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Fic In The works. Plz read.

How's the plot? This is my first Fic, so I need the rates.


  • Total voters
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  • Poll closed .

Soulpaladin

Brawl rocks.
;194; Plot: A scientist named Kieth is planning to make all of the pokemon in the world Clowns like him!!!!! A trainer named Kuro, who always thought Kieth was wierd. Can Kuro stop this Crazy Clown!?;munchlax;
 

Jonouchi

Chibi-cario
What did I tell you about double posting? NO ONE WILL RESPOND IN A FIVE MINUTE TIME SPACE!!!!!!

We need to know a bit more about it, like how this happened and why it happened. This barely tells us anything about the story
 

magdaw

sumthin origional :p
From what I've gathered, it really is bad. I'm going to be honest. You could improve maybe by giving us more details. Your idea is unique... if you can pull it off, it would be great. But if you can't, it would be a disaster and wouldn't be taken seriously. Clowns... you can make them creepy, funny, or downright stupid. Try not to make it the latter.

Good luck!
 

Elemental Charizam

Sudden Genre Shift
I like this thread. Unlike ALL other preview threads, at least it doesn't pretend it's not just a ploy to get more readers.

You lose the kudos by gratuitously abusing smilies and impatient double posting =(
 
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