frozenthrone101
BugBite Leader
edited it what about now
Hetran
This idea needs... a lot of work, to put it simply. The whole thing the plot hangs on - Groudon being tossed into the ocean and the worldwide temperature going down - can't even happen. Groudon has no power over making the temperature colder, only hotter. Plus, why did Groudon/Team Rocket leave their respective home turf and what compelled Apollo to at all care?ten years after the events of pokémon emerald, team rocket admin apollo finds out about the legend of groundon and the secret tower of johto. Groudon. he also finds out that without groundon, the worlds heat would go down. a lot. And Apollo would care about this... why, exactly? Not to mention that it's never stated that without Groudon the heat would go down... so he orders team rocket to attack the monster, a trainer that is heading to the safari zone observes these events. Okay. Trainer thing is clearly an attempt to get the MC involved. What's stopping him from merely watching Team Rocket hop into Johto to kill a Hoennian Legendary on his TV set? Surely they're broadcasting this slop. Also, again - Why would Team Rocket give a Ratatta's tail about Groudon and the temperature going down? Thye have more important things to do (like rule the world) than worry about that. team rocket takes the groundon and throws it into the artic above sinnoh, Um, how? Did they just rope the thing up and carry the carcass of a twenty-foot red monster across the skies of Johto...? the trainer trys to help it, but it goes deep into the ocean. Okay, you lost me. Why did Groudon go into the Mewing OCEAN? There's not even any ocean in Snowpoint not covered by ice! the world gets colder, and colder. now the world goes into an ice age. the trainer has to go and try to revive groundon, but to do this, he must go back into time. Or, you know, he could just go catch Groudon and release him out of the PokéArctic Ocean. now he has to find dialga, will he succeed? Wait... Dialga? Okay, that was random.
Mr. Joker said:new idea;
ten years after the events of pokémon emerald, team rocket admin apollo finds out about the legend of groundon and the secret tower of johto. he also finds out that without groundon, the worlds heat would go down. a lot. so he orders team rocket to attack the monster, a trainer that is heading to the safari zone observes these events. team rocket takes the groundon and throws it into the artic above sinnoh, the trainer trys to help it, but it goes deep into the ocean. the world gets colder, and colder. now the world goes into an ice age. the trainer has to go and try to revive groundon, but to do this, he must go back into time. now he has to find dialga, will he succeed?
thanks for repsonding
Here is my idea: Pokemon island. Machoke has lived in Vermilion City since he was a little machop. Later in life, a Machoke finds him and raises him to fight with his gang, 2 tyroges and a Hitmontop. Machop has lived with his new friends and watched himself evolve to a machoke, machoke evolve into a machamp, and the tyroges evolving into hitmonlee and hitmonchan. The problem is thre are Pokemon catchers that have been looking to catch the gang for years and in one disater they succeed, but machoke escapes but gets pushed into the ocean knocked out.
Finally after drifting, he wakes up in a place called Pokemon island. Pokemon Island is perfect place where there is only Pokemon. Machoke meets a Golem and tells him his situation. Golem suggest to enter a tourtament where the winner gets one wish from king Charizard. Machoke is an excellent fighter and thinks he can win no problem. The only thing in his way is a greedy gang called Team Zap'em (name can be edited), Jolteon, Electrode, and Electabuzz, who wants to win the tourtament to dominate and destroy the peacful life style of Pokemon island. The rest of the book is about Machoke trying to rescue his friends and bring them back to Pokemon Island and his new feud with Team Zape'm.
I'm trying to keep this rated no more than PG and keep it kid friendly. If you have some ideas, please tell me.
Theese are a group of Pokemon that feel they can be independent on their own and enjoy the freedom of not being inside a Pokeball.
Also, Team Zap'em is just plain greedy and they want to have complete control over Pokemon Island since Jolteon thinks he was cheated out of the last tourtament 5 years ago.
Charizard won't magicly grant a wish; he's king so he'll use his authority to grant the wish the best he can.
Machoke has been trying to avoid a Pokemon pound employee (something I made up.) They're trying to avoid being put inside a Pokemon pound.
Thankyou for the ideas