Fawante (heaps better than voltorb)

[flame fox]

my fawante pic he is one of my favorite 4th generation pokemon
its not the best but i like it, its no way as good as other fawante pictures ive seen

 

[ZOMBIE!]

Fuwante is nothing like voltorb, the closest pokemon to him is Shuppet =/

Onto the pic...
The lines are quite shakey and I find the shading boring.
The background is plain and the clouds look strange.

It is drawn pretty well though but does have a few flaws.

 

[flame fox]

i meant better than voltorb cause i drew one and it really sucked

 

[Taylor Ray]

Looks to skinny, lines are shaky as above posted, and the clouds look like a blob of white paint. but still ok 5/10

 

[Chaotic Pink]

It looks ok, the outline is thick in some places but goes thin in others, I find this distracting to the actual picture. The background is quite plain, what program do you make them on? Although, well done for trying

 

[Francesc]

It looks fine, but you could improve the background.

 

[flame fox]

as i said before im not the best thanks for pointing out somethings to improve and i know the background isnt very good im going to imrove that aswell

 

[pepsa]

It is a nice picture. Since others touched upon the fact of outlines I will not talk about that.

The pose looks kinda plain, not to interesting. I like the shading, though. Also, I feel that the way you drew it, it looks a little too squished. I suggest making it look more rouinder. But, I think you have the basic idea. The cloud on its head also looks scrunched up. If you make those minor changes, plus fix the outlines, I personally think it will look so much more magnificent! Nice work anyway.