;194; Plot: A scientist named Kieth is planning to make all of the pokemon in the world Clowns like him!!!!! A trainer named Kuro, who always thought Kieth was wierd. Can Kuro stop this Crazy Clown!?;munchlax;
From what I've gathered, it really is bad. I'm going to be honest. You could improve maybe by giving us more details. Your idea is unique... if you can pull it off, it would be great. But if you can't, it would be a disaster and wouldn't be taken seriously. Clowns... you can make them creepy, funny, or downright stupid. Try not to make it the latter.
Wow. Deja vu, this reminds me of the first time I was writing a fic. I think you ought to give more information. I'm not to sure if the idea thread is still around, but if so, its better suited there than it is in its own thread. Yep, here it is http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=22230
G'luck with your... er... interesting... yeah... interesting idea.