EXCEPT ME
By Mel-Girl
Haha, as you can see, I've tidied up the first post and added some colour. Sorry if it's too bright or whatever.
INFORMATION: Well I started up this fic because I am a definite Multishipper and I can never choose which shippings I like best. But I have a passion for writing shipping fics and so I decided that as Hikari is my favourite character to ship, I'd do a fic that features like all of the Hikari shippings I like. Then I decided to add in extra shippings for other characters, make the characters teenagers, throw them in high school, add in the humour and let it all go from there.
So if you like humour, tons of different shippings and uh... Mel-Girl, then this is the fic for you! Well, hopefully. Please give it a go. XD
SUMMARY: Kengo has a crush on his closest friend Hikari. The problem is, Hikari just hasn't noticed. So while Hikari is off dating various guys, Kengo's stuck on the outside, not confident enough to admit how he feels. Will he ever open up or will Hikari end up happy with some other guy?
Reviews and constructive criticism are extremely welcome. My spelling might be a tad different to American as I'm from New Zealand (eg. I spell colour, while you guys may spell color).
CHAPTER LIST
Chapter One: Accident
Chapter Two: Trouble
Chapter Three: Better Luck Next Time
Chapter Four: Wasn't How It's Supposed To Be
Chapter Five: Double
Chapter Six: Bowling! Let's Mix It Up!
Chapter Seven: Yumomi declares war!
Chapter Eight: Lifesaver wanted!
Chapter Nine: Truth and Feelings
Chapter Ten: Working Things Out
Chapter Eleven: Gossip!
Chapter Twelve: Troublesome
Chapter Thirteen: Anything But Perfect
Chapter Fourteen: No Better Than You
Chapter Fifteen: The Melancholy Of...
Chapter Sixteen: You're Kidding Me, Right?
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ANNOUNCEMENT!
I made a list of the characters in Except Me and then I plonked in their Japanese and their dub names. =D
Kengo – Kenny
Hikari – Dawn
Kasumi – Misty
Haruka – May
Nozomi – Zoey
Satoshi – Ash
Shuu – Drew
Gen – Riley
Shigeru – Gary
Kouhei – Conway
Hiroshi – Ritchie
Harley
Shinji - Paul
Mikuri-sensei – Wallace
Reiji – Reggie
Yumomi – Leona
Saori – Soledad
Kanata – Kelly
Daigo – Steven
Seiyo – Giselle
Moe – Macey
Ayako-sensei – Johanna
Akane-sensei – Whitney
Nanako – Casey
Aoi – Yet to be found out... ;;^^
Kimi – She’s an OC, no dub name needed for her XD
Tsutsuji-sensei – Roxanne
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Hikari – Dawn
Kasumi – Misty
Haruka – May
Nozomi – Zoey
Satoshi – Ash
Shuu – Drew
Gen – Riley
Shigeru – Gary
Kouhei – Conway
Hiroshi – Ritchie
Harley
Shinji - Paul
Mikuri-sensei – Wallace
Reiji – Reggie
Yumomi – Leona
Saori – Soledad
Kanata – Kelly
Daigo – Steven
Seiyo – Giselle
Moe – Macey
Ayako-sensei – Johanna
Akane-sensei – Whitney
Nanako – Casey
Aoi – Yet to be found out... ;;^^
Kimi – She’s an OC, no dub name needed for her XD
Tsutsuji-sensei – Roxanne
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I also have made an 'Except Me' commercial! Here it is! =D
Ships featured in this chapter include: Penguinshipping, Ironwillshipping, a bit of Pokeshipping and if you squint carefully, Contestshipping is vaguely hinted at.
Anywho, enjoy!
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Chapter One: Accident
Kengo’s POV
“Kengo?! Can you help me decide what to wear?” Hikari asked, as she dragged me from my room to hers. It wasn’t exactly good for my reputation as hardly any guys were forced out from their dormitory room to go and help a girl choose her outfit for the day. “Haruka-chan keeps suggesting that I wear pink today as it suits me but I’m really not sure! What do you think Satoshi would like to see me wear? Actually, no not Satoshi... I’m trying to think... Who should I impress...”
I could barely answer as being pulled along the floor was far too painful for me to even think about responding. Also, doesn’t her roommate Kasumi like Satoshi? Her other roommate Haruka used to have a thing for her too but then she went after my roommate Shuu instead. Hikari has always been quite outgoing and social, always liking to dress to impress.
Hikari loosened her grip on my shirt collar – which she yanked me along by – and waved to her sleepy roommates. She was always the first to wake up too. “Good morning!” she greeted them, Kasumi falling out of bed with surprise. Haruka was almost as chirpy, using a response with the same cheery tone as Hikari’s, while Nozomi groaned, pulling the sheets over her head.
“Hikari-chan! Why did you bring Kengo here? He’s in his freaking pajamas!” Kasumi shouted, trying to force her duvet off her. I stared down at my green clover pajamas and blushed. At times like this, I wish I was five because then people wouldn’t find me in these pajamas to be stupid.
With a huge grin, Hikari announced, “As Nozomi-chan and Kasumi-chan weren’t interested and pink was all that’s on Haruka-chan’s mind, I brought Kengo to give us a male’s opinion on what outfits we should wear...”
Kasumi shot up and grabbed at my shoulders immediately. “You’re Satoshi’s roommate, right? What’s his favourite kind of outfit for girls?”
I shrugged. “I don’t know Satoshi that well. Uh... Blue? Um... Actually, I don’t think Satoshi cares what the girls wear as long as they share his interests...” Kasumi was nodding in thought, before rushing to the wardrobe to grab a navy cap, short-sleeved green jacket, dark blue singlet and light denim shorts with some white sneakers. That’s just a take on Satoshi’s usual outfit if you ask me.
Looking over at Haruka, I suggested something green or red, which caused her to choose on red mini-dress with green straps and dark green shorts that reached above the knees. She picked a green cardigan to go over top the dress with some red jandals for her feet. I’m incredibly lucky that these girls aren’t changing in front of me.
Nozomi was still half-asleep as she pulled on her boots and put on her sunglasses and left, explaining that she was going to get breakfast. She was still in her pajamas... Hikari looked down at me. “So Kengo! What do you think I should wear?”
“Uh... Um...” I really wanted to suggest a great choice, because then I can gaze at her all day and feel awesome. It might make it harder to keep my crush secret, but hey, she just sees me as one of her best guy friends, so I get to hang around her without guilt or anything.
It’s just kind of hard because she clearly would never see me in that way or she wouldn’t have dragged me from my room and asked my opinion. If she did like me, she wouldn’t dare let me catch her with bed-hair.
Hikari always likes to look perfect, but she doesn’t seem to mind me seeing her like that. Normally I’d tease her about it but that was back when we were ten. Now that we’re fourteen and at boarding school, she doesn’t seem to care that I see.
“That’s it! I got it! Kasumi-chan and Haruka-chan both have crushes and so-” I put my hand up, which silenced Hikari instantly. “What is it?!”
I sighed and asked, “Are you just dressing to impress to grab some guys just because Kasumi and Haruka are clearly interested in impressing some guys? What if you get the guys that Kasumi and Haruka like? What’s the point?” She just giggled and punched my shoulder lightly.
“I just feel left out and hey, if I get a chance to knock all the guy’s dead with a killer outfit, then why not?” she replied, going over to a mirror and brushing her hair.
“You might get some unwanted attention, you know?”
Hikari continued on, ignoring my response. “You know what? I think I’ll try my luck with that good-looking senior Gen! There’s something cool about him and he’s really nice and stuff...” Oh god, I can’t have her chasing after a senior. I glanced at Kasumi and Haruka, but they only seemed to agree with her.
“Doubt he’d see you in that way, Pikari!” I laughed awkwardly. “After all, Gen probably already has a girlfriend. Sure, you two may have chatted before and he seemed really interested in you – I mean, no he didn’t!” Hikari grinned at me and walked up to me, placing the tip of her finger against my forehead. “Okay, so Gen has a slight thing for girls like you...”
“See? I do have a chance!” Hikari answered cheerfully, her eyes shining sapphire with excitement and her cheeks blushing pink.
I sighed, cursing my tendency to blurt out the wrong things at the worst of times, while Hikari started rummaging through her wardrobe. She suddenly started pulling her pj top up and I knew that was the time to make a hasty exit.
Slamming the door behind me, I noticed a familiar face walking through the hallway. “Ah! Were you just in Hikari-san’s room?” I definitely recognised him. That dark navy jacket and that raven black hair and dark blue eyes... He had this look of mystery yet you could tell he was a really nice person. No wonder girls went gaga for this guy. What have I possibly got over this guy?
“Hey Gen...” I mumbled, my cheeks going bright red. “I mean, Gen-san. I wasn’t causing trouble! Hikari was just having trouble choosing an outfit for impressing this guy... So she dragged me from my room suddenly – wonder if she realised that Shinji, Shuu and Satoshi probably saw her in her pjs’ and bed-hair but I think getting my opinion was all that mattered! And so I ended up picking almost every roommate of hers’ outfit for the day and all I learned is that she’s interested in a senior who also happens to be like a prefect or something... Gen-san is his name and – oh.”
I slapped my forehead, feeling annoyed at my mistake. Gen wasn’t supposed to know. I probably just enhanced Hikari’s chances with him without intention! It’s hard to be a guy like me with such a stunning girl as the crush. Too hard to admit feelings and they usually wait for too long and the girl finds happiness with another guy. I can’t believe I stuffed up this early.
Gen smiled, not really minding my slip-up. “Is that so?” He walked over and knocked on the door. “Gen at the door,” he announced, as we heard a loud thump. Likely to be Hikari collapsing in shock and now hurrying to make herself look presentable.
The door slowly opened with Hikari’s hair half down and half in a ponytail, and was wearing a long-sleeved lilac top and still her pajama pants. “S-Sorry, Gen-san... That you have to see me like this...”
“Kengo-san seems to think you’re interested in a certain senior. If you’d like, the certain senior would like to take you outside the school to have lunch elsewhere, if you’re up for it.” My jaw dropped. Man, I could never be cool when asking a girl out. I wish I could be like that.
“O-Oh you mean me, go out with you? Are you s-s-serious?” Hikari asked, stuttering over her words. Gen nodded slightly and she squealed loudly. “Oh, hang on! Today?” Gen shrugged. “I’m totally up for today if that’s fine with you!”
“Sure. Meet you at the school gate at the beginning of lunch,” he replied with a warm smile. Without another word, he continued pacing through the school hallway.
Hikari leapt out at me and glomped me. “Kengo! I love you! You totally helped me get a date with one of the hottest guys in school!”
I ignored the fact she was hugging me, as I felt myself plunge into a dark, never-ending hole. I was actually considering admitting how I felt sometime soon, but there’s no way I can do that now. I’m going to feel bad, but I guess the only way is to get Gen out of the picture.
And I know just the two guys to help me.
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So what do you think? Reviews are always welcome and all. I'm not very good at rounding off author's notes. So anywho, Kengo looks all set to ruin things for Hikari and Gen. So go on, have a guess at who he's going to pick to help him...
Adios!
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