I didn't notice this fic until two or three days ago...
I don't know if you're still on Serebii, Water Spirit. Anyway, I'll write it.
This is one of the greatest story of Pokeshipping, or even Pokemon, I've read since today.
Every situation is full of imagination and surprise. Each character is well represented, as well as their Pokemon (just a side-note on Pikachu that might help: when calling Ash, he usually says "Pikapi".). The atmosphere is very close to the original serie, wich is valuable and pretty rare.
Now, about the descriptions...They are simple, and yet don't need to be more complicated; enough accurate, but letting imagination makes it's job. Greatest way of making a description in my opinion.
As for the feelings...Well I just feel like I was inside.
One of your greatest strength is you ability of developping everything well, letting some unsolved shadows; after all, your fiction is 30 chapters long, right?
In one word as in much more; your fiction is amazing. They say quantity does not make quality, well both are presents here.
I loved it. I hope you might - one day - continue this one.
With all my thanks, and congratulations,
Tericarax.