Eye!

[cdra1617]

Done on paint when I was bored; the only thing my computer's let me upload.
My first piece of art on this forum... comment please.

 

[Carpetted!]

It's too plain. Shading's off. Pupil is stretched. Pupil should have more colors than black, look closely, it should be a variety. Top and bottom are cut off. Outlining is bad. Did I mention it was too plain? Perfect symettry=dullness.

 

[cdra1617]

Thanks for the crits!
I may edit it up, but for now my computer is being annoying. I'll make it unsemetrical if I do. And I'll add a few colors.
It's actually not cut off, but it appears to be because the bitmap fits it too well...
Again, thanks for commenting!

 

[Carpetted!]

Wow...
You sure do take criticism well!

 

[cdra1617]

I assume that's a good thing, right? o.o
I just know that I need some criticism.