I'm not surprised your sig is breaking the rules, with you posting a rule breaking thread.
There is a thread for Fanfic Ideas. Stand alone threads are for only one idea and that is only when it is a preview or asking for help, opinions, suggestions and etc, about a work in progress- and not an idea. This usually includes snippets of a prologue, chapters, characters and etc.
Yeah it pretty much is boring- it feels like watching some bad OT fic, thrown in with the anime. So smart he made his own Porygon!
Bill is smart. Bill made a time machine. Bill can not create Porygon.
This man is smarter than Bill? Maybe. This man have the technology to make Porygon? probably not. And even if he did, how could it be perfect. There's no way he'd have gotten it perfectly in one go. No genius does. Not even Bill, did.
And Bill is smart.
First off get a beta or spell check ffs. I didn't understand it the first time through. Secondly, there are many type of naturalists and animal rights activists. Don't just lump them all together and think it's the same with real life. No. Greenpeace are retards who can't do crap. Then you have the Ecoterrorists, burning people and buildings, fun! Then PETA, who will steal animals from farms, but kill dogs, puppies, kitties and cats just to keep them from being adopted! Epic!
Or like in WoW; D.E.H.T.A or something. Extreme animal rights activists, so bad in the place where they're camped- you kill an animal you get a debuff. Go to close to their camp, they kill you. And what do they want? Oh the head of what everyone wants. Hemmet Nessingwary, if I spelt the genocidal causing freak's name right.
And randomly find feathers here and there? As what? fossils? Don't you know things rot, degrade, deteriorate, yada yada? So again- what feather. If it was simply a single item that was a myth more than rumor, that'd be more believable.
For the most part you really need to work on spelling and grammar. Secondly- characters. Plot. Actions. Plot. Characters ...
I suggest reading the Rules, and then reading Advice for Aspiring Authors, because you really, need to read both threads.
There is a thread for Fanfic Ideas. Stand alone threads are for only one idea and that is only when it is a preview or asking for help, opinions, suggestions and etc, about a work in progress- and not an idea. This usually includes snippets of a prologue, chapters, characters and etc.
A boring generic one about a male pokemon coordinator whos brothers all own gyms around the region of sinnoh (Im gonna make new gym leaders for each of the gym's) or even make my own region maybe. And his companion's a tomboy girl who is looking to complete her pokedex not only normally but with as many shiny pokemon as she can get (a shiny hunter if you will) but also out to become the greatest pokemon trainer OF ALL TIME! as she would put it, by doing all of the gym battles. But then as a twist they also have a guy who wants to know everything there is to know about pokemon, his dream is to create the ultimate pokedex and becomes the best professor in the pokemon world, I mean this guy is so smart he even created his own Porygon. (and nothing went wrong, but his porygon did also just come out as level 1, as it should)
Yeah it pretty much is boring- it feels like watching some bad OT fic, thrown in with the anime. So smart he made his own Porygon!
Bill is smart. Bill made a time machine. Bill can not create Porygon.
This man is smarter than Bill? Maybe. This man have the technology to make Porygon? probably not. And even if he did, how could it be perfect. There's no way he'd have gotten it perfectly in one go. No genius does. Not even Bill, did.
And Bill is smart.
Ho oh and lugia time lol Pokemon explorers go to the places where Ho oh and Lugia are meant to be but after a long search they find no trace of either pokemon except for a pokemon egg, too large to be an ordinary pokemon's egg and both with distinct marking's. Later the scientist's at a pokemon preservation sorciety discover the eggs are the legendary pokemon but they also discover that the pokemon wont hatch until they are placed in a nest made completely of its parents feathers. Meaning they send a group of talented pokemon trainers to find the rainbow feathers and silver feathers that should be and are rumoured to be all around the region of sinnoh, but of course there are some orgonisations who are trying to get the feathers to get the legendary pokemon themselves. But at the same time some pokemon rights activists beleive the eggs should be put back where they were and left to "natures will".
First off get a beta or spell check ffs. I didn't understand it the first time through. Secondly, there are many type of naturalists and animal rights activists. Don't just lump them all together and think it's the same with real life. No. Greenpeace are retards who can't do crap. Then you have the Ecoterrorists, burning people and buildings, fun! Then PETA, who will steal animals from farms, but kill dogs, puppies, kitties and cats just to keep them from being adopted! Epic!
Or like in WoW; D.E.H.T.A or something. Extreme animal rights activists, so bad in the place where they're camped- you kill an animal you get a debuff. Go to close to their camp, they kill you. And what do they want? Oh the head of what everyone wants. Hemmet Nessingwary, if I spelt the genocidal causing freak's name right.
And randomly find feathers here and there? As what? fossils? Don't you know things rot, degrade, deteriorate, yada yada? So again- what feather. If it was simply a single item that was a myth more than rumor, that'd be more believable.
For the most part you really need to work on spelling and grammar. Secondly- characters. Plot. Actions. Plot. Characters ...
I suggest reading the Rules, and then reading Advice for Aspiring Authors, because you really, need to read both threads.