EX:Shining Wonders

[Lost4815162342]

This is EX:Shining Wonders *Star goes by* Oooooo......Pretty......
This set contains mostly Shining Pokémon, but it also contains regular, holos, and EXs. There are 108(Based on Lost) cards in the set, and I'm too lazy to write a spoiler, so too bad!!!

Blaziken* 23/108
Electrode * 76/108
Entei* 99/108
Espeon* 104/108

 

[Kyuukimon]

Read the tutorial for right fonts please. Electrode* does not have the symbol. Also, the picture always overlaps the text, not vice-versa. And no offense, try to get some better art for Electrode and Blaziken. For Electrode*'s second attack, it should be

If heads, this attack does 100 damage to the Defending Pokemon. If tails, this attack does 80 damage to each of your Benched Pokemon.

There are mory wording errors I'll say later.

 

[Keanu Reeves]

I clicked out of it once I saw the art

 

[Lost4815162342]

I haven't been faking for a while, so the Electrode * isn't that good, and I can't believe I forgot some of the symbols. I have the right fonts, it's just that stupid anti-aliasing, it's making them too bold! I'll fix all of those problems, but not the art, I want to use my own art for some of my cards.

 

[Alakazam]

The Entei and the Espeon have good art and the rest [Spoil]STINK[/Spoil]

 

[Lost4815162342]

I know, my art is not that good, but are the cards themself good?

 

[MAJINX24]

they're alright but theres alot of things you have to improve on..

probably better to read the tutorial a few more times before you make an entire set ud want to correct.

b/c im kinda tired and bored I'm not going to go into too many details.. (I'm just going to look at Entei cause the art is nice)

1- theres something wrong with the text.. It looks bolded thru the effect text and thats wrong.. the text for the name is formatted improperly.. I dont even think its the right font.. its way too think.. if its the correct font.. in the tutorial, in the section that talks about the card's name, it'll mention how thick the letters should be, its easily adjustable in photoshop..

2- I'm about 99.99% certain the pokebody is in the wrong circle.. should be 1 or 2 to the right..

3- be careful with the image and developing 'snow' around the image.. because of that one factor the card looks rushed.. that couldve been taken care of within 15 minutes..

4- ur missing a space after the period in the pokbody text (after "..apply.")

5- for some reason theres an undesirable grainyness to the image that I know is not on the blank.. I can tell ur using something other than paint so this should be easily avoidable

on a positive note.. its nice to see a up-and-comer actually do a set symbol correctly.. congrats.. im sick of writing out the fact most people do it wrong..

On the one I took a good look at, I give it a 2.5/5 (bonus mark for the set symbol thing tho)

 

[Lost4815162342]

I can't fix the text, I mean I try but it doesn't work. I don't know what you mean by "Snow", and I dont think I'm doing anything to the make it grainy.

 

[MAJINX24]

when I say snow I mean the white dots around Entei's picture.. normally from cropping it out of a pic with a white background..

 

[Lost4815162342]

Ohh, that, I try to fix that with the piant bucket, but if I make it too strong, it screws up the colors on the Entei.

 

[Kyrouge Masta]

sDon't judge on art people. Unless it affects the card in a way which id, dont tell peeps thier art stinks ect. It's not nessersarily thier fault.

 

[King Shuckle]

These cards aren't that bad actually. You have potential, and I think you can make your work successful. 8/10 for the whole set. There is a way to fix the font. Keeping playing around with it and eventually you will figure it out.