far. almost better than pokechow. i can't wait for the next eposode!

Thank you very much, but now they are called pages. A certain amount of pages will make up a chapter.

I would prefer some sort of criticism, but if you truely believe it's perfect then I guess that's okay...

Flygon said:
Odd... Reminds me of a fan fic I once read called One Stone.

Really? I haven't ever read or heard of it.

I'll try to have the next page finished later today. It'll illuminate and clear things up a bit more for people who are confused.

Nagashi · Oct 29, 2005

This is a pretty interesting beginning. Can't wait for the next installment.

Tenten · Oct 29, 2005

*claps* I'd love to read more about this. Interesting plot...I wonder what's going to happen. This, all you pokemon comic makers, is a good example of a good pokemon comic: Not cliche, interesting plot, good beginning....Great job, blueguy! You really outdid yourself. Can't wait for more, so I'll be watching for updates. ^^

Matt Silver · Oct 29, 2005

It looks beautifully done and has great sprites. keep going.

Sora · Oct 29, 2005

Mattthegreat995 said:
It looks beautifully done and has great sprites. keep going.

Agreed. Much better than PokeChow (Too lazy to press the alt key x3)

blueguy · Oct 30, 2005

Snagger Outlaw said:
Agreed. Much better than PokeChow (Too lazy to press the alt key x3)

Um... Thanks, I suppose.

Mattthegreat995 said:
It looks beautifully done and has great sprites. keep going.

Thank you very much!

Princess_Zelda said:
*claps* I'd love to read more about this. Interesting plot...I wonder what's going to happen. This, all you pokemon comic makers, is a good example of a good pokemon comic: Not cliche, interesting plot, good beginning....Great job, blueguy! You really outdid yourself. Can't wait for more, so I'll be watching for updates. ^^

Wow! Thank you very much for that review!

May's brother said:
1. It's perfect, no critisism needed
2. Can't wait for the next page!

Thanks!

P-Arts said:
This is a pretty interesting beginning. Can't wait for the next installment.

Thank you.

The next installment you ask? It'll be up in 1 - 1 and 1/2 hours, depending on lazyness levels...

*waits for new signature banner to be white-be-goned*

Nara Shikamaru · Oct 30, 2005

Interesting comic Blueguy

. I love your bubbles, sprites, and such. YOUR COMIC ACUALLY MAKE SENCE! :O

Anyway I just thought that you want your sig thing to be completely tranceparent so I did it for you XD;;;

blueguy · Oct 30, 2005

Nara Shikamaru said:
Interesting comic Blueguy . I love your bubbles, sprites, and such. YOUR COMIC ACUALLY MAKE SENCE! :O

Anyway I just thought that you want your sig thing to be completely tranceparent so I did it for you XD;;;

Thanks, but by the time you posted my request in a Fan Art Request thread had been replied to.

Anyhoo, thank you very much... I should hope it makes sense.

Page Two is up! Enjoy!

Bu†cH · Oct 30, 2005

An original more (or just as) original than Pokechow!

Keep up the good work!

May's brother · Oct 30, 2005

The new eposode is as perfect as it can get! I especially like it when she enters azure village how the top left corner says "azure village"!

blueguy · Oct 30, 2005

May's brother said:
The new eposode is as perfect as it can get! I especially like it when she enters azure village how the top left corner says "azure village"!

Thank you.

Mattthegreat995 said:
Woot! New page=SWEET!
Let's see where this is goin

It's goin'... to the grocery store... Thanks.

Butchimatic said:
An original more (or just as) original than Pokechow!

Keep up the good work!

Thanks!

The third page will be up later! Stay tuned!

Feraligator-Kiwi · Oct 30, 2005

As always your comics look great, and so far it seems like a good plot even though not much has happened yet.

blueguy · Oct 30, 2005

Feraligator-Kiwi said:
As always your comics look great, and so far it seems like a good plot even though not much has happened yet.

Thanks! There will be some good plot development in this first chapter, but i have to set up all the characters, locations and backgrounds...

Beco said:
Looks like another masterpiece by Blueguy.

Masterpiece? Um - *blushes* Thanks!

I'm going to start working on Page 3 right about...

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blueguy · Oct 30, 2005

Alright... excuse the doublepost, but Page Three is finished!

Enjoy and post comments and criticisms for me!

Everstone

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