Fakemon of the Roeizek Region

[Medical Meccanica]

Here I'll post my fakemon pixelart for critique. I don't do 80x80 sprites anymore because I feel I can't express myself in that small a space.

Complete (still need crit)

Valckin
http://i36.*******.com/154cah1.gif
Fire
Bomb Weasel Pokemon
Valckin have a highly flammable fluid in place of their blood, and they occasionally explode from their own Fire attacks. Radicals in Roeizek often use them as living bombs.
Evolves from Valui with Fire Stone

Yumebo
http://i37.*******.com/5b1g5y.gif
Psychic/Dark
Dream Pokemon
Yumebo is the controller of dreams, creating majestic worlds in humans' and Pokemons' minds each night. Yumebo is said to have the nightmarish abilities of Darkrai, and some say Darkrai is simply another form of Yumebo.

WIP

Kyriakeon
http://i37.*******.com/xogm6c.png
Poison
Disease Pokemon
Kyriakeon's bodily fluids are full of several different types of deadly viruses. The more intelligent groups of Roeizek radicals may extract these liquids for use in biological warfare.
Evolves from Eevee after a level-up in *poison forest that needs a name*

 

[thedudemister]

It does'nt really look like a pokemon but it is very well done. You should try and make it more cute.

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Ugh, it annoys me to more end when people say "it doesn't look like a pokemon make it more cute"
Is Empoleon cute? Is Shiftry cute? Is Tyranitar cute? Seriously, not all Pokemon are so adorable they make your eyes bleed. =/

 

[Jeydis]

Main thing that makes it not pokemon like is the belts though, no pokemon has distinct human clothes like that.

Its super well done though

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Uhh... Machamp?
I admit that's only one, but that proves that it's not against the Pokemon 'rules'.

 

[thedudemister]

Main thing that makes it not pokemon like is the belts though, no pokemon has distinct human clothes like that.

Its super well done though

I agree. Mabye if you remove the belt and re-draw it on all four legs it may look more like a pokemon.

 

[Jeydis]

With machamp it fits pretty well but here they are uneeded really. Not saying there are straight forward rules to pokemon, that would be dull, but that may just be the problem with the sprite.

 

[Medical Meccanica]

*facepalm*
It'd look terrible on all fours.
Also, the belts were originally ammo belts, but I thought they looked more Pokemon-ish as regular belts. Maybe if I made the brown a different color?

 

[GDE]

it's a cool picture, but i don't think it belongs in the sprite section

 

[Medical Meccanica]

It's not done. 'WIP' = 'Work in Progress'.
The pixel definition will come after I get enough critique.

 

[GDE]

ooooh....... well, i read the description, but when i first looked at it, it really looked like a zangoose evo

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Well, it's a weasel and Zangoose is based on a mongoose, which are rather similar. xD
I guess I'll start refining it now, and I can fix any errors that come up later.

 

[GDE]

good luck.

 

[Power of Fire]

That looks like a Digimon -_-; Kinda reminds me of WereGarurumon... (The Belts, Its appearance). But Work on it though.

 

[Lemon!]

Ahh.. good old Meccanica, I remember your old fakedex and how great it was, I cant wait too see more sprites from you.

 

[Kindrindra]

It kinda doesn't apper on the screen for some reason, so I can't review it but...
In my opinion, Empoleon and Tyranitar are adorable, and shirfty is cute (Yes, I do find grimer cute) By the way, machamp has a belt because of the fact in it's pokedex data It needs it to control it's musles (Aka, If it didn't have it, it would be rampaging and crushing everything in it's way... while asleap!)

See Ya Later!

 

[WTF?]

Ugh, it annoys me to more end when people say "it doesn't look like a pokemon make it more cute"
Is Empoleon cute? Is Shiftry cute? Is Tyranitar cute? Seriously, not all Pokemon are so adorable they make your eyes bleed. =/

i agree, xD and clothes dont matter when it comes to pokemon, i remember i think its in battle frontier there is a meowth wearing a hat and boots ^^

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Guys, if you're going to say it doesn't look like a Pokemon, at least tell me how to make it look more like one.
As for the belts, I don't want to remove them, but would it help if I changed the color/style of them?
Still working on refining the outlines...

 

[alli940]

well maybe you should make the belts black or red lihe rest of the guy...

BTW i checked your youtube profile andyou are a very talented spriter... that guy is propably going to look awesome...

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Thanks.
Black or red would blend in too much... would grey or orange/pink work? Or any other color?