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Yay! This is my first fic. I don't have proper English grammar still learing, so I can make mistakes. This is Pg-13 (violence,maybe horror later)
CHAPTER1-Captured
Somewhere in a forest there live three Quilavas. Quilavas are weasel like pokemons with dark bleu head and back and light brown belly and paws. The golden rays of the sun shines through the branches of the trees, Feofan enjoys the warm rays. Feofan is the youngets of them, his older sister Setsuka is enjouying eating some oran berry’s, and his oldest brother Kai is holding the watch.
Setsuka:”C’mon bro have some berry’s.” Kai turned around and look strict at Setsuka and say:”Did you forgot what I promisd to our mother that I protect you two no matter what.’’He turned back further to holding the watch. Setsuka looked down at the ground and say sadly:’’You just takes evrything serious.”
Feofan saw something coming in his dirrection, it was two humans with black hats,black uniform with a big red R.
“hey bro there come two humans.”Say Feofan.
Kai looked in Feofan direction and say quickly:’’Feofan, Setsuke hide!”But it’s to late the two rocket members saw them and one throw a red and white ball an there came a golbat out.Golbat is a bat with a huge mouth with four sharp teeths. Golbat flutter to Feofan it’s want to use wing attack Feofan is paralysed of fear, then Kai stand for Feofan and use flamethrower at Golbat.Golbat is hit but is not giving up,Feofan goes back he don’t want to fight, his sis go to help Kai to defeat the Golbat.
Feofan watch how his sis and bro fighting against Golbat it’s look they’re going to win. Feonfan is thinking:”Wait there are two humans, where is then then the pokemon of the second one?” Feofan heard some sound behind him and he look back what behind him. It was a seviper, it’s a black snake with puple and golden/yellow like plates, it have two huge fangs and a sword like tail. Seviper sissed at Feofan, he run away scared with his eyes close. When he opend his eyes it kinda to late he smash with his head against a tree. He was dizzy and then everything is black before his eyes. A sereval hours later Feofan opend his eyes. “Where am I?” He looked around there are computers and many other techy stuff. Feofan wants to get up but he can’t, now he realised he in a cage just big enough for him. Humans in white labcoat are coming to him, one of them has something in his hands. It’s a needle with icky green/yellow stuff in it. They injected that stuff in Feofan, it doesn’t hurt. Few minutes later Feofan’s back burn heavenly, he want to roll or run away but it can’t he can only lie in the cage. He cry and scream of pain but the humans don’t care.
“Where is Kai and Setsuka? Are they here to?”
Some humans carry the cage where Feofan is in to an other room. There they put them in a cat scan. Feofan hear them talk:”Yes it’s looking good soon the experiment will completed,then no one can stop us.’’Feofan is confused are they still talking about him or something else? Feofan is placed to another room. There he is enjected with another needle,he feels a little strange and he started to dream. Well it’s not a dream more like a nightmare, there is a black creature with bloodred eyes is killing his brother there is so much blood. But his sister has only a headwound. Suddenly Feofan awake
it’s now evening Feofan is hungry but he don’t get any food,and he feel weak to and his back still burns. He wished that he the next day, enough strengt have to break out of the cage or that he never shall awake again.
This was chapter1 it's maybe short, any comments?
CHAPTER1-Captured
Somewhere in a forest there live three Quilavas. Quilavas are weasel like pokemons with dark bleu head and back and light brown belly and paws. The golden rays of the sun shines through the branches of the trees, Feofan enjoys the warm rays. Feofan is the youngets of them, his older sister Setsuka is enjouying eating some oran berry’s, and his oldest brother Kai is holding the watch.
Setsuka:”C’mon bro have some berry’s.” Kai turned around and look strict at Setsuka and say:”Did you forgot what I promisd to our mother that I protect you two no matter what.’’He turned back further to holding the watch. Setsuka looked down at the ground and say sadly:’’You just takes evrything serious.”
Feofan saw something coming in his dirrection, it was two humans with black hats,black uniform with a big red R.
“hey bro there come two humans.”Say Feofan.
Kai looked in Feofan direction and say quickly:’’Feofan, Setsuke hide!”But it’s to late the two rocket members saw them and one throw a red and white ball an there came a golbat out.Golbat is a bat with a huge mouth with four sharp teeths. Golbat flutter to Feofan it’s want to use wing attack Feofan is paralysed of fear, then Kai stand for Feofan and use flamethrower at Golbat.Golbat is hit but is not giving up,Feofan goes back he don’t want to fight, his sis go to help Kai to defeat the Golbat.
Feofan watch how his sis and bro fighting against Golbat it’s look they’re going to win. Feonfan is thinking:”Wait there are two humans, where is then then the pokemon of the second one?” Feofan heard some sound behind him and he look back what behind him. It was a seviper, it’s a black snake with puple and golden/yellow like plates, it have two huge fangs and a sword like tail. Seviper sissed at Feofan, he run away scared with his eyes close. When he opend his eyes it kinda to late he smash with his head against a tree. He was dizzy and then everything is black before his eyes. A sereval hours later Feofan opend his eyes. “Where am I?” He looked around there are computers and many other techy stuff. Feofan wants to get up but he can’t, now he realised he in a cage just big enough for him. Humans in white labcoat are coming to him, one of them has something in his hands. It’s a needle with icky green/yellow stuff in it. They injected that stuff in Feofan, it doesn’t hurt. Few minutes later Feofan’s back burn heavenly, he want to roll or run away but it can’t he can only lie in the cage. He cry and scream of pain but the humans don’t care.
“Where is Kai and Setsuka? Are they here to?”
Some humans carry the cage where Feofan is in to an other room. There they put them in a cat scan. Feofan hear them talk:”Yes it’s looking good soon the experiment will completed,then no one can stop us.’’Feofan is confused are they still talking about him or something else? Feofan is placed to another room. There he is enjected with another needle,he feels a little strange and he started to dream. Well it’s not a dream more like a nightmare, there is a black creature with bloodred eyes is killing his brother there is so much blood. But his sister has only a headwound. Suddenly Feofan awake
it’s now evening Feofan is hungry but he don’t get any food,and he feel weak to and his back still burns. He wished that he the next day, enough strengt have to break out of the cage or that he never shall awake again.
This was chapter1 it's maybe short, any comments?