spikyearedpichu
Dawn of the XY Era
Summary: The gluttonous "Spiny Nut Pokémon" Chespin has grown pudgy from eating too much. It has a post-meal battle against Ash's Pokémon to get some exercise, but its heavy belly slows its movement too much, and it ends up losing against Froakie and the others. Alarmed, its Trainer Clemont invents exercise gear for it.
Note: Notice Chespin's stomach after it's been eating sweets. Is it really okay to eat this much?
Comic adaptation:
Page 1:
Panel 1:
Narrator: Citron's Pokémon Harimaron has met a kind old woman in the forest.
Old woman: Eat as many of my macarons as you like!
Harimaron: Rima rima'!
Narrator: Hey, Harimaron... aren't you eating a bit too much?
Panel 2:
Voice: Hey granny, I'm back!
Old woman: Oh, looks like grandpa is back.
Panel 3:
Old woman: My husband and I like having Pokémon battles with each other, you see. So I'm going to make you work real good here.
Panel 4:
Harimaron: Rima...!?
Page 2:
Panel 1:
Old woman: All right, grandpa! Today I'm going to shut that mouth of yours!! Do your best, Harimaron-chan!!
Old man: Ghahahaha!! I say the same to you!!
Panel 2:
Old man: Mafoxy, Will-o-Wisp!!
Page 3:
Panel 1:
Old woman: Harimaron-chan! Don't just run away, attack!!
Panel 2:
Old woman: It's moving oddly slow... Maybe it ate too many macarons...
Panel 3:
Citron: Harimaron!!
Harimaron: Rima'!!
Panel 4:
Citron: Sorry, but this Harimaron is my Pokémon!
Harimaron: Rima rima'!
Old woman: Oh, is that so!? I was so sure it was a wild Pokémon...
Panel 5:
Old man: Gahahaha! I guess that means I win this battle, huh!?
Panel 6:
Citron: I'll be taking over the battling from here on!!
Harimaron: Rima'!
Old man: All right! Then let's resume!!
Page 4:
Panel 1:
Satoshi: Hey, doesn't it look like Harimaron has put on some weight...?
Serena: I'm sure it ate too may macarons...!
Panel 2:
Old man: Will-O-Wisp!!
Citron: Harimaron! Please dodge!!
Panel 3:
Citron: If it keeps moving like this, its stomach should get smaller and its body get lighter!
Panel 4:
Satoshi: It's gradually starting to move faster and faster!!
Panel 5:
Old man: Mafoxy!! Flamethrower!!
Citron: Harimaron!!
Panel 6:
Harimaron: Ri... Rima'...
Page 5:
Panel 1:
Harimaron: Rimaaaa'!!
Citron: This is Overgrow!? It's said to power up Grass type moves in a pinch...!!
Panel 2:
Citron: All right, Harimaron! Vine Whip!!
Panel 3:
Old man: Wha... In that case... It seems I have no choice but to use my ultimate move to beat you!!
Panel 4:
Old woman: Stop it, grandpa!! Using that move is going to cause bodily harm!!
Old man: Shut it!! I've made up my mind!!
Panel 5:
Satoshi: A move so extreme it causes bodily harm to the Pokémon!?
Panel 6:
Old man: Mystical...
Page 6:
Panel 1:
Old man: Fiiiiiiiiii...
Panel 2:
Old man: My... my back...!?
Panel 3:
Old woman: Oh Grandpa! I told you it would cause you bodily harm...!
Panel 4:
Old woman: Everyone, I baked lots of macarons as an apology, so eat up!
Satoshi: Bon appetit!
Narrator: Satoshi and his friends journey towards the Kalos League continues on!
Note: Notice Chespin's stomach after it's been eating sweets. Is it really okay to eat this much?
Comic adaptation:
Page 1:
Panel 1:
Narrator: Citron's Pokémon Harimaron has met a kind old woman in the forest.
Old woman: Eat as many of my macarons as you like!
Harimaron: Rima rima'!
Narrator: Hey, Harimaron... aren't you eating a bit too much?
Panel 2:
Voice: Hey granny, I'm back!
Old woman: Oh, looks like grandpa is back.
Panel 3:
Old woman: My husband and I like having Pokémon battles with each other, you see. So I'm going to make you work real good here.
Panel 4:
Harimaron: Rima...!?
Page 2:
Panel 1:
Old woman: All right, grandpa! Today I'm going to shut that mouth of yours!! Do your best, Harimaron-chan!!
Old man: Ghahahaha!! I say the same to you!!
Panel 2:
Old man: Mafoxy, Will-o-Wisp!!
Page 3:
Panel 1:
Old woman: Harimaron-chan! Don't just run away, attack!!
Panel 2:
Old woman: It's moving oddly slow... Maybe it ate too many macarons...
Panel 3:
Citron: Harimaron!!
Harimaron: Rima'!!
Panel 4:
Citron: Sorry, but this Harimaron is my Pokémon!
Harimaron: Rima rima'!
Old woman: Oh, is that so!? I was so sure it was a wild Pokémon...
Panel 5:
Old man: Gahahaha! I guess that means I win this battle, huh!?
Panel 6:
Citron: I'll be taking over the battling from here on!!
Harimaron: Rima'!
Old man: All right! Then let's resume!!
Page 4:
Panel 1:
Satoshi: Hey, doesn't it look like Harimaron has put on some weight...?
Serena: I'm sure it ate too may macarons...!
Panel 2:
Old man: Will-O-Wisp!!
Citron: Harimaron! Please dodge!!
Panel 3:
Citron: If it keeps moving like this, its stomach should get smaller and its body get lighter!
Panel 4:
Satoshi: It's gradually starting to move faster and faster!!
Panel 5:
Old man: Mafoxy!! Flamethrower!!
Citron: Harimaron!!
Panel 6:
Harimaron: Ri... Rima'...
Page 5:
Panel 1:
Harimaron: Rimaaaa'!!
Citron: This is Overgrow!? It's said to power up Grass type moves in a pinch...!!
Panel 2:
Citron: All right, Harimaron! Vine Whip!!
Panel 3:
Old man: Wha... In that case... It seems I have no choice but to use my ultimate move to beat you!!
Panel 4:
Old woman: Stop it, grandpa!! Using that move is going to cause bodily harm!!
Old man: Shut it!! I've made up my mind!!
Panel 5:
Satoshi: A move so extreme it causes bodily harm to the Pokémon!?
Panel 6:
Old man: Mystical...
Page 6:
Panel 1:
Old man: Fiiiiiiiiii...
Panel 2:
Old man: My... my back...!?
Panel 3:
Old woman: Oh Grandpa! I told you it would cause you bodily harm...!
Panel 4:
Old woman: Everyone, I baked lots of macarons as an apology, so eat up!
Satoshi: Bon appetit!
Narrator: Satoshi and his friends journey towards the Kalos League continues on!
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